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  1. May 2023
    1. Louise Bennett had a programme called “Miss Lou’s Views” on Jamaican JBC Radio in the 1970s. One correspondent wrote in a daily newspaper that such a programme should be scrapped because it tended to perpetuate ignorance in Jamaicans. Though Louise Bennett has sought to foster love and respect for the Jamaican dialect, she has never advocated that Standard English be abandoned. She argued that for far too long it was considered not respectable to use the dialect, because there was a social stigma attached to the kind of person who used it. She added that many people still did not accept that for many Caribbean people, there were many things best said in the language of the folk. (“Bennett on Bennett” 101).

      Louise Bennett, a radio talkshow host for the JBC, sought to show her respect for her roots, even advocating that standard English ought to be the spoken language because of the social stigma related to speaking in the island country's dialect. She added that many people still did not accept that for many Caribbean people, there were many things best said in the language of the folk. (Davidson par.4). 

    2. Louise Bennett, Caribbean cultural icon, linguist and poet, has been writing and performing using the Jamaican Creole since the 1950s. For a long time, despite the fact that her work gained limited favour among the working class and some intellectuals, her writings did not appear in the important Jamaican anthology Focus in the 1940s to the 1960s, and the Jamaica Poetry League ignored her. In 1962, she was included in the Independence Anthology of Jamaican Literature, but not in the section for poetry. It took the social and political upheaval of the 1970s for academics and others to accept Louise Bennett as a guru of the Jamaican Creole. She received the Order of Jamaica in 1974.

      Despite being overlooked for decades Miss Lou had a following. She was featured in the Independence Anthology of Jamaican Literature in 1962, but not in the poetry section. In the 1970s Miss Lous following finally broke the stalemate that placed Louise Bennett as a guru of the Jamaican Creole receiving the Order of Jamaica. (September 7 th has been officially declared Miss Lou Day. Known as Miss Lou, that is to say the honorable Louise Bennett-Coverley who was born in Kingston Jamaica in 1919 to a widowed dressmaker. Miss Lou is highly esteemed as the queen of comedy her persona is known for highlighting, commemorating, and exploring Jamaican heritage (Davidson par 3).

    3. Miss Lou, the Honourable Louise Bennett-Coverley O.M., O.J., finally has her day! September 7 has officially been declared, by Governor-General Sir Howard Cooke, to be ‘Miss Lou Day’. The day marks the works of the esteemed first lady of comedy in promoting, celebrating, and exploring Jamaican culture. It also marks the day of her birth.

      September 7 th has been officially declared Miss Lou Day. Known as Miss Lou, that is to say the honorable Louise Bennett-Coverley who was born in Kingston Jamaica in 1919 to a widowed dressmaker. Miss Lou is highly esteemed as the queen of comedy her persona is known for highlighting, commemorating, and exploring Jamaican heritage (Davidson par 1-2).

  2. Feb 2023
    1. This is the dead land this is cactus land 40 Here the stone images Are raised, here they receive The supplication of a dead man's hand Under the twinkle of a fading star. Is it like this 45 In death's other kingdom Waking alone At the hour when we are Trembling with tenderness Lips that would kiss 50 Form prayers to broken stone

      They are unable to carry out their desires in the third section since they are in a barren land.

    2. Here we go round the prickly pear Prickly pear prickly pear Here we go round the prickly pear 70 At five o'clock in the morning. Between the idea And the reality Between the motion And the act 75 Falls the Shadow For Thine is the Kingdom Between the conception And the creation Between the emotion 80 And the response Falls the Shadow Life is very long Between the desire And the spasm 85 Between the potency And the existence Between the essence And the descent Falls the Shadow 90 For Thine is the Kingdom For Thine is Life is For thine is the This is the way the way the world ends 95 This is the way the way the world ends This is the way the way the world ends Not with a bang but a whimper.

      Finally, in the last segment, children skip around a cactus while singing a nursery rhyme. They are no longer capable of thinking, creating, acting, or responding since a shadow has taken possession of them. The poem concludes with a whimper that represents the end of the world.

    3. The eyes are not here There are no eye here In this valley of dying stars In this hollow valley 55 This broken jaw of our lost kingdoms. In this last of meeting places We grope together And avoid speech Gathered on this beach of the tumid river. 60 Sightless, unless The eyes reappear As the perpetual star Multifoliate rose Of death's twilight kingdom 65 The hope only Of empty men.

      The Hollow Man from section two speaks in the fourth part on the dismal environment they are in and how they are terrified to look at or be looked at by others.

    4. Eyes I dare not meet in dreams In death's dream kingdom 20 These do not appear: There the eyes are Sunlight on a broken column There is a tree swinging

      In the second portion one of them is terrified to stare at those who entered death's dream kingdom , something the Hollow Men are unable to accomplish.

    5. Those who have crossed With direct eyes to death's other Kingdom Remember us--if at all-- not as lost 15 Violent souls, but only As the hollow men The stuffed men.

      In the second portion one of them is terrified to stare at those who entered death's dream kingdom , something the Hollow Men are unable to accomplish.

    6. We are the hollow men We are the stuffed men Leaning together Headpiece filled with straw. Alas! Our dried voices, when 5 We whisper together Are quiet and meaningless

      T.S. Eliot wrote the poem "The Hollow Men" in 1925. A gang of Hollow Men greets the reader as the poem's first part begins. Their voices and bodies are indeed dry, as well as everything else about them. Everything they do has no meaning.

    7. THE HOLLOW MEN

      T. S. Eliot wrote the poem "The Hollow Men" in 1925. Like many of Eliot's poems, it has overlapping and disjointed themes, although it is widely acknowledged to be primarily focused with post-World War I Europe under the Treaty of Versailles.

    1. Ganga was sunken, and the limp leaves Waited for rain, while the black clouds Gathered far distant, over Himavant. The jungle crouched, humped in silence. Then spoke the thunder

      Thunder suddenly rumbles in the Ganges, halfway around the world from Europe. Eliot references the Upanishads' (Hindu fables) traditional meaning of "what the thunder speaks" in his writing.

    2. V. What the Thunder Said

      The imagery and events of The Waste Land's of the poem is spectacularly apocalyptic. The towns of Jerusalem, Athens, Alexandria, Vienna, and London are destroyed, rebuilt, and then destroyed once more as the first half of the piece builds to an apocalyptic conclusion. The description of a dilapidated chapel makes reference to the chapel from the Holy Grail legend. The rains arrive, ending the drought and restoring life to the earth as a cock crows on top of the chapel. Strangely, no hero has come forward to lay claim to the Holy Grail; instead, the rebirth has seemed gratuitous and random.

    3. IV. Death by Water

      The poem's shortest piece, "Death by Water," tells the story of Phlebas the Phoenician, who appears to have drowned to death. He has put his worldly concerns aside as his body is being pulled apart by sea life. The narrator challenges the reader to think about Phlebas and to be mindful of death.

    4. burning

      Reference to the Buddha fire sermon

    5. Tiresias

      The son of the nymph Chariclo, a favorite of Athena, and a blind Theban seer known as Tiresias. In various well-known legends, he takes role. Sophocles, Euripides, Pindar, and Ovid are a few of the ancient authors who make reference to him.

      Tiresias is a mythological character with both male and feminine traits who is blind but can “see” into the future

    6. Unreal City Under the brown fog of a winter noon Mr. Eugenides, the Smyrna merchant Unshaven, with a pocket full of currants C.i.f. London: documents at sight, Asked me in demotic French To luncheon at the Cannon Street Hotel Followed by a weekend at the Metropole.

      The one-eyed merchant of Madame Sosotris' tarot pack, Mr. Eugenides, then makes an offer to the speaker. The speaker accepts Eugenides' invitation to accompany him to a hotel that serves as a gathering spot for homosexual trysts.

    7. Sweet Thames, run softly, till I end my song.

      Sweet Thames, run softly, till I end my song.

      Prothalamion

      BY EDMUND SPENSER.

      T.S Eliot uses this line in his collage adding a modernist twist

      By making this reference Edmund Spencer must have had some significant impact in T.S. Eliot's life

      The segment begins with a barren riverside scenario where the speaker is fishing while being surrounded by rats and trash while "musing on the king my brother's wreck." In this part, the refrain from Spenser's Prothalamion ushers in the river-song:

    8. III. The Fire Sermon

      The title of this, The Waste Land's longest chapter, is taken from a discourse delivered by Buddha, in which he exhorts his listeners to forgo earthly lust and seek emancipation from material possessions. This piece does definitely take a turn away from the earthly, with a succession of degrading sexual encounters coming to an end with a river-song and a religious ritual.

    9. The Chair she sat in, like a burnished throne,

      There are several unrhymed lines that appear to be written in iambic pentameter. Still in this section, there are lines that become contrary to the rule as the lines begin to unravel, suggesting some irregularity.

    10. Goonight Bill. Goonight Lou. Goonight May. Goonight. Ta ta. Goonight. Goonight. Good night, ladies, good night, sweet ladies, good night, good night.

      Goonight Bill. Goonight Lou. Goonight May. Goonight.

      Ta ta. Goonight. Goonight.

