all controls,
You mentioned "all controls", but I don't understand what it controls. Does it control the proceeding digital communication and timing aspects of the circuit?
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which
usually a good sign of "you can definitely make this sentence more optimized". For example, just "handling".
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Graduation Project:
Can we drop this?
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00% increaseresolutio
From what?
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Used Matplotlib and Pandas libraries to create data insights from tests, streamlining both the researchproject, and several other parallel projects regarding the same device.
Should this be a separate bullet?
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and usage of the interface and provide direction in identifying optimization
This doesn't quite read like a tangible result and it confuses the readers - can we keep this short and concise?
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eliminating a critical bottleneck in the dataacquisition speeds of laser light generation systems.
Should this be a separate bullet because this bullet looks pretty long?
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270% bandwidth increase beyond project target
What does this mean?
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Ensured compliance with NATO Janus standard.
Can we fit this in a sentence or should this be a separate bullet?
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Sci-Kit-Learn
Scikit-learn
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Languages: C, C++, VHDL, Verilog, System Verilog, Python, Tcl, MATLAB, AssemblyProgramming Libraries: Keras, Sci-Kit-Learn, Pandas, NumPy, SciPy, Matplotlib, PyserialCommunication Protocols: SPI, I2C, UART, RS-232, AXISoftware Tools: Xilinx Vivado, Altera Quartus, Lattice Diamond, LTSPICE, Ubuntu, Peta Linux, Jira, Bitbucket,Github, ConfluenceTestbench Tools: Oscilloscope, Logic Analyzer, Multimeter, DC Power Supply, Function Generator
you probably have more skills
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proof-of-concept communication abstraction layer
used in where?
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enabling the softwareengineering team to effortlessly interact with diverse hardware components by using simplified commands.
can be optimized to "providing a facade to simplify usage of ..."
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Created an automated data processing script in Python to accelerate the analysis of raw test data and generateinsights
I feel like this can be optimized down to "Used Pandas and Matplotlib to create data insights of raw data, "
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both the research project, and several other parallel projects regarding the same device.
"projects across teams" is good enough
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Proposed and implemented several HDL firmware modifications
Does anything stand out that we can use as a proper example with tangible data?
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enable higher data rates, enabling
"enable to enable" lol we need to ban the word "enable" from your resume completely unless there's no other alternative methods to convey your message
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repared an automated hardware test benc
Using what? Also, is writing the mathematical model and preparing an automated hardware test bench two different actions and therefore need two different bullets?
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enabling
you like the word "enabling" too much
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Wrote a mathematical model
using what?
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addressing a bottleneck
which was? and how much of an efficiency increase did you see from this?
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NS
should also say Halifax, NS, Canada for consistency across resume if you're applying outside of Canada
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Undergraduate Research Assistan
wasn't there also a parallel workflow related bullet???
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Remodeled an FPGA based signal transmitter, overseeing
doesn't make sense here -- you start off with "Remodeled" then follow up with another action of "overseeing" which doesn't sync up
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enabling real timeprocessing of signal dat
and how does this help exactly?
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enabling real-time monitoring of diagnostic data
and how does this help exactly?
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real time
real-time
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ADC
What's ADC?
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system-level test case
using what?
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fullstop period
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fullstop period
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fullstop period
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Designed a GUI using Python to allow for fast system reconfiguration and user friendly controls
awkward sentence to read. Thinking it's better to write "Created a Python GUI to allow user-friendly system reconfiguration of the beamformer to support non-technical users." or something along those lines (probably that line doesn't suffice either, but it's less deciphering than the current line.
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ㅡㅑㄴ냐ㅜㅎ fullstop period
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drive system integration
and how did it go?
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, and
awkward comma
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allowing for systemreconfiguration via SPI communications
What does this mean exactly? Is this the switch that you've designed?
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missing fullstop period
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00% increaseresolution
from what resolution? curious
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machine learning toadapt to varying channel conditions
adapt to what kind of channel conditions? How can it be used? What was the accuracy in testing?
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Bedford, Nova Scotia, B4B 0Z9
You dont need to add your specific address (you dont need this info at all tbh)
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(proficient in object-oriented programming)
There's no need to specify
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https://www.linkedin.com/in/alishahzodov/
You can make use of hyperlinks here
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Projects
You definitely need to put more projects!
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certain scenarios,
what specific scenarios?
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though it comes at the cost of higher memory usage
No need to mention this
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Debugged code with hand-tracing method to root cause a binary code bug in the CPU.
Weak bullet comparatively -- might request you to drop it
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Built and tested 50+ circuits with circuitverse with close to 100% coverage, which formed the core components ofthe CPU
Action statement-fy this
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reeing up resources allocated towardsbug-fixing
by how much? Saving how much money with the freed up resources?
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random space before comma
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large codebase, contributing to the maintenance of a software system comprising over 2,000 files.
I almost refuse to believe that you've worked with 2,000 files -- even as a SWE at a FAANG I've never had to maintain 2000 files. I've maybe contributed to 80 files so far.
