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  1. Apr 2021
    1. only one hour of therapy a week without the caregivers working on the skills at home is not going to be as effective in helping the child reach their goa

      Rework this sentence for clarity; use past tense

    2. For the group members' growth, asking follow up questions and providing comments on their sharing allowed them to further reflect and develop necessary skills to utilize in their recovery and post-discharge

      Shorten, simplify, or break up this long sentence

    1. At Encompass Health, they use a documentation program that while lengthy, it helps gather all

      Reword. Perhaps,

      Encompass Health used a lengthy documentation program that helped me gather....etc.

    2. There are many different diagnoses that come in and out of the therapy gym each day

      Nope. People come in an out. Change to person-first language! You were treating people, not diagnoses!

    3. One of the more beneficial workshops I had the opportunity to be apart of were Journal Club Meetings.

      Rephrase. Perhaps:

      Participating in Journal Club meetings was beneficial to me as a student.

    1. I'm so thankful to be in a position where I can make efforts to help those who aren't able to help themselves just yet. 

      Past tense. Also, please provide a synopsis of the artifact below

    1. e pretended to be our own superhero, saving the day as we propelled ourselves on the scooter boards and flew across the trampoline for proprioceptive and vestibular inpu

      who is "we"? Are you referring to you and your FWE, or to the child? Please clarify

    1. Creating rapport upfront leads to your patient cooperating and participating in the plan of care you create.

      past tense; also, find a synonym for the word "create" as you used it at the beginning and end of this sentence.

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    1. The example used above

      Perhaps reword.

      The image above is a screenshot from a blog post in which I discussed the impact of leisure activities on the overall mood of two patients. Etc. Etc. Etc.