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  1. Dec 2023
    1. sturdy back

      Not the stereotypical american description for women; reveals a strength in black women that is discussed further, later on in the poem and the physical labor that African women are more subjected to then American women.

    2. now

      Reveals this poem's setting takes place in Wheatley's adulthood because the last time Wheatley would have seen her mom is when she was 8 years old, before she was taken into slavery.

      *We understand Wheatley herself is the poet by later lines

    3. golden fire

      Metaphor meaning sun rays reflecting off of the wet rocks; an intentional focus on the beauty of this setting shows Wheatley's fondness in regard to the proximity to her home.

    4. chill'd

      Shortened version of "Chilled." Possible reasoning of this grammar choice: To conjure the use of "Black Vernacular" further suggesting that Wheatley is the speaker because it was in common use during her lifetime and not likely of Madgett to use it herself.

    5. mended Depression-weary clothes

      In her autobiography, "Pilgrim Journey" Madgett describes her mother: "After Mama was finished in the kitchen, she brought whichever visitor was there that night upstairs where she mended something..." referring to her mom being willing help anyone emotionally in need (possibly battling mental health) and physically in need (something they own is torn), by housing them for the night and mending their clothing.

    6. the wind that bore him high into the sunlight emanated from your breath

      Referencing to the first stanza's sun-verses-shadow analogy, Madgett depicts her mother as wind to reveal her belief that her father was so great only because her mother made him great.

    7. invented suns

      Final use of sun analogy that reiterates the notion that women are the mastermind behind and maintainers of the men's success, as is the case in her Mother and Father's situation.

    8. Seeking his favor

      This clause reveals her intentions for raising her hand, thus showing her actions are hinged to her father's recognition and high-perception of her, not to righteousness itself.

    9. sober ways.

      Associated with the previously mentioned, "depression-weary clothes", "sagging spirit", and "quiet elegance," "sober ways" most likely refers to her mother's solemn and humble attitude. Further exemplifying Madgett's desire for recognition.*

      *See "Seeking his favor"

    10. daily sustenance

      "Give us our daily bread" is a quote from The Lord's Prayer, commonly recited in Christian churches. Because she is referring to her mother, she elevates her mother's status to that of the divine in the ultimate form of praise.

    11. idolized

      Idolatry is a sin frequently discussed in Christian Doctrine. Madgett knew this word's connotation and uses it paired with the past tense tone to foreshadow her change in perspective.

    12. "I am!"

      Final biblical reference; In John 8:24 Jesus states: "For unless you believe that I am, you will die in your sins" revealing Wheatley's apparent bold, confident, and unapologetic view of herself

    1. at all points

      In a version published in The Black Scholar vol. 9, no. 3, “Midnight Song” has a somewhat different ending starting after this line with a separate stanza. This alternate ending is as follows:

      "This is a blue room poem/ caught up in a web/ of no light/ The leaves weave/ a ring of gold/ painting the earth"

    2. of light

      In the version from The Black Scholar vol. 9, no. 3, this line is changed to say "of no light." This seems to be the most drastic change to the ending, as the alternate line paints a far bleaker final image.

    3. curtain is striped

      The curtain here seems to be not only blocking out the natural light from the window, but creating the illusion of cage-like bars with stripes. This interpretation would further establish how trapped the speaker feels.

    4. blue line

      We finish with the same color we started with, a blue, showing Lane's appreciation for the natural world. This also references a moment Lane talks about in “‘Pulling in the Natural Environment’: An Interview with Pinkie Gordon Lane” by John Lowe, in which her son asked her for binoculars in order to see the equator.

    5. a poem

      This stanza continues to show the ways in which poetry can enhance one’s imaginative perspective. It seems as though this stanza is trying to say that even an ordinary plane ride can feel magical with the creative power of poetry.

    6. blue

      Attention to color starts with the mention of blue skies and will continue throughout the rest of the poem. This seems to be Lane expressing her appreciation for the variety of colors in Africa, subverting the stereotype of Africa as the "dark continent" devoid of prosperity.

