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  1. Aug 2021
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    1. She felt a soft wet substance with her fingers and was surprised that nobody spoke or took off her bandage. There was a pause for a few seconds; and then a great deal of scuffling and whispering. Somebody said something about the garden, and at last Mrs. Donnelly said something very cross to one of the next-door girls and told her to throw it out at once: that was no play.

      Although the tile of the article is Clay, there is no appearance of the word Clay in the article, we could still realize what Maria has touched is clay, and it differs James Joyce from other mediocre writers.

    2. But no one tried to show her her mistake; and when she had ended her song Joe was very much moved.

      What is brilliant and talented for James Joyce's writing is instead of directly pointing out how old Maris is, he hided a lot of hints in the writing to reflect this point that reader has to read and interpret carefully to get all of these evidence.

    3. She felt a soft wet substance with her fingers and was surprised that nobody spoke or took off her bandage

      what's the thing she got? Considering the title of the story, it might be clay, which links to death and bury.

    4. Mrs. Mooney

      It's weird to see that she still uses Mooney as her family name as they have already divorced. Also, using Mrs. to refer a female often imply certain degree of looking down upon female.

    5. These noises converged in a single sensation of life for me: I imagined that I bore my chalice safely through a throng of foes.

      Although I here is referred to the protagonist, I could also infer the mindset of James Joyce due to his Irish identity.

    6. As I did so I met the gaze of a pair of bottle-green eyes peering at me from under a twitching forehead. I turned my eyes away again.

      Jame Joyce was great at building all kinds of comparisons. Previously, the protagonist is eager to look for someone with green eyes, but now he doesn't dare to look at the green eyes, reflecting his state of mind and achieving the principle of "show, but not tell".

    7. Then he asked us which of us had the most sweethearts.

      I found that many times the story expands toward the unexpected direction from common people's imagination. The prediction we made based on his previous description often misleads us how plot will move forward.

    8. He had often said to me:

      It seems similar to the Garden Party as In medias res that we first encounter personal pronoun without knowing whom he refers to and whose story is unknown.

    9. “Wide-awake and laughing-like to himself…. So then, of course, when they saw that, that made them think that there was something gone wrong with him….”

      The title of this story makes me wonder who is the protagonist of this story, or who is the person James Joyce aims to depict the most. Although the whole story is narrated from "my" point of perspective about Old Cotter's story, and the title "THE SISTERS" seems to point us toward the direction that Eliza and Nannie are two major persons James Joyce want to focus on instead.

  3. Jul 2021
    1. didn’t see him after four o’clock.”

      I think in the beginning the sentence is that "Harold hadn’t come back from lunch until close on four." Does that mean Harold came to office around four and then left soon, or does it suggest old Mr. Neave is too "tired" for remembering things clearly as if in dream?

    2. But Leila didn’t want to dance any more. She wanted to be home, or sitting on the veranda listening to those baby owls. When she looked through the dark windows at the stars, they had long beams like wings... But presently a soft, melting, ravishing tune began, and a young man with curly hair bowed before her.

      Again, just like what happened at the end of the Marriage à la Mode we read yesterday, there's a change of mind for the main character in whether doing something or not.

    3. She would remember for ever.

      In American English, forever is written as one word. In British English, you may see the forever written as two words: 'for ever'. Therefore, it could be a good way for computer to determine the author's origin or the contexts of the story setting.

    4. But Isabel couldn’t help wondering what had happened to the salmon they had for supper last night. She had meant to have fish mayonnaise for lunch and now...

      There's a change of perspective from William to Isabel in the story.

    5. garden

      Here we encounter the theme garden again and it brings me to think what's in common for all stories in this book? Why are they group together?

    6. “Oh well, give me one,” said she.

      The second time she changes her mind after refusing the order while Hennie partakes to take some. It seems that she tries to act like others instead of behaving what she truly would like to.

    7. At that “she” looked up; she simply withered her mother.

      She also disdainfully told her mother to "shut up". Her attitude is very different from her mother's timid and claptrap attitude with her, also forming a strong contrast with her angelic appearance.

