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  1. May 2024
    1. but your author very deliberately uses the word front, because that’s what it is, a story, a lie, about as thin as your sheet of standard cardboard.

      It's more of a lie than you think!!!

    2. “Tag! You’re it!”

      Tubbo knows exactly what to do to bring out Ranboo's genuine self

    3. “All I ever wanted to do was to fly, but I don’t know if it even matters.”

      Perhaps the beginning of his tiredness with the constant running?

  2. Feb 2024
    1. Dan depends. where are u taking me Phil Paris? Phil Oh wait ive done that Phil god im so smooth

      NO I FUCKING LOVE THIS LMAO It's one of my favorite moments in this fic

    1. “Um, yeah, I think I did.” Phil says eventually, looking straight ahead. “I think I was talking about how pretty Paris is... or maybe the museum? I can’t remember really.”Phil chuckles, and Dan frowns, not having picked up on any of that. “Wow, I didn’t get that at all.” Dan says, laughing at his own ineptitude. “I guess I’m worse at French than I thought.”

      Clutching my heart rn bro...Dan has no idea

    1. they’re going to make pickets and signs with anti-capitalist slogans out of craft paper and bamboo

      LETS GOOOOOOOOOOO Good job Phil, raising a buncha little commies <3

    1. blood sheeting out of the wound and down his wrist.

      A hint of foreshadowing perhaps

    2. th-this is a-all I have.

      What you have is so so beautiful. It's bigger and deeper than human love.

    3. “If you want me to leave, you’re going to have to tell me.”

      I love how important communication is in this story

    4. I love you

      Ahhhhh the beautiful sadness of a meaningless I love you. It's not sincere. Doesn't that crush you, fearsome, sweet Prince?

    5. You took advantage of me.

      TRUTH HE LIED BY OMMISSION

    6. and it’s good to know he’s mar-

      ANDDDDDDD ANOTHER HELLENITE STORY WITH UNCONSENTUAL MARRIAGEEEEE

    7. The more Ranboo reads, the stranger he finds it that everything in the forest is so friendly with him, but then he thinks about who he’s always with.

      HE'S GOT THE MUSIC IN HIMMMMM

    8. One day it’s the crumbling remains of a medieval church, roof completely gone and letting in the bright fall sunlight, dead leaves carpeting the floor and the twisting vines of some giant plant wrapped around through open windows, stained glass long gone, but when Tubbo swipes his fingers under his eyes, Ranboo can see it glowing in the afternoon light, kaleidoscope of colors dancing across the ground.Another time, it’s a massive oak tree, golden leaves heavy on it, and one mischievous look from Tubbo and they’re racing to the top, and Ranboo tries to be careful at first, but after he slips the one time, foot instantly catching on a sturdy branch that wasn’t there before, he stops worrying, scrabbles after Tubbo in wild abandon, chasing his giddy laughter up through the leaves.

      Ranboo's meant to end up here. He falls in love with the Earth even without being under a spell.

    9. pupils slit to the side rather than circular

      Like a goat?

    10. Tubbo lights up like the sun

      I'm glad Tubbo eventually learns that he can't get everything he wants. It's great that they decide to be together under their own free will.

    11. gymnast (?)

      Heh...like real Tubbo

    12. Um, yeah?

      BIG MISTAKE PAL

    13. Death does in fact come for us all

      Hah.

    1. We’re not charming some landlord into letting us live there rent free, that’s not fair to them.

      Nah it's fine FUCK LANDLORDS

    1. I want to be loved because it’s his choice, not because I made him.

      That was always the thing.

    2. I am the Prince of Underhill, I have duties to my people and my land that have gone neglected-

      This is such a silly argument ugh Ranboo acting like he hasn't been neglecting Tubbo first

    1. but all the lights and flickering images on the screen only made his head pound worse.

      He has let himself act too human. He needs to tell Ran that he can never be human. He's gotten Ran too used to it.

    2. she can usually coax a few of the dryads into dancing, spins in between their whirling leaves with wild abandon.

      She reminds me of Aurora from Maleficent

    3. and he can see it unfolding in front of him, Arthur giving that thing a dance, crowning its head with their branches, forcing him to watch it stand by his brother’s side, lording over him for an eternity.

      It's so funny that he ends up marrying a human himself.

    1. Tubbo would gladly take the devil himself

      Thats funny cuz he really hates Ran at first and wants so badly to just dump his ass into space lol

  3. Feb 2023
    1. obfuscate

      Meaning to render obscure, unclear, or unintelligible.

    2. “S-Surprise.”

      The whole Annwyl scene means SO much to me OHHHHH it is so satisfying it feels so good to see Ranboo determined, steady, smart, stealthy, risky, TEARING HIS FATHER DOWN NEVER WAS A FATHER ALWAYS A BAD PERSON and RANBOO IS WINNING AND SUCCEEDING!!!!!

