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  1. Aug 2022
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    1. his wife to tell him where the corkscrew was

      Joe drinks to dull his thinking when he gets too vexed or angry. He puts the same habit on Maria when she was disappointed about leaving the plum cake on the train.

    2. young men seemed to notice her but an elderly gentleman made room for her

      the description of the young lady as well as the young men being impolite to Maria seems to imply that Maria doesn't belong or fit in with the young crowd

    3. sheriff’s man.

      This reflects pretty poorly on the town's police force if a drunken, abusive, aggressive man can join. It seems like this job has very little screening or requirements to get.

    4. The Bohemian Girl

      From this link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Bohemian_Girl#Synopsis

      The Bohemian Girl is a romantic opera where a girl gets kidnapped and taken away from her royal upbringing/father and falls in love with her kidnapper. This maybe reflects Eveline's desire for Frank to take her away from her current life and father.

    5. I heard a voice call from one end of the gallery that the light was out. The upper part of the hall was now completely dark.

      The use of light in this work is really nice, with lots of vivid descriptions on shadows and light sources. It'd be interesting to try and map out the mood of the character based on the light descriptions in the surrounding text.

    6. gazed

      This opening paragraph has a lot of personification vocabulary related to sight with the streets being called "blind" and the houses gazing at each other. Perhaps this is a hint that there will be a lot of visual imagery in this text?

  3. Jul 2022
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    1. High Toast

      This is a brand of tobacco. It seems like James is also addicted to this by his response to it. Interesting because he is a reverend and probably has preached about having no idols or addiction

    2. e…

      Ellipses seem to be characteristic of old Cotter's speech, signifying the deterioration of his mental state?

    1. The wind of evening shook the dark leaves to a thin airy cackle.

      The personification of nature changes from a friendly and energy-filled female to a more witch-like persona, signifying the continuous deterioration of Mr. Neave's state of mind

    2. to run up, to blow in his white beard, to drag sweetly on his arm. And he couldn’t meet her,

      Personification of the Spring as a caring, energetic, and eternal female spirit. This is heavily contrasted with Mr. Neave feeling his age and mortality

    3. “Pardon,” she smiled at him more radiantly than ever. She didn’t even recognise him again.

      Again, the transformative nature of dancing is able to bring back Leila's passion. Dancing/the ball seems to symbolize the start of her young adulthood as she is also 18 in this story

    4. they were pink and white flags streaming by

      I really like the imagery of flowers blurring together into flags by the motion of dancing. This is similar to how the "dancing" of the car made it seem that lampposts were "waltzing". The power of dancing to transform objects and people seem like a repeated theme in this story.

    5. He steered so beautifully.

      Similar to the beginning of the story, where the cab was described as possibly her first partner. The symbolism of a cab being a partner is interesting because it reinforces the role of the men to "steer" while the girls are along for the ride.

    6. r horrid old train is late. The taxi’s outside.

      I came back to this section after reading the whole passage and I thought the symbolism of the old train representing the values and way of life of William vs the newness of the taxi that represents Isabel's new way of life and values was really interesting

    7. No, it was too difficult. “I’ll—I’ll go with them, and write to William later. Some other time. Later. Not now. But I shall certainly write,” thought Isabel hurriedly. And, laughing, in the new way

      Again the description of "new" appears, showing how the vanity of her friends has become her choice over genuine love and care for William.

    8. he familiar dull gnawing in his breast quietened down.

      Chest pains from the stress and anxiety regarding his wife and kids?

    9. the new Isabel had explained

      The usage of new here implies there was likely an event or thing that causes Isabel to adapt new values.

    10. Good heavens—why! I—I don’t mind it a bit. I—I like waiting.” And suddenly her cheeks crimsoned, her eyes grew dark—for a moment I thought she was going to cry. “L—let me, please,” she stammered, in a warm, eager voice. “I like it. I love waiting! Really—really I do! I’m always waiting—in all kinds of places...”

      This is the first time that the young girl stammers so much, before she was very demanding and impatient, but now, as she's actually going to be left alone, she seems unsure and insecure, possibly due to her coming of age?

    11. Oh, shut up, mother,” said she wearily

      There is an immediate characterization of the daughter being very different than the idealistic image the mother seems to have of her daughter. The mother basically looks at her daughter as if she is an angel from Heaven in the first paragraph, but so far her daughter is rude and impatient.

    12. casinos with snuffy old saints for croupiers and crowns to play with

      Juxtaposition of the image of corruption associated with Casinos and old age with the innocence and youth of the young girl

    13. Don’t shout!” h

      The frequency of exclamation marks seems to be increasing as the story goes on and the sisters become more hysterical

    14. Took it out of the lock and held it up to Josephine, showing Josephine by her extraordinary smile that she knew what she’d done—she’d risked deliberately father being in there among his overcoats.

      It's interesting that she mentions that this action is being weak instead of strong when this represents her pushing against the power her father has over her, even after death.

    15. Constantia lay like a statue, her hands by her sides, her feet just overlapping each other, the sheet up to her chin. She stared at the ceiling.

      It's interesting that Constantia is the one laying down like a corpse while it is the Colonel who is dead. Seems almost like she is in shock and her method of coping is to mimic the dead.

    16. Laura shook her head. She was.

      Laura's actions and words here seem very conflicted. She shakes her head that she isn't crying while she is and she says that her experience was marvelous while she is sobbing. This perhaps mirrors her inner conflict with her families high class values to her desire to look past class and status

    17. white

      This story has many mentions of different colors. Here the white road by Laura's house is contrasted heavily with the smoky and dark lane by the poorer areas where the colors seem to signify status and class.

