The little mermaid lifted her glorified eyes towards the sun, and felt them, for the first time, filling with tears
Each were where they needed to be.
The little mermaid lifted her glorified eyes towards the sun, and felt them, for the first time, filling with tears
Each were where they needed to be.
kingdom of heaven,
Why would the author choose Heaven?! That's a place for Christians and humans at that. Interesting word here.
“And we may even get there sooner,” whispered one of her companions. “Unseen we can enter the houses of men, where there are children, and for every day on which we find a good child, who is the joy of his parents and deserves their love, our time of probation is shortened. The child does not know, when we fly through the room, that we smile with joy at his good conduct, for we can count one year less of our three hundred years. But when we see a naughty or a wicked child, we shed tears of sorrow, and for every tear a day is added to our time of trial!”42
More and more keeps added. Not sure if this needs to be here. It doesn't change the story any.
“A mermaid has not an immortal soul, nor can she obtain one unless she wins the love of a human being. On the power of another hangs her eternal destiny. But the daughters of the air, although they do not possess an immortal soul, can, by their good deeds, procure one for themselves.40 We fly to warm countries, and cool the sultry air that destroys mankind with the pestilence. We carry the perfume of the flowers to spread health and restoration. After we have striven for three hundred years41 to all the good in our power, we receive an immortal soul and take part in the happiness of mankind. You, poor little mermaid, have tried with your whole heart to do as we are doing; you have suffered and endured and raised yourself to the spirit-world by your good deeds; and now, by striving for three hundred years in the same way, you may obtain an immortal soul.”
Everything she desired was right at home. This is where her grandmother told her to be and asked her to go in the beginning!
then she flung it far away from her into the waves;37 the water turned red where it fell, and the drops that spurted up looked like blood
The theme of family was very strong here. The prince and the princess were now family. The little mermaid gave the ultimate sacrifice --- her life---for the prince's happiness!
She bent down and kissed his fair brow,
She did the one thing she had done in the beginning. This brings it back full circle.
We have given our hair to the witch,” said they, “to obtain help for you, that you may not die to-night. She has given us a knife: here it is, see it is very sharp. Before the sun rises you must plunge it into the heart of the prince; when the warm blood falls upon your feet they will grow together again, and form into a fish’s tail, and you will be once more a mermaid, and return to us to live out your three hundred years before you die and change into the salt sea foam. Haste, then; he or you must die before sunrise. Our old grandmother moans so for you, that her white hair is falling off from sorrow, as ours fell under the witch’s scissors. Kill the prince and come back; hasten: do you not see the first red streaks in the sky? In a few minutes the sun will rise, and you must die.” And then they sighed deeply and mournfully, and sank down beneath the waves.
Her family's love for her is immeasurable. However, she must hurt someone else she loves to live. How is this fair? All she wanted was true love and to live forever.
She saw her sisters rising out of the flood: they were as pale as herself; but their long beautiful hair waved no more in the wind, and had been cut off.
They had given up all they had to save her!
. All was joy and gayety on board ship till long after midnight; she laughed and danced with the rest, while the thoughts of death were in her heart.
Sometimes one must pretend nothing is wrong yet everything is wrong. Her fate awaits for her sins.
She knew this was the last evening she should ever see the prince, for whom she had forsaken her kindred and her home; she had given up her beautiful voice, and suffered unheard-of pain daily for him, while he knew nothing of it.
She's starting to see she gave it all up for nothing.
The little mermaid could not help thinking of her first rising out of the sea, when she had seen similar festivities and joys;
She's now longing to go back. In this life one is always longing to be somewhere they aren't!
The little mermaid, dressed in silk and gold, held up the bride’s train;
This just poured salt into the wound!
The little mermaid kissed his hand, and felt as if her heart were already broken.
She can't get the desires of her heart now.
“It was you,” said the prince, “who saved my life when I lay dead on the beach,”
Weird twist of fate. He found the one he had been searching for and she was a true princess!
Then the little mermaid, who was very anxious to see whether she was really beautiful, was obliged to acknowledge that she had never seen a more perfect vision of beauty. Her skin was delicately fair, and beneath her long dark eye-lashes her laughing blue eyes shone with truth and purity.
Women have to see the other woman always.
he thought she could distinguish her father’s castle, and upon it her aged grandmother, with the silver crown on her head, looking through the rushing tide at the keel of the vessel. Then her sisters came up on the waves, and gazed at her mournfully, wringing their white hands. She beckoned to them, and smiled, and wanted to tell them how happy and well off she was; but the cabin-boy approached, and when her sisters dived down he thought it was only the foam of the sea which he saw.
She's missing her family. Yet they are always there. Just out of reach.
