A traffic signal was installed at the intersection of Clay Street and Eagle Avenue.end underline Before it was installed, many vehicles raced through the intersection without regard to the posted speed limit. Pedestrians, many of whom were students, crossed the intersection to get to and from campus, but they had to dodge in and out of constant traffic. The number of accidents rose far past an acceptable limit. Indeed, one recent accident resulted in a loss of life.
When I read this paragraph, it feels like the writer is showing how one problem led to another until things got serious. Instead of just saying “a traffic light was needed,” the paragraph walks me through all the small issues that built up to that decision. It’s basically connecting the dots so I can see why the final outcome actually makes sense.