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  1. Mar 2025
    1. while the suggestion might seem extraordinary, he said, the team makes a very convincing case

      Love how they tie this back into a conclusion after playing devil's advocate.

    2. Dr. Scarpetta and his colleagues make the case that the ancestors of Fiji’s iguanas crossed on mats of floating vegetation.

      This is a mind-boggling theory as the voyage is nearly 5,000 miles long.

    3. The question has definitely captured the imagination of scientists and the public alike

      I think is quote supports the hook of this article. I like how it ties the public, a.k.a. the article audience, into the minds of the scientists alike.

    1. Mr. Lee said he hoped Dr. Doutaghi’s job and access to emails and campus would be restored, and he is asking the school to take “public action to restore her reputation.”

      Article ends being one-sided and open ended. I wish there was more information about the outcome or projected outcome.

    2. The decision came three days after a news site, powered at least in part by artificial intelligence, published a story about Dr. Doutaghi’s connections to the group.

      This makes it feel more than just an academic controversy. The AI-generated reporting angle is unique and makes the story feel more relevant.

    3. Last week, though, she was abruptly barred from Yale’s campus in New Haven, Conn., and placed on administrative leave.

      The word "abruptly" builds intrigue, making the reader want to know why. I like how this amplified the tesnsion relating to the title of the article.

    4. Helyeh Doutaghi, a scholar in international law, began a new job in 2023 as the deputy director of a project at Yale Law School.

      The opening sentence is straightforward but lacks an immediate hook. Starting with the controversy or her sudden removal would be a stronger way to pull the reader in.

    1. ignorance leaves him vulnerable to someone who may get some perverse satisfaction from taking advantage of him. (Can it really be that the two episodes you happen to know about represent the full extent of his roommate’s betrayals?)

      This is a great representation of my feeling on this debate.

    2. Do I have an ethical obligation to tell my son, or should I let him continue his convivial and peaceful last year of college with this tight-knit group of guys?

      This is an absurd question in my opinion.

    3. I called the company and they sent me a copy of the front and back of the check, which was signed and deposited by the same lying roommate.

      This is a common issue with undergraduate students.

    4. My son is a senior in college. His best friend and roommate for the last four years recently took something from him that was in a hiding place no one knew about except for my son and this friend.

      I chose this article because I have heard many horror stories about similar situations.

  2. Feb 2025
    1. A lift ticket for around $100 “might sound like a pretty freaking good deal,” Ms. DesLauriers said, “for a powder day with five-minute lift lines and 1,700 vertical feet.”

      Great closing and again, almost a slight humorous tone.

    2. A lift ticket for around $100 “might sound like a pretty freaking good deal,” Ms. DesLauriers said, “for a powder day with five-minute lift lines and 1,700 vertical feet.”

      I am sold after this article.

    3. The passes prompted crowds of skiers, yet exacerbated traffic jams, long lines and housing shortages in small resort communities.

      Incredibly relatable to me growing up in Breckenridge.

    4. nabling snow seekers to glide seamlessly between groomed, lift-served trails and powdery backcountry glades

      Best description of a ski terrain I have ever read.

    5. What Bolton lacks in glam it more than makes up for with its terrain and friendly vibe. It has cultivated a niche among Eastern ski areas as a hybrid downhill and backcountry resort, leaning into demand for backcountry skiing with its fabled 1,200-acre powder preserve, known as the Bolton Backcountry.

      Absolutely fired me up. The vocabulary throughout this passage, such as "niche", "cultivated", and "demand" were all used properly to support the claims towards this backcountry area.

    6. “We have Formica in the bathrooms, not marble.”

      A humorous quote that gains the readers attention while also supporting and visualizing the area being described.

    7. Stowe takes Epic and Sugarbush takes Ikon, and each resort has more than 100 trails, a vertical drop of over 2,000 feet, a dozen or more lifts, and luxury slope-side lodging.

      This description painted a picture of the mountain area. This is a relatable introduction that mimics and visualizes a Colorado slope.

    1. But he hadn’t, he noted, anticipated the intensity of the vitriol, which, he said, included doxxing and vandalism, as well as death threats.

      Wow! Crazy to think of this is all in relation to a family friendly animated bear film.

    2. “In a time of life with cynicism, Paddington is a remarkably generous-spirited, uncynical character,” he added. “And the film reflects that.”

      This article was much more about the film versus development of the film, which threw me off all in all. Interesting read and feel obligated to watch the movie.

    3. That is, until “Paddington 2” became available to watch on Amazon Prime Video in March 2018 and then became a streaming hit in 2020 during the coronavirus pandemic.

      Very interesting how all streaming services showed their light during the pandemic. That seams to what have promoted this sequel more than anything.

    4. Hugh Grant as the ridiculously campy villain, Phoenix Buchanan — was also a breeze.“Hugh knows a good part,” he said, laughing.King’s confidence as a director grew from the first film to the second, Heyman said, as he became more comfortable with the bevy of visual effects required to create the C.G.I. bear, who was represented during filming by a toy bear head on a stick.“There was a lot more time to focus on the script and on working with the actors,” Heyman said. “It was really fun. The spirit of the film was reflected on set.”

      Finally! Some relevant information to the article with good reasoning.

    5. ldren from Nazi-occupied Europe to England. The second film, directed by Paul King, who wrote the script with Simon Farnaby, is an action adventure with stunning set sequences, following Paddington through a court trial, a prison escape and a daring pursuit by train.

      Too much backstory for a recent event article. Continuously start to wander.

