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  1. Jan 2020
    1. moon tide stops

      Tides are the rise and fall of sea levels caused by the combined effects of the gravitational forces exerted by the Moon and the Sun, and the rotation of the Earth. The cycle of the moon also has connotations of menstruation, which, if stopped, implies that the woman is pregnant. This phrase may also suggest that the world the speaker is living in has stopped spinning at this moment while womb waves are seen inside the woman.

    2. Fire yellow white hot maggots seemin more than semen Sperm jellied germ of god the rich pudding of love tiring Tadpole Couriers of destiny coursing toward the heaven halo Aborrea

      Here, the poem seems to shift from depicting sex as something merely sweet and pleasurable to being the cause of fertilization, creation, evolution.

    3. Fire yellow white hot maggots seemin more than semen Sperm jellied germ of god the rich pudding of love tiring Tadpole Couriers of destiny coursing toward the heaven halo Aborrea Of egg sun like yolk wonder deep in the night time of Belly love

      The speaker seems to be realizing that sex is about more than pleasure: rather, it has the ability (or power) to create life

    4. black aesthetic

      A term coined by Larry Neal in 1968, the "Black aesthetic" is a concept central to the Black Arts Movement and the Black Power movement. Neal and his contemporaries called for a rejection of the "Western" aesthetic and the development of a completely new mode of art and creation, as "it is impossible to construct anything meaningful within [the Western aesthetic's] decaying structure" (Neal, "The Black Arts Movement, from The Drama Review, Summer 1968).

    1. Robert Hayden

      African American Poet who served as a consultant in Poetry in the Library of Congress. He was the first African American to hold this position. Ellis favored Hayden’s work because he was different than a lot of poets at the time and Ellis admired that.

  2. Dec 2019
    1. blue line

      We finish with the same color we started with, a blue, showing Lane's appreciation for the natural world. This also references a moment Lane talks about in “‘Pulling in the Natural Environment’: An Interview with Pinkie Gordon Lane” by John Lowe, in which her son asked her for binoculars in order to see the equator.

    1. near Congress, On Capitol Hill, take the 30 bus, Get off before it reaches Anacostia, Don’t cross the bridge into Southeast.

      Anacostia this is a high-crime neighborhood in Washington D.C. The overall crime rate is higher than the national average. In the poem Ellis describes how they were told to avoid Southeast DC because it is not a safe area.

    1. When “for their thousand blows” return a thousand ten

      Here, Evans is referencing Claude McKay’s poem "If We Must Die." Similar to McKay’s poem, Mari Evans is using this stanza as a call-to-arms of sorts, insinuating that complacence is harmful and action must be taken to enact change.

    1. sacrificial

      Sacrificing both goods, animals, and people was once common practice in many religions, like Christianity, Judaism, Islam, and Hinduism. The practice involves destroying the item, or killing the person or animal for forgiveness or blessings from a spiritual being.

    2. Chicago

      Chicago was Gwendoyn Brooks's hometown, and it was also a central location in the meat-packing industry, which is referenced throughout the poem. Many African Americans found work in the meat-packing industry after the Great Migration, which was when many black Americans moved out of the South in pursuit of better work and social treatment in the North. These goals were not entirely met, as the meat factories that employed many African Americans had notoriously terrible working conditions. According to Upton Sinclair’s exposé "The Jungle," workers were often seriously injured, exposed to diseases from the meat, worked long hours, and were paid very low wages.

    1. and I have not loved. always

      The phrase “I have not loved always” is broken up into two lines, emphasizing the journey that they speaker has taken to be able to love. When a reader sees the first line “I have not loved, “ the poem takes on a suddenly negative tone, but the next line saves the intention of the poem by clarifying with “always.” These lines also seem to portray a shift in the poem. The speaker appears to change from talking about her own experiences to adopting all of the experiences and tribulations of her ancestors.

    1. to ex- Quisite Profanity

      'to' shows that the 'organic sacristy abode' is being a home to an "exquisite profanity." Separation of exquisite may suggest the strange division and unity of exquisite (extremely beautiful and, typically, delicate) and profanity (blasphemous or obscene language)

    2. Pepper pot

      An assertive person who shares opinions or acts in ways that are stronger than the extant social power structure might predict. Especially of a woman, since men often wrongly expect women to be weak, acquiescent, or void of certain types of knowledge.

