22 Matching Annotations
  1. Nov 2021
    1. But, to my mind, it is the duty of the younger Negro artist, if he accepts any duties at all from outsiders, to change through the force of his art that old whispering “I want to be white,” hidden in the aspirations of his people, to “Why should I want to be white? I am a Negro–and beautiful”?

      This is such a powerful line within this particular piece. Being proud of who you are, how you look, and where you come from, no matter who you are, is so necessary to produce meaningful and beautiful art. It's also necessary to develop healthy views of the "self" and to show others how to do so. This is still a lesson that is being taught today to children and adults alike, especially for African Americans, making this line stand out more.

    2. The children go to a mixed school. In the home they read white papers and magazines. And the mother often says “Don’t be like niggers” when the children are bad. A frequent phrase from the father is, “Look how well a white man does things.”

      In our society mixed schools is seen as a positive thing, where children can be shown different people and lives and experiences while receiving an education but Hughes seems to be making the point that it isn't good.This is especially true if the child's home-life only solidifies what the child may learn in a school during this time, that white people are better. It's interesting to see the "Negro" family desperate to fit into white society and teach their child to conform, when he probably isn't fully aware of why he's being taught this in the first place.

    3. But this is the mountain standing in the way of any true Negro art in America–this urge within the race toward whiteness, the desire to pour racial individuality into the mold of American standardization, and to be as little Negro and as much American as possible.

      The separation between being Negro and being American is interesting here, especially when the mountain is being used to signify that separation. Hughes is using America in two ways here, to represent the country and white America, which is a necessary distinction to make, while also creating three different experiences. It creates the experience of the land and society itself, white society, and then Negro society, and it's the attempts to cross into these societies that is harming the work created by "Negros". I wonder if this mountain of "conformity" can't be avoided entirely by looking to exist by that third America.

  2. Oct 2021
    1. If there were water we should stop and drink Amongst the rock one cannot stop or think Sweat is dry and feet are in the sand If there were only water amongst the rock Dead mountain mouth of carious teeth that cannot spit

      This section is a complete opposite to the rest of the poem. The dryness of the rocks and mountain are connected to death and the inability to think while the narrator practically begs for water. It appears that here water is meant to represent life and maybe even hope, considering how desperate the narrator is.

    2. The river sweats                Oil and tar

      It's interesting here that the "wet" motif includes not just water, but oil and tar. With the personification of the river sweating, it can be viewed as the river laboring and its products are pollution that are harming most likely harming everything around it.

    3. The river’s tent is broken: the last fingers of leaf Clutch and sink into the wet bank

      Once again we see "wet" in the form of the river used in a negative light as the season changes. The leaves falling from trees are clearly dying and sinking, representing death and an end to something positive.

    4. yet there the nightingale Filled all the desert with inviolable voice

      While this stanza uses negative imagery and words to describe wet things, the imagery and description for "dry" things is quite positive. Nightingale songs are lively and considered beautiful, making the dry desert seem better or nicer than the "wet" section.

    5. Unstoppered, lurked her strange synthetic perfumes, Unguent, powdered, or liquid—troubled, confused And drowned the sense in odours;

      In this section liquid or "wet" appears to be something negative once again. It dulls senses and creates concern. The use of the word "synthetic" also suggests it is fake or produces falsehood in a way. All of these different aspects come together to produce a strange and worrying image.

    6. Bin gar keine Russin, stamm’ aus Litauen, echt deutsch.

      After more than half a stanza in English, one single German line is introduced. What was it about this line in particular that needed to be in German? How does this line in German about the narrator's identity connect with the seasonal descriptions?

  3. Sep 2021
    1. Poets and kings are but the clerks of Time, Tiering the same dull webs of discontent, Clipping the same sad alnage of the years.

      This is very strong imagery that stood out to me, placing kings and poets on the same level of people who are either scholars or actual clerks, as both are possible in this case. I wonder why they are being connected to "alnage" in this poem.

    1. For I could never make you see That no one knows what is good Who knows not what is evil; And no one knows what is true Who knows not what is false.