      Good night ladies, good night, sweet ladies, good night good night

      T.S.Eliot makes an allusion to Ophelia, a made-up figure from "Hamlet." After her father was murdered by her lover, Hamlet, she became enraged and confused. Ophelia's father, Polonius, advised her not to fall in love with Hamlet, but she persisted. Even the night before Hamlet kills Polonius, he spends time with Ophelia while making lewd comments and telling her that "A woman's love is short."

    11. II. A Game of Chess

      Two conflicting scenes—one of high society and the other of the lower classes—are the emphasis of this section. In the first part of the , an affluent, immaculately dressed woman is shown surrounded by priceless furnishings. Her neurotic thoughts turn into frantic, pointless cries as she waits for a partner.

      This section's second segment is set at a London bar where two women are conversing about a third woman. As the bartender yells repeatedly, "HURRY UP PLEASE, IT'S TIME," One of the women recalls a chat they had with their friend Lil, whose husband had just received his military discharge.

    12. To where Saint Mary Woolnoth kept the hours With a dead sound on the final stroke of nine. There I saw one I knew, and stopped him, crying: 'Stetson! ‘You who were with me in the ships at Mylae! ‘That corpse you planted last year in your garden, ‘Has it begun to sprout? Will it bloom this year? ‘Or has the sudden frost disturbed its bed?

      The speaker queries Stetson, the spectral figure, regarding the fate of a corpse that was placed in his garden. The event is brought to a close with a well-known passage from the preface of Baudelaire's Fleurs du Mal, in which the poet accuses the reader of partaking in the poets sins.

    13. Unreal City,

      The final episode in the section. The speaker strolls through a vision of London where the dead are still cursed. The Speaker runs across someone whom he fought once in combat that purports to merge the World War I battles with the Punic Wars between Rome and Carthage.

    14. Madame Sosostris, famous clairvoyante, Had a bad cold, nevertheless Is known to be the wisest woman in Europe, With a wicked pack of cards.

      In the third episode of this portion, a fictional tarot reading is described, in which some of the cards Eliot uses are not actually from a tarot deck.

    15. ‘You gave me hyacinths first a year ago; ‘They called me the hyacinth girl.’ —Yet when we came back, late, from the Hyacinth garden, Your arms full, and your hair wet, I could not Speak, and my eyes failed, I was neither Living nor dead, and I knew nothing, Looking into the heart of light, the silence. Oed’ und leer das Meer.

      Childhood memories of a "hyacinth girl" and the speaker's subsequent nihilistic revelation after meeting her are interspersed with the prophetic tone that borders on being scary.

    16. I. The Burial of the Dead

      An Anglican burial service phrase serves as the inspiration for the title of the opening chapter of The Waste Land. It consists of four short stories that each appear to be told by a different speaker. The first is a brief autobiographical passage from a wealthy woman's youth in which she recalls going sledding and asserts that she is German, not Russian (this would be important if the woman is meant to be a member of the recently defeated Austrian imperial family.

    1. Once out of nature I shall never take My bodily form from any natural thing, But such a form as Grecian goldsmiths make Of hammered gold and gold enamelling To keep a drowsy Emperor awake; Or set upon a golden bough to sing To lords and ladies of Byzantium Of what is past, or passing, or to come.

      Very romantically, Yates does not want to return to a failing body; he wants to be immortalized by becoming the work of a goldsmith or master craftsman. Something so precious that will keep an Emperor awake or be used to sing to the lords and ladies of what is past, passing, or yet to come.

    2. O sages standing in God's holy fire As in the gold mosaic of a wall, Come from the holy fire, perne in a gyre, And be the singing-masters of my soul. Consume my heart away; sick with desire And fastened to a dying animal It knows not what it is; and gather me Into the artifice of eternity.

      A sage was regarded in classical philosophy as someone who has the knowledge to comprehend the depths of reality and existence. By being knowledgeable about a wide range of topics, reflecting on them thoughtfully, and imparting your wisdom to others, you can become a wise person. In line 11 "Come from the Holy fire, perne in a gyre," Yates is talking about the presence of God in a whirling spinning sensational consuming fire.

    3. Sailing to Byzantium

      was published in 1927. Yeats was 62. Yeats knows we all have one thing in common, and that is death. Yeats said himself that Byzantium, the city known as Constantinople at the time, was the center of European civilization and the source of its spiritual philosophy. Today, we know the city as Istanbul. Each stanza is 8 lines long, and they each have a central theme, yet they are interconnected.

    4. I

      Yates was an Irish national who was elected to be a senator for the free Irish state and was reappointed in 1925 for a second term.

    5. That is no country for old men. The young In one another's arms, birds in the trees, —Those dying generations—at their song, The salmon-falls, the mackerel-crowded seas, Fish, flesh, or fowl, commend all summer long Whatever is begotten, born, and dies. Caught in that sensual music all neglect Monuments of unageing intellect.

      Yeats is looking back on a country that he is leaving. He is talking about the new generation that does not care for the dying. His interest isn't in the mutable but in the immutability of God's holy fire.

    6. An aged man is but a paltry thing, A tattered coat upon a stick, unless Soul clap its hands and sing, and louder sing For every tatter in its mortal dress, Nor is there singing school but studying Monuments of its own magnificence; And therefore I have sailed the seas and come To the holy city of Byzantium.

      When a man ages, he becomes unsightly. Yates is reiterating that we will all get old, and as we do that, we move from singing to studying, which is inevitable. Therefore, he sails the seas to the holy city of Byzantium.

    7. That is no country for old men. The young In one another's arms, birds in the trees, —Those dying generations—at their song, The salmon-falls, the mackerel-crowded seas, Fish, flesh, or fowl, commend all summer long Whatever is begotten, born, and dies. Caught in that sensual music all neglect Monuments of unageing intellect.

      The rhyme scheme appears to be abababcc deddedeff ghghghii jkjkjkll

    8. By William Butler Yeats

      Cast a cold eye On life, on Death. Horseman, pass by!

  3. Dec 2022
    1. The steps that were taken began with an internet search to find English learning material tailored to the sixth grade level, after which the core mission became finding lesson plans on the subject, verb, and object constituencies used in the lesson. In preparing the lesson plan,

      and I want to annotate this part and keep it for writing

    2. The research and planning of the course material became integral to the teaching. In the first stages of planning, there was an awareness that, as a participant in the teaching role, research needed to be done to locate material and rehash it to fit in the lesson plan

      annotate what ever I want and to save it

  4. Nov 2022
    1. W. E. B. DU BOIS The Niagara Movement Address to the Country t [Although in existence for only five years, the Niagara Movement was well known for its uncompromising, confrontational civil rights agenda

      The niagara movement wasn't the first

    1. Schuster believes it will take a separation of two generations of writers to change the tone from what if formally known as fragmented sentences to the newer term coined minor sentence.

    2. In the end what should English teachers do with the Idea of fragmented sentences. Some of them are more clear and concise and done in less words with a greater impact. Fragmented sentences are known for a greater impact when forming a rhetorical ending. Schuster quotes the Hambrace College Handbook as asking students to proof read their work looking for fragmented sentences then making appropriate changes for the sentences that cannot be justified always with the thought does the fragment express the same thought better than a full sentence?

    3. Schuster adds a few more categories to the list of fragmented sentences by calling them out as having a contracted syntax style or more appropriately known as aphoristic sentences. He then list them into a category of their own as irregular sentences.

    4. Schuster answers his question again by asking " Should students Learn the rules before they break them?" This comes from the idea that you can only break or bend the rules after you know them. It may be very useful; however, it is believed that native speakers have knowledge of what a sentence is and is not. Secondly, professional writers often use fragments hopefully consulting a style guide. The Third and Fourth rule go hand in hand it is thought as people learn syntax that they Inevitably break the rules before they learn them and in this sense they become aware of the rule.

    5. Schuster gives examples that Authors often employ to create emphasis to individual items or list of thing. Uncommonly found in such matter is the list separated by semi colons or periods. However, one exception to the rule might be to add a more natural tone when questioning through interrogative type words or also in response to the question. Schuster writes that it is up to the author to use expressions in a more conversational type of way

    6. Schuster lays out some rules for writing fragments and their positions. He says that one way of writing an effective fragment is used to create a dramatic pause or emphasis, or by using some end mark or quite possible no end mark whatsoever. The example given is useful to understanding Schuster as he shares the passage "It has the look of something a twelve-year-old would do. And enjoy doing." Another landmark in writing a fragmented sentence might be to create an intensity or conciseness that is quite often viewer as a independent clause such as " I drew back on the syringe."

    7. Schuster goes on to write there are rules for writing sentence fragments similar to that of writing proper English. Again he ask the question "should grammar rules trump rules of rhetoric?" This is largely discussed because sentence fragments can often achieve a better conceptual reception to the readers understanding of the meaning, being the exception the rule.

    8. Schuster quoted several scholars like Red R. Noguchi who believes that by all appearances fragments reveal the understanding of syntax. Two other prominent authoritarians on the subject believe fragments should be considered minor sentences instead of being classified as fragments and that minor sentences should be distinguished from true fragments or "broken sentences." Other contemporary scholars place the fragment next to the elliptical sentence saying they are perfectly acceptable and the exception to the rule.

    9. Schuster in his search found that these fragments "express the same idea as the sentences do and in fewer words." Astonishingly, in Schuster search he discovered that the fragment was sometimes clearer in expressing its content. For the English speaker these essays and articles flowed more like casual English conversation. Schuster ask the rhetorical question based on the evidence "can one be in favor of economy of wording, emphasis , and naturalness of expression and be against the use of sentence fragments?"