    3. peach brandy

      "The presence of the peach in folklore, literature, religion, paintings, embroidery, and in the affection of the people signifies luck, abundance, and protection." The fruit is believed to offer immortality or at least reaching very old age. This may suggest the idea of invisibility when you're young and drunk. (Jacqueline M. Newman, Flavor&Fortune - peach meaning in folklore and literature)

    1. Negritude

      "Negritude" refers to a movement that was founded in the 1930s by thinkers, writers, and activists such as Aimé Césaire, Léopold Sédar Senghor, and Léon Damas. Negritude condemned colonialism and sought to cultivate "Black consciousness."

    2. Isis

      Greek for Auset. The Nile Valley Civilization’s Great Mother, “Queen of Heaven,” “Throne of Kemer,” the queen and co-ruler with King Asar (Osiris, Greek). Humanity’s archetypal Back Madonna. (Annotated by Touré)

    3. Zulu legions

      A member of a South African people traditionally living mainly in KwaZulu-Natal province. "The Zulus formed a powerful military empire in southern Africa during the 19th century before being defeated in a series of engagements with Afrikaner and British settlers" (editors of Encyclopaedia Britannica) which may explain why they are descried as “shaking the earth.”

    4. solar obelisk of myth

      "At a point in his life, Sun Ra began to turn to ancient Egypt and Ethiopia for his spiritual out-look and sartorial style" (Encyclopaedia Britannica). Thus, Egyptian references are made in the poem. Egypt may also represent the start of civilization.

    5. Sonny Blount. May 22, 1914 to May 30th, 1993

      Sonny Blount, later changed his name to Le Sony'r Ra was alive from May 22, 1914 – May 30, 1993. He was a well known American jazz composer and poet. He was known for his experimental music philosophies.

    6. Jupiterian wisdom

      a person that has a well-developed Mount of Jupiter (located on the palm of the hand at the base of the index finger. It has a connection to the Greek God, Zeus, who became Jupiter in Roman mythology) and a long and large finger of Jupiter and that is usually held by palmists to be characterized by ambition, leadership, and a religious nature

      (Definition of Jupiterian- Merriam Webster)

    1. Lungs

      In her audio video from the Furious Flower Conference in 1994, Adisa Vera Beatty states that her poem is about a rumor that "The Duke” received Nat King Cole’s lungs. It may suggest how Nat died and the Duke survived because the hospital prioritized the Duke because he was white and they let him survive with the lungs of Nat King Cole.

    2. Nat entered at the hospital’s Negro entrance, and the “Duke” on the White side

      The separate entrances shows a form of segregation that took place from 1896 to 1954. White and Black people had separate entrances, exits, water fountains, schools,etc. This goes for hospital entrances as well. The white areas had better doctors and equipment, better maintenance, unlike African American areas that were assigned to them.

    3. the Negro with the golden feathery light voice, tinged with raspiness

      The “Negro” is referring Nat King Cole, who was a well-known American Jazz pianist and vocalist during the “swing era.” He was also the first African American to have his own night show, called “The Nat King Cole Show”

  3. Nov 2019
    1. if I could touch

      Trethewey emphasizes the substance lost through not being able to interact with the women -- it is significant to note that the photographer is a white man. What also might be lost by the gaze being aligned with the white, male perspective?

    2. Clifton Johnson

      Clifton Johnson was an American author, illustrator, and photographer. "Johnson viewed photography in similar terms to painting and composed his photographs in that fashion. He stated that he selected subjects in the same fashion as he would for paintings and posed them in a way that represent 'naturalness of life as I see it.'" #Photography )

    1. Baby brother's named for two fathers, and each Saturday he seeks them in this neutral zone of brotherhood,

      Strange evokes themes of Christianity with "two fathers" and parodies congregation on the holy day with "each Saturday" spent at the barbershop. Similarly, the emphasis on "brotherhood," reiterates the sense of masculine connection valued during the time.

    2. cappin' players, men-of-words, Greek chorus to the comic-tragic fanfare

      Strange uses images of classic Western culture -- "players, men-of-words, Greek chorus" -- to equate a traditionally valued forum for exchanges of ideas with an intellectual space undervalued by mainstream culture.

    3. the closest semblance of a throne he'll ever know

      this line both honors the boy who will never know the full acceptance of genuine praises of mainstream culture, and evokes a sense of the Black masculinity that was so significant during the rise of the Black power movement.

    1. you, man, will you remember me when I die? will you stare and stain my death and say i saw her applauden suns far from the grandiose audience? you, man, will you remember and cry?