    8. You see, I want her to go in. She’s not been before,

      Mrs. Raddick talks about her daughter by using she instead something like "my daughter", which is weird and makes us not entirely sure whether she is talking about her daughter at all and gave us a sense of distancing and strain between this pair of mother and daughter

    9. At that she paused, the fork in her hand, opened her eyes, and really did smile. “Of course,” said she. “I always expect people to.”

      It surprises me she welcomes people smoking around, forming a strong contradiction with her negative attitude toward gambling.

    10. “Yes, yes, she’ll be delighted. That’s just what I wanted, isn’t it, darling?

      I am lacking of words to describe the behavior of mother, careless and mindless seem to be not enough considering her behavior toward her own daughter.

    11. Why couldn’t she have workmen for her friends rather than the silly boys she danced with and who came to Sunday night supper?

      An evidence for class divider.

    12. They must. Already the men had shouldered their staves and were making for the place.

      It seems that those men don't follow Laura's instructions and made their own decisions.

    13. The organ-grinder might play there all day and the stick would not thump. "It never will thump again, It never will thump again,

      Their memory of father turns out to be the memory of fear instead of memory of good things.

    14. A spasm of pity squeezed her heart. Poor little thing! She wished she’d left a tiny piece of biscuit on the dressing-table. It was awful to think of it not finding anything. What would it do?

      On the one hand, it shows Constantia has a caring personality; and on the other hand, can this sympathy for mouse foreshadowing her own situation that draws a parallel?

    15. We miss our dear father so much,” she could have cried if she’d wanted to.

      Is Josephine truly missed his dead? In addition to her actions in the previous paragraphs that "she nearly giggles" when discussing her father's funeral, the author seems to suggest Josephine don't feel too much loss from her father's death

    16. to her favourite Buddha

      Rather intriguing to see her faith in Buddhism in the western world at that time, when Buddha would for sure be regarded as a faith of colonial world / Ceylon.

    17. evening Bertha

      In the novel, there are a lot of different clothes people wear for different occasions, and this could be used to study their class and social status.

    18. whether we shall keep her or not.”

      It turns out that Kate is the cook of the house, making me surprise a lot, as in the previous part she is referred as "the enchanted princess" that makes me assume Kate is a person with higher social status.

    19. Aunt Josephine went scarlet with pleasure; Auntie Con gave a deep, deep sigh.

      Although the writing is quite short, reader can easily sense the different characteristics between Josephine and Constantia because of a lot of comparisons.

    20. to-morrow

      By reading different novels of earlier periods, it turns out that to-morrow is the word people used in "old world" while tomorrow is a more modern term.

    21. top-hat

      According to the Wikipeida, "by the 1790s, the directoire style dress coat with top hat was widely introduced as citywear for the upper and middle classes in all urban areas of the Western world." And apparently, porter is a working class and can be viewed as lower class, so again here class dynamics is a theme in Mansfield's novel. Edited: During the 19th century, the top hat developed from a fashion into a symbol of urban respectability, and this was assured when Prince Albert started wearing them in 1850. bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Top_hat

    22. ... On the veranda, dressed all in white and wearing a cork helmet, stood Benny

      It seems that author uses ... not as omit something unfinished but as a jump to another scene across the space, to the location where Benny stays at.

    23. Miss Pinner—and Miss Constantia?”

      It's interesting to see Constantia is been named Miss Constantia while Josephine is been called Miss Pinner instead of Miss Josephine

    24. Ceylon

      Ceylon is the English name for Sri Lanka in the early days. Curious to know why they read Ceylon mail at this point of the reading, maybe this story encompasses the colonization issue?

    25. The week after was one of the busiest weeks of their lives. Even when they went to bed it was only their bodies that lay down and rested; their minds went on, thinking things out, talking things over, wondering, deciding, trying to remember where...