    10. Schuster found an interest in the use of comma splices, single sentence paragraphs, and the occasional rambling. but what out weighed all the grammatical errors were the sentence fragments. Schuster gave the benefit of the doubt by using conservative figures not applying compound sentences consisted of a fragment with an added independent clause, Nor did he figure in imperatives that are often considered fragmented sentences; However, Schuster found fragments in a ratio of ten to one per article and goes on to say some authors are more prone to this use of syntax and some are less averse than their constituents. Schuster initial conclusion is that English teachers might reconsider the value of the sentence fragment.

    11. There is a war going on in the class rooms and it is the English teacher who's job it is to eradicating sentence fragments. In response to this notion Schuster examined fifty American essays. In doing this he became excited to observe the range in syntactic resources the writers used at their disposal.

    12. The notion that students should be taught to avoid sentence fragments is a challenge to the class room. Edgar Schuster took an in-depth look at several of the top American essays and found fragmented sentences in all of them. It was Schuster who suggested that students might learn to use fragments effectively.

  5. Oct 2022
    1. Kuleshov's early accounts demonstrate that the essence of the experiment resides neither in the order or quantity of shots, nor in the direction that the actor is looking (although it is sensitive to this). As Roberta Pearson and Philip Simpson note, the explanatory power of the Kuleshov effect lies in its facilitation of both Eisensteinian, abstract meaning and linear continuity editing.65 In addition, it is not limited to the audience's failure to perceive sameness in the actor's face. Rather, the essence of the early accounts is that the editor shapes what is seen or not seen by the spectator, which Martine Joly and Marc Nicolas refer to as the "hallucina-tory effect" of the Kuleshov effect.66 In Kuleshov's letter and prison versions, the actor is not asked to reduce his performance to an expressionless ground zero; the actor actually acts, and this performance is then transposed into another sequence within a distinct and rich situational context. However, for this to [End Page 74] work, the actor's facial expression must be "expressively indistinct," to borrow Riis's term. on a human face, both overwhelming and underwhelming feelings can produce immobilized, mask-like facial expressions,67 and the Kuleshov effect operates within this range of emotional ambiguity. The narrative situations employed by Kuleshov—prison, freedom, bankruptcy, and betrayal—are nuanced, complex phenomenological states, which are essential in order to justify the indistinct expressiveness of the actor.

      The experiment is neither in the number of shots nor direction but relies on abstract meaning and continuity editing producing an "hallucinations-tory effect" Kuleshov explained the actor is not asked to reduce his performance to an expressionless ground zero but the shots transposed into sequences and context produce a overwhelming and underwhelming "mask like facial expression" and this effect operates in the range of ambiguity.

    2. Semion Rayburt: lev Vladimorivich, what is the story of the discovery that is now called the Kuleshov effect? Lev Kuleshov: Well, that is the result of long sittings at the editing table … and … various experiments that I conducted, editing together that which is different … different combined with different. And so I realized that if you combine one shot with another [End Page 66] shot, or one shot with two other shots, then you get not only that which is … depicted … in each of those shots, but something new … that, which is not in those shots … that, which does not exist. Today, this is known to any young filmmaker, at the very least, to every good director. Today, all of cinema works in this way. What is this? Is this my invention? Well, you know, in philosophy, there is a concept known as necessity and chance. The fact that it is called the Kuleshov effect is chance. But it being an effect is a necessity. Because by that time, cinema culture had matured to the point that it required new means of expression. It could no longer remain a non-art … it had to at all costs become an art.40

      Kuleshov's humble admiration for what became known as the Kuleshov affect as he explains the technique how he relied the combination of shots arranged with one another produced an affect in which you get an affect of what was depicted but also something new. Kuleshov explained that after this time all of film began to work in this way. He goes on to say the very concept that this carried his name was just by chance howbeit all came about out of necessity, and by this time film was looking for even newer expressions.

    3. Aristarco's portrayal of Kuleshov is that of a skillful pedagogue and a "formal revolutionary" whose primary contribution was passing his theoretical knowledge to the more brilliant and politically conscious Pudovkin. Indeed, Aristarco finds fault with Kuleshov's focus on organizational problems at the expense of a more ideological commitment.31 Echoing Hans Richter's claim that Pudovkin's Film Technique and Film Acting for cinema was the equivalent of leonardo da Vinci's drawings,32 Aristarco credits to Pudovkin his "epic principle": the notion that editing is the "fragmentation of an idea" through the "disparate elements that arose from the connection between individual shots."33 leyda, who witnessed firsthand the breakthroughs of Soviet cinema, portrays Kuleshov not as a mere technical mentor but as the foundation from which theoretical and technical achievements in Soviet cinema emerged. According to leyda, Pudovkin's Shahmatnaia goriachka (Chess fever, 1925) "cannot be imagined split from Kuleshov's ingenious montage method" or distinguished from "Kuleshov's etudes and films."34

      not everyone agreed with Kuleshov's affect in film It was Aristarco who sided with Hans Rictor that Kuleshov's student Pudovkin techniques and film acting were the equivalent of Leonardo Da Vinci's drawings.

    4. Taking an (especially inexpressive) close-up of Mozzhukhin from an old film, he juxtaposed it with successive shots from other films, namely a plate of soup, a coffin and a child. He projected the sequences to unknowing spectators who, according to Pudovkin, were amazed at the artistry with which Mozzhukhin expressed hunger, sadness or paternal tenderness."28 [End Page 63]

      This is the stuff I want how Kuleshove juxtaposes successive shots from other films to project sequences to unknowing spectators who were amazed by the artistry

    1. she sang.   

      she sang

    2. Ramon Fernandez, tell me, if you know,    Why, when the singing ended and we turned    Toward the town, tell why the glassy lights,    The lights in the fishing boats at anchor there,    As the night descended, tilting in the air,    Mastered the night and portioned out the sea,    Fixing emblazoned zones and fiery poles,    Arranging, deepening, enchanting night.

      Stevens utilizing the T's to tout the turn Toward the town it's 4 T's in a row I think to put an emphasis on the word tilting.

    3.    It was her voice that made    The sky acutest at its vanishing.    She measured to the hour its solitude.    She was the single artificer of the world In which she sang. And when she sang, the sea,    Whatever self it had, became the self That was her song, for she was the maker. Then we,    As we beheld her striding there alone, Knew that there never was a world for her    Except the one she sang and, singing, made.

      Stevens utilizing the S's again for the heavier sibilance with Sky, She and Solitude and so on

    4. The sea was not a mask. No more was she.    The song and water were not medleyed sound    Even if what she sang was what she heard,    Since what she sang was uttered word by word. It may be that in all her phrases stirred    The grinding water and the gasping wind;    But it was she and not the sea we heard.

      Yes the sibilance in the S's pushing air toward the teeth forming the S's sounding form of the words sea, and she then song and sang as she sang word by word.

    5. constant cry, caused constantly a cry,  

      constant cry, caused constantly a cry. Stevens utilizing the C's to give a false perception of the form of sibilance by directing air from the tongue towards the sharp edge of the teeth forming the S sound.

    6. mimic motion    Made

      The M sounding reoccurrence a form of consonance or assonance utilizing the repetitious m giving the poem a rhyming kind of feel and a specific flow to lines 4 and 5

    7. water-walled

      A form of pararhyme as “a kind of inverted anti-assonance, which varies vowels between repeated consonants (e.g., slip-sloop). Sometimes Y and W are considered vowels because of their unique sound.

    1. One must have a mind of winter To regard the frost and the boughs Of the pine-trees crusted with snow; And have been cold a long time To behold the junipers shagged with ice, The spruces rough in the distant glitter Of the January sun; and not to think Of any misery in the sound of the wind, In the sound of a few leaves, Which is the sound of the land Full of the same wind That is blowing in the same bare place For the listener, who listens in the snow, And, nothing himself, beholds Nothing that is not there and the nothing that is.

      One needs to adopt a winter mindset. to observe the pine tree branches covered in snow and covered in frost;

      and have experienced prolonged cold Viewing the junipers covered in ice and the spruces harsh in the faraway glimmer

      To not be troubled by any suffering in the sound of the wind in January, When a few leaves rustle,

      Which is the sound of the same wind blowing in the same barren location across the same land?

      Because the listener, who hears in the snow but is himself nothing, sees both the nothing that is and the nothing that is not.

    1. Supple and turbulent, a ring of men Shall chant in orgy on a summer morn Their boisterous devotion to the sun, Not as a god, but as a god might be, Naked among them, like a savage source. Their chant shall be a chant of paradise, Out of their blood, returning to the sky; And in their chant shall enter, voice by voice, The windy lake wherein their lord delights, The trees, like serafin, and echoing hills, That choir among themselves long afterward. They shall know well the heavenly fellowship Of men that perish and of summer morn. And whence they came and whither they shall go The dew upon their feet shall manifest.

      Pagan worship of creation

    2. VIII

      The last two stanzas debate each other just as the language of the last stanza debates itself. Humankind might someday achieve an ecstatic union with nature, but for now, the randomness and beauty of the world elude us.