I must travel,” he had said to her; “I must see this beautiful princess; my parents desire it; but they will not oblige me to bring her home as my bride. I
They arranged marriages back then. It was not for love. But he's going to try to go against the king!
They will meet no more: while I am by his side, and see him every day. I will take care of him, and love him, and give up my life for his sake.”
Even thought he loves another, she feels the prince will always be with her!
The youngest of them found me on the shore, and saved my life. I saw her but twice, and she is the only one in the world whom I could love; but you are like her, and you have almost driven her image out of my mind. She belongs to the holy temple, and my good fortune has sent you to me instead of her; and we will never part.”
He doesn't know she really saved him. He's telling her he loves her but he never will in the way she wants. This is a sad story!
As the days passed, she loved the prince more fondly, and he loved her as he would love a little child, but it never came into his head to make her his wife;35 yet, unless he married her, she could not receive an immortal soul; and, on the morning after his marriage with another, she would dissolve into the foam of the sea.
He never loved her in the way she wanted to be loved. This is usually how young love goes.
Once during the night her sisters came up arm-in-arm, singing sorrowfully, as they floated on the water. She beckoned to them, and then they recognized her, and told her how she had grieved them. After that, they came to the same place every night; and once she saw in the distance her old grandmother, who had not been to the surface of the sea for many years, and the old Sea King, her father, with his crown on his head. They stretched out their hands towards her, but they did not venture so near the land as her sisters did.
The theme of family is huge. No matter what your family is always there for you. Even if they can't be right with you.
The prince said she should remain with him always,
It's a start but it's still leading the reader into believing what they saw in the Disney movie will happen.
danced as no one yet had been able to dance. At each moment her beauty became more revealed, and her expressive eyes appealed more directly to the heart than the songs of the slaves.
Often people don't realize the talent they possess.
his was great sorrow to the little mermaid; she knew how much more sweetly she herself could sing once, and she thought, “Oh if he could only know that! I have given away my voice forever, to be with him.”
If he doesn't love her for her and not her voice, then they weren't meant to be.
Beautiful female slaves,29 dressed in silk and gold, stepped forward and sang before the prince and his royal parents: one sang better than all the others, and the prince clapped his hands30 and smiled at her.
The prince likes singing slaves to entertain him.
Then the little mermaid drank the magic draught, and it seemed as if a two-edged sword went through her delicate body: she fell into a swoon, and lay like one dead. When the sun arose and shone over the sea, she recovered, and felt a sharp pain; but just before her stood the handsome young prince.
This leads that reader along and makes the reader think she may get him.
going to leave them forever, she felt as if her heart would break.
She's realizing the gravity of what she has done.
polypi sprang back in terror when they caught sight of the glittering draught,
This must be a serious potion
“But if you take away my voice,” said the little mermaid, “what is left for me?”
Too many think that who they are is found in their talents and abilities.
ou have the sweetest voice of any who dwell here in the depths of the sea, and you believe that you will be able to charm the prince with it also, but this voice you must give to me; the best thing you possess will I have for the price of my draught. My own blood must be mixed with it, that it may be as sharp as a two-edged sword
The one thing she values is what she must give as payment.
“But I must be paid also
everything comes with a price!
“I will do it
Again teenagers are stupid!
But think again,” said the witch; “for when once your shape has become like a human being, you can no more be a mermaid. You will never return through the water to your sisters, or to your father’s palace again; and if you do not win the love of the prince, so that he is willing to forget his father and mother for your sake, and to love you with his whole soul, and allow the priest to join your hands that you may be man and wife, then you will never have an immortal soul. The first morning after he marries another your heart will break, and you will become foam on the crest of the waves.”
The Sea Witch is reminding her of the family she will lose.
“Yes, I will
Teenagers think they know but they don't know!
I will prepare a draught for you, with which you must swim to land tomorrow before sunrise, and sit down on the shore and drink it. Your tail will then disappear, and shrink up into what mankind calls legs, and you will feel great pain, as if a sword were passing through you. But all who see you will say that you are the prettiest little human being they ever saw. You will still have the same floating gracefulness of movement, and no dancer will ever tread so lightly; but at every step you take it will feel as if you were treading upon sharp knives, and that the blood must flow. If you will bear all this, I will help you.”
This what the Little Mermaid must endure to get what she wants!
it is very stupid of you, but you shall have your way, and it will bring you to sorrow,
Even the sea witch was trying to be the voice of reason. Teenagers never listen!
, built with the bones of shipwrecked human beings.
See above
The white skeletons of human beings who had perished at sea, and had sunk down into the deep waters,
Proof that humans die
The little mermaid was so alarmed at what she saw, that she stood still, and her heart beat with fear, and she was very nearly turning back; but she thought of the prince, and of the human soul for which she longed, and her courage returned.
She wanted this so badly she would endure anything.