    18. People of that class are so impressed by arum lilies.”

      Even with the "gift" her mother is only concerned with class and image.

    1. On that night, the three men were to part. In three separate directions

      Throughout the novel "three" has shown up a few times either with the Indians, the love triangle, and again with the directions here. I wonder if a dispersion plot or finding the concordance of the word or number "three" might reveal any motifs

    2. by being smothered with a pillow from his bed–that the persons guilty of murdering him are the three Indians

      It's almost poetic justice that the novel is nearing it's end with the death of someone who stole the Moonstone by the three Indians since the novel started off with the murder of the 3 Indians that were guarding the diamond.

    3. Speaking as a servant, I am deeply indebted to you. Speaking as a man, I consider you to be a person whose head is full of maggots, and I take up my testimony against your experiment as a delusion and a snare.

      This passage highlights how strong Betteredge's sense of duty and service is, even against his own morals. This highlights how Betteredge is likely heavily biased against narrating that the people he serves would do much wrong, even if he thought differently.

    4. him; a

      I am not sure how to interpret the use of the italicization here. It almost seems aggressive or angry, but there is little reason for Ezra to be mad at Candy. Perhaps it is a projection of bitterness for his situation that he cannot escape.

    5. Myself as the Thief.

      This is the first time "Thief" is capitalized in the novel. Will be interesting to see if it's capital anywhere else and when.

    6. I stood like one Thunderstruck, or as if I had seen an Apparition.’ If that isn’t as much as to say: ‘Expect the sudden appearance of Mr. Franklin Blake’–there’s no meaning in the Englis

      I think this section continues to highlight of Betteredge's bias of skewing reality to fit what he idolizes

    7. whom I had always believed to be a smooth-tongued impostor–justifying the very worst that I had thought of him, and plainly revealing the mercenary object of the marriage

      This is interesting that Mr. Bruff is the first narrator and character to openly think badly of Mr. Godfrey Ablewhite. So it should be important to see what this narrator says about him to fill in gaps left by other narrators.

    8. I am afraid I should have felt it my duty to my client to ask him to reconsider his Will. In the case of Sir John, I knew Lady Verinder to be, not only worthy of the unreserved trust which her husband had placed in her (all good wives are worthy of that)

      Here, Mr. Bruff's narration sounds pretty similar to Gabriel's. It also seems like he might have similar biases since he has also had a long and good relationship with the Verinder family

    9. But to let an innocent man be ruined; to keep a secret which destroys his character for life–Oh, good God, it’s too horrible! I can’t bear it!”

      I feel it is a bit odd that Godfrey is never suspected by Rachel at this point, but is held aloft as some person incapable of wrong. Similar to the name analysis on Zulip, "God"frey may be too idealized

    10. Clack

      Her name is an onomatopoeia for a sharp and sudden, obtrusive sound, similar to how she imposes herself onto people like trying to convert Mrs. Verinder

    11. “We shall have a change in the weather before long.”

      Weather has been used before to foreshadow major events. So likely something unexpected or bad will happen with this change in weather.

    12. The Last Rose of Summer

      This song is based on the a poem by Thomas Moore from 1805. After listening to the lyrics, I can't help but think of Rosanna since the song is about the last rose of summer who's all alone, similar to how Rosanna prefers to be alone and her name has the word Rose in it. You can find more info and an audio recording here The Last Rose of Summer

    13. Sergeant Cuff;

      Another instance of a name reflecting the traits or role of a person. English last names tend to reflect the occupation of the family, i.e. Fletcher as a last name typically comes from family that had something to do with arrowsmithing or archery.

    14. Mr. Franklin, still sticking to the helpless view of our difficulty, whispered to me: “That man will be of no earthly use to us. Superintendent Seegrave is an ass.” Released in his turn, Mr. Godfrey whispered to me–“Evidently a most competent person. Betteredge, I have the greatest faith in him!”

      This is interesting to see the polar opposite opinions and behaviors of these two characters as it highlights potential biases as the narrators change in the future.

    15. Religion (I understand Mr. Godfrey to say, between the corks and the carving) meant love. And love meant religion.

      This is an interesting description of religion since the other main exposure to religion is the background of the Moonstone which is entangled with violence. Meanwhile, this description relates love and religion.

    16. when you wonder what this cruel nastiness means, you are told that it means a taste in my young master or my young mistress for natural history

      The author may be bringing this up to highlight the innate malice and cruelty that humans can harbor. Could this be foreshadowing the reveal of someone's true cruel nature?

    17. No! it won’t do to set off yet. I am sorry again to detain you; but you really must hear the story of the sands, and the story of Rosanna–for this reason, that the matter of the Diamond touches them both nearly. How hard I try to get on with my statement without stopping by the way, and how badly I succeed! But, there!–

      The tone of Gabriel seems to be often anxiously defensive and doubtful. I think this is also seen when he first accepts this task and from his reliance on Robinson Crusoe.

    18. He was, out of all sight (as I remember him), the nicest boy that ever spun a top or broke a window. Miss Rachel, who was present, and to whom I made that remark, observed, in return, that she remembered him as the most atrocious tyrant that ever tortured a doll, and the hardest driver of an exhausted little girl in string harness that England could produce.

      Gabriel seems prone to idolization as seen with Robinson Crusoe, his lady, and Mr. Franklin. This idolization may lead to biases and inaccurate recounting of events, so it's something to look out for.

    19. And I declare, on my word of honour, that what I am now about to write is, strictly and literally, the truth.

      I don't know much about the context of this novel, but I think it will be interesting to see how much we can trust this statement as we learn more about the narrator and the narrator's mental state and biases.