      First, the week after what? Who's they (their lives)? Reader encounter the middle of story first which really triggers readers' attention and curiosity. Secondly, we find the unfinished sentences like those in the Garden Party, showing that it is either author's personal style or the genre of that generation, a classic example of literary modernism, which differs from the Victorian novel.

    1. he medical man who examined him, being informed of this circumstance, considered the post-mortem appearances as being perfectly compatible with murder by smothering–that is to say, with murder committed by some person, or persons, pressing the pillow over the nose and mouth of the deceased, until death resulted from congestion of the lungs.

      Since the murderers didn't move the pillow to remove any physical evidence related to murder, this shows that the Indians are not experienced criminals to make some attempts to prevent themselves from being suspected or caught by authorities.

    2. When the morning came, your language and conduct showed that you were absolutely ignorant of what you had said and done overnight.

      If Rachel doesn't come to see this entire thing and came to the house in the morning, it will be hard to get a sense what has actually happened in the room. I can't imagine how they can worked with him to figure out every details. Franklin wouldn't have remembered for sure.

    3. Mr. Godfrey Ablewhite paid three thousand pounds to Mr. Luker, he was to receive back the Diamond, as a pledge redeemed.

      This rate is unbelievably high, but Godfrey couldn't do anything about it. Mr. Luker used this secret of the Moonstone's whereabouts to almost blackmail Godfrey, asking for 1.5x what he lent after one year.

    4. “Where is he now?” she asked, giving free expression to her one dominant interest–the interest in Mr. Blake. “What is he doing? Has he spoken of me? Is he in good spirits? How does he bear the sight of the house, after what happened in it last year? When are you going to give him the laudanum? May I see you pour it out? I am so interested; I am so excited–I have ten thousand things to say to you, and they all crowd together so that I don’t know what to say first. Do you wonder at the interest I take in this?”

      Form these lines of question, reader will feel a sense of eagerness to know everything about Franklin in haste.

    5. my full dose–five hundred drops.

      This dose is much higher than what he suspected Mr. Candy has given to Mr. Blake, and it really makes me concerned about his ability to continue conducting the experiment with a clear mind when he itself seems to be an addict.

    6. you have fallen to the lowest possible place in Betteredge’s estimation.

      I knew the book has been placed high in Betteredge's mind, but I still don't get why and how this importance come from.

    7. I found myself brought to a standstill at the outset of the inquiry. I was not even capable of accurately remembering the number of the guests who had sat at the same table with me.

      If Mr. Franklin cannot remember the number of guests clearly, how can reader trust his long, seemingly-intact and detailed narration?

    8. “You shall know that you have wronged me, yet,” I said. “Or you shall never see me again!”

      Mr. Franklin is definitively not a good communicator in understanding how other people feel and think since he is egocentric and every decision he made is from his own standpoints. He is not ashamed and don't feel guilty at all to explain anything more after Rachel witnessed him stealing the diamond and he cannot give a sufficient evidence to show himself is innocent.

    9. The apology was more unendurable than the insult. The most degraded man living would have felt humiliated by it.

      Mr. Franklin is ego-centric as it is he made mistake and was responsible for the missing of the Moonstone, though we still don't know why and how he did it. He acts like he made no mistakes at all and I think it reflects the contemporaneous male dominance.

    10. I could resist it no longer–I caught her in my arms, and covered her face with kisses.

      I felt insulted if I were Rachel as Mr. Franklin acted pretentiously and I was disgusted by his hypocritical excuse for this absurd behavior.

    11. If the Moonstone had been in my possession, this Oriental gentleman would have murdered me

      This reflects the western centric points of view in viewing people from Asia as savage and barbaric.

    12. He needed a large sum of money; and he needed it by a given time. Rachel’s income, which would have helped him to anything else, would not help him here

      Before now, I am speculating it is he stole the diamond, but if he stolen the diamond, he should have enough money and it remains unexplained.

    13. ? She has told me with her own lips (this, dear lady, is between ourselves) that she loves another man, and that her only idea in marrying me is to try and put that other man out of her head.

