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  1. Nov 2020
    1. Selective courses such as Honors or AP (Advanced Placement) wereexcluded as were three sets of letters where all students in one class wroteon the same topic.

      While these students were excluded from statistical extrapolation, this is evidence there was not control over how participation was assigned or how the opportunity was given. Students in other classes might have had limited options for topics, might have been guided or impacted by preceding lessons on civics, might have had letters read prior to submission, impacting a student's sense of freedom to write a true and preferred opinion.

  2. Oct 2020
    1. The schools and courses that fit the selection crite-ria represent students of various grade levels (Grades 8–12)

      The vast majority of these students can be voters in this election. With the president being incumbent, I wonder if participation in this project increased the likelihood of the same students choosing to vote. This project might have made the students feel invested since their opinion was voiced.

    2. Topics associated with majority students of colorBlack Lives Matter 3.9**2.0Bullying 1.7*1.2Corruption 0.3*0.1Discrimination & Prejudice 4.1**2.9Immigration 15.3**7.1Muslims 0.5**0.2Police 8.1**4.1Race/Ethnicity 8.2**5.0Sexual Violence 1.7*1.3Topics associated with majority White studentsAbortion & Reproductive Issues 5.2 6.9**Animal rights 3.5 4.7**Driving/Transportation 0.4 0.7*Energy1.41.9**Environment & Wildlife 4.7 5.5*Food, Nutrition, & Hunger 1.6 2.3**Guns 7.7 10.7**Health3.34.6**Labor & Wages

      This highlights priorities. If students instead checked off boxes of things that mattered to them, there would be more overlap. Rather, these letters are mostly single topics that likely felt most important, under attack, or urgent.

    3. Dear Mr. President,

      Students were instructed not to reference who the president was, but clearly Adeline knew who she was writing to. I wonder if her high level of logic and use of formal citations was not just evidence for her argument, but also evidence of her personal value as an intelligent and serious American voice. As an 8th grader in 2016, she's potentially voting for the first time in this election or possibly still a hair too young.

    4. tudents at the Michigan site used personalexperience with the lowest frequency across the five schools, but citationat the highest and unsourced data at the second highest frequency.These contrasts between schools in both forms of argumentation andtypes of evidence used suggests different emphases in instruction withregard to what makes a convincing argument as well as what counts as evi-dence.

      I must admit I was swayed in my letter choice by the use of citations and logical arguments. I found long letters that made strong claims, without citations and evidence, caused me to feel more like an editor than a listener. I kept thinking arguments were uninteresting when they made bold claims without any supporting evidence.

    5. personal experience. Personal experience was most likely to be used withinletters that made empathic appeals, and then ethical appeals,

      I was looking for a high level of personal involvement in the first letter I chose. It made both an emotional and ethical appeal towards immigration. Unlike some other immigration letters I didn't chose, this one expanded to the need to have a global effort, showing higher levels of empathy.

    6. The kind of cynicism and mistrust that M. Levinson (2012) ascribes tohistorically marginalized

      Cynicism and mistrust has been shown and the number one cause leading to political disengagement in adults too. Therefore, not teaching students to participate is still taking a position and affecting their future voice.

    7. Additionally, as we’ve inferred that these letters are substan-tially shaped by teachers’ instructional practices, we must questionhoweducators gain practice at recentering classrooms on student voice.Fretting about youth civic engagement and students’ lack of preparationfor a media landscape bombarded by fake news largely ignores the factthat student civic identities are substantially shaped by schools and teachers.Our exploration of writing in just five sites within this study reveals thatyouth in areas that civic literature frequently sees as disengaged are highlyvocal around civic issues that surround them; more important, the patternsof what kinds of evidence they utilize and what kinds of arguments theymake suggest that teachers have guided how student civic voice is articu-lated, with what resources, and in acknowledgment of what other commu-nities and movements.

