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  1. Nov 2017
    1. “Strategically,” said Jones, “we are going to make sure we have the appropriate offer for any time of the day.”

      I really don't like this ending. I wish Sam would have ended talking about the important part of the essay: the second conversation about Brexit.

    2. ogether, sandwiches, wraps and baguettes accounted for more than a third of all the food we bought at lunchtime in 2016. Add burgers and the proportion rises to 40%. The only other items that came close were crisps, chips and chocolate bars. Salads made up 3.5% of our lunches. Sushi didn’t make the top 10.

      How many times has the author reestablished that sandwiches are extremely popular?

    3. You take the workforce away and the Costas of this world can’t function,” he said. “If they start closing down and retracting, that is going to have a knock-on effect.” The sandwich industry, Winship pointed out, doesn’t merely sustain hundreds of thousands of jobs, it also produces billions of pounds of added productivity throughout the economy. “It allows people to carry on working over lunch,” he said.

      here the so what is! Yay!

    4. A person known as the “stacker” then put two sandwiches on top of each other and fed them into the Grote AC60 ultrasonic cutting machine. Chahar and I drew close.

      Every time the author refers to them self, their credibility goes down. I feel almost angry that I'm being forced to read the essay at this point; it is so boring.

    5. “They want comfort. They want solace. I’ve had a shit morning. I’ve fallen out with my boss. I’ve had a fucking horrible journey in. A poxy lettuce-and-whatever concoction in a plastic bowl is not going to do it for me. I want a cup of tea, a chocolate biscuit and I actually want to cry. I am going out for a fucking sandwich.”

      And the tone shift is so unexpected it hurtsI

    6. Boltman had nine branches of French Franks by the early 1990s, but he could not keep up with Pret a Manger. Pret will open its 500th branch next year, and is currently valued at £1.4bn. (Metcalfe sold most of his stake in 2008.) But Boltman still knows a thing or two. A small man with a husky voice and a moustache that he smooths as he talks, he won four consecutive sandwich designer of the year awards – at the BSA’s fiercely contested “Sammies” – between 2009 and 2012. How Greggs conquered Britain: ‘Nobody can quite believe how well it has done’ Read more “My idea of relaxation is to write down five new sandwiches,” he said when we met recently at his latest baby, a vaguely hipsterish place called Trade, on the Essex Road in north London. The quest of the sandwich inventor is a mostly pitiless one. The industry has its own 80:20 rule: 80% of sales come from 20% of the flavours. These are often referred to as “the core” – the egg mayonnaise, the BLT, the chicken salad – and they are as familiar as our own blood. Pret’s best-selling sandwiches (the top three are all baguettes: chicken caesar and bacon, tuna and cucumber, cheddar and pickle) have not changed for seven years. M&S’s prawn mayo has been its No 1 for 36.

      I feel like I'm wasting my time with these paragraphs. What is the point of just letting me know this? Not really showing what the title promised: an explanation of how the sandwich overtook Britain. I already believe it did, just tell me how.

    7. more sociable way of eating – was present at its inception.

      Maybe the author will jump down this rabbit hole? That would be interesting - how social tendencies have changed with the foods we eat. What are the causes of this change if it exists?

    8. more sociable way of eating – was present at its inception.

      Maybe the author will jump down this rabbit hole? That would be interesting - how social tendencies have changed with the foods we eat. What are the causes of this change if it exists?

    9. In recent years, the biggest development in the sandwich business has been its successful targeting of breakfast.

      I don't really get the purpose of the essay yet, I don't really care about this either. The essay is getting less engaging with time.

    10. In recent years, the biggest development in the sandwich business has been its successful targeting of breakfast.

      I don't really get the purpose of the essay yet, I don't really care about this either. The essay is getting less engaging with time.

    11. British sandwich-makers are sought-after across Europe, and invited to places like Russia and the Middle East to advise on everything from packaging and production lines to “mouth feel” and cress. “In Saudi Arabia they absolutely love the story of the Earl, the scoundrel,” one factory owner told me. And during weeks of reporting for this article, I didn’t come across one person who doubted that the long boom would continue for years to come. “It’s big. We all do it. And we do it a lot, is our summary of the market,” said Martin Johnson, the chief executive of Adelie Foods, a major supplier of coffee shops and universities.

      This shows the strong structure of the essay. The quote made me feel as if this part of the essay would be weak, but then confirms the original argument while dispelling my disbelief.

    12. We are light years ahead of the rest of the world,” Jim Winship, the head of the BSA, told me.

      This quote conflicts with the overall tone of the essay. It seems satirical.