      Mr. Godfrey is lying and hypocritical if we can trust Miss Clack's narration of the scene in Montagu Square

    14. I have lost a beautiful girl, an excellent social position, and a handsome income,”

      What he regards of the marriage with Rachel is all about reputation and wealth instead of loving Rachel from his heart.

    15. It is a poor Christian that is afraid of being insulted

      Look crazy and inane to me and entering private space without permission is intolerable in my point of view. Miss Clack seems to use religion as the excuse to do immoral acts.

    16. You would have done great things in my profession, ma’am, if you had happened to be a man.”

      We can look at this question from a feminism perspective, which shows that in the 19th century, the gender status is not the same as certain occupation with respects can only be done by male, no matter how great a women she is.

    17. if he had known Rachel’s character as I know it, he would have suspected everybody in the house but her

      This shows solicitor's confidence in Miss Verinder, but also reflects a controversy for us to think about: will you ignore something / easily deceived by someone if he is familiar to you? Or, can you know better the characteristic of oneself?

    18. “Dear aunt, a little conspiracy!” he said. “Dear Miss Clack, a pious fraud which even your high moral rectitude will excuse! Will you leave Rachel to suppose that I accept the generous self-sacrifice which has signed this paper? And will you kindly bear witness that I destroy it in your presence, before I leave the house?” He kindled a match, and, lighting the paper, laid it to burn in a plate on the table. “Any trifling inconvenience that I may suffer is as nothing,” he remarked, “compared with the importance of preserving that pure name from the contaminating contact of the world. There! We have reduced it to a little harmless heap of ashes; and our dear impulsive Rachel will never know what we have done! How do you feel? My precious friends, how do you feel? For my poor part, I am as light-hearted as a boy!”

      This paragraph makes Mr. Godfrey seem to be a gracious and honorable man who cares Rachel a lot.

    19. “My reputation!” She burst out laughing.

      Miss Rachel becomes hysteric and it seems that she knows what happened clearly but for some reason she can't present the truth to the public and intends to hide it from everyone. What a big change! I can't wait to find the truth.

    20. invincible reluctance

      This phrase means death but in a roundabout way which is fairly clever. However, this also adds some difficulty to the text analysis as machine cannot detect the meaning of this phrase and categorizing with the word such as death together.

    21. Oriental

      This is my first time seeing people from SouthEast Asian being referred to Oriental, which is surprising as I encountered the word before when it refers to East Asians.

    22. there are two reasons for my taking it up next, in my turn.

      Different narrators with distinct occupation speaks in different tone. We can clearly sense the difference among Betteredgee, Miss Clack, and Mr. Bruff. Mr. Bruff, as a layer, speaks logically.

    23. Her answer to this, on her own solemn affirmation

      To be honest, I think Sergeant's analysis is quite convincing and it seems that it's not true. What we believe is true in fact being fallible means we have overlooked something and this is exactly why detective novel fascinates me.

    24. Mr. Blake

      I think this is also interesting to investigate on as sometimes the same person refers to other differently. For example, Sergeant called Mr. Franklin as Mr. Franklin Blake and Mr. Blake as well. Moreover, this is an issue that we have to keep in mind when we do textual analysis. If we only look at the number of times Mr. Franklin appears in the text, we actually make some mistakes.

    25. “Drive on!” cried Miss Rachel, louder than ever

      From so many evidence that Miss Rachel acts abnormally because of Mr. Franklin, though Mr. Franklin doesn't know why and he might not be intentional.

    26. Her own, to be sure

      I am coming back to comment after reading enough to know that nightgown is not for her own but Mr. Franklin. I wonder why here instead of hiding thoughts, he made a rather arbitrary conclusion that eventually proves that he was wrong? And it leads me to reflect why he is so confident about no one has stolen the diamond, as he cannot figured about a segment of the whole case - what has Rosanna did.

    27. if we don’t find the Moonstone, they will.

      Again I am so confused that why the word they and we are in italics, as well as the appearance of Italics of some words that don't mean something special to me. How about others? What do you think?