      The speaker ends with the same italicized question that she posed near the beginning of the poem, asking if they will remember her showing appreciation for nature, but without an engaged or impressive audience. The speaker seems equate their life with their ancestors’ lives for some of the poem, but then time splits at the end and the speaker is back to the reality of being more carefree and privileged, but on the outskirts of people’s minds and out of the spotlight. The speaker seems to feel a sense of inadequacy and compared to her ancestors' experiences. She appears to be seeking audience approval and confirmation that she will be remembered and admired for her actions as well.

    2. converges

      The speaker claims that time splits, sending the speaker on a different path than the ones that they have been describing. The speaker seems to feel as if they were separated from the experiences of their ancestors that she just finished describing.

    3. rattle of my seed,

      This could be a reference to growing and planting crops, which black people were forced to do within slavery, but it could also refer to offspring as the seed. This could be referencing the suffering that black children had to inherit for their race.

    4. i have walked by memory of others

      The speaker claims that many of the actions of black people are viewed and interpreted through the memories of other people. This line appears to reflect a tradition in black poetry, especially the Black Arts Movement, in which poets felt as if their experience was interpreted by others, especially white writers.

    5. wid mouths discarden the gelatin

      The speaker speakers in a dialect by saying “wid” instead of “with.” These three lines seemingly describe a purification process, with the speaker releasing the tension from being pirated, which may be a reference to ancestors being kidnapped from Africa and discarding gelatin from their mouth.

    6. the unconscious unbridles feasts the flesh knots toward the shore

      The speaker also seems to assert that the soul controls the body, by saying that unconscious desires are “unbridled” or unrestrained, and control the “flesh knots,” or body of a person. The assertion that the body’s action impact the soul, but the unconscious, spiritual part of a person controls the body creates a cyclical claim about life experiences.

    7. you, man, will you remember and cry?

      The italics in this stanza suggest either a second stanza or an emphasis or shift in audience. The speaker seems to be addressing the reader more directly and asking if they will remember and miss her, even though she lived a more sheltered life.

    8. swallows

      Swallows are a type of small bird and are usually used to symbolize joy and hope. The use of these birds in the poem may suggest the extent of protection that the speaker feels as if she experiences, especially when it is paired with the idea of dancing far away from the world's problems.

    9. wite

      Wite” is seen as a misspelling of “white,” which could be the speaker not wanting so use the actual color name, since it is racially charged. However, “wite” is also a more outdated word to describe guilt, blaming, or accusing. This use of the word may relate to the speaker's guilt or fear about her own experience being unimpressive.

    10. bringen

      The speaker uses what could be considered an accent or a dialect, primarily on words that end in “ing.” The speaker replaces the “ing” ending with “en,” which makes the word bringing sound like bringin’, for example.

    11. alien life

      "Alien” is usually used to refer to a foreigner that is not a naturalized citizen in the country in which they reside. The poem seems to be using this phrase to refer to a person that feels like an outsider in their own life experience. As the poem continues, the speaker appears to feel as if their own experience is inferior to that her black ancestors'.

    1. My first attempts were filled with noise, Wild solos, violent uncontrollable blows

      Even though Ellis is using words that describe a physical altercation, he is using them to depict how he feels when he writes. It is not physical violence, but it creates a powerfulness through words instead of violence.

    2. T.S. Eliot

      He was a popular White literary figure that a lot of other literary writers looked up to. Looking again at the first two lines on this stanza, the questioning by the substitute teacher relates to the preconceived judgement of Ellis by the substitute.

    3. A white substitute teacher At an all-Black public high school

      The significance of mentioning the different race ratios within the high school is that it introduces the notion of race inequality. It also suggests that this substitute teacher has a preconceived opinion on Ellis because he is African American.

    1. She like love: the agony and the bone

      The poem addresses the subject of the poem again by comparing her to love, but also stating that she faces agony and death. This seems to relate to Gwendolyn Brooks's work having a positive, hopeful impact on black communities that were experiencing pain and exploitation, like the black meat-packing community that is referenced in the poem. While Brooks's words do not solve the corruption and power imbalances that the black urban community faces, they do provide a message of love and understanding.

    2. mayors

      “Meats for mayors” depicts the idea that extreme pain and suffering is being endured by both black workers and the animals so that wealthy, predominately white people can enjoy the delicacy of meat. The line seems to carry a sarcastic tone, as if to ask whether the passive enjoyment of an item like meat is worth the suffering that occurs to produce it.

    3. bleats

      “Bleats” is typically associated with lambs, which were often used in sacrifices because of their pure and innocent connotation. In the Bible, Jesus is referred to as the Lamb of God, because He lived a completely sinless life but still sacrificed for the greater Christian good. The speaker of the poem seems to be using the bleats as both reference to the slaughtering occurring at the meat factory, and the pain endured by the black workers both in the factory and in their communities. The reference to lambs suggests that innocence is being destroyed.