    13. ccording to the British Sandwich Association, the number grows at a steady 2% – or 80 million sandwiches – each year. The sandwich remains the engine of the UK’s £20bn food-to-go industry,

      The number that I'm still wondering is how much do these sandwiches cost?

    14. Henry Mayhew calculated that 436,800 sandwiches, all of them ham, were sold on the streets of London each year. That might sound a lot, but Sainsbury’s, which currently accounts for around 4% of the UK “food to go” market, now sells that number every 36 hours.

      These numbers make it very easy to agree with the argument present. Good use of evidence and sources.

    15. “It is an absolute passion,” one former M&S supplier told me. “For everybody. It has to be.”

      This quote is supposed to aid credibility, but it is actually harmed. First of all, this statement doesn't really make sense in business; all business is driven by capitalism rather than a passion for the art. Secondly, there are no credentials of this person, all I know about them is that they worked with or for Marks & Spencer.

    16. He saw Pret and Starbucks and Costa and Subway coming a mile off

      This new argument is rather insignificant and undeveloped. Moreover, it seems wrong and I think it is probably just an opinion of the author. Sam should prepare for the naysayers with some evidence or proof or just change the wording.

    17. (Boots established the country’s first national distribution system – selling the same sandwiches in its all branches – in 1985, and pioneered the meal deal.)

      I don't think parentheses should be used here; instead, Sam should've combined the two sentences with a semi colon, in my opinion.

    18. At Amstrad the staff start early and finish late. Nobody takes lunches – they may get a sandwich slung on their desk,” Alan Sugar told an audience at City University in 1987. “There’s no small-talk. It’s all action.”

      Seems like Japan.

    19. If anything, it seemed outlandish. Who would pay for something they could just as easily make at home?

      I don't really agree. Even though this may be a new development, it seems rather logical - not outlandish.

    20. Looking upon the nation’s £8bn-a-year sandwich industrial complex in 2017, it seems inconceivable that this had not been tried before, but it hadn’t.

      This syntax of insert fact here followed by some way of saying "I bet you didn't believe that," ending in some sort of "but it's true" hurts the ethos of the author because I'd prefer some varied sentence structure.

  2. Oct 2017
    1. : a proud national narrative of a country of immigrants who come here and lift themselves up with hard work.

      What is the American dream today? What is the American dream for Americans?

    2. Forty-five blueberry companies. Thousands of workers to oversee and protect.

      Second conversation: the evolution of the employee employer relationship. Research into personal accounts from previous workers when companies were smaller. Which is better?

    3. Noel, still drunk from the night before.

      Why is he drunk? Potential second conversation about the use of alcohol to get through tough times / as a crutch in life. Research about alcohol use / specifically migrant alcohol use when they don't have much money.

    4. getting into the United States was more difficult than ever

      exploitation of illegal peoples coming to the US could look into people who have been sex trafficked or just abused / overcharged

    5. "E-Verify is a joke," they said, "Everyone pretends."

      If this is the case, then why hasn't the government done anything about it? Laskas could incorporate research about the history of E-verify and how it has progressed to be so apparently meaningless.

    6. ocals didn't treat you like shit

      second conversation about the public perception of immigrants from national perspective. This was talked about earlier but I didn't think about it as a second conversation. Laskas could include some surveys about how people perceive immigrants from different parts of the country and analyze why there are such differences.

    7. holding migrant workers in debt and chaining them inside box trucks.

      Second conversation regarding what law enforcement is doing to stop this. Research into case law about what has happened with workers and penalties the farmers face would be useful to get a point.

    8. family doctors, pharmacies, and twenty-four-hour urgent-care centers. But a lot of those amenities are not immediately within reach if you're a migrant worker living out of your car,

      Second conversation about health care. Could use research about the number of migrant workers that have coverage under the Affordable Care Act and how many are at risk of losing coverage or how many would benefit from the new proposed health care bill.

    9. Do a taste test someday. The cultivated ones are watery and mealy compared to the tiny wild ones—intense bursts of candy-like fruit. Once you notice the difference, you will never buy the fat ones again.

      The second conversation here has to do with how consumers are taking it into their own hands to conduct uncontrolled tests with these blueberries and may be assuming that a certain blueberry came from one place based on its looks. This kind of discrimination, although against blueberries, damages sales of New Jersey grown blueberries and leads to a stereotype of New Jersey natives as "watery and mealy."

    10. a fungus clinging to their roots that allows the plant to extract nutrients from the otherwise lousy soil

      Second conversation about symbiosis and what it means to be a plant in today's human-domineered planet.