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  1. Sep 2020
    1. Writing a sound paragraph is really just amatter of thinking clearly about a topic you have researched and transferring that thinking to the page

      We need to fiugre out what are we going to write about and collected the matched source before we start to write the paragraph so that we can present the topic more throughly and deeply.

    1. any ambiguity in your writing forces your reader towork to understand your meaning.

      instead of using words with baised meaning, we should use more precised wording so that the reader do not have to guess what exactly we meant.

    2. The goal of good writing is straightforward: tomake your reader’s job as easy as possible. Realizingthis goal, though, is not so simple.

      I agree with the author that a good writing needs to be straightforward and easy to understand. With image combine with words, it can give the readers a better understanding of the concept.

  2. Aug 2020
    1. In scientific writing, plagiarism is perhaps the most serious and the most widelyrecognized ethical lapse.

      Plagiarism is not in all knids of area and it does not matter if it is major or minor. It can lead to negative consequencese for perpetrator or vallid the insitution or national policy.

    2. 1Created in 2003 First revision, 2006 Second revision, 2015 Please send any questions, comments, or suggestions to Miguel Roig, Ph.D(roigm@stjohns.edu)PREFACEIn recognizing the importance of educating aspiring scientists in the responsibleconduct of research (RCR), the Office of Research Integrity (ORI) began sponsoring the creation of instructional resources to address this pressing need in 2002. The present guide on avoiding plagiarism and other inappropriate writing practices was created to help students, as well as professionals, identify and prevent such malpractices and to develop an awareness of ethical writing and authorship. This guide is one of the many products stemming fromORI’s effort to promote the RCR.Many other writing guides are available to assist scientists in preparing their research reports for publication in scholarly and scientific outlets. Some of these resources focus on matters of scientific style and are written for those who are completing theses and/or dissertations. Other guides target professionals and focus on topics, such as the traditional Introduction, Methods, Results, [and] Discussion (IMRAD) journal article and submission process, along with other elements of scientific publishing. Few writing guides, however, focus solely on issues related to responsible writing, an area that continues to receive increasing attention in part because of rapid changes occurring in science dissemination and globalization within the last few decades. The latter factor has resulted in the addition of increasing numbers of researchers whose primary language is not English, the lingua francaof science, who must struggle to function in a highly competitive research climate. Thechanges in science publishing that have taken place in recent years (e.g., open access movement) have also resulted in many more outlets for the publication of scientific research. At the same time, the emergence of so-called “predatory publishers” is thought to have also contributed to a decline in the quality of science that ultimately becomes part of the scientific record (Beal 2013; Clark & Smith, 2015). Because these and related factors are likely associated with questionable writing and authorship practices, ORI felt that an updated and more detailed treatment of the issues covered in the two previous versions of this guide was necessary. Thus, the current version is herein presented. INTRODUCTIONScientific writing can be a cognitively demanding and arduous process, for it simultaneously demands exceptional degrees of clarity and conciseness, two elementsthat often clash with each other. In addition, accuracy and transparency, fundamentalaspects of the scientific enterprise are also critical components of scientific writing.

      I agree with the author point that scientific writing requires clarity and conciseness. These two elements always creates conflict, that is why we also need accuracy and transparency as our crotical components. In today's moredern scientific research, we put notjust data and theory but also literature components to fulfill the audienc's demand.

    1. Keywords:computer-mediated communication, face-to-face communication

      It is interesting that the author listed the keywords below the abstract. The two key words summarized the two major terms of communication the author descirbed in the abstract that helps the reader to understand.

    2. In order to gain a complete understanding of CMC’s true effect on both online and offlinerelationships, it is necessary to conduct a study that examines all aspects of CMC.

      A topic sentence gives readers a head-up about what the paragraph is talking about. Examing both online and offline relationships give the auidence a more comprehensive knownledge of CMC's true effect.

    1. 280 Chapter 10 • Research on Predatory Algae: From Environmental Event to Environmental Policy A Sea Grant report, "Marine Biotechnology: Competing in the 21st Century," outlines a framework for research in support of marine biotechnology. Its three broad themes-Molecular Frontiers in the Ocean Sci-ences, Applications ?f Marine Biotechnology, and Marine Biotechnology and Society-encompass a range of research, education, and outreach needed to develop this field.

      The "Marine Biotechnology" has a very clear sturcture that it contains three themes targeted to imporve the national's technology and meet the government objective.

