we could add a Quotes as titles e.g. "This was simply the most important week of my life"

i like this too

i also like this, as it is more clear to me

same, i would highlight that!

I would re-write this sentence

don't really understand

I would highlight this

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The first things mention make it seems that the important info of this immersion is about sexual energy and sexual shame and not awareness, energy, emotional state, grounding, connection, etc.

Use pictures of hot girls, I will take a loooot of next time in Romania.

I would not mention this in parenthesis, but rather in small font below

Use Marketing language / symbols

For example:

Get $2000 USD DISCOUNT !!!! with red and big fonts, by subscribing NOW.

Book your early bird ticket HERE CTA

Only 3 spots LEFT!

You can use those countdown roulettes to introduce a sense of urgency.

I'd rather mention this first

it makes me think that the original state is unsafe

I would rather say sexual energy

Can we include the limitless logo ? and mention that is a collaboration or that it is both coaches/names

David: -Ideally we would have the video start automatically when the page opens -On mobile the video is too small, can we make it bigger somehow? -For all videos we should allow the option to increase the speed, in case someone just wants to fo over everything quickly. I don't see any downside doing only avoiding people that lose patience like me lol -The calls to action buttons should be A LOT more visible, almost as if you had no other choice but to click :) -We are missing Tania's feedback, she is hot it will add some value if it's good

I would not present this part first, but instead "Who is this for"

just an idea: Can we add a sense of urgency in the website, like a count down, or like "get the special offer 1899" instead of 2199$ today. Or say that we have a limited (unlike our name lol) number of people that can sign up...

David shared the 3rd video with you ? The one of Julien ?

Can we make the video a bit bigger ?

His name is woody

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As a picture, I would see a million of profiles or phones, with one that stands out in Red for instance..

I am going to provide you with some screen shots this weekend of results Can we then make a boxe on the side with the screen shots that are automatically rotating?

good that you highlighted some text. Can you highlight the most important words/text in the webpage? We can take some time and do it together if you want.

we could add

• understand the world of online dating

Does ssthis video on the right will be replaced by David's ? that will introduce himself and the package with all his attractive natural and effortless manner?

good paragraph

I'd say Covid-19 has accelerated the digital transition with a significant increase of the use of online dating.

call to action buton I would write "Get Your Profile Done By Experts"

If you have ever felt

I like this

I like this, can you make it more visible?

Is it possible to have a pop-up when we open the page with a direct call to action ? and collect emails?

In title or as a subtitle of the page

I will send you the complete lists

I would not mention Geneva

I would not mention this

That could be the title. You can decide what is best with the flow.

Highlight this part somehow as it is the most important one

I don't think people can in reality, it is too much work, add then people hold the camera, they are not able to shoot themselves. You know what i mean

can we have it in bold.

Can we add subtitles so that one can read and understand faster the paragraphs?

Text is good. I would add more visual. it is a bit too much text alone. I would add a sick picture that would make people want to read more about it.

will coach you, or tutor you, or teach you

icon of something representing the optimization.

icon of a package for example

Mention that we provide X hours of videos / teaching

would use a icon of a camera for example

I would use a bit of visual here, like a chess piece in this frame for strategy

Can we also add a short description above or below the vids, like "Joe, went from virgin to banging midgets"

truuuuue

I think non guys realize how big is the competition.

I would explain what I mention previously, saying that this would just be stupid not to use it.

We can also mention the automation side of it. It is basically running in the "background" and your profile is shown to girls 24/7

can we highlight/emphasise this

In the sales copy, I would emphasize more our positioning as experts. Like we studied this for years, tested profiles, and spent thousands of hours learning, experimenting. And we want to give guys the quickest shortcuts (as a first step)

Excellent draft Duduke

for the follwing draft, can we add some icons, and or infographics?

Can you please add a section with some random screenshots. I will provide with some later. Something like an image that changes automatically and you see other screenshots of proof of results. If that is not clear, I will explain next time we speak.