      This is really interesting word choice to describe understanding large concepts like "good", "evil", "true", and "false". It seems to be saying that no one can understand one without having to understand the other and that all definitions are subjective to each person. In connection with the literature mentioned prior to the ending lines, I take this to mean that the knowledge in those books don't offer the understanding a person needs for these concepts. Instead, people must use what's around them as well as their own ideas to understand the world.

    2. Tragedy, comedy, valor and truth, Courage, constancy, heroism, failure–

      This poem is interesting in that it continues to list things that are somewhat related four at a time. The first time are things related to poetry, next are contents of plays and adjectives relating to tales of heroes.

    1. I have watched her sometimes away off in the open country, creeping as fast as a cloud shadow in a high wind.

      Both this narrator and the narrator in "The Souls of Black Folk" use shadows as motifs. They both have shadows following them representing a darker part of their lives. For this narrator, it represents the woman in the wallpaper, which she is slowly believes she is becoming, and for Du Bois, the shadow represents an alternative thinking to protect his own mind.

    2. I determine for the thousandth time that I WILL follow that pointless pattern to some sort of a conclusion.

      Just like the narrator in "The Virgin and the Dynamo" the narrator here is determined to reach a conclusion, an explanation to help her make sense of the world around her. It is a desperation that drives both of them based on their own emotions and understandings about what they perceive as being the most important.

    3. John is practical in the extreme. He has no patience with faith, an intense horror of superstition, and he scoffs openly at any talk of things not to be felt and seen and put down in figures.

      In this story, John is not spiritual in the slightest and relies only on facts and figures, obvious, clear-cut science that can be explained. This is a direct opposite to Adam in "The Virgin and the Dynamo", who steps away from science and math and facts, downright rejecting them, in exchange for stepping fully into faith. This difference in characteristics showcases the narrator's issues and actually leads to them worsening over time.

  4. Aug 2021
    1. Yet in mechanics, whatever the mechanicians might think, both energies acted as interchangeable force on man, and by action on man all known force may be measured.

      The energies he is speaking of here are the energies or "forces" of the past; the Virgin and the steam engine. This conclusion he is drawing is an odd one. He is essentially saying that both energies are forces and his conclusion is that these forces are measured by their effect on humans? Is he saying the effect religion and previous invention had on humans is the effect this new force is having on him? This effect cannot even be properly measured. It's just as abstract as whatever "force" he has decided to worship.

    2. Indeed, Langley seemed to be worried by the same trouble, for he constantly repeated that the new forces were anarchical, and especially that he was not responsible for the new rays, that were little short of parricidal in their wicked spirit towards science. His own rays, with which he had doubled the solar spectrum, were altogether harmless and beneficent; but Radium denied its God–or, what was to Langley the same thing, denied the truths of his Science. The force was wholly new.

      I'm a little confused by this concept. Where did the idea of rays come in? Adams seems to be using different words for this new "force" that one can assume is from the dynamos or is the dynamos. This is further backed by Langley saying he didn't like the direction these "forces" were leading science but Adams also mentions the solar spectrum. So will the dynamos and the future of science also be referred to as "rays" and "forces" for the rest of the chapter? If that's the case, then what's the point of using different words?

    3. the nearest approach to the revolution of 1900 was that of 310, when Constantine set up the Cross. The rays that Langley disowned, as well as those which he fathered, were occult, supersensual, irrational; they were a revelation of mysterious energy like that of the Cross; they were what, in terms of mediæval science, were called immediate modes of the divine substance.

      This obsession with force seems to take on a new meaning here as the narrator directly compares it to a supernatural and divine force like the Cross, especially since that Cross supposedly helped Constantine in the battle that occurred afterwards. Is the narrator saying that this force, whatever it is, will prepare him for some "battle" he may face in the future? For instance, the battle for knowledge or understanding in regards to this force. Is that why he calls this personal discovery of force a "revolution"?

    1. From the oak turned to a wall, they Lion, From they sack and they belly opened And all that was hidden burning on the oil-stained earth

      Are these three lines summaries of the first four stanzas or are they simply callbacks to them?