    7. golden animal

      Lane tells John Lowe in "‘Pulling in the Natural Environment’: An Interview with Pinkie Gordon Lane." that this is a reference to the lions she saw on a safari with her son in Africa.

    8. She

      “She” could be referring to Lane herself or the woman pictured in African garb that Lane says inspired this poem in John Lowe's "‘Pulling in the Natural Environment’: An Interview with Pinkie Gordon Lane."

    1. She like love: the agony and the bone

      The poem addresses the subject of the poem again by comparing her to love, but also stating that she faces agony and death. This seems to relate to Gwendolyn Brooks's work having a positive, hopeful impact on black communities that were experiencing pain and exploitation, like the black meat-packing community that is referenced in the poem. While Brooks's words do not solve the corruption and power imbalances that the black urban community faces, they do provide a message of love and understanding.

    2. mayors

      “Meats for mayors” depicts the idea that extreme pain and suffering is being endured by both black workers and the animals so that wealthy, predominately white people can enjoy the delicacy of meat. The line seems to carry a sarcastic tone, as if to ask whether the passive enjoyment of an item like meat is worth the suffering that occurs to produce it.

    3. bleats

      “Bleats” is typically associated with lambs, which were often used in sacrifices because of their pure and innocent connotation. In the Bible, Jesus is referred to as the Lamb of God, because He lived a completely sinless life but still sacrificed for the greater Christian good. The speaker of the poem seems to be using the bleats as both reference to the slaughtering occurring at the meat factory, and the pain endured by the black workers both in the factory and in their communities. The reference to lambs suggests that innocence is being destroyed.

    4. raw, the freshly killed alone

      This line references the process of producing meat again through language like “raw” and “fresh.” The speaker of the poem seems to be conflating the process of killing animals to create meat for consumption to the experience of lower socioeconomic black people.

    5. sacrificial

      Sacrificing both goods, animals, and people was once common practice in many religions, like Christianity, Judaism, Islam, and Hinduism. The practice involves destroying the item, or killing the person or animal for forgiveness or blessings from a spiritual being.

    6. shanty towns

      Shanty towns refer to the dilapidated settlements that are typically on the outskirts of a town. Many African Americans in urban areas found themselves living in shanty towns, and workers in the meat-packing factories likely would have lived in such establishments.

    7. a phrase of her like stitching wounds can make;

      This line suggests that the subject of the poem, which was previously established to be Gwendolyn Brooks, can provide healing and repair to the community with her words or phrases. This line references the fact that Brooks wrote about black urban struggles in her writing. Her first poetry volume A Street in Bronzeville portrayed the reality of the poor living and social conditions that the black community faced. Brooks's acknowledgement of these conditions seem to have made the community feel seen, while also functioning to challenge existing oppression.

    8. weening

      “Weaning” as it is typically spelled references the process of slowly getting accustomed to life without something that a person was dependent on, like a baby off of milk or a patient off of medicine. However, the poem spells the word as “weening” which is a word that is not commonly used in modern language, but it means to think or have and opinion. These two definitions of similar words work together to depict the idea of both infancy and thinking, simultaneously occurring in the corruption of the streets.

    9. Lazaruses

      A reference to a biblical story in which Jesus brought a dead man named Lazarus that had been buried in a tomb for four days back to life. This miracle caused many people in the Bible to acknowledge Jesus as Christ.

    10. fasted days

      "Fasted days" refers to a typically religious practice of abstaining from food and/or drink for a certain period of time. The practice is thought to increase self-control, bodily autonomy, and relationship with a higher power.

    11. shanks

      The word "shank" has multiple definitions. Typically it either refers to a makeshift knife/ sharp weapon, or a meat shank, which is the portion of meat around the lower leg of the animal.

