They are so used to how their dad interacts with the pole it because an every day thing. It was never questioned at that point like it was just a known thing.

Very descriptive! It describes a well played with dal and it shows' it and it is very thought provoking.

Forcing herself to neglect herself and how she is feeling. It is taking a large tole on her

Go with the flow. Its okay wo rewrite things to figure out what sounds or works the best.

The narrator takes the time to list all these aspects of the character's life because of how significant they are. While they are not something that is used now and have no effect on how people marry today. They had a huge effect on how people married in the past.

Can effect how a character talks with another. Like if its a teacher, parent, or friend.

Is a good description on what this doing and gives the reader a brief view on how the girl thinks and see her cow

One of the most fun and most complicated things to do.

Describing things about a character can be an easy thing to get stuck doing.

She's a very lonely person and because of that she has turned to judging others that are a round her. She judges them as a way to distract herself from how she is truly feeling.

Generally not a point of view that is used very often but some of the most interesting stories out there use it.

You could think of it like a play. You have the script and know how the character that you are playing feels, but you have to be able to show that to the people in the crowd or reading how the character feels.

As someone who is new to weighting I find it a little difficult to not just finish my righting on the first draft. I find it hard to go back and try and add or take out what is or isn't needed.