    3. They shall know well the heavenly fellowship

      he did not know exactly where he wanted the poem to go or how seriously he wanted the paganism to be taken

    4.   VII

      By rejecting Jove and Jesus alike, “Sunday Morning” gives us the first great no in Stevens’s poetry, but its affirming yes is more tentative than Monroe may have wanted to believe.

    5. Not as a god, but as a god might be,

      religious skepticism.

    6.   IV

      Stanza IV presents a catalog of imaginary afterlives—fictions of immortality—that have lost out to earthly reality

    7. Why should she give her bounty to the dead? What is divinity if it can come Only in silent shadows and in dreams?

      She (or the poem’s speaker, whose voice melds with hers) concludes that “Divinity must live within herself,” assimilating all the “pleasures” and “pains” of earthly experience.

    8. Sunday Morning

      Three questions what happens to us when we die? Can we believe seriously in an afterlife? If we can’t, what comfort can we take in the only life we get?

    1. It took dominion everywhere. The jar was gray and bare. It did not give of bird or bush, Like nothing else in Tennessee.

      With the words bare, bird, and bush Stevens uses a type of assonance called consonance for a rhyming scheme.

    2. The wilderness rose up to it, And sprawled around, no longer wild. The jar was round upon the ground And tall and of a port in air.

      Stevens uses the same reoccurring themes the jar, the wilderness, and Tennessee.

    3. I placed a jar in Tennessee, And round it was, upon a hill. It made the slovenly wilderness Surround that hill.

      Wallace Stevens uses the reoccurring vowel sounding words like round and surround forming a well known style called assonance creating an internal rhyming scheme.

    1. Although the relationships of wave driven erosion derived here can be used to inform coastal retreat models, further research is needed to quantify how the combined wave and rainfall processes and feedbacks may influence overall longer term cliff retreat rates.

      The study needs to go on to understand the full dynamic of erosion

    2. High temporal and spatial resolution of both cliffs and the fronting beach are needed to quantify the wave driven erosion processes, understand coastal cliff morphology, and improve cliff retreat modeling and prediction.

      this is the key to understanding cliff erosion

    3. found evidence that rainfall was a primary driver of cliff erosion because the low temporal frequency of the observations did not resolve separate time periods with elevated wave impacts and no rainfall. In addition, the volume of material eroded on the lower cliff, related to wave erosion, is smaller compared to the larger eroded volumes on the upper cliff, which are better correlated with rainfall

      areas on impact over all

    4. Good correlation exists between wave metrics and cliff erosion at elevations that exceed the potential wave runup and impact elevation by several meters, suggesting that waves indirectly influence upper cliff erosion by eroding lower levels. For example, as a lower cliff elevation waves erode the cliff base, cliff stability decreases leading to higher elevation failures

      the stability of the cliff is at its base if the waves erode through impact and chemical activity the top of the cliff is impacted by the weaker base.

    5. Of the three tested wave metrics, wave impact height squared explained more of the observed erosion. The result is consistent with several empirical and theoretical wave impact metrics

      This seems to t= be the primary metric. waves are measured proportional to wave height squared.

    6. Cliff face erosion rates, incident waves, wave-cliff impact metrics, and rainfall were all elevated during winters when fronting beaches were most eroded

      These are the metrics when studying erosion

    7. The effects of complex bathymetry and beach orientation were simulated with a spectral refraction wave model initialized with offshore buoy data

      Image result for bathymetry lidar Bathymetric Lidar is a technique to capture geospatial data of the coastline and (shallow) waters. It is a method potentially facilitating efficient and fast creation of hydrographic data.

    8. A cliff top railroad, critical to the regional economy, is currently situated within a few meters of the cliff edge. Historical episodic cliff failures have resulted in several train derailments (Kuhn and Shepard, 1984) and landslides during the study period triggered several temporary rail closures and emergency repairs.

      Building and reenforcing cliffs are part of coastal life as in this string it was said that cliff erosion threatened train derailment triggering emergency closures of the rail.

    9. The cliff face is weakened by chemical, physical, and biological weathering, including desiccation and root wedging, and subject to sheet erosion and rilling from rainfall, while the cliff base is also subject to marine erosion processes (e.g. wave action).

      evidently the cliff face is bombarded with wave erosion near the base and rain and weather erosion over the entire cliff face. the cliff face is deteriorating through chemical, physical, and is subject to rilling or sheet erosion.rilling is the process of water flow in a small stream; trickle. In this process of erosion there is also deposition taking place. in the summer months the beach is larger as the sand is washed up on the shore during the transition between winter and summer with the same beach eroded and smaller in apoperanece due to wave activity taking and then replacing the sediment seasonally.

    10. The studied 2.5 km reach of coastal cliffs in Del Mar, California and northern Torrey Pines State Beach

      This is the area they studied

    11. A truck-mounted lidar resolved the fronting beach and convoluted surface of the ~10–25 m high cliffs.

      This study was done through a three year observation of a cliff side in southern California using lidar. "Lidar, which stands for Light Detection and Ranging, is a remote sensing method that uses light in the form of a pulsed laser to measure ranges (variable distances) to the Earth." The cliff was observed over three years, the study watched how wave heights, wave-cliff impacts, and rainfall all impacted the erosion taking place.

    1. Future water quality and availability in the Delta are threatened by climate change's projected sea level rise and decreased winter snowpack. The future of the California Delta is Key to sustaining wildlife and farming. The decisions we make now will effect the future of California and its residents.

    2. Subsidence More than 60 islands in the Delta's peatlands were dewatered and their nutrient-rich peat soils stripped of vegetation starting Subsidence in the late 1800s to create room for cultivation. Peat soils deteriorate due to drainage, wind, and agricultural operations, releasing carbon dioxide (CO2) into the atmosphere. The islands have sunk 9 to 26 feet below sea level as a result of soil deterioration.

    3. The key to the Delta's existence is committed to researching a range of terrestrial species in the Bay-Delta, in addition to studying fish and aquatic wildlife. These include investigations into invasive and threatened species, as well as research on migratory birds and fish. These birds are threatened by a number of factors in the Bay-Delta, including habitat loss, the encroachment of non-native prey species, disturbance, industrial and agricultural pollution, and salt and sea-level rise brought on by climate change. Data from the network are being used to model the movements and behaviors of these fish, and when combined with USGS water-flow data, aid in the understanding of how flow conditions, water channel geometry, and turbidity are affecting salmon survival in the Bay-Delta. is also researching the elements that determine the movement and preferred habitats of the estuarine-dwelling Delta Smelt.

    4. When it comes to conservation USGS provides information for groups interested in fish conservation, specifically for the endangered Delta Smelt. They also offer information to individuals interested in monitoring suspended sediment since it affects the movement and final disposition of pollutants connected with sediment. For the creation and maintenance of marshes and mud flats, sediments carried by rivers into the Delta are equally crucial. Increased knowledge of sediment movement may also make it feasible to better regulate the distribution of sediments for dredging projects, coastline erosion prevention and protection, habitat restoration, and, ultimately, the preservation of terrestrial species.

    5. In the development of the restoration project USGS gathers data on water quality and quantity in real-time, round-the-clock. In order to balance the water demands of endangered species with those of California's cities and agriculture, water managers control both the quantity of water released from dams and the amount of pumping in the south Delta. With this effort scientist look for nutrients like phytoplankton, light penetration, and dissolved organic material, along with other factors.

    6. The Sacramento-San Joaquin Delta and San Francisco Bay combined make up the biggest estuary on the west coast of the Americas, totaling more than 1,600 square miles. Nearly 10 million people live in the "Bay-Delta." It drains a watershed that encompasses more than 40% of California and is more than 75,000 square miles.

    7. USGS provides science addressing water quantity and water quality as well as sediment transport, pollution, wildlife, wildlife habitat, and climate change

    Annotators

    1. Improving the management of wet-year supplies is a critical climate change adaptation strategy. This will require identifying cost-effective investment options and adapting operations and regulatory approaches to facilitate capturing more water in wet times.

      Rules should be simplified and made more lenient to help environmental water managers and water users adapt to rapidly changing hydrologic conditions.

    2. Modernize and simplify regulations to provide water for the environment. The current mix of state and federal regulations is unnecessarily rigid, not well coordinated, and not always logical. Two efforts now underway—the State Water Board’s comprehensive revision of its water quality control plan for the Delta, and endangered species consultations governing CVP and SWP operations (e.g., Biological Opinions, Incidental Take Permits)—provide an opportunity to coordinate and simplify regulations, and to increase flexibility to help both environmental water managers and water users respond to rapidly changing hydrologic conditions. One central change needed is to pivot from a system based on water year types—where regulatory requirements can change abruptly with subtle changes in conditions—to a system that operates on a continuum based on month-to-month hydrology.

      in preparing for more drought Ca has signed an amendment of the State Water Board's water quality control strategy in its entirety protecting the Delta, and endangered species and has enacted regulations to assist environmental water managers and water users to adjust to rapidly changing hydrologic circumstances, As the rules were made simpler and more flexible.

    3. Wet years are increasingly important for supply. Even in extended dry periods, wet years still occur and are vital for supply. During very wet years, a large volume of water is uncapturable, and insufficient capacity to store water south of the Delta becomes a limitation on export pumping. Expanding above- and below-ground storage capacity could increase Delta exports without changing current regulations. In such years, more water could also be captured and stored upstream. Managers also need to adapt how they manage water storage in the watershed in a warming climate, where the snowpack is storing less water than it has historically.