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ccessible way
what does accessible way mean in communication? curious
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Created customized learning resources including exercises and challenges for the tutees, promoting proactiveness inlearning, as well as also sharing learning some learning resources which i use, such as leetcode and W3Schools.
Watch your grammar and spelling!
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n
Some are missing periods
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persons
students'
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Provided peer tutoring and academic support to classmates in various computer science courses, including webdevelopment, data structures and algorithms, database systems, and computer programming, leading to a gradeboost of approximately 10% at the end of the semester
Bullet is too long!
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With the experience gained with web development fundamentals, A proficiency in Angular, Vue and PHP wasdeveloped
Action statement-fy this
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Bachelor of Computer Science,
If your GPA is > 3.5, you should probably put it in there as well
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Coding Languages and Databases
Probably better to omit "and Databases"
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Demonstrated collaboration, creativity, and adaptability to tackle diverse cybersecurity problems.
Any specific tools you've used for this?
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4th place
Curiosity question - out of how many teams?
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Used SMTP protocol to send mail to network administrator of detected intrusions
Action statement this one
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simulate attacks
what kind of attacks?
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howcasing attentionto detail in system design.
I feel like "showcasing attention to detail" is never the result here -- what are something tangible instead? For example, did you end up fixing some vulnerabilities using your own custom NIDS?
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Conducted vulnerability assessments and classified malicious activities
with your own NIDS? Or something else?
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machine learning
using what? Also, how was it tested? Accuracy?
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(Wireshark library for Python)
No need for this
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analyzing log data
curiosity question - can you simulate AND analyze using nmap? or did you need two different tools?
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like nmap
like nmap or just nmap?
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nteractive dashboards
using what?
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Designed and implemented a fully functional SIEM home lab
Bold that doesn't need bolding (I'll stop giving feedback for bolding from now on, I think you understand the point now lol)
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Elastic SIEM-Based Threat Detection & Log Analysis Home Lab
Is this a single project? Or is it two projects?
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Software Developer, Barter Trader
Software Developer Intern or real Software Developer?
Also I think you need more technical bullets with proper results
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Worked independently and as part of a team to implement innovative solutions, consistently meeting objectives andshowing the ability to adapt quickly to a changing environment.
I feel like Agile bullet can even be combined with this one as well
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Utilized Confluence for documenting project requirements, tracking progress, and collaborating with team members toensure smooth communication and project alignment.
Can we combine the hypothetical Agile bullet this this one?
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Confluence
Another bold that doesn't need bolding
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adhering to Agiledevelopment methodologies and the MVVM design pattern
These two topics (Agile and MVVM) can probably be their own bullets
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Designed and implemented scalable and secure features in an Android application using Java,
How did you make it scalable? "Using Java" doesn't prove anything here
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Software Developer, Barter Trader
Same feedback here about visually separating your employer and your role
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Tutor, Dalhousie University
There should be some sort of visual separation between your role and the employer instead of just a singular comma.
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simplify complex programming and information security concepts
"Simplify complex programming and info security concepts" probably comes out inaccurately - you probably didn't simplify the concepts, but you just conveyed it in a simplified method. Probably needs a rewording here
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collaborative learning environment
You should drop the bold here
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ostered a collaborative learning environment that emphasized critical analysis and effective communication.
You should turn this into an action statement.
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Demonstrated attention to detail by tailoring explanations to individual learning styles and resolving diverse technicalqueries
Generally confused about this bullet - How do you demonstrate attention to detail by "resolving diverse technical queries"? I feel like this bullet needs a general rewording to make it flow better.
Additionally, since this is a bit of a relevant experience, I might ask you to put in more technical-focused bullets as well rather than showing off your soft skills
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CIATriad, Risk Assessments, Incidence Response, and Access Control Model
I'd be very conservative about using bolds here.
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attention to detail
Going back to being conservative with bullets - if you don't need to use bolds, don't use it
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using strong interpersonal skillsand a problem-solving approach showcasing passion for programming and Cybersecurity
Probably better to remove this / reword this -- this is a better fit for your cover letter than your resume
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SummaryCybersecurity-focused third-year Computer Science student with a strong interest in defensive security, digitalforensics, and data analytics. Hands-on experience in Security Operations, including building an ElasticSIEM-based Threat Detection and Log Analysis lab for monitoring and analyzing security events.
Remove Summary entirely
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Expected Graduation: August 2026
Should say your start date for your university as well
e.g. September 2022 - August 2026
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smth something
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250,000+
SHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESH
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• Academic discord bot used by 2000+ students to modernize course information provider experience.Intern Report | React, Node.js, Express.js, AWS (API Gateway, Lambda, Amplify, SES, ...) Jul 2022 – Sep 2024• Leading the development of a public crowdsourced aggregate information about internships.Mouseless | Python, Pandas, OpenCV, Git Jun 2022 – May 2023• Leading the development of a machine learning cursor peripheral that tracks eye movements.Don’t Touch It! | C#, Blender, Unity Feb 2022 – March 2022• Collaborated in the development of a game that tests human curiosity
ur project sucks
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DANIEL KANG
This is a really cool name
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