For the first picture, it is fine for the moment, I will see if I can find a similar picture with a hot girl. By the way don't hesitate to use pictures of hot girls in the rest of the website :)

I think we should have a call to action. earlier. And I would mention clearly -> "get your Tinder profile done by experts" or something along the line (or less words)

remove "can"

It can if you use it well

can we mention something like "You have ever felt you are wasting your time with online dating, thatTinder doesn't work and you want to give up..."

Title is cool. should we use a intro video like in the website ? With David presenting the concept?

Limitless options should appear as a title, as it is a branch of the limitless mentoring.

Maybe we can explain in a chapter what Limitless options is about.

add section "Feedback" I will add tons of screenshots (I will send you them on the drive)

add section who we are team description from landing page

Say that we have many success stories

Add the two testimonials in English (to be edited)

I will edit the French one (for this one: We will only use the sound. and I will use images to tell a story)

use 2x2 windows

add caption "joe has lost his vrginity"

"Greg has met the mother of his children"

"Johnathan has named his son Steen"

add colors, infographics

Can you find stock pictures to fill the website in the meantime

make it more attractive with logos, etc!

Present three packages

1) 1397 CHF - > entry package

• home study course
• support with limitless options
• Professional shooting

2) 1997 CHF - > gold

• home study course
• support with limitless options
• Professional shooting
• Personal coaching for a month

3) 2497 CHF - > platinium

• home study course
• support with limitless options
• Professional shooting
• Personal coaching for three months
• follow up and text coaching
• dates coaching

Change call to action to something like (the wording will be reviewed)

"Get your personal profile done now"

Let's change this to "Why they cannot live anymore without Steen's pictures" or something like "This is the perfect package for men presenting themselves in a natural, attractive and effortless manner to get the abundance they desire"

--> THIS WILL BE REPHRASED

The vsl on the right will be changed asap with David presenting

• the thank you video (after the close)

can we have a pop up on the website, saying "successful online dating starts with great photos Geneva session's open for reservation" wtih a call to action "Sign me up"

this is a title

Button needs to be bigger, and emphasised add "now"

button "Get limitless option" needs to be bigger and add "now"

This one too emphasized

I like the idea of Limitless Options, let's emphasis this

Great first version Duke Let's change the first picture to have something more attractive

Video, is it possible to have smaller caption, as we drag down ? In the edit, let's add the subtitles

button below not activated

see section "our application process"

https://www.saintlavigne.com/home

Remove

We can change to What our clients say:

see example of testimonials presentation in https://www.saintlavigne.com/home

Some ideas for the websites: https://www.saintlavigne.com/ https://www.maxtornow.com/start33339179

remove

should be the 1st one

Choose another picture from the repository

can we highlight with black font

button below "apply for a FREE consultation call" is not activated

Can we highlight the keywords in bold in the three sections ?

same

even more highlighted in bigger font

?

Video ok for now but to be re-edited later, based on the feedback we'll receive.

Background picture to be changed with the latest pictures uploaded in : https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1YRXjyAnXznzkb9Sunakp1xvI1FZoJEcx?usp=sharing

After submitting the form, I come back to the beggining, and I should receive a confirmation message, an email, and David congratulating me with the thank you vid.

What makes you think you are a good fit to join the limitless mentoring journey?

Be more specific: like, Age, Profession, Romantic relationship, country, ...

No need these titles

What is your current monthly revenur ?

• 0-1'000 USD
• 1 - 3K USD
• 3 - 5 K USD
• 5 - 10K USD -10-20K USD

• 10K USD

No need to mention this

Ok for the moment

Remove

REmove "Goals" change cosmetic see for example : Woofo Typeformxt ex:higherpayingclients.com

List three reasons why you are applying for the limitless mentoring

Can we make the answer's boxes bigger, and it seems the windows cannot be stretched horizontally