    12. Chicago

      Chicago was Gwendoyn Brooks's hometown, and it was also a central location in the meat-packing industry, which is referenced throughout the poem. Many African Americans found work in the meat-packing industry after the Great Migration, which was when many black Americans moved out of the South in pursuit of better work and social treatment in the North. These goals were not entirely met, as the meat factories that employed many African Americans had notoriously terrible working conditions. According to Upton Sinclair’s exposé "The Jungle," workers were often seriously injured, exposed to diseases from the meat, worked long hours, and were paid very low wages.

    13. God help me, I be His maidservant, I be His witness to this sale of womanflesh

      It seems that this ins not only a prayer from Hattie to God, but it carries a doubly meaning. Hattie will also likely be the maidservant for her new master, and her purchase and servitude will be signs of witness "to this sale of womanflesh," giving constant evidence of the inhumanity of slavery for the master to bear.

    14. The Agony and the Bone

      Dolores Kendrick dedicated this poem to Gwendolyn Brooks, who was one of the most influential African American poets in the 20th century. The title appears to reference a well-known Brooks quote that asserts that "writing is a delicious agony."

    15. My, your forehead be hot, fever comin’ on I ‘spect, an’ your mother’s fever gone cold makin’ it more dangerous when it be exposed to the elements

      It seems that this is one of Carrie's first experiences on the auction block; she's crying and nervous while Hattie knows what's going on. Kendrick may be describing Carrie's discomfort as the fever coming onto her, in addition to her possibly feeling sick in the moment. In contrast, Hattie is no stranger to the ills of slavery and is used to this public display of inhumanity; her "fever's gone cold". However, Carrie's anguish seems to have reignited an anger in Hattie that she hasn't had in some time, and she is well aware that, "exposed to the elements/ that gather up 'round her now," she must control herself. So, her words to her daughter are also a way for Hattie to keep herself calm.

    16. We be sold, but we ain’t bought.

      It seems that, in the end, Hattie and Carrie are sold together. Hattie says "we ain't bought" because through her prayer and conversation with Carrie they refused to succumb to their own acceptance of slavery. They have not "bought in".

    17. who need the disease of your Mama’s wrath so they can recover from their own

      Kendrick seems to also point out the conflict that many slaves faced. If they were to unleash their own wrath, whites would feel that they "can recover from their own" participation in slavery, using it as an excuse for the buying, selling, and abuse of other humans.

    18. Money look good, even if it be for your soul

      This may be a comment on the subtle trap that materialism presents. Kendrick may not only be referring to the monetization of human life during slavery in the context of the poem. She may also be commenting on the prevalence of materialism over time, including the present. This line, along with the one before it, stand out as clear statements that live beyond Hattie and Carrie's time on the auction block, suggested by the line breaks that separate them from the body of other stanzas.

    19. ‘cause my soul be amputated

      Hattie seems to be sure that, although her physical state would likely remain intact if Carrie is sold, every other aspect of her being down to her soul would be damaged. Kendrick brings up an often unrecognized effect of slavery, as enslaved persons endured abuse on every level. The physical torture inflicted was just as painful for enslaved persons as the emotional trauma involved.

    20. I cain’t leave this block in holo-cust!

      Kendrick's use of enjambment here layers the meaning of these two lines. Hattie cannot leave the auction block in either the present or the foreseeable future. If she decided to run, she would surely be abused and likely separated from her child. In the second line, the hyphenated word "holo-cust" is clearly a play on the word holocaust—meaning a mass slaughter of people--used most commonly in reference to the Holocaust, the genocide of millions of Jewish people by Nazi Germany from 1941-1945. Kendrick seems to be likening the mass abduction, abuse, and even murder of millions of African Americans from the 1600s to the 1800s. However, the word "holo-cust" has a meaning of its own. The Greek word "holo" means entire, total, or complete, while the word "cust" likely refers to the Latin word "custos" which means guardian or oversight. When put together, the word holo-cust means something along the lines of total guardianship. This is the role Hattie takes on the auction block as Carrie's mother. However, when the two lines are read together, Kendrick comments on the compromising position that enslaved parents were forced into.