    2. Because of limited funding and widespread interest in marine biotechnology, proposals will be evalu-ated rigorously. Clear and complete proposals that meet the objectives of _the National Sea Grant College Pro-gram as outlined in the enclosed materials will have the best chance of success.

      If a proposal aims to raise funds or get finicial support from the nation. it has to be rigorously and evelauted throughly. it also need to meet the objective of the organization that the proposal needs to be in detail in order to have the best chance to get the money.

    1. Given the variety of audiences to be addressed and the multiple agea ders at be accomplished, writing the research proposal is one of the most challen~s to and most important-tasks scientists engage in.

      A successful research proposal needs to make both general and specific audience to understand. It also requires the varity of auidence to engage with the author. At first the research proposal passed the peer review, now, it needs to pass the various audience.

    2. As the diagram indicates, peer review plays a critical role in funding decisions, just as it does in decisions about the publication of journal articles.

      Peer review is essential for sentific report. It is also a key part for publishability. By reviewing by your peer, the author will have a direct feedback on his work and if there is a mistake, it can be seen and report back before the article is showed to the general public.

    1. Infer means to draw a conclusion—the responsibility of the spectroscopist, not the spectrum. One could say that the spectrum implies, but this too is a personification. A better sentence would be “A highly symmetrical structure can be inferred from a simple IR spectrum.”

      we drow the conlusion, not the data itself. The word using in lab report is important as it could cause misunderstanding.

    2. Poor sentence construction and grammatical solecisms are all too common in both written and oral reports of scientific findings. The English language is the principal tool of modern scientific communication, and its effective use should be a goal of anyone preparing for a career in science.

      Science is all about precise and accurate. Using proper language for sentence structure and communication is necessary to talk effectively.

    1. Any piece of prose, no matter how short, may “mean” in 10 (or more) different ways to 10 different readers. This methodology of reader expectations is founded on the recognition that readers make many of their most important interpretive decisions about the substance of prose based on clues they receive from its structure.

      The auidence understand the same concept differently. Each of them have its won way to interpert the material according the clues that appeals in the reading. So giving out the clues to the readers is very important for them to understand what the author's purpose about.

    2. In smaller units of discourse the functional divisions are not so explicitly labeled, but readers have definite expectations all the same, and they search for certain information in particular places. If these structural expectations are continually violated, readers are forced to divert energy from understanding the content of a passage to unraveling its structure. As the complexity of the content increases moderately, the possibility of misinterpretation or noninterpretation increases dramatically.

      The reading material must have a structrue that contains divisions and sections for the audience to understand directly and easily. if the sections keep giving the audience informations without logical sense, it would make the audience confused and lead to misinterpretation.

    1. In so doing, theybuilt their arguments on a rich intellectual tra-dition that, more than any other in our society,is seen as unbiased and credible

      Those representing evolution use science gto support argument that science is the most effective and unbasised way to the public as it requires education and intellengence.

    2. To-ward that end, evidenceindicates that scientistsshould engage in moreand ongoing dialoguewith policymakers andthe public to help buildshared understanding and effective policysolutions (1–4, 6).

      I agree with what the author says here and it matches with the Covid-19 situation. The government use false numbers and data to calm down the public. But as science we must show people the fact so the people can be mentally perpared.

    1. Warren needed Marshall's clinical knowledge t, 1s v , . . d t 'd how the bacterium he was observmg was related to gastric syrnp-to un ers an . d d (Ch zin 1993· Warren 2005a,b). Marshall needed Warren m or er to un er-toms a ' · · his ti' ts (M h ll d th b·iology of the bacteriun1. he was observmg m pa en ars a stan e · ch 'd th · 005 d) And both Marshall and Warren relied on pnor resear to gm e err 2 a,c,. th lidt t d d needed other scientists and the NIH to fur er test, va a e, accep , an own, an · · h alth t th · ti' t d tl eir work in theory and practice.

      collaberation, teamwork, and information sharing are que essential in the scientific research field. It is the way scientists communicate and compromise when they are working on the same topic with each other's help.

    2. To gain the acceptance he thought his theory deserved, Marshall did some-thing that most scientists would-and should-never do. Unable to convince his colleagues that H. pylori caused stomach ulcers, in 1984 Marshall created a potent mixture containing the bacteria and drank it; inducing a case of acute gastritis in himself (Marshall et al. 1985).

      Marshall was getting too urged to let the public accpet his view, he take the bacteria himslef which is a huge mistake in scenific world.