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  1. Oct 2025
    1. Such figures may be straightforward, like the red rose in Burns's poem. Or they may be as complicated as the figure in the concluding lines of William Butler Yeats's poem The Second Coming

      I liked how they talked about how figurative language can be straight forward or be more complicated because it lets you use it in different ways. If your writing a light hearted poem or even a funny poem you might use figurative language in a more simple obvious way. But when your writing about a more serious topic you might make it more complicated.

    2. When one writes "the last apple on the tree," or "the one small peach as pink as dawn," one is beginning to deal with particulars—to develop texture.

      I would agree being more specific helps your reader picture what your picturing and helps get the story across more

    1. Most importantly, effective poems never tell readers how to feel, how theyfelt, how anyone should feel about the whole thing.

      I would agree the most effective poems should express your feelings and tell your story. Telling your readers how to feel about something will make them not want to read your work anymore and your poem will feel unauthentic.

    2. Another good thing toremember is not to overwhelm the reader with too many images and toomany details.

      This is very important when writing a simple poem. You want to make sure your story is still coming across the way you want to share it and your readers aren't getting distracted or overwhelmed by too many details. So only focus on the ones you think matter the most

    1. Spend fifteen minutes in class (or out!) working with the devices ofpersonification and imagery. Examine (in your imagination or in the actualworld) some thing. Create several personifications of what this thing mightsay, do, look like, things that of course are impossible in “reality” such asthe sky frowning, a tree breathing, a room waiting for someone’s return.List as many as you can. Think about them when you are done and choose acouple of your best ones to share with the class.

      My middle school english teacher did something like with my class every Friday. She would pick and object and we would have to write about what we think it's emotion is and why. Along with are they smiling or frowning. Then we would have to write a poem about it and we could choose to share or not. It was a great way to help build our creativity and got us thinking outside the box.

    2. style of artistic expression that heeds and uses thesubconscious or unconscious human mind, including dreams and dreamlikeimagery,

      The specific writing that poetry is, is very healing. It helps express emotions in a way that only our individual brains can think of. Every one can write down I'm sad but it's the way everyone would describe their sadness in a unique way. When someone might say it feels like pouring rain another person might say it's like getting hit by a bus. The same thing can be true about happiness too. No one would describe their happiness the same way. Someone might say It feels like the sun is shinning just for me, when another person might say it feels like I picked up a lucky penny. It's a healing way to let our subconscious come out and speak

  2. Sep 2025
    1. Theconsistencyofavoicewithinapoemisanimportant

      Keeping the tone and consistency in a poem is important because it not only helps the story be told properly, but changing the tone and not keeping it consistent will confuse your readers.

    1. Is the poem complete

      This is an interesting question because there is no rule about how long a poem has to be. So you personally have to decide if this small story is done and you told the story you wanna tell or do you have to add one more line.

    2. Example: if you think you need a question mark, then rewrite so that syntax makes the interrogative nature clear.4.As for commas, dashes, and dots? Leave them out!

      When I was reading this I found it interesting because as a writer I stress about forgetting things like commas, and dashes because those are a very important part of grammar. So leaving them out in in this type of writing will take some getting used to.

    1. The reader, as he or she begins to read, quickly enters the rhythmic pattern of a poem.

      This is an important part of reading and writing a poem, finding the right beat will help you tell the story even better.

    2. No two poems will sound exactly alik

      No to poems will sound a like because no two people have the same story to tell. And even if you do have the same story as someone else then the two of you will each tell it in a different way. Poems are special because they are unique to your mind only you can come up with it making it special.

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    1. We can train ourselves to respect our feelings, and to discipline(transpose) them into a language that matches those feelings so they can beshared.

      Poetry can be used as a way to help us understand our own feelings better. Respecting your own feelings can be a struggle for a lot of people so having a way to write down your sad moments in a creative way can help people feel more validated and come out stronger and know it's ok to feel all the feelings.

  4. Aug 2025
    1. The Writing Center

      This place has been really helpful in the past! Especially when I had writers block and didn't know how to make my writing even better, or which direction to take it!

    2. Short exercises meant to put the concepts explored in the lecture into use

      I think this will help us break out of our shells and help us get more comfortable with different writing styles in poetry! Sometimes you learn one way to do it and it becomes a default, this will help expand our knowledge and help us be even more creative.

    3. This is meant to ease the worry over grading for you! As long as you sincerely attempt theassignment you will get at least a B and may likely get an A depending on your work

      This makes me a little more relaxed about this class so I can focus more on being creative and being open to trying new things, with out the fear of failing.