    21. Ever seen a finer lookin’ peoples than that?

      Kendrick's use of irony through Hattie's words seems to comment on the irony, hypocrisy, and absurdity of slavery. People dressed in fine clothing to do quite evil things like the purchase, division, and abuse of enslaved families.

    22. hold hard while we crush the evil

      Their refusal to cry or break down in front of these white people is an act of defiance that symbolically defeats "the evil" of slavery as to not let it affect them.

    23. Mama will protect you from all the shoutin’ an’ screamin’ an’ biddin’ that’s goin’ on

      Hattie and Carrie are on an auction block as slaves about to be sold. This context is continued through the spoken word of Hattie describing what is actually going on.

    24. unleavened.

      Unleavened refers to bread or baked goods made without 'leavening agents' that would cause it to rise while being baked. The result is a flatter good like biscuits or tortillas. This may also be a biblical allusion. When Moses helped the Jews escape slavery in Egypt, they didn't have time to let their bread rise, so they ate unleavened bread. Jewish people eat unleavened bread at Passover year to commemorate their escape from bondage.

    25. after the twilight died.

      The use of both the italicized and non-italicized text are used to signal the thoughts and spoken words of the mother in the poem respectively. The mother is Hattie, and Carrie is her daughter.

    26. not a human bein’ like all you

      Hattie, the enslaved mother, seems to be well aware of her humanity and the fact that whites, specifically white slave owners, believe her to be simply property. This echoes W.E.B. DuBois' concept of "double consciousness."

    27. Cain’t be no slave forever, No, Lord!

      The repetition of this phrase, "Cain't be no slave forever," throughout the poem serves to reinforce the idea that anything, death included, is better than slavery.

    28. then fix her somethin’ to eat, maybe some cake and milk, and mine’ sittin on the stairs in the cold, in the dark, waitin’ to do some waitin’ on waitin’ for the milk to sour and the cake to crumble,

      This is a comparison of the life the white children on the plantation live versus that of the life her children have to live.

    29. But that boat wasn’t meant for nothin’ but glory, and when it crashed into the sea, I entered that water like I was being baptised, saw my John’s head stretch among the waves and near him Mary and near her Lottie, laughin’. Oh, Lord! What a sight! Baptized to the death!

      In this verse, Kendrick compares the drowning of Peggy and her family to a baptism - the boat, intending to take them back to slavery, instead leads them to glory through death.

    30. And I knew then that death gave me a chance, a great salvation

      Many slave mothers believed that death was a better option for their children than living as slaves. Margaret Garner, the women who inspired Kendrick to write this poem, killed her two-year old daughter and attempted to kill her three other children because she held this belief.

    31. Can’t be no slave forever, not me! and my children

      This is a foreshadowing of events that are to come and a sentiment that appears frequently in slavery-era spirituals such as "Steal Away to Jesus" and "Swing Low, Sweet Chariot." These narratives point simultaneously to the possible freedom of escape from slavery and the comparative 'freedom' of heaven/death.

    32. Peggy in Killing

      Kendrick wrote this poem after researching Margaret Garner, a slave who attempted to escape with her husband and children. Her story also inspired Toni Morrison's Beloved and an opera called Margaret Garner.

    33. They done found me, Lord! The done found me again! I’m dead and they don’t know it. Sometimes I don’t either.

      Kendrick chose to write "Peggy in Killing" in an African American vernacular, engaging in a poetic tradition pioneered by Paul Laurence Dunbar and other writers of the vernacular tradition, such as Zora Neale Hurston and Sterling Brown. Her use of this dialect can also be seen as an indication that the subject of the poem, Peggy, has not had a formal education.

    1. the prince

      This reference to a prince seems to bring to mind a fairytale-like character, a 'Prince Charming' who is the personal savior for the woman. This pairs with the cult of true womanhood: the 19th century ideal that women should be religiously devout, virgins, domestic, and submissive. When these underlying concepts are put together in the context of the poem, Derricotte may be referring to this prince as the savior of this woman's sexual livelihood, her 'second coming'.

