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  1. Nov 2015
    1. I am silver and exact. I have no preconceptions. Whatever I see I swallow immediately Just as it is, unmisted by love or dislike.

      based off of Judah's annotation to the first line, maybe this is a person who likes themself for the way they are and anyone who sees different can take it or leave it

    2. Whatever I see I swallow immediately Just as it is, unmisted by love or dislike. I am not cruel, only truthful

      it just shows an image of what it see's. if anyone gets mad at what they see its not his fault he"s just showing them the truth.

    3. In me she has drowned a young girl, and in me an old woman Rises toward her day after day, like a terrible fish.

      These two lines could be a wakeup call of reality. Something so sharp and serious, there's no humor in this.

    4. Faces and darkness separate us over and over.

      This line makes me think of two lovers perhaps. if the person is gone, the mirror has nothing to reflect but darkness. Because the person is gone, the mirror is apart of the separation and could feel sad or lonely.

    5. I have no preconceptions. Whatever I see I swallow immediately Just as it is, unmisted by love or dislike.

      Reflect everything it sees. Also it will show everything exactly the way it is, however it may feel "love or dislike," that won't cloud it's judgement.

    6. Now I am a lake. A woman bends over me, Searching my reaches for what she really is. Then she turns to those liars, the candles or the moon. I see her back, and reflect it faithfully. She rewards me with tears and an agitation of hands. I am important to her. She comes and goes.

      Not only is this an allusion but her feelings towards her way out of the darkness, to love herself; to be great!!!

    1. Made thee in raggs, halting to th’ press to trudge, Where errors were not lessened (all may judg).

      Poet is afraid to publish her book because she thinks contains many errors and the audience may disapprove of it.

    2. Thou ill-form’d offspring of my feeble brain, Who after birth didst by my side remain, Till snatched from thence by friends, less wise than true, Who thee abroad, expos’d to publick view, Made thee in raggs, halting to th’ press to trudge, Where errors were not lessened (all may judg). At thy return my blushing was not small, My rambling brat (in print) should mother call, I cast thee by as one unfit for light, Thy Visage was so irksome in my sight; Yet being mine own, at length affection would Thy blemishes amend, if so I could: I wash’d thy face, but more defects I saw, And rubbing off a spot, still made a flaw. I stretched thy joynts to make thee even feet, Yet still thou run’st more hobling then is meet; In better dress to trim thee was my mind, But nought save home-spun Cloth, i’ th’ house I find. In this array ’mongst Vulgars mayst thou roam. In Criticks hands, beware thou dost not come; And take thy way where yet thou art not known, If for thy Father askt, say, thou hadst none: And for thy Mother, she alas is poor, Which caus’d her thus to send thee out of door.

      WHOLE POEM IS ABOUT AN AUTHOR'S BOOK WHICH SHE IS NOT CONFIDENT IN AND SCARED TO PUBLISH.

    3. In Criticks hands, beware thou dost not come; And take thy way where yet thou art not known,

      The author does not want her book landing into a critics's hand because she is worried about he review due to the face that she does not like it herself. Because it is flawed in her eyes, she already knows for a fact she'll get a bad review most likely.