20 Matching Annotations
  1. Aug 2021
    1. We are working hard in halal environment to give all necessary services to all who are looking for halal

      Replace this with something like: "We work hard to provide the best products for those looking for halal and Middle-Eastern services."

    2. a

      capitalize

    3. n

      capitalize

    4. ,

      no space

    5. h M

      you need consistency, are you going to write it with the space, or without? everywhere else is without. It's okay either way because this is your own product and you can call it anything

    6. Halal Gate:Shop

      When you describe things in english, they like to see professional wording, not artistic flowery language. يعني لا تكتب "different meanings of beauty"

      also START SHOPPING should have two Ps

    7. .

      only one period

    8. S

      lowercase s

    9. diffrent

      different

    10. s

      capitalize the beginning of sentences

    11. :S

      missing space in the middle again

    12. conatainer

      container.* add one period

    13. old fashion

      old fashioned, and missing a noun after

    14. Halal Food, Organic

      no need for the random capitalization

    15. :T

      add space in between: "Gate: Tasty" I also don't understand what you mean by Tasty and More. I think it's better to just write Food Services

    16. s

      add period

    17. ,

      same as before. might be best to do CTRL-F " ,"

    18. ,

      remove spaces before commas

  2. Feb 2021
  3. Jan 2021