    1. Do not call me out of my name

      this phrase is repeated in the beginning of the poem. Instead of saying “they call me out of my name”then the speaker changes it to “do not”. This refers to a demand and to show the power of who she is “ A Black”

    1. a community of believers

      In his introduction, Jackson ends by saying, "You come to understand that yeah, your neighborhood is kinda absurd, but people like Steve are family," implying that Steve's community of believers are those living in the North Philadelphia neighborhood where he grew up.

    2. crazy, crackbrained, just a little Touched

      These words are all colloquial indicators for the word "crazy." "Touched" can also be used to indicate that somebody has been blessed or "touched by God."

    3. his scuffed wing- Tips, ragged as a mop, shuffling Concrete, could be ten-inch FIRESTONE Wheels,

      Jackson is comparing the movements that Steve makes to that of a car. In his movements, his feet become the wheels.

    4. Steve’s 1985 CORVETTE

      In introducing "Some Kind of Crazy," Jackson explains that "there was this guy named Steve who used to walk around like he was driving a car" - the imagery used in the poem is designed to compare Steve's actions to that of someone driving a car - specifically a 1985 Corvette.

    5. Some Kind of Crazy

      Jackson mentions the concept of Theatre of the Absurd when introducing this poem at the 1994 Conference, indicating that the poem is written from a distanced perspective, looking down on the actions of the people described.

    1. black aesthetic

      A term coined by Larry Neal in 1968, the "Black aesthetic" is a concept central to the Black Arts Movement and the Black Power movement. Neal and his contemporaries called for a rejection of the "Western" aesthetic and the development of a completely new mode of art and creation, as "it is impossible to construct anything meaningful within [the Western aesthetic's] decaying structure" (Neal, "The Black Arts Movement, from The Drama Review, Summer 1968).

    2. Lump velvet little wild rabbit

      The rabbit is a symbol of prosperity, abundance, and fertility. The rabbit symbolism of longevity is very true because of its ability to reproduce and build ancestry.

    3. to ex- Quisite Profanity

      'to' shows that the 'organic sacristy abode' is being a home to an "exquisite profanity." Separation of exquisite may suggest the strange division and unity of exquisite (extremely beautiful and, typically, delicate) and profanity (blasphemous or obscene language)

    4. sacristy

      a room in a church where a priest prepares for a service, and where vestments and other things used in worship are kept. Being next to organic and abode may suggest the mothers pregnant belly is a natural 'sacred room' or 'abode' for the baby

    5. moon tide stops

      Tides are the rise and fall of sea levels caused by the combined effects of the gravitational forces exerted by the Moon and the Sun, and the rotation of the Earth. The cycle of the moon also has connotations of menstruation, which, if stopped, implies that the woman is pregnant. This phrase may also suggest that the world the speaker is living in has stopped spinning at this moment while womb waves are seen inside the woman.

    6. Fire yellow white hot maggots seemin more than semen Sperm jellied germ of god the rich pudding of love tiring Tadpole Couriers of destiny coursing toward the heaven halo Aborrea

      Here, the poem seems to shift from depicting sex as something merely sweet and pleasurable to being the cause of fertilization, creation, evolution.

    7. Fire yellow white hot maggots seemin more than semen Sperm jellied germ of god the rich pudding of love tiring Tadpole Couriers of destiny coursing toward the heaven halo Aborrea Of egg sun like yolk wonder deep in the night time of Belly love

      The speaker seems to be realizing that sex is about more than pleasure: rather, it has the ability (or power) to create life

    8. our now we love now we love now my love now my Love now my love Love me now my love my love My Love NOW!!

      Emphasis and repetition of living in the now and not worrying about future consequences

    9. In rhythm with life rhythms without metronomes

      The poem is written with a sort of rhythm, but not a regular or structured rhythm. So, this line may be referring to the irregular beat of the poem and reflecting the irregular structure of life's "rhythm."

