The tear gascame 30 seconds later.
Explaining the pace with "30 seconds later" makes me feel like I was there
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- Dec 2023
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vault.si.com vault.si.com
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No athlete has embodied the soul of a city and the spirit of itspeople as Richard did in the 1940s and '50s in Montreal, my homefor the past 21 years.
This is a weird sentence structure
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www.sbnation.com www.sbnation.com
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raced down the side
Exciting--feels like I"m there
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And that was just the beginning. You’ve never seen a hockey player like Maurice Richard. Not Crosby. Not Gretzky. Not Orr, Beliveau, Howe. None of them had the talent, the intensity, the will to take over a game like Richard. And none of them meant to their fans what le Rocket meant to Canadien fans.
This is especially engaging to Hockey enthusiasts themselves but if that is they're target market then the descriptor is clear and exciting.
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Their teammates swarm about, clutching and shoving one another.
This sentence does a really good job at engaging the reader.
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www.cbc.ca www.cbc.ca
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Topics will change each week. Students will find themselves examining religious metaphors, behaviours and ethics, and drawing links between them and the Habs.
All of these things play into story telling
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He would probably have a lot of things to say about it," Bauer said.
Importance of this statement as it pertains to the conversation
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are, in fact, a faith.
Very interesting way to describe it
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CBC Radio Archive: The Richard Riot
Good use of mixed media
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Unbeaten, unbowed, unrepentant — still forever proud.
Alliteration at the beginning of the sentence brings power to the ending piece “still forever proud” also a great way to end the essay.
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believed
Third party perspective — interesting take on story telling
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- Nov 2023
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www.gutenberg.org www.gutenberg.org
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then could I bear the waiting better."
He’s try to describe the way hope makes us do things differently while still letting the reader come to that conclusion on their own. Interesting writing tactic
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long after nightfall
Great story telling
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speaker ended by adding his own laugh.
The speaker is not just a speaker if he’s injecting his own laugh he is a part of the conversation
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across the water
Interesting way to describe the excitement of exploration by underplaying it
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