sweet,
alliteration on the t
sweet,
alliteration on the t
These I painted blind
shows dads passion that even blind he could paint. Shows that when your vision goes the things you cared most about stay with you.
wo cats preening
these cats could symbolize something
three paintings by my father:
father was a painter. This could give insight to what the character went through growing up.
He’s so happy that I’ve come home
shows how his father cares for him and is happy that he was back.
muddy lighting
imagery of room.
heavy as sadness, and sweet as love.
Description on the day.
inside, something golden, glowing,
imagery in a way shows how the persimmon can light up and shows readers what it is suppose to look like.
I didn’t eat but watched the other faces
He knew more about the fruit than others. Could mean he was Chinese and knew better.
fight and fright, wren and yarn.
Shows he is learning things, also they both rhyme could be a play on words and how they a lot sound the same.
I teach her Chinese
Shows background on the main character and what they do.
How to eat
Gives in situation interesting way to set up a poem.
n sixth grade Mrs. Walker slapped the back of my head
This shows the setting of the character and is in first person it shows.