      I'm not certain this advocates for schools to be involved in civic engagement. I also think it's a fallacy the writer has continually believed that society is unaware of the role schools can take in building youth politics. The power teachers have to shape, alter, and impact student voice is why certain politicians lash out against universities and why some schools are institutionally underfunded, why standardized learning is pushed in public schools, and why some people are okay with high drop out rates in certain districts. Silencing student AND teacher voice is intentional.

    8. 11,035 student

      This is a large study database. Letters can give insight on so many things including a comparison in writing ability. As a researcher, our team's data base for EF (executive function,) wasn't this large. I wonder if the data includes how the instructions for this assignment were delivered.

    9. At the same time that the 2016 election sparked a renewed interest incivic education (Tripodo & Pondiscio, 2017), it is also increasingly apparentthat traditional boundaries of civics are unable to account for a system inwhich youth fear for their safety in schools, children are being kept in cages,and individuals are being legislated ‘‘out of existence’’ (Green, Benner, &Pear, 2018). Considering these dehumanizing markers of civic life in theUnited States today in tandem with the powerful forms of political engage-ment that youth are a part of—from Black Lives Matter to DREAMers to theParkland-inspired March for Our Lives—we explore the data in this studywith the recognition of new civic ‘‘innovation’’ occurring today (Mirra &Garcia, 2017).

      I highlighted this paragraph because it is so clearly Liberal and a reason why civics isn't neutral. Can a class be taught about caging children, legislating individuals "out of existence," and BLM in a neutral way? I picked two of my letters because they were passionate and emotional about welfare, but entirely opposite positions on the topic. How can a classroom cover hot, political topics without causing rage amongst parents? Even causing a kid to expose their family's leaning on political topics can be dangerous. I think of my opposing letters and feel like these two students could never be friends.

    10. Occluding this reimagining today is that the pub-lic too frequently perceives schools as politically neutral sites that do notincorporate the forms of youth activism and political participation that arepresent in participatory and networked contexts today

      I don't think the public sees schools as politically neutral, in fact I think a reason schools avoid more civic education is because education is often not neutral. Aside from charter and private schools, public schools and universities are publicly seen as Liberal. This is part of why there is a push to have public dollars follow a student rather than be contained in the public education system.

    11. Our findings call for civic educationthat listens to and centers the voices of Luis and his peers as emerging civicactors

      My high school had a single quarter of one class that addressed how the government worked. We spent a tragically tiny amount of time learning about something that overwhelmingly shapes our lives. We had an amazing opportunity to spend two weeks, every year, at the Denver capitol, playing a mock US government. Our school representation was miniscule because virtually no one knew it was even happening. The interactive activity is why I had a pocket constitution in my pocket and obsessed over the details of how our government worked.

    12. he describes per-sonal experiences with violence (‘‘I know what it’s like to live on a battle-ground’’

      The first letter that stood out to me was another student personally connected to an international issue; immigration. I'm accustomed to believing kids echo the opinions of their parents, but kids are part of our policies and can offer insight and experience.

    1. Full  descriptions  of  each  assignmentand  corresponding  rubricswill  be  available  in  Canvas.

      Well, I now believe I will complete this class far better versed in technology. None of the assignments cover something I am currently familiar with.

    2. to  prepare  them  for  an  increasingly  complex,  demanding,  and  competitive  workplace

      I'm actually feeling a little guilty about opting my kids out of computer learning in school. Just a little guilty though. I'm amazed at the things they seem to have picked up intuitively and really don't want my kids staring at screens in school. Maybe this class will change my mind, but I was really disappointed to learn this opt out was not honored. When schools went virtual, I found out my kid was extremely well versed in the computer programs already.

    3. Promote  and  model  digital  citizenship  and  resp

      As an avid gamer, and occasional Facebook user, I often blame technology for the breakdown of model behavior. Hidden behind our screens, we're often more callous, defensive, reactionary, judgmental, sensitive, and insensitive. I also struggle to not be misunderstood. I even read a study that says kids are less likely to believe someone is likeable in text if they use punctuation.