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  1. Sep 2017
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    1. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      The debate is still going on, and what scientist find out in the future will hopefully answer some of the many questions we all have.

      So what's the problem? That science doesn't know enough about climate change? Or that some politicians reject the notion of climate change? Or something else. ?

      #Haleigh
    2. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      but how climate change has made the storms more powerful and devastating

      So... climate change creates stronger variations in weather, not necessarily "hotter"... We might get exceptionally strong snow storms this winter. That confirms scientists' conceptions of climate change. right? This is a very nuanced subject. I'll be looking for your ideas about the issue to become nuanced, too. Great!

      #Haleigh
    3. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      scientist need to get to the bottom of it.

      This implies that scientists have only recently begun studying "climate change." True? If now, how can you reword this to be more precise?

      #Haleigh
    4. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      Therefore climate change is not real.

      Because this is a sentence fragment, it can be interpreted to be your view. Is this what you mean?

      #Haleigh
    5. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      fact of scientist changing the research of “Global Warming” to “Climate Change” makes him skeptical, and he is not the only one. On The Daily Dot

      Can you provide links to these sources within this document?

      #Haleigh
    6. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      climate change is not real.

      This is an opportunity to define more than 2 p.o.v.'s. For instance some don't believe "climate change" is "real." But others believe climate change is "natural" not "man made..."

      #Haleigh
    7. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      nature.

      Great transition to another p.o.v. by the way...

      #Haleigh
    8. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      the

      Which? The "the" here refers to an article you've already introduced...

      #Haleigh
    9. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      Trump

      Who? Rewrite this to address an audience from the year 2050. How would you change the language? Why?

      #Haleigh
    10. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      Trumps view that climate change is not real, and that it is just an act of nature.

      How do we know this is President Trump's view?

      #Haleigh
    11. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      Michael E. Mann, Susan J. Hassol and Thomas C. Peterson

      Are these scientists? Why should we listen to them? What is there expertise?

      #Haleigh
    12. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      New York Times

      Italicize titles of books, magazines, newspapers.

      #Haleigh
    13. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      With these natural disasters coming out of the blue

      Isn't your point, and the point of scientists, that these storms and their severity are not coming "out of the blue"?

      #Haleigh
    14. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      was Texas that was

      Just as a matter of interesting style practice, can you rewrite this sentence so that there is no verb "to be'? No "was"?

      #Haleigh
    15. MrsA 13 Sep 2017
      Many people are suffering from devastating hurricanes right now

      If someone reads this two months from now, how will this read?

      #Haleigh
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