    28. I was the only person who saw him go; and he told me he should be back before the Sergeant returned.

      It seems that Mr. Franklin is suspicious as well since he tries to do something secret without letting the Sergeant to know.

    29. speaking in a loud voice

      Betteredge's narrative portrays Cuff as an annoying figure that intentionally to do something with bad intention, in additional to the use of word "devilish cunning" in the previous paragraph. It seems to me that Betteredge intends to emphasize on certian things Cuff did and mixed some of his own subjective feeling (for example, the word devilish, to make us as a reader become hatred to the Sergeant himself.

    30. here under the sanction of the mistress of the house. Under these circumstances, is it, or is it not, your duty as a good citizen, to assist me

      Is commanding other to help with moral constraint a good idea? What will 19th Century people think about it?

    31. The latter habit–hitherto mainly useful in helping me to discipline the fallen nature which we all inherit from Adam–has unexpectedly proved important to my humble interests in quite another way.

      I finds fascinating that both Betteredge and Miss Clark mentioned Adam and related Bible story in their narratives. As a foreign student, I am not sure whether this is unique or a common pattern for the English novel, if anyone knows, please respond!

    32. The events related in several narratives.

      I think the second period offers a series of different narratives by people and helps us make our own judgements of what has happened. We will not be restrained from following Betteredge's mind to unpack the whole story, but instead, we will be able to pinpoint many of Betteredge's factual and narrational inconsistencies and paradoxes introduced in the previous chapters by analyzing the alternate perspectives from others.

    33. boudoir

      The word "boudoir" appears several times in the book. This word means "a woman's dressing room, bedroom, or private sitting room" by Merriam-Webster dictionary. The frequent usage of this word by author and sometimes with the addition of quotation marks make author think that this word has its own importance and Betteredge want to stress certain meaning on it.

    34. have

      Why author here want to use the Italics form of have instead of regular font? I found this similar pattern appearing several times based on what we have read so far and I also put this in my hw1 as something interesting to investigate about.

    35. Item the first: the baker’s man declared he had met Rosanna Spearman, on the previous afternoon, with a thick veil on, walking towards Frizinghall by the foot-path way over the moor.

      I think that this is a typical statement of witness in a detective story. Betteredge wrote down a witness statement in which it is unclear what has actually happened, as what's Rosanna Sperman was going to do that afternoon and why she wear a thick veil, but the mystery and uncertainty makes the plot more intriguing!

    36. I was savage with myself, for feeling uneasy in myself the moment she had spoken them–but so it was.

      Does savage in a sense related to the Robison Cursoe that he lived like a savage creatures on a desolated island?

    37. that they asked awkward questions directly, and that the “foreign politics” and the “falling asleep in the sun” wouldn’t serve a second time over with them

      Why they and them are in italics form?

    38. I am a slovenly old man, and a good deal of my meat and drink gets splashed about on my clothes.

      I do find this a little odd and possibly out of character - Betteredge seems so dedicated to his lady and his job, that I'd imagine him taking more care over the state of what he dresses.

    39. I am not superstitious

      I found this seemingly paradox fascinating that in the previous chapter, he says that "Although I attach no sort of credit to the fantastic Indian legend of the gem, I must acknowledge, before I conclude, that I am influenced by a certain superstition of my own in this matter. It is my conviction, or my delusion, no matter which, that crime brings its own fatality with it. I am not only persuaded of Herncastle’s guilt; I am even fanciful enough to believe that he will live to regret it, if he keeps the Diamond; and that others will live to regret taking it from him, if he gives the Diamond away." And here he says he is not superstitious of any sort which make me reflect the authenticity of his narration that might influence the story developing.

    40. and to all of his house and name who received it after him

      Maybe it's because I am not familiar with English literature, but instead of simply using the words such as descendant, the author use "all of his house and name who received it after him" that is different from our daily speech pattern and it could be a characteristic of the 19th century novel or author's unique personal style. It might be a interesting topic to explore for NLP.