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  1. Sep 2020
    1. When you Read Like a Writer (RLW) you work to identify some of the choices the author made so that you can better understand how such choices might arise in your own writing. The idea is to carefully examine the things you read, looking at the writerly techniques in the text in order to decide if you might want to adopt similar (or the same) techniques in your writing.

      When you are reading like a writer. You also notice things and fix things as you are reading though it. So I think that this would be helpful to someone like who is new or something because this would have been really handy and helpful to me in the beginning as I first started it.

  2. Aug 2020
    1. Over the semester, everyone will write one summary that documents our class conversation for a particular week. These conversation summaries should bring together both synchronous and asynchronous work. They may include reference to assigned readings, in-class conversations, discussion board posts, group updates, hypothesis annotations, or other elements of the work we do that week. You must acknowledge, in your writing, the sources that you use, whether those sources are an assigned reading, or the contributions of one of your peers. You should include at least one direct quote, and one paraphrase.

      I am still really confused about what we're doing for the conversation summaries?

    1. I spent five years in Michigan’s Upper Peninsula—a place I didn’t even know existed until I moved there to attend graduate school. I lived in a town of four thousand people. The next town over, over the portage bridge, had seven thousand people. In my town, the street signs were in both English and Finnish because the town had the highest concentration of Finns outside of Finland. We were so far north that my blackness was more curiosity than threat. I was a woman out of place but I did not always feel unsafe. There were the abandoned copper mines and the vast majesty of Lake Superior and so much forest cloaking everything. During fall, deer hunting, so much venison. The winters were endless, snow in unfathomable quantities, the aching whine of snowmobiles. There was loneliness. There were my friends, who made the isolation bearable. There was a man who made everything beautiful. What I cannot forget is my landlady, who rented my apartment to me over the phone and who, when she first met me, told me I didn’t sound like a colored girl.

      I know what that means, because I have lived a city for 7 years, a place I didn't even know what it was or it even know that it was there until I went there for my education. Because where I lived before for 13 years, I know I didn't have a future there. So I moved into a city for 7 years now and where I know I will have a future someday. But in the story, what does it really mean by "there was a man who made everything beautiful."? I don't really get that part of the story.

    1. When you Read Like a Writer (RLW) you work to identify some of the choices the author made so that you can better understand how such choices might arise in your own writing. The idea is to carefully examine the things you read, looking at the writerly techniques in the text in order to decide if you might want to adopt similar (or the same) techniques in your writing.

      It's just like you're trying to solve something, you need to know what every word and sentence, ... etc, you're writing what it means, and what are you trying to say.

    1. Then I wrote some terrible, terrible stories.

      What kind of some terrible stories did you write about? I personally don't like those kind of stories, but they're fun to read sometimes when you are bored and don't have anything to do n that particular moment.

    1. You might share the story of a particular resonant experience

      Like what kind of story might that be that would work for this project? I have a few ideas in mind, but I don't really know which one to talk about for this Unit 1 Project. Also because it's our first project/assignment in this course so far...

    1. We would have classes, workshops, or lessons, but there would be no official grading of omelets or yoga poses, since letters and numbers would be meaningless in those scenarios.

      I mean why would you take a course that is meaningless and have nothing the same compared to the other previous courses that you have taken before. But I would give it a try and see how that is different than the ones that I'm taking right now.

    1. he had lost time due to the discussion with his wife — he ascended clad for venturing out, including his Ajax model Mountibank Lead Codpiece, to the covered roof pasture whereon his electric sheep "grazed."

      when you blame some one of something that they didn't do will make you pay at the end no matter what happens. After losing time due to anything won't bring the time back no matter what you do. There are 4 things in like that you can't bring back after in life: time after it's gone, opportunity after it's missed, the word after it's said, and trust after it's lost.

    1. Breathing, always a pleasant activity in ordinary times, has now become the most thrilling activity on Earth.

      Breathing always helps me to calm down and think more clearly. But that's true because it's more hard these days to go outside and take a deep breath because of this horrible pandemic that caused a lot of our lives during these past few months.