, I liked and some I do not.
Really work on verb tense consistency.
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Give attribution to these images. And consider the spatial mode of this post. Right now the spacing seems awkward and unintentional.
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Artifact
Do you mean BED too?
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sounds of water running.
Where are you in the Aquarium here? It's a big, busy, diverse space.
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At the time of going on Wednesday February 8, 2016 there was very few people so there was not a huge amount of commotion from individuals.
This sentence exemplifies work needed on the sentence level. Work with me in office hours or with Writing Studio tutors.
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different take on the Georgia Aquarium
Different from whose?
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an important factor in our lives?
Really good question. Now... what is the purpose of this post? It seems short. Underdeveloped. Is there a thesis? A focus? I'd like to see this revised to be a full post! (And maybe some sound too? See me for help if needed!)
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What music means to me?
Do you mean this as a question?
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Classnote
This category needs an "s" at the end.
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Discussion Question
How can you make this more specific so that someone from outside of the class might find it interesting or useful?
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