      The abundance of many native species and the health of the Delta ecosystems are still under decline despite these changes.

    4. Environmental regulations have also increased Delta outflow. During much of the last century, outflow was declining as water use grew. In the mid–1990s and 2000s, regulations on water flow and quality were expanded—and export pumping limits were set—to improve ecosystem health and protect endangered species. These changes have reduced exports in most years and increased outflow in dry years. In combination, increased outflow to meet salinity standards and protect the ecosystem has broken the long-term decline in the portion of runoff that becomes Delta outflow. Despite these changes, populations of many native species and the health of Delta ecosystems continue to decline.

      Farming and resident water use also impacts the delta water usage. Despite modifications, many native species' numbers and the wellbeing of the Delta ecosystems are still under decline.

    5. Maintaining salinity is requiring more outflow. During the early 1990s, conditions seem to have changed in the Delta, requiring greater system outflow to meet salinity standards. The reasons are not well-documented, and research is underway to improve the understanding of trends, including estimates of in-Delta use and outflow and how they relate to salinity control. When system water needs increase, this puts increased pressure on upstream reservoirs, which must release more water to meet this higher outflow demand. Looking ahead, studies indicate that changes such as sea level rise, the creation of new tidal habitat in the western Delta, and other factors may lead to the need for more system outflow.

      Current research is looking at keeping the salinity lower in the delta through a larger freshwater flow out of the Sacramento and San Joaquín river systems.

    6. Upstream use is rising—and Delta inflow falling. Upstream uses appear to be rising as a share of runoff in the Delta watershed in dry and critically dry years. In 2021, upstream uses accounted for a record 84 percent of runoff from the watershed. This shift is reducing inflows to the Delta, making it harder to meet other management objectives. While it is likely that increased evaporative demand is playing a role, it is not possible to determine the causes of increased upstream water use under the current monitoring system

      In the recent year upstream water use has impacted the lower delta area leaving a lesser water flow out to the SF Estuary

    7. The watershed is experiencing important changes in runoff and water use The climate of the Delta watershed is changing, with a significant rise in temperatures over the past few decades. California also has been in a relatively dry spell, following a spate of wet years in the late 1990s (first figure). Warming is increasing “evaporative demand”—or what can be thought of as the “thirst of the atmosphere”—making droughts more intense. Warming is also causing significant declines in snowpack, historically a key part of the watershed’s seasonal water storage. These changes are impacting water sources, uses, and outflow—and posing major challenges for water supply managers, fish and wildlife managers, and state and federal regulators. Five key trends have emerged:

      Seasonal water shed has impacted the CA Delta as weather becomes dryer the capacity of water storage has become reliant on the inland lakes which appears to be in decline along with the lesser snowpack.

    8. Regulations ensure additional outflow to protect the ecosystem and several species of endangered fish. During dry periods, this “ecosystem outflow” is small compared to the outflow needed to maintain salinity, but during wetter years, outflow for the environment increases. Finally, during most years, there are periods when runoff exceeds the capacity of infrastructure to divert and store it. This “uncaptured outflow” becomes quite large during wet years (see second figure).

      During droughts this outflow is held back to sustainable levels where as in wet years the outflow is enough to let it move out into the SF Bay

    9. Delta outflow. A significant portion of runoff in the watershed becomes outflow into San Francisco Bay: Some outflow, referred to here as “system outflow,” is needed to repel seawater from the Delta at all times. Without it, Delta water would be unusable by cities and farms. In dry periods, reservoir releases are needed to keep salinity low enough. System outflow also supports the Delta ecosystem, but this outflow would be needed to keep water usable, even if there were no ecosystem management objectives in the Delta

      Delta Out Flow is the biggest part of the Delta ecosystem keeping the salinity far from the fresh water fisheries and freshwater foul is what keeps the California Delta l=alive and well.

    10. Water sources. Rain and snow in the headwaters, along with rainfall in the valley and the Delta, generate runoff. The volume of runoff varies dramatically between wet and dry years, with frequent droughts and occasional floods (see first figure). Upstream reservoirs change the runoff available in any given year by storing water in wet years and releasing it in dry years

      sources of water. Runoff is produced by rain and snow in the headwaters, the valley, and the Delta. Between rainy and dry years, with regular droughts and sporadic floods, the amount of runoff changes drastically (see first figure). By holding water in rainy years and releasing it in dry years, upstream reservoirs alter the runoff that is available in any given year.

    11. The Delta is important to all Californians The Sacramento–San Joaquin Delta lies at the confluence of two of the state’s largest rivers and at the head of the San Francisco Estuary. Forty percent of California’s runoff comes from the Delta watershed. It supplies water to roughly 30 million residents and more than 6 million acres of farmland upstream of and within the Delta, as well as in other watersheds including the Bay Area, the southern San Joaquin Valley, the Central Coast, and Southern California. The ecological health of the Delta and the reliability of its water supplies are in decline. Given the challenges facing the watershed and the competing uses for scarce supplies, Delta water management issues are a source of conflict and many misunderstandings about water use. Weak water accounting systems make this worse.

      Conjoined at two of Californias largest rivers the San Francisco Estuary makes up 40% of Californias water run off. This water supplies the entire Central Valley from north of Sacramento all the way to Bakersfield and Los Angels via aqua duct. The Delta's ecological stability and the dependability of its water supply are deteriorating. Delta water management concerns are a source of conflict and numerous misconceptions about water usage because of the difficulties the watershed is facing and the conflicting demands on limited resources.

    12. The Sacramento–San Joaquin Delta and its watershed supply water to cities and farms across much of California; they also support commercial and recreational fisheries and provide vital habitat for many endangered native fishes and other aquatic species. During dry periods, most of the outflow from the Delta into San Francisco Bay is required to keep the Delta fresh enough for agricultural and urban uses, while during wet periods, most outflow is runoff that is too great to be captured and used. The climate in the watershed is changing: the past two decades have seen record warmth, making droughts more intense, with higher evaporation and declining snowpack. Water use upstream of the Delta appears to be rising, resulting in less inflow to the Delta. To address declining ecosystem health, regulations have also been changing, leading to higher outflows and lower water exports to other regions. These changes have not stopped the decline in native species. To better cope with more intense droughts, management of the Delta and its watershed would benefit from a suite of improvements in water use tracking and oversight, updates in water flow and quality regulations, and cost-effective investments to store more water in wet years.

      The Sacramento and San Joaquin Delta supplies a large part of Californias water supply for farming and Subsistence. The Delta provides California with water for farming as well as habitat for recreational fisheries. In either feast or famine the outflow of the delta is kept to sustain farm AG and residents while allowing the delta to flow out to the BAY. Over the past 20 years the Delta has been affected by declining snowpack because the area is warming. Due to the decline a call for more water regulations has been Intrachol to sustaining CA water storage.

    1. the structural and sedimentary geology at Moss Beach and James Fitzgerald Marine Reserve.

      the Mesozoic granitic rocks and overlying lag deposit of granite boulders in the Purisima Formation, that ranged up to three or four meters in diameter. In the same Cove, the Purisima strata are folded into a plunging syncline on the southwest side of the fault. to provide students with a realistic case history illustrating why an understanding of geology is important to their lives.

    2. Many of the homes with spectacular ocean vistas are perched precariously above cliffs adjacent to the San Andreas Fault and were constructed on poorly consolidated sediments. Landslides, slumping, and erosion have caused rapid retreat of the cliff line, which has caused numerous perimeter homes to be condemned and abandoned. Ray also provided insights into a little known report about damage assessments to new homes following the local 1957 M5.3 earthquake.

      Erosion of the coastline In the years following World War II, there was tremendous urban expansion in areas like the coastal region south of San Francisco; However, many of these homes do not exist any longer due to the hazard of cliff side erosion. The take away is that rocky coast lines give way to deposition under violent earthquake and weathering coastal condition.

    3. erosion rates in coastal bluffs

      rates of erosion on coastal bluffs, The cliffs of North Esplanade Beach typically erode at a pace of around 0.2 m per year, but during the devastating El Nio storms of 1997–1998 they retreated as much as 14 m.

    4. About 300,000 yd.³ of sediment was dredged from the main ship channel and disposed of in a target area immediately offshore of the erosion hotspot at Ocean Beach. California State University at Monterey Bay and the USGS are currently monitoring and modeling the fate of the dredge sediments to determine if this new practice should be permanently implemented. This very progressive, low-impact form of shore line protection and beach nourishment has been successfully conducted in Holland for many years. For more information about the USGS studies at the mouth of San Francisco Bay, see:

      What is being done to protect the current shoreline in SF Bay here the Army Core of engineers has dredged sediment from the shipping channel that flowed out to sea from the past geological cycle and brought in inshore to add protection this has worked for other countries protecting their coastlines.

    5. Monty Hampton and colleagues provided an introduction to the sediment dynamics of the San Francisco Bay-Ocean Beach system as well as the history of the 1.5-km long O’Shaughnessy seawall built between 1915 and 1929 to protect the Great Highway.

      NCGS Monty Hampton explore the dynamics,ics of the San Francisco Bay Ocean Beach system.

