- May 2022
-
wordpress.com wordpress.com
-
"I didn't fully understand it at the time, but throughout my time as a freshman at Boston College I've realized that I have the power to alter myself for the better and broaden my perspective on life. For most of my high school experience, I was holding to antiquated thoughts that had an impact on the majority of my daily interactions. Throughout my life, growing up as a single child has affected the way am in social interactions. This was evident in high school class discussions, as I did not yet have the confidence to be talkative and participate even up until the spring term of my senior year."
Tags
- Introduction p.1
- (Major Essay) Introduction paragraph
- In this annotation, I choose to expand on my introduction. Before I explain why I chose the words I did, I should mention that my first draft failed to meet one of the assignment's primary requirements: a "Story like" structure. Finally, I decided to rework my introduction because my first draft did not begin with a clear beginning. Instead, I started by describing the fundamental context of the encounter before detailing my previous experiences. To improve my final edit, I made sure I described my experiences and/or how I felt before they occurred.
Annotators
URL
-
- Jan 2021
-
discourse.ubuntu.com discourse.ubuntu.com
-
( sorry for 2 answers, can’t we edit posts here ? )
-
- Feb 2016
-
lastauth.com lastauth.com
-
Welcome to Hubzilla at LastAuth.com
The Welcome Page. The Man behind the scene's has been truly welcoming. Test 1 Test 2
So my consideration here is to go between an annotation structure such as this and a mind-map structure(initially until I regard other infographic materiaux making) such as mindmup.com.
Tags
Annotators
URL
-