I will venture all for him, and to win an immortal soul, while my sisters are dancing in my father’s palace, I will go to the sea witch,
Putting the plan into action!
But she soon thought again of the world above her, for she could not forget the charming prince, nor her sorrow that she had not an immortal soul like his;
Young love
The whole court applauded her with hands and tails; and for a moment her heart felt quite gay, for she knew she had the loveliest voice25 of any on earth or in the sea.
This is something that seems important to her.
Is there anything I can do to win an immortal soul?” “No,” said the old woman, “unless a man were to love you so much that you were more to him than his father or mother; and if all his thoughts and all his love were fixed upon you,23 and the priest placed his right hand in yours, and he promised to be true to you here and hereafter, then his soul would glide into your body and you would obtain a share in the future happiness of mankind. He would give a soul to you and retain his own as well; but this can never happen. Your fish’s tail, which amongst us is considered so beautiful, is thought on earth to be quite ugly; they do not know any better, and they think it necessary to have two stout props, which they call legs,24 in order to be handsome.”
She's forming a plan now.
“Let us be happy,” said the old lady, “and dart and spring about during the three hundred years that we have to live, which is really quite long enough; after that we can rest ourselves all the better. This evening we are going to have a court ball.”
Grandmother is the voice of reasons.
“Yes,” replied the old lady, “they must also die, and their term of life is even shorter than ours. We sometimes live to three hundred years, but when we cease to exist here we only become the foam on the surface of the water, and we have not even a grave down here of those we love. We have not immortal souls, we shall never live again;21 but, like the green sea-weed, when once it has been cut off, we can never flourish more. Human beings, on the contrary, have a soul22 which lives forever, lives after the body has been turned to dust. It rises up through the clear, pure air beyond the glittering stars. As we rise out of the water, and behold all the land of the earth, so do they rise to unknown and glorious regions which we shall never see.”
This helps to introduce the dilemma!
“If human beings are not drowned,” asked the little mermaid, “can they live forever? do they never die as we do here in the sea?”
Her gears are turning!
There was so much that she wished to know, and her sisters were unable to answer all her questions.
Her gears are turning...she's wilder than her other sisters.
She grew more and more fond of human beings, and wished more and more to be able to wander about with those whose world seemed to be so much larger than her own.
This obsession is growing bigger and bigger.
And she remembered that his head had rested on her bosom, and how heartily she had kissed him
Her new obsession is a little creepy. If this was a friend of mine, I'd tell them to seek help.
She would swim much nearer the shore than any of the others ventured to do
She's brave
Now that she knew where he lived, she spent many an evening and many a night on the water near the palace
This is a new obsession! She just replaced one with a new one.
friend happened to know who the prince was.
There's a glimmer of hope!
her sisters all about it. Then the others heard the secret,
Girls cannot keep a secret!
It was her only comfort to sit in her own little garden, and fling her arm round the beautiful marble statue which was like the prince; but she gave up tending her flowers, and they grew in wild confusion over the paths, twining their long leaves and stems round the branches of the trees, so that the whole place became dark and gloomy
This is just like all of us in life. We get ourselves fixated on one thing and nothing else matters! We let everything else go just to focus on the one true thing we want.
This made her very unhappy, and when he was led away into the great building, she dived down sorrowfully into the water,
Her mental heal is in question again. Isn't that light a teenager to be very happy one min and then the next very manic or depressed? However, this was a serious situation, she had saved his life but being a mermaid prevented the prince from knowing!
She seemed frightened at first, but only for a moment; then she fetched a number of people, and the mermaid saw that the prince came to life again, and smiled upon those who stood round him. But to her he sent no smile; he knew not that she had saved him.
The Little Mermaid was the ONE to save him not this girl! this is enough to make the reader angry!
The mermaid kissed his high, smooth forehead, and stroked back his wet hair; he seemed to her like the marble statue in her little garden
This was not true love! This was just her fantasy.
His limbs were failing him, his beautiful eyes were closed, and he would have died had not the little mermaid come to his assistance.19 She held his head above the water, and let the waves drift them where they would.
She was not going to let him die!
she had seen him sink into the deep waves, and she was glad, for she thought he would now be with her; and then she remembered that human beings could not live in the water, so that when he got down to her father’s palace he would be quite dead.
She's very naive to the new world as most young adults are. This a true metaphor for life.
excepting
This is a word that took me a minute to realize that it wasn't saying expecting. I had to read it a few times!
The little mermaid now perceived that the crew were in danger; even she herself was obliged to be careful to avoid the beams and planks of the wreck which lay scattered on the water.
She is now seeing that the world can be a dangerous place. A true metaphor for life. We have the fun and all the glitz and glamor and then suddenly it's dangerous. Very true to life.