    6. The 1997-98 El Niño exposed the 12-foot diameter transport box that carries approximately one third of the city’s sewage out to the sea. A multibeam survey conducted by the USGS in the fall of 2004 indicated that the San Francisco Bar has been contracting since the 1950s. Retreat of the laterally extensive San Francisco Bar has resulted in erosion of shoals that once protected the Sloat region from direct wave attack. In June 2005, the U. S. Army Corps of Engineers implemented a new dredge disposal program to address this problem.

      The SF area is receding ever since the 1950s however the army core of engenders has solved some of these issuees

    7. Historically, the shore line South of Sloat Blvd. was situated several hundred feet landward of its current location. The shore line was extended seaward with fill during the late 1800s and early 1900s to promote urban development in the Western areas of the city.

      Evidence of human deposition is the shore line south of Sloat Bulv. has grown several hundred feet over the past 100 years. However erosion has threatened the new land resulting in a threat to the "Great Highway" The Great Highway is a route in San Francisco that runs along the Pacific coast and serves as the city's western boundary. It parallels Ocean Beach for about 3.5 miles and was constructed in 1929. It stretches to Point Lobos Avenue and the Cliff House at its northern end, while its southern terminus is at Skyline Boulevard next to Lake Merced.

    8. Ocean Beach is a high-energy system with classic offshore bars and troughs that are scoured by powerful rip currents.

      Ocean beach is a wonder of offshore bars and troughs that are under constant erosion and deposition producing rip currents

    9. Both of these geomorphic features are fed by sediment flushed out of San Francisco Bay and shaped by the strong tidal currents and storm waves originating in the Pacific Ocean. An understanding of these large-scale features is very important because Ocean Beach is strongly affected by tidal currents emanating through the Golden Gate as well as wave refraction around the San Francisco Bar
      1. Both features are produced from the sediment flowing out of the Bay possible originating from the San Joaquin delta area and flowing out to sea.
    10. Ocean Beach and the extensive dune fields that covered many areas of San Francisco formed during the post 20,000 year rise in sea level. West of the Golden Gate Bridge, the seafloor is covered by one of the largest sand wave fields in the world as well as the seaward San Francisco Bar, an ebb-tidal delta covering over 100 km²

      West of the GoldenGate Bridge is one of the most fascinating sand wave fields that was produced through past history of the San Francisco Bay Area moving sediment out ofd the Bay and into the open Ocean as well as a an ebb-tidal delta

      Ebb-tidal delta Featured snippet from the web Ebb-tidal deltas are shallow sandy environments at the seaward side of coastal inlet systems connecting the open sea with a back-barrier basin. The sand is transported across the ebb-tidal deltas towards the inlet by waves and transported offshore by tidal currents (Oertel, 1985).Feb 1, 2022

      The geomorphology of an ebb-tidal-delta linked to benthic ...https://www.sciencedirect.com › science › article › pii

    11. Coastal Cliffs-Landslides and Urban Developments Reported by John Karachewski Photos by Phil Garbutt

      Title, Author, and photographer

    1. Course materials will either be the four books listed below, material in “Files” on Canvas, or material on the Poetry Foundation web site (https://www.poetryfoundation.org/). I heartily recommend this site as a resource for learning about poets, poetic movements, etc.

      and here he want this

    2. In the intro lecture, accessible via “Modules” on your sidebar, I introduce you to modernism in the arts (c. 1900-1930). That's the only time all semester that I’ll do a lot of talking or deliver asynchronous instruction. After that, the class will center on large- and small-group discussions. Our readings and viewings fall into four main categories: theoretical backgrounds (in the intro lecture and during the first two weeks), poetry, fiction, and film. Together, these texts aim to give you a sense of how modernism’s legacies continue to unfold up to the present day.  

      this is what Wolfe wants from me

  6. Sep 2022
    1. The kind you can’t recover from You sent a half-written email to a potential employer. You forwarded an annoying customer email but forgot to remove them from the send list. Perhaps you sent an insulting email to a manager. Or maybe you went on a rampage about an editor you didn’t like and sent it to your publisher by accident.  Is it serious? There are some email mistakes you can’t recover from. At this point, it’s best to let the potential job go, apologize to your manager for unprofessional behavior, and let the chips fall where they may.  Everyone makes mistakes Everyone’s made an email mistake, from CEOs to administrative assistants. It’s part of working life. But mistakes come in a range of seriousness. Plus, what may strike fear in a sender often turns out to be a relatively innocuous mistake to the recipient.  How do you recover from email mistakes? Typically, by addressing them and clearing up any issues before they have a chance to arise. 

      7 the kind you can't recover from there are some email mistakes you can't recover from. Maybe you insulted a management in an email. Or perhaps you accidentally emailed a tirade you had about an editor you didn't like to your publisher. from time to time your going to have to let things go or face the consequences of apologizing to a boss or a manager. How can email typos be fixed? Usually, by taking care of them and resolving any problems before they have a chance to manifest this is where grammarlys softer comes in recall these seven mistakes before you fall into error.

    2. The reply-all  That awkward moment when you put someone on blast in a massive email chain when you were just trying to vent to your work bestie. There’s nothing worse than everyone on your team seeing your bad behavior on display.  Is it serious?  The seriousness of the email depends on what your reply was. If it was a snarky or rude message, this could lead to action from your manager. It might result in only a meeting, but it could reduce future opportunities or harm your reputation.  How to recover An immediate apology is the best way to recover from an accidental reply-all. Whether you share this apology with the whole email chain or just the person you called out is up to you. But you might also need to speak with your teammates, boss, or other people you work with regularly to maintain those relationships. 

      6 the reply to all. this should be taken seriously and Grammarly can help. grammarlys software has the ability to tone down your messages before you click send in the sense you can let cool head prevail. buy employing to software into your messaging to avoid this pitfall. It's up to you whether you send this apology to everyone in the email chain or just the person you specifically mentioned. However this can be avoided.

    3. The unfinished draft Before you could finish your email, you accidentally hit send. Oops! Maybe your draft email was half-written, unedited, or full of emotions you didn’t intend to share.  Is it serious?  It depends on which type of unfinished draft you sent. If it was incomplete or unedited, you might be fine! However, if it was an angry email you didn’t mean to send, brace yourself.  How to recover If you simply sent an incomplete email, don’t panic. Send the complete email with an explanation at the top—“Oops, here’s the rest of that email”—and you should be OK. If it was an emotion-filled email, though, you might not be able to recover as easily. You should apologize, and you might even want to take your apology offline and do it in person or over the phone. 

      5 the unfinished email before you accidentally click send your personal secretary Grammarly can conduct searches and add suggestion's as to what you want to say in the tone you want to say it. Possibly, your draft email had feelings you didn't intend to convey or was just partially written. How can this be avoided? Don't freak out if you only send an incomplete email. You should be fine if you send the entire email with an apology at the top like "Oops, here's the remainder of that email." However, if it was an emotional email, you might not be able to bounce back as quickly. One recommendation is avoid writing in discussion post or social media with out writing your memo, text message or business letter in a word doc with out Grammarly at your disposal.

    4. Have you ever hit send on an email and immediately regretted it? Were you frustrated that your chance to “undo” came and went before you could react? We’ve all been there.  According to Loom.com, the average office worker sends dozens of emails a day—excluding personal emails. When you’re relying on email that much, you’re bound to make a mistake once in a while.  If you’re anything like the many workers who overthink the emails and messages they send, read on to ease your mind. We’re exploring the most common email mistakes and how you can recover from them. 

      Yes I have clicked and sent out e mails text messages and totally regretted the action in an unbelief what I just sent out. At times poorly misspelled syntax and punctuation is laughed at as anyone who uses technology to communicate knows about digital grace and the world of online mistakes. While many in College and in the business world experience sending dozens of emails a day it isn't hard to force mistakes happening. In this era of high speed communication many people can spend to much time over thinking their text messages, memos, or emails. Grammarly helps people to recover from these mistakes and excellent in the art of writing.

    5. The typo-filled email Spelling, punctuation, and grammar mistakes are among the most common mistakes in emails. Mistakes like these can diminish trust in your professionalism and knowledge. The good news is that these are easily prevented. Is it serious? This issue isn’t severe. Sure, it’s not great for your reputation, but you probably didn’t offend anyone with errors like these.  How to recover You can’t take back the email. The best thing to do is hope your recipient didn’t notice and prevent mistakes like these in the future. You can avoid grammatical mistakes by giving your email a thorough read before sending it. You can even read it aloud to catch issues your eyes skip over. Another way to prevent mistakes is by using software such as Grammarly to automatically check all your emails before sending them. 

      3 the typo filled email, sometimes we joke about this as someone was drunk texting. This however funny it can be at times should be taken seriously. At the college and business level emails, text messages, and memos need to be on point was to not distract and lose the trust of the readers all while keeping the writer in good standing and unembarrassed. Although it hurts your reputation, you probably didn't offend anyone with these mistakes. These embarrassing errors make the writers wish they could turn back time The email can't be deleted. The best course of action is to hope your receiver didn't see the error and avoid similar ones in the future. By carefully reading your email before sending it, you can prevent grammatical errors. Even reading it out loud will help you detect mistakes your eyes miss. Using software like Grammarly to automatically proofread all of your emails before sending them is another approach to avoid errors.