    10. Pepper pot

      An assertive person who shares opinions or acts in ways that are stronger than the extant social power structure might predict. Especially of a woman, since men often wrongly expect women to be weak, acquiescent, or void of certain types of knowledge.

    11. peach brandy

      "The presence of the peach in folklore, literature, religion, paintings, embroidery, and in the affection of the people signifies luck, abundance, and protection." The fruit is believed to offer immortality or at least reaching very old age. This may suggest the idea of invisibility when you're young and drunk. (Jacqueline M. Newman, Flavor&Fortune - peach meaning in folklore and literature)

    1. chaingang

      A chain gang is a group of convicts chained together while working outside the prison. In the early 1900s, news of the wretched conditions of convict laborers began to be publicized, and the violence and corruption of the system began to turn public opinion against convict leasing. Though many citizens and politicians wanted to abolish convict leasing, the problem of the expense and difficulty of housing convicts remained. Chain gangs developed as a popular solution to that problem.

    2. sweetest left hook you ever dug, baby

      A hook is a boxing term for a punch thrown with one's arm at a 90 degree angle, usually aimed at the jaw. This is a play on words, since "hook" is also a music term for a part of the song that "catches the ear" of the listener.

      There is am important connection here between the musicians and boxing. On September 23, 1952, a jazz concert at Massey Hall in Toronto featured Charlie Parker, Dizzy Gillespie, pianist Bud Powell, bassist Charles Mingus and drummer Max Roach. Each of the performers was a towering figure of jazz's first century, and this was the only time that they ever played together. However, their concert was held at the same time as the World Heavyweight boxing match between Rocky Marciano and Jersey Joe Walcott, which resulted in the attendance of the concert being so small that the venue could not afford to pay the musicians.

    3. Leadbelly’s

      Lead Belly, or Huddie William Ledbetter, was an American folk and blues singer, known for his use of the twelve-string guitar in the early 19th century. Lead Belly is often credited with setting the standards for modern American folk music. The blues is a music form known for taking the painful and making it beautiful, which is what this poem is doing.

    4. twelve string clutch of all the blues

      "Twelve string" is a reference to the guitar, and probably to Lead Belly as before. Together with the blues, this is most likely referring to the old blues of the Mississippi Delta, which were derived from African spirituals.

    5. Can't you see what love and heartache's done to me I'm not the same as I used to be this is my last affair

      Throughout the poem, the tone of the refrain shifts from the romantic nostalgia of the original lyric to the tragedy and racial trauma of Bessie's death.

    6. Two-hundred-pound

      Smith weighed about 200lbs, which was one reason that those present at the accident decided it would be too difficult to transfer her to the car of a passerby who was willing to drive her to get care.

    7. Loved a little blackbird

      Probably a reference to the song "I'm a Little Blackbird Looking for a Bluebird" by Louis Armstrong. Smith recorded with Armstrong during her career. Also, the blackbird holds a racial connotation.

    8. 'nother n***** dead 'fore noon

      Here, there is a stark contrast between this voice and the voice of the poem—the voice of the poem eulogizes Bessie as a music hero, this one both writes her off and kills her off using this racial slur.

    9. all-white big bands

      This holds a double meaning, referring to both the medical bands taping up Smith's bleeding arm and the fact that her career was during a time when large jazz bands were composed of white musicians.

    10. Can't you see what love and heartache's done to me I'm not the same as I used to be this is my last affair

      The refrain of the poem is an allusion to the first four lines of the song "My Last Affair" sung by Billie Holiday:

      Can't you see What love and romance have done to me I'm not the same as I used to be This is my last affair

      Holiday recorded the song with Teddy Wilson and His Orchestra in 1936, the year before Smith's death. Smith and Holiday were two of the most famous blues singers in the 1920s and 30s.

      "Last Affair" is a reference to Smith's death.

    11. arm torn out

      In reference to the automobile accident that led to the death of Bessie Smith. Her arm was torn from her body and she was bleeding profusely, but could not receive proper medical treatment in time due to the fact that the closest hospital to the accident would not accept African American patients.