At length the ship groaned and creaked; the thick planks gave way under the lashing of the sea as it broke over the deck; the mainmast snapped asunder like a reed; the ship lay over on her side; and the water rushed in.
This ship has crashed due to the storm!
To the little mermaid this appeared pleasant sport;
This was more fun for her than the people on the ship!
It was very late; yet the little mermaid could not take her eyes from the ship, or from the beautiful prince
She's mesmerized and in love!
The little mermaid was so startled that she dived under water; and when she again stretched out her head, it appeared as if all the stars of heaven were falling around her, she had never seen such fireworks before.
She is experiencing the scary stuff as well on the surface. Beautiful, yet frightening. Is that' a beautiful metaphor for love?
And how handsome the young prince looked, as he pressed the hands of all present and smiled at them, while the music resounded through the clear night air.
She is already falling in love with him!
Among them was a young prince, the most beautiful of all,18 with large black eyes; he was sixteen years of age, and his birthday was being kept with much rejoicing.
The prince is introduced. It is his birthday too! She's seeing how humans celebrate birthdays!
The sun had just set as she raised her head above the waves; but the clouds were tinted with crimson and gold, and through the glimmering twilight beamed the evening star in all its beauty. The sea was calm, and the air mild and fresh.
Her first glimpse of the surface was just as detailed as the every detail throughout. You can almost see it through her eyes!
Oh, how gladly she would have shaken off all this grandeur, and laid aside the heavy wreath!
This is a bigger glimpse into who the little mermaid is except for the one longing to go to the surface
Pride must suffer pain
This is profound but harsh statement. Grandmother was filed with pride for her ranking. The Little Mermaid didn't care.
When the sisters rose, arm-in-arm, through the water in this way, their youngest sister would stand quite alone, looking after them, ready to cry, only that the mermaids have no tears, and therefore they suffer more.
Her mental health is suffering due to this longing to be on the surface.
But the sailors could not understand the song, they took it for the howling of the storm. And these things were never to be beautiful for them; for if the ship sank, the men were drowned, and their dead bodies alone reached the palace of the Sea King.
I'm not exactly sure why this was put in here. If later her voice is taken? This is confusing to me.
in the evening hours, the five sisters would twine their arms round each other, and rise to the surface, in a row.
The theme of family is beautiful. Yet as always, the baby is left out of what the adults do.
When first the sisters had permission to rise to the surface, they were each delighted with the new and beautiful sights they saw; but now, as grown-up girls, they could go when they pleased, and they had become indifferent about it. They wished themselves back again in the water, and after a month had passed they said it was much more beautiful down below, and pleasanter to be at home.
The sisters had changed their minds, yet the Little Mermaid probably has not. This is just making me, as the reader nervous for her!
The fourth sister was more timid; she remained in the midst of the sea, but she said it was quite as beautiful there as nearer the land. She could see for so many miles around her, and the sky above looked like a bell of glass. She had seen the ships, but at such a great distance that they looked like sea-gulls. The dolphins sported in the waves, and the great whales spouted water from their nostrils till it seemed as if a hundred fountains were playing in every direction. The fifth sister’s birthday occurred in the winter; so when her turn came, she saw what the others had not seen the first time they went up. The sea looked quite green, and large icebergs were floating about, each like a pearl, she said, but larger and loftier than the churches built by men. They were of the most singular shapes, and glittered like diamonds. She had seated herself upon one of the largest, and let the wind play with her long hair, and she remarked that all the ships sailed by rapidly, and steered as far away as they could from the iceberg, as if they were afraid of it. Towards evening, as the sun went down, dark clouds covered the sky, the thunder rolled and the lightning flashed, and the red light glowed on the icebergs as they rocked and tossed on the heaving sea. On all the ships the sails were reefed with fear and trembling, while she sat calmly on the floating iceberg, watching the blue lightning, as it darted its forked flashes into the sea.
Still wondering what the Little Mermaid is putting together in her head of what the world is like. Is she okay mentally waiting so long? Does her sister's going to the top help or hurt her?
The third sister’s turn followed; she was the boldest of them all, and she swam up a broad river that emptied itself into the sea. On the banks she saw green hills covered with beautiful vines;13 palaces and castles peeped out from amid the proud trees of the forest; she heard the birds singing, and the rays of the sun were so powerful that she was obliged often to dive down under the water to cool her burning face. In a narrow creek she found a whole troop of little human children, quite naked, and sporting about in the water; she wanted to play with them, but they fled in a great fright; and then a little black animal came to the water; it was a dog, but she did not know that, for she had never before seen one. This animal barked at her so terribly that she became frightened, and rushed back to the open sea. But she said she should never forget the beautiful forest, the green hills, and the pretty little children who could swim in the water, although they had not fish’s tails.