    3. “Safe travels, may the Four Celestials light your path.”

      This sucks like yeah hes a shit father but this goodbye is so empty its so strange

    4. “I-I never would’ve let you hurt each other that badly I- I made sure you were safe, all of you.”

      DELUSIONAL, ZEETHO, D E L U S I O N A L

    5. “Why remain loyal to an institution that only causes you pain? That’s hurt you? It’s…madness it’s-

      HAAAAAAA I CACKLE HE THINKS HE WAS EVER FUCKING RESONABLE AND KIND AND CARING OF RANBOO FUCKING PRICK OF A KING GO ROT

    6. you think no, you are happy

      You think...no you ARE happy

      :)))))))))))) <3

    7. “I’m tired of running, o-of getting shot at, w-worrying about if I’ll get to live another day with you or not.”

      AND GODDDDD ISN'T THAT THE WAY THEYRE ALWAYS RUNNING ALWAYS HURTING ALWAYS GETTING ANGRY AND ACCIDENTALLY HURTING EACH OTHER OHHHHHHHHHUGGHGHGHGHG

    8. “I-I don’t want to.”

      This moment is sooooo

    1. Ad Astra

      To the stars, a fitting title for this story. I think it's interesting to show Tubbo's perspective first in the story of Bo and Boo's relationship. They're falling for each other, but it hurts, and Ranboo is really hurting while Tubbo doesn't understand...they are both traumatized so they hurt each other, but it works. Tubbo wants the stars, they go to the stars.

    2. he lets out a breath he didn’t know he’d been holding

      UGHHHHH no not the overused phrase lol

    3. planetside

      I think the use of this word is interesting, if you liken it to beachside, which is the area by a beach, but I would assume this word means he is on the planet, not beside it.

    1. “I-I’m a b-bad person, a flawed being, he might n-never speak to me a-again…b-but that doesn’t mean I deserve to d-die.”

      I am so very proud of him

    2. you think you wanna find out

      YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH FUCK YEAH

    3. “Reshaa shut your whore mouth or I’ll do it for you!”

      I love this line lmao

    4. Lesson Forty-One: Duty comes before attachments is that why he never looks at you

      This section is fucking heartbreaking. It's the only time they ever truly connected. Fuck you Zeetho Zeethotad, dumbass fucking redundant name

    1. it’s okay if it’s him

      this motif tho

    2. I told you Enderian was a nightmare language. Why do you think literally no one else speaks it? It’s horrible.

      THE WELSH SLANDER THE WELSH SLANDER I CACKLE

    1. Are you even listening to me, Ranboo screams at him, and it’s not because he’s angry, tense line of his body he never stops talking like he’s trying to fill up empty space like he’s trying to prove he’s there, and Tubbo’s eyes slip closed, head falling back against his chair, shadow on the wall not even there doesn’t matter never did, achingly empty hole in his chest because it’s Ranboo whispering it’s nothing where he lays delirious and out of his mind, but that’s not what he really means. I’m nothing

      This realization fucking KILLS

    2. know you anywhere

      They way they are already so close and familiar and attached like BRO !!!!!!!!!!

    3. like it’s not even social awkwardness, it’s something else…something worse.

      It really is, it's incredibly fucked up how his family treated him

    4. It doesn’t make any sense, he’s a prince, grew up with everything he could ever want, would’ve been swamped with servants and courtiers from birth, and if Tubbo’s remembering right, he has like, six, seven siblings, so his family would’ve been there as he was growing up, so why does it feel like somethings gone sideways about him?

      Tubbo how can you not obviously tell that he is deeply traumatized

    5. it is next to impossible to know where you stand with them, and they’ll never, even under pain of death, tell you.

      This is funny knowing how Ranboo and Tubbo turn out <3

  4. Oct 2022
    1. “Good morning.”Dream is bashful in the morning, hiding his face in George’s neck. George barely moves, only shifting to press a kiss into Dream’s hair. “Make me breakfast. I want scrambled eggs.”

      Domestic af

    2. “Wanted you,” he mumbles through kisses and lovebites, “wanted you so bad since forever.”George bites his lip to keep certain things from spilling out. But Dream continues on, and finally he gasps, “Me too.”A pause. “Really?” Those big green eyes look up at him, some sort of moonshine. “Yeah,” he admits, “for the longest time.” It would sound worse aloud, but with Dream kissing his neck and raking his hands all over him, he can stand to let things slip. Slip, slip, slip, underneath the water, underneath gentle touches, underneath the weight of what he understands as love.