    4. weening

      “Weaning” as it is typically spelled references the process of slowly getting accustomed to life without something that a person was dependent on, like a baby off of milk or a patient off of medicine. However, the poem spells the word as “weening” which is a word that is not commonly used in modern language, but it means to think or have and opinion. These two definitions of similar words work together to depict the idea of both infancy and thinking, simultaneously occurring in the corruption of the streets.

    5. raw, the freshly killed alone

      This line references the process of producing meat again through language like “raw” and “fresh.” The speaker of the poem seems to be conflating the process of killing animals to create meat for consumption to the experience of lower socioeconomic black people.

    6. a phrase of her like stitching wounds can make;

      This line suggests that the subject of the poem, which was previously established to be Gwendolyn Brooks, can provide healing and repair to the community with her words or phrases. This line references the fact that Brooks wrote about black urban struggles in her writing. Her first poetry volume A Street in Bronzeville portrayed the reality of the poor living and social conditions that the black community faced. Brooks's acknowledgement of these conditions seem to have made the community feel seen, while also functioning to challenge existing oppression.

    7. shanty towns

      Shanty towns refer to the dilapidated settlements that are typically on the outskirts of a town. Many African Americans in urban areas found themselves living in shanty towns, and workers in the meat-packing factories likely would have lived in such establishments.

    8. Lazaruses

      A reference to a biblical story in which Jesus brought a dead man named Lazarus that had been buried in a tomb for four days back to life. This miracle caused many people in the Bible to acknowledge Jesus as Christ.

    9. fasted days

      "Fasted days" refers to a typically religious practice of abstaining from food and/or drink for a certain period of time. The practice is thought to increase self-control, bodily autonomy, and relationship with a higher power.

    10. The Agony and the Bone

      Dolores Kendrick dedicated this poem to Gwendolyn Brooks, who was one of the most influential African American poets in the 20th century. The title appears to reference a well-known Brooks quote that asserts that "writing is a delicious agony."

    1. the unabated war we seem unable to define goes on

      Because of the attempted change in code to end explicit verbal racism that Evans references in her earlier line, "all transition merely language," she is implying that the oppression of Black people has become more subversive and systematic. Racism isn't gone, and thus the war against it is not over, but it becomes more difficult to fight against a system than those that control it.

    2. Who is it bides the time and why? And for how long?

      Like the call-to-action that Evan’s conjures earlier in this verse, she uses this line to place the blame of the unrelenting oppression that is still ongoing on those that are complacent to it.

    3. II

      Evans’ second verse builds in frustration as it works to re-contextualize the oppression of African Americans from the first act as something that is still occurring today. The seemingly hopeful end of the first act is met with a bleak future/”Present” in the second.

    4. All transition merely language.

      Here Evans is pointing out the lack of actual progress in the fight against racism, where the "change" made to combat injustice did not go far enough - where racial slurs become taboo but violence towards Black citizens continues.

    5. Sanctioned lynchings Still orgasmic

      In her introduction at the 1994 Furious Flower conference, Mari Evans dedicates this poem to African American victims police brutality, to exemplify this reoccurring history or violence and injustice. In particular, she dedicates the poem to Michael Taylor, a 16 year old Black boy in 1987 that was shot in the temple while his hands were steel-cuffed behind his back; his death was unjustly ruled a “suicide”.

    6. disciplined entanglement wild welt of trees and gullies

      Evans' use of words like "disciplined" and "welts" serves to present imagery that is both related to the natural scene/setting of the first verse, and to slavery, as the first verse paints a picture of Black slaves running in fear of their white enslavers, attempting to escape.

    7. I

      “Alabama Landscape” is written in three verses, each one moving further into the future. The first is set in the time of slavery, the second in the “present” when the poem was written, and the third looks to the future for action and change.

    8. Alabama Landscape

      Alabama has a long and tragic history systematic racism and injustice towards African Americans. By naming this poem, “Alabama Landscape,” Mari Evans is using specific place as a relevant model of the continuous and unsolved disease of racism in America.

    9. assailed impervious indestructible

      Mari Evans uses line breaks to emphasize the strength and perseverance of a person that has endured injustice. When read aloud at the 1994 Furious Flower conference, Evans gives each of these three words their due diligence with significant time to settle.

    10. I learned Da Nang and Pork Chop Hill

      Evans includes Da Nang and Pork Chop Hill, battle sites of both the Vietnam and Korean Wars (respectively), to further the narrative of violence and tragedy that runs parallel to American History.