Again beautiful imagery; however back in my mind I keep thinking about how the obsessed little mermaid will view this. Will it make her worse or better with this mental anguish and longing she is putting herself through?
In another year the second sister received permission to rise to the surface of the water, and to swim about where she pleased. She rose just as the sun was setting, and this, she said, was the most beautiful sight of all. The whole sky looked like gold, while violet and rose-colored clouds, which she could not describe, floated over her; and, still more rapidly than the clouds, flew a large flock of wild swans12towards the setting sun, looking like a long white veil across the sea. She also swam towards the sun; but it sunk into the waves, and the rosy tints faded from the clouds and from the sea.
Details in this put you there. Almost as if you have never seen the life above the water!
As soon as the eldest was fifteen, she was allowed to rise to the surface of the ocean. When she came back, she had hundreds of things to talk about; but the most beautiful, she said, was to lie in the moonlight, on a sandbank, in the quiet sea, near the coast, and to gaze on a large city11 nearby, where the lights were twinkling like hundreds of stars; to listen to the sounds of the music, the noise of carriages, and the voices of human beings, and then to hear the merry bells peal out from the church steeples; and because she could not go near to all those wonderful things, she longed for them more than ever.
Again Mr. Anderson is describing everything in great detail.
When something like a black cloud passed between her and them, she knew that it was either a whale swimming over her head, or a ship full of human beings, who never imagined that a pretty little mermaid10 was standing beneath them, holding out her white hands towards the keel of their ship
The Little Mermaid was learning more and more.
None of them longed so much for her turn to come as the youngest, she who had the longest time to wait, and who was so quiet and thoughtful.
Fairytales always introduce a problem and the problem here is that the Little Mermaid was the youngest who longed to go to the surface like her sisters. She seemingly wanted to be there and know more about the surface than any of the other sisters!
However, each promised to tell the others what she saw on her first visit, and what she thought the most beautiful; for their grandmother could not tell them enough; there were so many things on which they wanted information.
Going to the surface meant a lot to them all. As a family they would be able to help fill in the gaps of the things they wanted to know about the new world.
“When you have reached your fifteenth year,”9 said the grand-mother, “you will have permission to rise up out of the sea, to sit on the rocks in the moonlight, while the great ships are sailing by; and then you will see both forests and towns.”
At this point, the reader must know this is how the story begins it's rising action. This may be detrimental to the Little Mermaid to go to the surface.
Her grandmother called the little birds fishes, or she would not have understood her; for she had never seen birds.
Grandmother's sense of family is strong here. She wanted to make this exciting world relatable to the Little Mermaid.
Nothing gave her so much pleasure as to hear about the world above the sea.
This is the biggest clue foreshadowing what was to come.
She was a strange child, quiet and thoughtful;7 and while her sisters would be delighted with the wonderful things which they obtained from the wrecks of vessels, she cared for nothing but her pretty red flowers, like the sun, excepting a beautiful marble statue.8 It was the representation of a handsome boy,
The reader can already see that the mind of the youngest isn't focused on the normal things that her family is.
Outside the castle there was a beautiful garden, in which grew bright red5 and dark blue flowers, and blossoms like flames of fire; the fruit glittered like gold, and the leaves and stems waved to and fro continually. The earth itself was the finest sand, but blue as the flame of burning sulphur. Over everything lay a peculiar blue radiance, as if it were surrounded by the air from above, through which the blue sky shone, instead of the dark depths of the sea. In calm weather the sun6 could be seen, looking like a purple flower, with the light streaming from the calyx
Details are a huge part of this story to help explain the two worlds that will be the setting for this story. This will help distinguish between the two worlds.
but the youngest3 was the prettiest of them all; her skin was as clear and delicate as a rose-leaf, and her eyes as blue as the deepest sea; but, like all the others, she had no feet, and her body ended in a fish’s tail.
You can almost see how beautiful she is with the details used to describe her!
They were six beautiful children
These girls must be important if they are mentioned this early. Mr. Anderson is introducing them as a family unit. This theme will be played out later on.
She was a very wise woman, and exceedingly proud of her high birth; on that account she wore twelve oysters on her tail; while others, also of high rank, were only allowed to wear six
Grandmother is valued and important.
The Sea King had been a widower for many years, and his aged mother kept house for him
The introduction of family here foreshadows what is to come.
There dwell the Sea King2 and his subjects. We must not imagine that there is nothing at the bottom of the sea but bare yellow sand. No, indeed; the most singular flowers and plants grow there; the leaves and stems of which are so pliant, that the slightest agitation of the water causes them to stir as if they had life. Fishes, both large and small, glide between the branches, as birds fly among the trees here upon land. In the deepest spot of all, stands the castle of the Sea King. Its walls are built of coral, and the long, gothic windows are of the clearest amber. The roof is formed of shells, that open and close as the water flows over them. Their appearance is very beautiful, for in each lies a glittering pearl, which would be fit for the diadem of a queen.