      GoooOOoOOoOOOOOd. GOD. YES MMM FUCK

    3. George thought he would be terrified, that every thought of what this means for the algorithm would overtake him.

      I suppose I get it now, there is a subtle underlying theme in their dynamic of an algorithm, the algorithm of them, like when George talked about a deviation in their code or something

    4. Numbers creep into his head for the first time since they’ve stepped foot on the islands, and the green and red arrows flicker up and down in his mind.

      What does this mean exactly

    5. “I like you,” Dream whispers, like no one will hear it.George only hums and gives up another kiss.

      Cutie fucking patooties

    6. affection woven in the words.

      They are both so in love

    7. “You just look quite handsome.”

      true people are so pretty when they monologue about their passions

    8. a

      an*

    9. George replies, because maybe it is

      IT ISSSSS

    10. midnight sun,’

      WAIT OMG THATS SO ROMANTIC

    11. The awkwardness between them is strangely wonderful.

      It means theyre getting somewhere. AGH George loves how unusual this experience is for them

    12. one bed

      AND THERE WAS ONLY ONE BEDDDD THATS MY SHIT TURN IT UPPPP

    13. He honestly thought the night in the tent had been an anomaly, like a skip in their code.

      MMMM THIS LANGUAGE it feels like George

    14. But now—they are in Norway. They are in Norway, and Dream is bending his body to get out of their tiny car. The air smells of salt and fish. They need a map to get around. They have both never set foot on this road, and still, they are here together.

      This is beautiful, they are exploring the world and themselves

    15. Henningsvaer

      The google earth images of Henningsvaer are gorgeous, there's a huge mountain sticking up and everywhere else is flat! It truly makes you think about how glaciers scraped and terraformed these islands.

    16. Instead of replying, Dream takes his hand off of the steering wheel, and intertwines his fingers with George’s. His eyes are trained on their passing setting for the rest of the ride, but George thinks if he looked at Dream again, he might have to kiss him.

      AAAARARARARAR SCREAMING

    17. Strawberries are in season in May. Bushes and bushes are ripe across Dream’s cheeks, and surely his own.

      SCREAMS THE IMAGERY

    18. “It’s funny that ‘When I’m Sixty-Four’ is playing during this conversation.”

      AHAHAAH the author did this on purpose.

    19. The sight of it all makes him want to scrape his knees. Not to hurt himself, but in the way that he imagines would come from running in the worn hills. Maybe if he tried to make his way down to the shore too quickly, with Dream chasing behind him, it might happen.

      Honestly I love this, it sounds ugly but its raw and real where you just wanna feel something and have a life experience.

    20. “An hour, probably.”“The whole hour that we’re trapped in this car.”

      Finishing each others sentences with no prompting MMM

    21. George isn’t sure how he feels knowing the difference.

      Isn't that just fucking delicious HEHEH

    22. Lofoten

      Lofoten is an archipelago in northern Norway, known for its dramatic scenery. An archipelago is a group of islands.

    23. Eventually, Dream’s hand moves to trace circles on his back.

      THEY ARE SOOOOO <3

    24. The left raindrop beats the right one in his make-believe race.

      Symbolism idk of what but it feels like it

    25. The phrasing is funny, like Dream wants to make sure that George is actively participating in the act of being held. It’s sweet.

      The way that words can mean so much <3

    26. He feels even colder.

      Metaphorically and literally

    27. Hold me or something.” No reply comes, only a yawn. George does notice that Dream’s body stiffens at the suggestion.

      Eheheheeheheh :)

    28. One day on the islands, and they are already shifting.

      Isn't it amazing how a change of setting can ruffle things up?

    29. Sleeping in the car might look weird to the owners though

      Huh? How would the owners know, what

    30. cognizant

      I thought this word was spelled wrong but it's not!

    31. “I don’t want to ejaculate in your tent,” George shoots back, a smile creeping in. “Maybe another time.

      YOU ARE SILLY. SILLY GOOFY.

    32. he stares into the vast emptiness in front of him. The sea rocks back and forth, tide only pleasantly disturbed by the onslaught of rain.

      This is such a overwhelming moment

    33. You really can’t, he reasons, knock on a tent.

      hehe silly

    34. He reaches an arm up out of his thermal sleeping bag to trace light lines in between the damp patches of fabric. Little constellations form between their imprints, and his breath steadies as his fingers etch pathways.

      I just adore him, this is magical. What a delicate moment.

    35. rituals

      This story feels like a breath of cool, wet, earthy, nordic air. Not that I know what that's like, but it IS set in Norway so.

    36. As the first raindrop hits the tent, George’s eyes snap open.

      Right off, a wonderful act of imagery.

    1. meet so many unique people.

      He certainly does heheehhe

    2. In the Hall of the King Underhill

      This story means a lot to me because I resonate with Tubbo, in the sense that I wish I could love and feel with the power of the Earth. Being a mere human is not enough for me sometimes.