    11. my son scream all the way from Anzio

      The Battle of Anzio took place in January of 1944 in Italy. The author references this battle to further propel the poem into the present, while highlighting more moments of injustice and death throughout U.S. history. After World War II, where Black and white Americans fought alongside each other, Black soldiers came back to a country that they had risked their lives for only to return to unrelenting injustice.

    12. I lost Nat’s swinging body in a rain of tears

      This is in reference to the freedom fighter Nat Turner, who in 1831 led a four-day slave rebellion in Southern Virginia. The Nat Turner Rebellion was the longest and most effective slave uprising in U.S. history. When Turner was found six days after the Rebellion, he was tried and executed by white men.

    13. I saw my mate leap screaming to the sea

      This line marks the start of Evan’s historical references to ongoing oppression and mistreatment of African-American people since the beginning of their time in North America, starting with the Slave Trade. To-be-enslaved Africans would abandon ship to escape their daunting future as slaves.

    14. some sweet arpeggio of tears

      Arpeggios are often referred to as “broken” stacked chords, where each note in the chord is played after the other, instead of all at once. The poet is writing about her building frustration and fear; lamenting about the tragedies that have befallen African Americans.

    15. I am a black woman

      Though this poem is written in first person, the speaker is an enduring and universal observer that transcends time. She is not telling the story one Black woman’s experience, but of the injustices that Black women have endured since the beginning of the slave trade.

    1. She died before anybody came.

      She died trying to contact people but there wasn’t enough time. Also, this last line confirms what you were thinking the whole poem, almost like a reminder if you didn’t get it, it’s about a death

    2. “Little boys don’t hold hands!”

      Seems to be potentially homophobic, the mother does not want her sons to be seen in public touching. Could also be that she feels judged as an African American family and does not want any more attention drawn to them.

    3. seemed there must be a father for

      Assuming they had a father and were a put together family. If the mother is out with her four children (children are expensive) in the day, meaning she isn't working. Assuming the father is working.

    1. Brazil, in Nigeria, Ghana, in Botswana, Tanzania, in Kenya, in Russia, Australia, in Haiti, Soweto, in Grenada, in Cuba, in Panama, Libya in England and Italy, France.

      These geographic regions are showing where Black people originated from through the Black Diaspora. The Black Diaspora refers to the mass dispersion of people from Africa during the Transatlantic Slave Trades. The Diaspora took millions of people from Western and Central Africa to different regions throughout the Americas and the Caribbean.

    2. They call me out of my name.

      This may suggest that the author is upset because “African American” restricts being Black to only American people, when there are Black people from other nationalities. People with darker skin are all group together, regardless of their ethnicity.

    3. Hyphenation.

      Hyphenation is the breaking of words into smaller units. In this case African-American is what is being hyphenated. The speaker is saying they are more than just this term. There is only one identity to them, which is being Black.

    4. Do not call me out of my name

      this phrase is repeated in the beginning of the poem. Instead of saying “they call me out of my name”then the speaker changes it to “ do not”. This refers to a demand and to show the power of who she is “ A Black”

    5. Unconquerable

      Unconquerable is capitalized in the middle of the stanza. Unconquerable usually refers to an adjective, but in this case since it is capitalized it can also refer to the speaker as an identity. Unconquerable is also the speaker's name.

    6. I am Kojo.

      As stated in the line before the speaker tells the reader that 'kojo" means unconquerable. The word Kojo is capitalized, this suggest that other than being " A Black" one of her other names that she goes by is Kojo.

    7. open umbrella.

      The term "open umbrella" is used to cover a broad number of functions or items that all fall under a single common category. This may suggest that Black categorizes all nationalities and does not exclude due to geographic boundaries.

    8. BLACK

      In this stanza BLACK is all capitalized which shows the seriousness and how powerful being Black is to speaker. Black is more than just an adjective, it is an identity. This poem was during the period of the Black Power Movement. This was a time when Black people grew proud of their identity and started a movement.

    1. a multitude of men in a new millennium descend as from celestial ships to walk an alien shore again.

      This line references the slave trade, with the alien shore being a reference to America. Benjamin Banneker was an outspoken critic of slavery and wrote letters to Thomas Jefferson voicing his opposition to the institution.

    1. bright dark

      Although "bright dark" is an intentional oxymoron, the speaker is most likely referring to intellectually bright because early on, Susanna Wheatley (John's wife, whom she was a servant for) noticed her intellect.