This is beautiful imagery.
FAR out in the ocean, where the water is as blue1 as the prettiest cornflower, and as clear as crystal, it is very, very deep; so deep, indeed, that no cable could fathom it: many church steeples, piled one upon another, would not reach from the ground beneath to the surface of the water above
The details right off the bat are FABULOUS!
and in his rage drove his right foot so far into the ground that it sank in up to his waist;39 then in a passion he seized the left foot with both hands and tore himself in two.40
WHAT?!?!?!? That's so brutal! Why did he deserve this fate? Deception #20 is the fact the reader is deceived into believing this man is so terrible for performing a service, agreeing upon a payment before hand, and then going to collect his payment. If the Brother's Grimm had given us a background or insight into why the imp wanted the child, maybe some wouldn't believe that this was a terrible manner in which the little man should die. Maybe this should have been the fate of the miller. He wanted to be seen as important. After he was first mentioned and then not mentioned again, was he that important? He gave his daughter away for his importance and he wasn't even that important. Maybe he was doing it to save her life and give her a man to marry that could take care of her in a way he couldn't. HOWEVER, how did he know she would be able to perform this task? Because that's all the reader knows about the miller, all we see is him giving his daughter into an early death at the hand of the King. Why is that right? There's anger built up in the reader by this point if they truly read and try to piece it all together. The Queen didn't realize the power of a mother's love for her child when in desperation to save her life she agreed to this mess. However, does the imp deserve this fate?! This has been something on my mind for many years after reading for the first time---not listening to my grandmother's tale. Why does the Imp deserve this brutal of a fate if you aren't going to tell the reader why the imp wanted this child. Maybe he would deserve this type of fate if the reader truly knew what he was going to do to this baby. Key points were left out and the true deception is for the reader to arrive at this point learning something about deceit and prominence. I'm not sure from this tale if the true lesson is here because it seems the little imp got far more than he deserved based on this version. Maybe the miller deserved this for lying on his child to the King and putting her life in danger just to "look important". Maybe this is why my grandmother told me he ran away never to be seen again! This would have traumatized me as a child to learn of the little imp's fate. I'm very very confused as to why this little man deserved this. I understand from the other versions, however, why did he deserve this for payment? I mean a peasant girl's life was going to be SAVED and she was going to be the QUEEN! She agreed to this. So what was the manikin's sin? The Brother's Grimm needs to realize that a lot of this story doesn't make sense. They also need to realize the deception began with them when they decided to deceive the reader by leaving out important parts of the story. By the end are we supposed to hate the imp or whom?
Some demon has told you that, some demon has told you that!"38 screamed the little man,
He feels that someone else has come to do the same thing he did to her! Some demon! She must have just conjured up this name!
crying: "To-morrow I brew, to-day I bake, And then the child away I'll take; For little deems my royal dame That Rumpelstiltskin is my name!"
Strange rhyme boasting his name! If I wanted someone to guess something I would have never ever said it out loud in any location. Deception #18 making the little man believe she wouldn't have a plan and she would just sit at home pondering names! The power of a woman to find out something is the true magic here, not the imp's magic to turn straw into gold. Yet, that's another essay for another day! And yet the question still remains why does the creepy old man want the child? The Brother's Grimm, why didn't you elaborate? Why did you deceive the reader making them believe this whole scenario without giving them important information because you did them a disservice in the end! We'll get to that!
she asked first: "Is your name Conrad?"36"No." "Is your name Harry?"
Deception #19 She must make the manikin think she doesn't have a clue and will never guess it. Give the man some hope! Best deception in the entire paper. Nothing left to question here. The reader "You" s involved now and knows what's going on for once in this tale. The Queen is ready to spring it on the little man!
"if your daughter is as clever as you say, bring her to my palace to-morrow, and I'll put her to the test."
Greed at it's finest. He had no thought of the deception being played out here. The POOR MILLER would NOT be poor if his daughter to spin straw into gold. Greed overshadowed the King's vision.
You
Despite the reader being confused and left with many questions, the Brother's Grimm pulled them into this tale. Now the reader is a part of the deception too. How kind!
the most grotesque little man
A little more insight of this manikin although the opinion of the messenger.
where the foxes and hares bid each other good night,
This is a idiom of German origin meaning a remote location. Very cool!
Sheepshanks Cruickshanks, Spindleshanks
See previous annotation about the names! In other versions I think Nathan was even one. More common than these!
Kasper, Melchior, Belshazzar,
These names!!! What about Frank, or George or Bill or Tom...even SUE! But these names?!?! Must have been passed down. I need to check the other Rumpelstiltskin versions to see if the names are the same or if the Brother's Grimm changed them.