    6. 2 The wrong person We all love autosuggest—that is, until it suggests the wrong person, and you don’t notice until after you’ve hit send. You think you’re sending an email to Joe Schmo, but it went to Joe DiMaggio instead! OK, you’re probably not emailing Joe DiMaggio, but you get the idea.  Is it serious?  Well, the seriousness of the issue depends on what you’ve sent. Sending your email to the wrong person is typically an innocuous mistake, as long as the email wasn’t confidential or didn’t involve personal or private information.  How to recover Simply send a follow-up email to let the recipient know the email wasn’t meant for them. If it was a harmless email or irrelevant to them, the recipient will probably be confused and either delete the email or respond to let you know they’re confused. If the email was confidential, you might want to speak to the relevant parties to let them know about your mistake.

      MISTAKE #2. You have sent an text or email to the wrong person. This is totally your error how embarrassing you can blame auto correct but isn't that just passing the buck? In this sense it depends on what you have sent and to whom you sent it to. As long as the email was not secret or contained no sensitive information, sending it to the incorrect recipient is often an innocent error. How does one recover from such a mistake You might want to communicate with the appropriate parties to let them know about your error if the email was confidential. Grammarly can prevent this from happening just by double checking the recipients name.

    7. 7 Common email mistakes 1 The misspelled name Is it Rachel or Rachael? Jonathan, Jon, or John? We all have spelling biases based on the people we grew up around. Misspelling a name will happen from time to time! This is a prevalent mistake with last names.  Is it serious? Misspelling a name might offend some people, but it’s one of the less intense mistakes you could make.  How to recover Send a quick email acknowledging your mistake and spelling their name correctly. Let them know you respect them and want to ensure you get it right. Try using this guide to start your email off on the right foot. 

      Mistake #1 How about the most common mistakes like Misspelling someones name? What do you do in the case you feel conflicted over something so small but so important do we just hang there in the balance or maybe consult a style guide or do we compromise by phoning up the person and embarrassingly ask, How do you spell your name? Is it Rachel or Rachael? Jonathan, Jon, or John? Every now and again, names will be spelled incorrectly! This common error occurs especially while using last names. However embarrassing this could be misspelling someone's name could annoy some, it's one of the less serious errors you could make.

    8. 7 Common Email Mistakes (and How to Recover)

      Every writer makes mistakes how about a program that supports writers and can help you excel as a writer no matter what level your at.

    1. A Grammarly spokeswoman said that its team is constantly working to improve the user experience. “We humbly recognize that the product is far from perfect and that the linguistic challenges are plentiful.”

      One Grammarly spokesperson suggested they are constantly working to improve the users experience. and that the challenges are huge.

    2. Audio producer and podcast host Ronald Young Jr., 38, echoes that sentiment: “Being a good writer takes practice. Autocorrecting software keeps you from making common mistakes [but] you still have to know how to communicate effectively outside of the basics of grammar.

      Ronald Young Jr. is quoted as saying: “Being a good writer takes practice. Autocorrecting software keeps you from making common mistakes [but] you still have to know how to communicate effectively outside of the basics of grammar.”

    3. Though the company promises to help people become better writers, Ms. Burke questions that claim, especially if users don’t already have a firm grasp of the laws of language. “These folks trust the program to be right, and…the program isn’t always right,” she said. “You’re not going to learn from Grammarly, but your writing can become more polished if you use it.”

      from one critic of the software it was said that people often over rely on the software and although it is imperfect the software will make mistakes and cannot read minds the software will help polish your writing and bring you to the next level.

    4. Zoe Burke first encountered Grammarly as an English major in college through targeted Google ads. That it not only helped fix typos and missing punctuation, but also improved style and tone made it stand out from other built-in proofreading tools. But as she continued her studies, eventually earning her master’s degree in English from the University of Dayton and joining its faculty as an instructor, she noticed the software missing errors and overcorrecting. When she ran her Master’s Thesis, about a composition course she was teaching, through the program, she said, “Grammarly kept wanting to change ‘composing’ to ‘composting.’”

      English majors have found that the software does exhibit errors in its correction and suggestions. Most people did see the usefulness of the tool while others are so demanding as to want to shed light on the few and far between mistakes the software makes with the complaint that at times the software makes overcorrections like in one occasion when “Grammarly kept wanting to change ‘composing’ to ‘composting.’”

    5. No, Grammarly doesn’t live up to its promises to catch errors and improve your writing

      The Cons

    6. Even professional writers and editors, particularly journalists, have adopted the tool. As their industry has gone digital, people like Gabrielle Healy, 26, a digital editor, are being asked to write and edit faster than ever before. Without the time to proofread herself, Ms. Healy started to notice that typos were slipping through the cracks. After she downloaded Grammarly, she was able to get them under control. “I’m constantly catching errors with it…. I [needed] the hand,” she said.

      In the world of high speed tech even journalist have found a worm place inter heart for the online software with proof reading over time online content Editors like Gabrielle Healy a digital editor has noticed typos slip through the cracks before the use of Grammarly.

    7. Having that second line of defense against typos has made Grammarly invaluable for some professionals. “I trust it more than I trust my…own checking,” said Ms. Pickett, who describes her work pace as “harried and chaotic.” She maintains that good grammar is paramount if one wants to be taken seriously. “While a wrinkled shirt or some misspellings may not matter to other generations, those in leadership still care, as do many people at the heads of their industry,” executives with whom she needs to work and negotiate. “Proper grammar just starts you off on the right foot.”

      The need for clear and concise grammar within industry is a critical objective of any CEO or small business owner who takes seriously its customers as well as its own public image. getting your spelling and punctuation correct is the over arching design for success in the world of business school and personal communications.

    8. The strategy might have brought the company downloads, but it hasn’t always made it well-liked. On Urban Dictionary, a website that can serve as a helpful glossary of internet slang and opinion, Grammarly is defined as “the reason ad blockers exist.” The service is also regularly maligned on social media sites for misguided or annoying edits. So, for all the companies’ advertising bluster, is the service actually making us clearer and more concise writers? Here, we present both sides.

      Grammarlys success has brought critics to explore rhetoric as the downloads increase the service is a regular target for the companies short comings.

    9. Since the company was founded in 2009, its software has ballooned in popularity. In 2020, the company boasted 30 million active users. It’s likely that many of these people found out about the service through the company’s digital advertising—according to a report from Winmo, a cloud-based sales prospecting tool, Grammarly spent over $100 million in the first quarter of 2019 alone, and was the highest spending YouTube advertiser in the period by far.

      Grammarly finding the users community through digital advertising the multimedia giant has excelled in the use of its product since 2009 and has spent over 100 million dollars on its own advertising.

    10. The free version of the software functions like a more sophisticated version of the spell-check tool in Google Docs or Microsoft Word, except it works anywhere you type. Writing an email? Grammarly will notice that you’ve misspelled “synergy.” Filling out a job application? Grammarly will notice that you’ve used “effect” when you meant “affect.” Firing off a spicy Tweet? Grammarly might tell you that your tone is a bit accusatory. (Unfortunately, it cannot prevent you from sending it off anyway.) If you’re willing to spend $30 a month (or $144 for a year) for Grammarly Premium, you’ll unlock more kinds of suggested edits, including ones that tackle your formatting and repetitive language.

      Functioning like a personal secretary Grammarly software appears to be more sophisticated than that of spell-check or google docs. Grammarly works anywhere you are online or on your phone firing off angry tweets or just sending a simple e-mail Grammarly is capable of noticing misspellings of providing the help you need filling out job applications opening more avenue's for taking part in this 21st century.

    11. IN JOANNAH PICKETT’S line of work, communication and first impressions are vital. And as that work has increasingly moved online, the associate vice president of the department of Alumni Relations & Development at Trinity University in San Antonio and her team are often making those first impressions via emails. When Ms. Pickett, 47, noticed her colleagues sending messages with sloppy text—including misspelled words and incorrectly used prepositions—she asked them to download the free version of Grammarly, a free-to-download typing and proofreading assistant.

      As communications increasingly move online first impressions become the number one issue of the day. with people getting in a flood of emails and text messages how they perceive the incoming content is key. if there are a string of misspellings or misplaced punctuation's people are most likely gonna leave your add or email behind. believing this can't be.

    12. For the recurring series, That’s Debatable, we take on a contentious issue of the day and present two spirited arguments—one in favor and the other emphatically opposed.

      By Author Christopher Castano, He proceeds to lead the debate over the contentious issue of those in favor and those emphatically opoposed to the software giant Grammarly.

    1. somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond any experience,your eyes have their silence: in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me,  or which i cannot touch because they are too near

      Iambic hexameter: a line of poetry with six iambs. for the first quatrain

    1. But Cummings’ supporters acclaimed his achievement. In a 1959 essay reprinted in his collection Babel to Byzantium, James Dickey proclaimed: “I think that Cummings is a daringly original poet, with more vitality and more sheer, uncompromising talent than any other living American writer.” Although admitting that Cummings’ work was not faultless, Dickey stated that he felt “ashamed and even a little guilty in picking out flaws” in the poems, a process he likened to calling attention to “the aesthetic defects in a rose. It is better to say what must finally be said about Cummings: that he has helped to give life to the language.” In similar terms, Rosenthal explained that “Cummings’s great forte is the manipulation of traditional forms and attitudes in an original way. In his best work he has the swift sureness of ear and idiom of a Catullus, and the same way of bringing together a racy colloquialism and the richer tones of high poetic style.” Maurer believed that Cummings’ best work exhibited “a new and delightful sense of linguistic invention, precise and vigorous.” Penberthy concluded that “Cummings’s achievement deserves acclaim. He established the poem as a visual object… he revealed, by his x-ray probings, the faceted possibilities of the single word; and like such prose writers as Vladimir Nabokov and Tom Stoppard, he promoted sheer playfulness with language. Despite a growing abundance of second-rate imitations, his poems continue to amuse, delight, and provoke.”