    1. and be warm all the time

      In comparison to "Nikki-Rosa," Giovanni's famous and frequently anthologized poem about how her childhood was happy in a way that white people cannot understand, this poem differs, possibly because it is specifically intended for a Black audience.

    2. ice-cream

      Giovanni's references to food are also specifically related to the culinary tradition of enslaved peoples. Buttermilk, for example, was an after product of making butter and drank by enslaved peoples to gain as many nutrients as possible. Okra, also, is believed to come specifically from Africa.

    3. always

      Giovanni likely turned Knoxville Tennessee into a children's book to offer positive representation for children of color. As Alice Fannin discussed in her article "Black Poetry: Three for the Children," Giovanni has often stated that there were "precious few" poetry books for children when she was growing up and even fewer "especially for us," emphasizing the need for more diversity in children's literature. Giovanni has written countless other volumes of children's poetry, such as Spin a Soft Black Song (1971), The Genie in The Jar (1996), Rosa (2005), and The Grasshopper's Song (2008).

    4. summer

      Nikki Giovanni was born in Knoxville and grew up in Cincinnati, Ohio. Giovanni and her sister went to Knoxville every summer to visit their grandparents, which likely serves as inspiration for this poem.

    5. I

      Originally published in the 1968 poetry collection Black Judgement and intended for an adult audience, Knoxville, Tennessee was reborn in 1994 as a children's book with full-color illustrations done by Larry Johnson.

    1. When “for their thousand blows” return a thousand ten

      Here, Evans is referencing Claude McKay’s poem "If We Must Die." Similar to McKay’s poem, Mari Evans is using this stanza as a call-to-arms of sorts, insinuating that complacence is harmful and action must be taken to enact change.

    2. All transition merely language.

      Here Evans is pointing out the lack of actual progress in the fight against racism, where the "change" made to combat injustice did not go far enough - where racial slurs become taboo but violence towards Black citizens continues.

    3. the unabated war we seem unable to define goes on

      Because of the attempted change in code to end explicit verbal racism that Evans references in her earlier line, "all transition merely language," she is implying that the oppression of Black people has become more subversive and systematic. Racism isn't gone, and thus the war against it is not over, but it becomes more difficult to fight against a system than those that control it.

    4. Who is it bides the time and why? And for how long?

      Like the call-to-action that Evan’s conjures earlier in this verse, she uses this line to place the blame of the unrelenting oppression that is still ongoing on those that are complacent to it.

    5. I

      “Alabama Landscape” is written in three verses, each one moving further into the future. The first is set in the time of slavery, the second in the “present” when the poem was written, and the third looks to the future for action and change.

    6. II

      Evans’ second verse builds in frustration as it works to re-contextualize the oppression of African Americans from the first act as something that is still occurring today. The seemingly hopeful end of the first act is met with a bleak future/”Present” in the second.

    7. Alabama Landscape

      Alabama has a long and tragic history systematic racism and injustice towards African Americans. By naming this poem, “Alabama Landscape,” Mari Evans is using specific place as a relevant model of the continuous and unsolved disease of racism in America.

    8. Sanctioned lynchings Still orgasmic

      In her introduction at the 1994 Furious Flower conference, Mari Evans dedicates this poem to African American victims police brutality, to exemplify this reoccurring history or violence and injustice. In particular, she dedicates the poem to Michael Taylor, a 16 year old Black boy in 1987 that was shot in the temple while his hands were steel-cuffed behind his back; his death was unjustly ruled a “suicide”.

    9. disciplined entanglement wild welt of trees and gullies

      Evans' use of words like "disciplined" and "welts" serves to present imagery that is both related to the natural scene/setting of the first verse, and to slavery, as the first verse paints a picture of Black slaves running in fear of their white enslavers, attempting to escape.

    10. assailed impervious indestructible

      Mari Evans uses line breaks to emphasize the strength and perseverance of a person that has endured injustice. When read aloud at the 1994 Furious Flower conference, Evans gives each of these three words their due diligence with significant time to settle.