Then the Queen pondered the whole night over all the names she had ever heard, and sent a messenger to scour the land,
She has a plan to find out and/or to guess his name!
"Who knows what may not happen before that?" thought the miller's daughter; and besides, she saw no other way out of it,
See "in a great state" below
in a great state
What kind of great state? Post partum-depression? Upset over losing her child? Is she really sad about losing her child or does she know the king will be angry? If we back up a bit when she promised these things she thinks "Who knows what may not happen before that?" Was she thinking she may not have a child or that the manikin would change his mind? Was the Creator (whomever one believes) going to bring Armageddon and the world end? Would being the Queen get her out of it? Was she going to figure out a way to deceive him? Was she just desperate to save her life and/or to be Queen? This statement is all the reader is given to go upon in having a glimpse into the Queen's mind. We need more. Perhaps Deception #14 is not knowing more and the reader is once again left with question that will give an anxiety ridden, overthinking human a complex as they read because they were lead to believe there is a true plot here not one that doesn't give clear understanding. The other versions tell it all. This one has been condensed so much that the reader is deceived into thinking they are going to read a fairy tale.
Then the Queen began to cry and sob so bitterly that the little man was sorry for her,30 and said: "I'll give you three days to guess my name, and if you find it out in that time you may keep your child."31
The Queen is now crying out of desperation for her child's life now, not her own. She has truly become a mother! The manikin had always came because of her tears. He felt sorry for her in the first place it seems. Now he has brought the tears and he feels sorry for her. He gives her a riddle to figure out his name in 3 days. Deceit #17 He knows she can't guess his name because it's something very uncommon (and said in other languages sounds funny!) but he's giving her false hope.
"No, a living creature is dearer to me than all the treasures in the world.
Deceit #16 the reader is still left wondering what the heck this manikin wanted this child for? Maybe to prove a point that in desperation of our lives we are willing to give anything? The deception to the reader is that there's a plot here that is easy to read without all the questions!
offered the little man all the riches in her kingdom28 if he would only leave her the child.
Though the Queen has learned deception from her father the miller, she didn't want to give up her son for the deception and lies. She offered all she had gained as a Queen---riches untold just to keep her child. This shows the reader that the Queen is so much more than a deceitful person. She was deceitful out of desperation to save her life after her father's deceit that threw her to the wolves. Her child means more to her than the riches she had gained as a queen! The story has some redeeming qualities for the reader now! However, the little man can spin gold out of straw, what does he need with her riches?!?
"Now give me what you promised."
Why did he wait until the baby was this age? Did he need the child weaned for whatever it was he needed the child for? Did what he need the child for require it to be a certain again? Is this deception #13 and maybe #14 first because the manikin deceived the Queen into believing she might get to keep the child by waiting that long? To maybe punish her for all her deception? And the biggest deception of all is deceiving the reader with all these holes in the plot. The Brother's Grimm seemed to leave out key things. The reader by now, without knowing all the other stories is confused. I had read the other versions before this one and knew them, that's why reading this is like what?!? Because there's so many holes that it's confusing to read it as is.
When a year had passed a beautiful son27 was born to her, and she thought no more of the little man,
We always want our cake and eat it too! This king had what he wanted and now a queen and a son. The Queen had what she wanted, her son. This story is masculine heavy! There could be a lot said about the masculinity of this story with only one woman to carry it all. Was she being oppressed and deceived all at once? That's another paper for another day!
When the King came in the morning, and found everything as he had desired, he straightway made her his wife, and the miller's daughter became a queen.
Deception #12. She has deceived the king once again. He has all he's ever wanted which is greed and now she will be greedy and take her peasant self using her deceit to gain prominence and become the Queen. Maybe the true deception #13 is the harm brought to the reader to wrap their heads around all the nonsense. This isn't the tale my grandmother told!
she promised the manikin what he demanded,
Maybe deception #11. The harm is brought to the reader to figure this plot with a million holes and draining fast out. So the daughter is now doing what her father did to her! She's now going to sacrifice her child so she can deceive the king to be seen of some importance to the King. Enough importance to become the Queen!
"Then promise me when you are Queen to give me your first child."
If counting all the other deceptions this is deception #10. The manikin has now earned her trust and is setting up the ultimate deception to get what he wants!
"She's only a miller's daughter, it's true," he thought; "but I couldn't find a richer wife if I were to search the whole world over."
