20 Matching Annotations
  1. Mar 2025
    1. That might be personal to me, as someone who grew up with a dad who was what you might call a campfire guitarist — not a performer, just a dad who used to entertain us with songs like "Dark as a Dungeon," a little folk tune about the lethal dangers of coal mining. Maybe to you, it's not the guitar.

      This referes to morer personall opnions and asspects of the ad, but can help the reader relate to the topic. It mentions how many people are crushed (haha) because of the unintended offense that this ad portrayed.

  2. Feb 2025
    1. I placed a jar in Tennessee,    And round it was, upon a hill.    It made the slovenly wilderness    Surround that hill.

      The jar changed the wilderness round the hill.

  3. Jan 2025
    1. I’m off again: muck, pond, ditch, residue of any thrillingly dead thing.

      Talks about how golden retrivers get easily distracted, and are very curious creatures.

    1. My name is OzymandiasOzymandias Pharaoh Rameses II (reigned 1279-1213 BCE). According to the OED, the statue was once 57 feet tall., King of Kings; Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair! Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare

      He thought that his legacy would be forever, but when he died, his legacy was over, and no one knew who he was. His statue was barely put-together and his legacy never remembered.

    1. I was gonna write about Mama's funeral but Lamont and Ms. Marcus going back and forth zapped all the ideas from my head.

      Sometimes when confilict is happening around you, it gets hard to focus.

    1. Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,    Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

      The Author talks about how elderly people who's life is being slowly taken away from them because of their aging body, and tells them to keep on going for as long as you can. The dying of the light refers to light being the equivalent live, and when the light is gone, you have passed (away).

    1. In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.

      This particular part of the poem emphasized how when you die in combat, you don't go down with out a fight. There is pain, agony, and a mass amount of suffering involved with it. You will not go down peacefully.

    1. Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots, But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind; Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots

      They talk about how even though they were extremely tired, they kept on marching even if they were wounded.

    1. That there’s some corner of a foreign field That is for ever England.

      They are talking about how England is there homeland, they are very patriotic about how they describe it in the folling sentences.

  4. Dec 2024
    1. They are free men, but I am banishèd. And sayest thou yet that exile is not death? Hadst thou no poison mixed, no sharp-ground knife, No sudden mean of death, though ne'er so mean But 'banishèd' to kill me? 'Banishèd'!

      Romeo expresses how much he longs for Juliet, and how death is better than not seeing her. He would rather be killed in gruesome ways than never see her again.

    1. Speakest thou from thy heart?

      Juliet is stunned at the response from the nurse. She was the only person that she went to for conformation and she could trust her, but was let down by the Nurse's love for county Paris.

  5. Nov 2024
    1. but you live uncuddled, uncoddled, can’t be bought at Petco and fed to fat snakes because you are not the maze-rat of labs: pale, pretty-eyed, trained.

      This commpairs the sad life of a rat to the nepo animals, who are wanted for their beauty.

  6. Sep 2024
    1. english sits in her mouth remixed so “strawberry” becomes “eh-strawbeddy” and “cookie” becomes “eh-cookie” and kitchen, key chain, and chicken all sound the same.

      This explains how their mother talks differently because of where they came from, and how things are mixed into Enlish.

    1. Everywhere men sat     shackled in sorrow, expecting the worst,     wishing often he and his kingdom     would be conquered.

      The quote talked about how the kind didn't even want his kingdom and wanted someone to take it from him. It talks about how everyone is sad, and they are all feeling that.

    2. For Beadohilde     her brother’s death weighed less heavily     than her own heartsoreness once it was clearly     understood she was bearing a child.

      Talks about how even though her brother died, her own sorrow and problems were worst and made her feel more hurt adn stressed that that of her brother's death.

  7. Aug 2024
    1. As he sang these tender strains, the very ghosts shed tears.

      This showed how even the sadness and grief in his songs caused sadness among the ghousts that surounded him.

    1. With my song I will charm Demeter’s daughter, I will charm the Lord of the Dead, Moving their hearts with my melody. I will bear her away from Hades.

      This quote shows how he was willing to do anything to get his lover back. Even if it meant doing something very dangerous.

    1. why did you turn back, that hell should be reinhabited of myself thus swept into nothingness?

      She is asking why he left her, and why he turned to her, and why he tried to come back. Even when she was so close to reaching the end, he turned around to see her, and if she was really real.