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  1. Jun 2022
    1. But I do know that we are at a crossroads. The unbearable history of these shootings has exhausted us, but it has also given us a hint of a way forward. Have we suffered enough sorrow to consider it?

      Really appealing to emotions by highlighting the outrageous of gun violence. And we are still seeking for a solution

    2. Whatever emotion emboldens people in these moments tends to wear off as the frenetic news cycle turns its attention elsewhere.

      Interesting, describing news as frenetic. What a great sarcasm to present day media

    3. For 381 days, at great burden to themselves, the Black citizens of the city walked and carpooled and otherwise put in the hard work to organize themselves so they could avoid taking the bus. This kind of self-sacrifice not only built an enormous sense of solidarity; it also allowed them to win.

      Great example, really well embedded within the text.

    4. A walkout with enough students involved and taking place over days, not minutes, puts concrete pressure on officials,

      Another scene here emphasizing we need immediate actions

    5. The walkouts of 2018 may seem forgettable now, but they did point to a tactic that, used more aggressively, could genuinely get under the skin of some grown-ups.

      good source with authors opinions

    6. The protests were moving but happened haphazardly and only for a brief, emblematic period of time;

      Again, we are led to see the non-feasance of attitude towards gun control.

    7. Dave Cullen, who covered the Columbine shooting in 1999 and later wrote a book about it, has said that in the days and even weeks after the attack, none of the survivors wanted to talk about gun control.

      The writer introduces who has witnessed an actual shooting; it a great subject to talk with when it comes to storytelling.

    8. The faces of those children. The unfathomable anguish of those parents, of those broken towns.

      great scene, seeing how a shooting could be catastrophic and heartbreaking.

    9. while we seem locked in this house of horrors, a schoolroom of slaughtered children around every turn, with no way out?

      Strong language here at the beginning, illustrating the seriousness of gun problem in america. An imperative change is needed.

  2. May 2022
    1. It also buys us time to enhance our understanding of the virus, and improve our tools to fight it. “The more we know about COVID when we get COVID,” the better off we’ll be, she said.

      Clear conclusion, reminding us of the pandemic is not over yet, we still need the time to get more understanding out of it.

    2. It’s true that the body’s bulwarks against infection tend to erode rather rapidly;

      Humans are often the one vulnerable, just like eroding the bulwarks

    3. “I’m nervous about reinfection,” he said. “I have reason to be.”

      The real-life example shows the other perspective on the severe consequences that covid brought. Make the article more persuasive.

    4. Some other microbes, when they reinvade us, can fire up the immune system in unhelpful ways, driving bad bouts of inflammation that burn through the body, or duping certain defensive molecules into aiding, rather than blocking, the virus’s siege.

      The writer uses these vivid descriptions, reflects the harms of multiple covid infections. It makes the unfamiliar information that follows easier to understand

    5. he thinks that people who have caught the virus twice or thrice may be more likely to become long-haulers than those who have had it just once.

      Good metaphors here, comparing people who got covid multiple times to long-haulers, illustrating the long-term effects

    6. Every time the body’s defenses are engaged, it “takes a lot of energy, and causes tissue damage,” Thomas told me.

      With this quote I can create a visual on how our body battle the virus.

    7. But the body is flush with other fighters that are much tougher to bamboozle—among them, B cells and T cells that can quash a growing infection before it spirals out of control. Those protections tend to build iteratively, as people see pathogens or vaccines more often.

      Nice analogy, compares vaccines to fighters

    8. But considering our current baseline, “less dangerous” could still be terrible—and it’s not clear exactly where we’re headed. When it comes to reinfection, we “just don’t know enough,” says Emily Landon, an infectious-disease physician at the University of Chicago.

      Good use of quotes from experts, showing a sense of credibility!

    9. The fact that colds, flus, and stomach bugs routinely reinfect hasn’t shredded the social fabric.

      This sentence shows covid is drawing closer to colds and flus.

    10. You’re not just likely to get the coronavirus. You’re likely to get it again and again and again.

      Good assumptions made by the author, illustrate the severity Covid is getting.

    1. The median salary of a child-care worker is $25,510. The median salary for a home health aide is even lower, at $17,200.

      With the implementation of data, it could generally have more engagement between the text and readers. In sum, it will make the unfamiliar information more intuitive to readers.

    2. Senator Kirsten Gillibrand of New York tweeted, “Paid leave is infrastructure. Child care is infrastructure. Caregiving is infrastructure.” Jarome Bell, a Republican congressional candidate from Virginia, was thrown. “Taking care of your own kids is infrastructure,” he replied.

      Again, citing quotes from authority can strengthen your opinions as well as keep to the point.

    3. If care work makes the economy possible, and its absence makes the economy impossible, what is it if not infrastructure?

      By asking a rhetorical question can let readers to question their opinion and make transition.

    4. Iceland outlawed gender discrimination the following year. Five years later, the country elected Vigdís Finnbogadóttir as president—the first time a woman was elected as a head of state anywhere in the world.

      The factual examples are often time the best source in terms of storytellings

    5. Men were left scrambling, unsure of how to manage their children. Many men called out sick to spend the day taking care of their kids, which caused more shutdowns.

      The vivid description of the absence of women creates a great visualization of the chaos situation.

    6. The New Zealander economist Marilyn Waring made this claim in her 1987 book, Counting for Nothing: What Men Value and What Women Are Worth, which argued that GDP was a poor measure of national economic health because it ignored women’s “nonproductive” care work.

      When a source is aligned with your value, it could enhance your credibility when writing your article

    7. The Italian Marxist feminist Silvia Federici advanced the notion of care work as essential to the productive-labor economy in 1972, when she founded Wages for Housework, an organization that called for the state to pay for domestic work.

      Celebrity is often the best source to back up your point of view.

    8. But the inclusion of care work under the infrastructure umbrella is more than just semantic sleight of hand.

      A metaphor is used to put infrastructure umbrella as semantic sleight of hand to illustrate perspective.

    9. “There’s this semantic debate that’s opening up,” Buttigieg said on MSNBC. “To me it’s a little bit besides the point … If it’s a good policy, vote for it and call it whatever you like.”

      The quotes included dissatisfactions pointed out the problem that Biden is creating. What seems like a necessary proposal have changed its original goal.

    10. Senator Marsha Blackburn of Tennessee tweeted a graphic that featured the $400 billion figure in an ugly black-and-yellow scheme, set against an ominously blurry legislative document.

      The tweet that senator posted gave out a great comparison of how the fund is being use. With the hyperlink the readers can click it as their interest.

    11. Infrastructure, they argue, consists only of the physical things that make the American economy run: roads and bridges built by men in hard hats, which nearly all politicians in Washington agree require more investment and are usually prefaced with the adjective crumbling.

      Author Moira disclosed the stereotype when talking about Infrastructure, revealed the other sides of infrastructure often get neglected.