He isn't lusting after her or in love with her. In social class, she is beneath him. However, the king will benefit from this, so he will marry her if the task is preformed correctly. This could be considered deceit #8 because all the other deceits lead to him deceiving the girl into believing she was worthy to be queen. However, it was because of all the other deceit and lies that he thinks he has something to gain from the girl. So he deceives her to believe she's valuable to him. The only value is the gold. Is she this blind? Maybe #8 or even #9 if we count the King's deceit, is the deception to the reader again as they try to figure this out. Was this deceit too? Was the girl so blind that she couldn't see the king didn't want her, he wanted her for what she could "do". And she can't even do that, so in reality does he want the manikin for his skill instead? Which would he benefit more from? A king does need a Queen and a Queen in his eyes doesn't have to come from royalty, it just has to come from riches untold.
you shall become my wife."21
The ultimate punishment and gain for all the deceit. She is a peasant girl and could marry a king. Did dear ol dad know this the entire time? Was he actually looking out for her or was he going for personal gain at his daughter's expense
in order to appear a person of some importance
The second deception. The one being deceived is the king. This man was showing off at the expense of his daughter. Yet he was never mentioned again, so how important was he really?!?!
The King was pleased beyond measure at the sights but his greed for gold was still not satisfied, and he had the miller's daughter brought into a yet bigger room full of straw, and said: "You must spin all this away in the night; but if you succeed this time you shall become my wife.
The king is filled with greed and lust for gold; however, the miller's daughter has pulled off deception #6 because even though it's the same as #5, she's getting in deeper. This is to save her own life BUT the man has his gold so she's going along with the great scheme as if her own. If she had told the truth, would there have been another deception by her and the king to capture him the next night? Or were her tears the drawing agent for the manikin? Also, if she had told the truth, would the king have put her to death or maybe the miller for lying or maybe both? Was this a test to see if the miller was lying or how much he loved his daughter?
The manikin took the ring, and whir! round went the spinning-wheel again,
The manikin is still gaining her trust. He is saving her life from the consequences imposed by the two men. and now her own consequences because in the eyes of the King she had performed this act. She must be a part of this now and take ownership for what she has done.
e had the miller's daughter put into another room full of straw, much bigger than the first, and bade her, if she valued her life, spin it all into gold before the following morning.
Now the girl is suffering the consequences of the kings greed and lust, her dad's deception, and now her own sin is added to the mix.
but his heart only lusted more than ever after the precious metal.
Greed is a dangerous thing.
As soon as the sun rose the King came, and when he perceived the gold he was astonished and delighted,
Deception #5. The daughter is now deceiving the king! He now thinks she is able to spin straw into gold!
The little man took the necklace, sat himself down at the wheel
He's gaining her trust for the ultimate deception later on. Trust has to be gained or she won't even agree.
Suddenly the door opened, and in stepped a tiny little man
Where did he come from? Magically he appeared? This is confusing! Deception #4. The one being harmed is the reader because they must try to fill in the gaps to figure out the plot.
She hadn't the least idea of how to spin straw into gold, and became at last so miserable that she began to cry.
The gravity of what dear old dad had done is setting in. She will die for him wanting to be important. If deceit is a punishment, it's judged by the level of harm it brings to a person. This has now brought her death and she must accept it at some point.
he told him that he had a daughter who could spin straw into gold.
This is the third deception and the second one of the king. This is an unrealistic idea that the king would be interested
he had an audience with the King,
Why did he get an audience with the king? Who is this king and where is his kingdom? Does it matter? This is the first deception. The one being deceived is the reader. For some reason when one reads through the first time they believe these words. Upon reading again, questions creep up. Kings would have no time for a poor miller and his beautiful daughter. This deceives the reader into believing this could actually be with no context or without even knowing whom this King is or where his Kingdom is located.
poor miller1
The word poor indicates that the miller might need help. However, reading along, the helps he needs is not what he sought.
She hadn't the leastidea of how to spin straw into gold, and became at last so miserable that she began to cry.
The gravity of what dear old dad had done is setting in. She will die for him wanting to be important. If deceit is a punishment, it's judged by the level of harm it brings to a person. This has now brought her death and she must accept it at some point.
in order to appear a person of some importance
The second deception. The one being deceived is the king. This man was showing off at the expense of his daughter.
he had an audience with the King,
Why did he get an audience with the king? Who is this king and where is his kingdom? Does it matter? This is the first deception. The one being deceived is the reader. For some reason when one reads through the first time they believe these words. Upon reading again, questions creep up. Kings would have no time for a poor miller and his beautiful daughter.
poor miller1
The word poor indicates that the miller might need help. However, reading along, the help he needs is not what he sought.
he had an audience with the King,3
Why did he get an audience with the king? Who is this king and where is his kingdom? Does it matter? This is the first deception. The one being deceived is the reader. For some reason when one reads through the first time they believe these words. Upon reading again, questions creep up. Kings would have no time for a poor miller and his beautiful daughter.
poor miller1
The word poor indicates that the miller might need help. However, reading along, the helps he needs is not what he sought.