      Sounds like Cummings left a lasting impression so fantastical it left his readers shoes behind as they lifted off for the cosmos

    2. Critics of Cummings’ work were divided into two camps as to the importance of his career. His detractors called his failure to develop as a writer a major weakness; Cummings’ work changed little from the 1920s to the 1950s. Others saw him as merely clever but with little lasting value beyond a few technical innovations. Still others questioned the ideas in his poetry, or seeming lack of them. George Stade in the New York Times Book Review claimed that “intellectually speaking, Cummings was a case of arrested development. He was a brilliant 20-year-old, but he remained merely precocious to the end of his life. That may be one source of his appeal.” James G. Southworth, writing in Some Modern American Poets, argued that Cummings “is too much out of the stream of life for his work to have significance.” Southworth went on to say that “the reader must not mistake Mr. Cummings for an intellectual poet.”

      very heavy criticism

    3. “I am someone who proudly and humbly affirms that love is the mystery-of-mysteries, and that nothing measurable matters ‘a very good God damn’; that ‘an artist, a man, a failure’ is no mere whenfully accreting mechanism, but a givingly eternal complexity—neither some soulless and heartless ultrapredatory infra-animal nor any understandingly knowing and believing and thinking automaton, but a naturally and miraculously whole human being—a feelingly illimitable individual; whose only happiness is to transcend himself, whose every agony is to grow.”

      the words of Cummings

    4. “Now he knows there is but one freedom..., the freedom of the will, responsive and responsible, and that from it all other freedoms take their course.” Kidder called Eimi “a report of the grim inhumanities of the Soviet system, of repression, apathy, priggishness, kitsch, and enervating suspicion.” For some time after publication of Eimi, Kidder reported, Cummings had a difficult time getting his poetry published. The overwhelmingly left-wing publishers of the time refused to accept his work. Cummings had to resort to self-publishing several volumes of his work during the later 1930s.

      Looking for freedom Cummings moved to the Soviet Union. He learned the disheartening way that Communism was operating under a dictatorship where there was no civil liberty. It is as if Cummings speaks from the grave teaching his readers to denounce the mistakes of communism.

    5. Cummings’ early love poems were frankly erotic and were meant to shock the Puritanical sensibilities of the 1920s. Penberthy noted that the poet’s first wife, Elaine, inspired “scores of Cummings’s best erotic poems.” But, as Wegner wrote, “In time he came to see love and the dignity of the human being as inseparable.” Maurer also commented on this change in Cummings’ outlook; there was, Maurer wrote, a “fundamental change of attitude which manifested itself in his growing reverence and dedication to lasting love.”

      Cummings matured as a poet moving from the sexual provocative to something more pure.

    6. Robert E. Wegner in The Poetry and Prose of E. E. Cummings, “in Cummings’ experience as a child; he grew up in an aura of love.... Love is the propelling force behind a great body of his poetry.” Friedman noted that Cummings was “in the habit of associating love, as a subject, with the landscape, the seasons, the times of day, and with time and death—as poets have always done in the past.”

      So interesting how Cummings could associate love as a subject or something to do with the landscape obviously only a mind like Cummings could artfully associate the powerful emotion with the physical world.

    7. “Love always was ... Cummings’ chief subject of interest,”

      In the heart of the great poet was love

    8. This satirical aspect to Cummings’ work drew both praise and criticism. His attacks on the mass mind, conventional patterns of thought, and society’s restrictions on free expression, were born of his strong commitment to the individual. In the “nonlectures” he delivered at Harvard University Cummings explained his position: “So far as I am concerned, poetry and every other art was, is, and forever will be strictly and distinctly a question of individuality.” As Penberthy noted, Cummings’ consistent attitude in all of his work was “condemning mankind while idealizing the individual.” “Cummings’ lifelong belief,” Bernard Dekle stated in Profiles of Modern American Authors, “was a simple faith in the miracle of man’s individuality. Much of his literary effort was directed against what he considered the principal enemies of this individuality—mass thought, group conformity, and commercialism.” For this reason, Cummings satirized what he called “mostpeople,” that is, the herd mentality found in modern society. “At heart,” Logan explained, “the quarrels of Cummings are a resistance to the small minds of every kind, political, scientific, philosophical, and literary, who insist on limiting the real and the true to what they think they know or can respond to. As a preventive to this kind of limitation, Cummings is directly opposed to letting us rest in what we believe we know; and this is the key to the rhetorical function of his famous language.”

      Cummings targets conformity with satire. For Cummings it is the art of making something or someone appear silly in order to humiliate, denigrate, or ridicule in a rhetorical fashion.

    9. His exalted vision of life and love is served well by his linguistic agility. He was an unabashed lyricist, a modern cavalier love poet. But alongside his lyrical celebrations of nature, love, and the imagination are his satirical denouncements of tawdry, defiling, flat-footed, urban and political life—open terrain for invective and verbal inventiveness.”

      Cummings celebrated life through an unabashed linguistic agility that explored love, nature, and the imagination.

    10. Norman Friedman explained in his E. E. Cummings: The Growth of a Writer that Cummings’ innovations “are best understood as various ways of stripping the film of familiarity from language in order to strip the film of familiarity from the world. Transform the word, he seems to have felt, and you are on the way to transforming the world.”

      With an avant garde Cummings concepts were novel, unconventional, or experimental, especially in the art of poetry, as the soul individual who proposed them.

    11. S. I. Hayakawa also remarked on this quality in Cummings’ poetry. “No modern poet to my knowledge,” Hayakawa wrote in Poetry, “has such a clear, childlike perception as E. E. Cummings—a way of coming smack against things with unaffected delight and wonder. This candor ... results in breath-takingly clean vision.”

      child like perception clear and concise

    12. Bethany K. Dumas wrote in her E. E. Cummings: A Remembrance of Miracles that “more important than the specific devices used by Cummings is the use to which he puts the devices. That is a complex matter; irregular spacing ... allows both amplification and retardation. Further, spacing of key words allows puns which would otherwise be impossible. Some devices, such as the use of lowercase letters at the beginnings of lines ... allow a kind of distortion that often re-enforces that of the syntax.... All these devices have the effect of jarring the reader, of forcing him to examine experience with fresh eyes.

      the devices were uniquely used. by Cummings

    13. Richard P. Blackmur wrote in The Double Agent: Essays in Craft and Elucidation, “has a fine talent for using familiar, even almost dead words, in such a context as to make them suddenly impervious to every ordinary sense; they become unable to speak, but with a great air of being bursting with something very important and precise to say.”

      an illuminating style bursting at the seems

    14. M. L. Rosenthal wrote in The Modern Poets: A Critical Introduction: “The chief effect of Cummings’ jugglery with syntax, grammar, and diction was to blow open otherwise trite and bathetic motifs through a dynamic rediscovery of the energies sealed up in conventional usage.... He succeeded masterfully in splitting the atom of the cute commonplace.”

      Split the Atom

    15. In a review of XLI Poems for Nation, Mark Van Doren defined Cummings as a poet with “a richly sensuous mind; his verse is distinguished by fluidity and weight; he is equipped to range lustily and long among the major passions.” At the end of 1925 Dial magazine chose Cummings for their annual award of $2,000, a sum equaling a full year’s income for the writer. The following year a new collection, Is 5, was published, for which Cummings wrote an introduction meant to explain his approach to poetry. In the introduction he argued forcefully for poetry as a “process” rather than a “product.”

      Cummings is the poets poet how poetic.

    16. The early 1920s were an extremely productive time for Cummings. In 1922 he published his first book, The Enormous Room, a fictionalized account of his French captivity.

      the 1920 were productive years for Cummings

    17. Cummings decided to become a poet when he was still a child. Between the ages of eight and twenty-two, he wrote a poem a day, exploring many traditional poetic forms. By the time he was in Harvard in 1916, modern poetry had caught his interest. He began to write avant-garde poems in which conventional punctuation and syntax were ignored in favor of a dynamic use of language. Cummings also experimented with poems as visual objects on the page.

      Cummings not only wrote as a child he experimented with poetry as a visual object

    18. Stanley Edgar Hyman wrote in Standards: A Chronicle of Books for Our Time: “Cummings has written at least a dozen poems that seem to me matchless.

      Matchless beyond the greatest poets that came before him.

    19. As one of the most innovative poets of his time, Cummings experimented with poetic form and language to create a distinct personal style. A typical Cummings poem is spare and precise, employing a few key words eccentrically placed on the page. Some of these words were invented by Cummings, often by combining two common words into a new synthesis. He also revised grammatical and linguistic rules to suit his own purposes, using such words as “if,” “am,” and “because” as nouns, for example, or assigning his own private meanings to words.

      e e Cummings likes to experiment and he doesn't let syntax dictate his style.

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    1. There seems to want to be some comparison that I can't put my hand on except for the clues that literature seems to be the subject in-that the author approaches with a humble attitude.