    6. “There’s humor in it for adults; there’s humor for children,”

      Lot of evidence to support the actual title of the article, "Why Everyone is still talking about Paddington 2".

    7. it is hard to imagine that when “Paddington 2” first arrived in theaters stateside, it was only a modest box office success.

      After the introduction, it went into a slight summary of the money storyline. I feel like I am starting to loose focus on the main question, is this the greatest film ever developed?

    8. This tweet was not ironic.

      I like the separation in the text to emphasis this introduction. I choose this article because I find it interesting that an animated film is in discussion for "Greatest Film Ever Created" and hope it competes with live acting films.

    1. The fish is only about six inches long. It also has a less scary alternative name: the humpback anglerfish.

      Unbelievable to have that strong of a presence to end with talking down the animal for a conclusion. Kind of let down but interesting discovery.

    2. This fish with “devil” in its name is no friendly guppy or koi. It is black as the depths in which it normally lives. Its teeth look like razors. Its lidless eyes, staring forward, seem to have a remorseless cruelty. Its mouth, perpetually open, frankly looks as if it wants to swallow you and everything you hold dear.

      Out of all the new york times assignments, this continues to be the most visual in its description. I love how it begins with using emotion to relate to the public and now really detailing the creature once the feeling of the article is set.

    3. big mouths, sharp teeth and a desire to eat almost anything.

      Again, almost using a scare tactic to lure me into the rest of the article. I have to keep reading!

    4. Even the light of the sun cannot penetrate the inky blackness below. The pressure of the water above is crushing. And yet life somehow survives, adapted to that strange world.

      The eerie emotion and vivid description effectively hook the audience, drawing them into the article with a sense of curiosity.

    1. It’s possible that further exploration will uncover “the ancestors of ostriches, fowls, neoaves and ducks that may have roamed alongside non-avian dinosaurs.”

      Great summary backed by scientists. Love how the ending left on a "cliffhanger" and keeps the audience excited to hear more about these discoveries!

    2. the new paper generated a near-complete three-dimensional reconstruction of the bird’s head.

      Using AI tools and new DNA study methods, topics I spend immense time looking into, makes this all possible. Continues to impress me every time I see real world applications of these new technologies.

    3. Antarctic avian is an ancient relative of today’s geese and ducks, and the oldest known modern bird.

      As an active bird hunter, this is what intrigued me in this article after getting hooked on the title. Relating to a descendent species that readers are familiar with, it makes it easier to conceptualize.

  3. Jan 2025
    1. It’s surprising to me that this is the fourth Oura Ring and that these problems, in addition to inaccurate step counting, haven’t already been solved. Wake me up when they are.

      Reflection: This article caught my attention because my partner just got an Oura Ring after we talked about it over the holidays. We were both curious about how well it actually tracks sleep and if it’s worth the hype. I liked how the article broke down the features in a way that made sense, especially the focus on comfort and how it’s less bulky than other trackers. The idea that it measures things like heart rate and body temperature to give a full picture of sleep is really interesting. My partner has already started using it, and we have been looking at the data together, trying to see if it actually helps with better sleep habits. I also liked how the article explained the app in a simple way, since some tech reviews can feel too complicated. The battery life seems like a big plus too, since constant charging can be annoying. Reading this made me think about how good writing makes even technical topics easy to understand, which is something I want to work on in my own writing.

    2. I liked wearing the Oura — thinner and more comfortable than its predecessor, it looked just like an everyday ring. I also understood its appeal: Its seven-day battery life could constantly monitor vitals like my heart rate.But my sleep and fitness data were so hit or miss that I can’t confidently recommend making the splurge and paying a subscription.

      Emphasizes the ring's minimalist design, which may appeal to users seeking a less obtrusive sleep-tracking device. Highlights the ring's capability to collect various physiological sleep patterns.

    3. The inside of the ring comes embedded with tiny sensors that collect data on vitals like heart rate, body temperature and movement, in an effort to track a wearer’s sleep patterns and pinpoint issues that may cause poor rest.

      The article begins by highlighting the growing popularity of the Oura Ring among those looking to improve their sleep quality.

    1. An exception, Ms. Knutson said, may be younger people, who are regular users of the apps and accustomed to being paid through them.

      Reflection: This article stood out to me because it talks about the importance of showing appreciation to people who help us every day. Especially during the holidays, it is a good reminder that even small gestures like a tip, a gift, or a thank-you note can make a difference. I liked how the article gave clear and practical advice. Figuring out who to tip and how much can be confusing, but this made it simple. I also liked that it mentioned other ways to show appreciation for people who cannot give large tips. The writing felt natural and easy to read. It was informative without being boring. I liked how it explained things in a conversational way instead of just listing rules. I want to keep that in mind for my own writing by making sure it is clear and useful while still being interesting.

    2. typically be giving the following amounts this year: housekeeper, $50; child care provider, $50; landscaper or snow remover, $30; teacher, $25; mail carrier, $20; trash or recycling collector, $20.

      Providing clear guidelines helps readers make the advice practical.

    3. veryone on your list a cash gift, Ms. Post said, consider making special cookies or candy to show your appreciation to those who deliver your newspaper

      The article highlights the importance of personalizing gifts, suggesting that understanding the recipient's interests can make the gesture more meaningful.

    4. More people said they planned to tip workers like housekeepers, child care providers and trash collectors at the holidays this year than in previous years

      This opening sets the stage by acknowledging the common practice of holiday tipping, emphasizing appreciation for service industry individuals.