108 Matching Annotations
  1. May 2020
    1. Here is the transformation: in selecting Starmer, Labour in all its divisions shows it has at last emerged as a serious party determined on seeking power.

      The article concludes with a reprisal of the decisive tone it began with. ‘At last’ as a preposition suggests that change has long been needed: Starmer’s leadership has rectified the Labour Party to a ‘serious party determined on seeking power.’ Seriousness and determination (the former used as a pre-modifying adjective, the latter as a stative verb)= qualities the reader finishes the article admiring.

    2. but a leader without a grip on their party looks an unconvincing prime minister of the nation.

      Author indirectly digs at Johnson: references the ‘Tory press howling at its shocking ineptitude.’ Prefix ‘un’ emphasises what the current government lacks rather than what they consist of.

    3. that spread so much bitterness through local parties.

      ‘Spread’ as a dynamic verb is linked to the prefix ‘ill.’ Suggests that Starmer’s party will eradicate the ‘bitterness’ spread ‘through local parties.’ Example of positive change.

    4. But with Starmer arriving with the wind in his sails, support for the dead regime may fade away, just as Militant vanished into the ether. Momentum itself has changed: Laura Parker, its national co-ordinator, is a Starmer campaigner and an emblem of the party’s future, unlike Momentum’s founder, Jon Lansman, a veteran Bennite.

      ‘Wind in his sails’ = idiom indicative of growing momentum. Noun phrase ‘dead regime’ solidifies the Corbyn Labour Party as something in need of replacement.

      The movement Momentum is listed as an example of this changing regime.

    5. Corbyn apparatchiks must go, but a Labour leader doesn’t directly control the party machine.

      ‘Must go’ = imperative, decisive, almost removed from the succeeding clause, which is more of a general declarative.

    6. An ill-assorted cabinet, chosen for hot Brexit passions not character or competence in a crisis, will face an impressively capable line-up on the bench opposite.

      Repetition of prefix ‘ill’ — if taken literally, it can be viewed that the author is suggesting that the ‘incompetence’ of the current government is like a sickness, and infectious in that retrospect. ‘Hot Brexit passions’ is similarly connotative of a temporary fever.

      Repetition of auxiliary verb ‘will’ — demonstrative of certainty.

    7. this singularly ill-equipped government will not come through it well – and Keir Starmer will.

      ‘Ill’ is again utilised as a prefix, suggesting that the government is not at all capable to carry the population through the coronavirus crisis — it is debilitated. However, the reader is assured that ‘another future is possible’ through the closing clause and auxiliary verb.

      Paragraph summary:

      • Paragraph blends Starmer’s ambitions with their relevance in modern-day context.
      • The government is presented as incapacitated and unable
      • However, despite the conflict within the Labour Party and the conflict of Britain as a whole, the reader is encouraged to view Starmer as a force of authority to rely on.
    8. In the aftermath of coronavirus and Brexit, plunged into a depressed economy, no one can guess the mood of politics in four years’ time,

      Acknowledgement of pragmatics — times are defined as uncertain, with the addition of a grim outlook

    9. Costly though it is, expect no backsliding on free tuition fees, because he sincerely believes in universal free education. But without power, policies are tinkling cymbals: ahead is the long, hard slog of solid and skilful opposition.

      Tone takes on an evaluative element through the adverb ‘costly.’ However, the reader is soured to ‘expect no backsliding’ due to Starmer’s ‘sincere’ beliefs, which the author presents as worthy of admiration.

      Pre-modifying, sibilant adjectives are used to define the opposition as ‘solid and skilful.’

    10. but wait for interpretations: it need not mean Whitehall-run monoliths.

      Author encourages the reader to form their own critical opinion before jumping to conclusions.

    11. Treading the tightrope stretched across a divided party, some Corbynites suspect he’s a covert Blairite, while some pragmatists worry about his radical pledges.

      Metaphor of a ‘tightrope’ suggests both conflict and danger.

      Author’s personal opinion takes a backseat, and the reader is presented with largely emotion-based (‘suspect,’ ‘worry’) views of other Labour supporters. It is important that these supporters have had to be, as noted previously, ‘swayed’ to Starmer’s case. Emphasises ideas of ‘division.’

    12. He conceded in his webinar with members this week, “any government would struggle”, before pointing to confused messages, slow action and the harsh light the crisis has shone on a decade of austerity. Steering off callow opportunism, expect forensically focused critiques to make this ill-prepared government writhe.

      Quote = direct example of aforementioned ‘nuance.’ ‘Pointing to’ also promotes ideas of simply exposing the government’s ‘confused messages’ and ‘slow action’ rather than directly attacking it. ‘Critiques’ as a noun reinforces this — a semantic field professionalism is evoked.

      ‘Steering off’ is similarly evocative of direct change, suggesting the Labour Party will take a route free from ‘callow opportunism’ under Starmer.’

      The author, however, steers the reader’s aggravation towards the government, where the pre-modifying adjective ‘ill-prepared’ is employed to define the current government as incapable in handling the coronavirus crisis. The reader is expected to support Starmer’s ‘critiques to make this government writhe’ as a result.

    13. After Corbyn’s unseemly gloating that coronavirus proved his policies right, expect pitch-perfect nuance from Starmer.

      ‘Unseemly gloating’ is directly juxtaposed with noun phrase ‘pitch-perfect nuance’ to demonstrate the switch from what the author views as an incompetent leadership to a refined, capable one.

    14. YouGov this week scored Johnson the highest positive rating of any government since 2003 – because nothing can save us but the state.

      Statistics in favour of the Tories are countered by the explanatory conjunction ‘because,’ which clarifies that the general public opinion only favours ‘the state’ as a result of the state being the one with authority in today’s context. Tone is almost scathing, sarcastic, although it cannot be said that the coverage is solely focused on Starmer and therefore excessively biased.

    15. What a hard time to arrive in post. Stricken and locked-down, there is no appetite for party politics as Britain, like every other country, at least temporarily rallies round the government of the day:

      Builds on ideas of adversity. ‘Stricken and locked-down,’ a fricative compound of adjectives, is connotative of political change being virtually unaccomplishable in today’s social landscape.

      ‘Rallies around the government of the day:’ modifier ‘of the day’ suggests that the public merely seek the reassurance of authority than that of the Conservative party specifically.

    16. What a hard time to arrive in post.

      Introduction of present-day (COVID-19) context: simple syntax results in an indisputable statement. ‘Hard time’ as a noun phrase = source of adversity, challenges. Content of the paragraph is displayed clearly.

    17. Using the very thing that most shamed Labour, his first totemic act will be to summon representatives of the Jewish community to help him set up a rigorously independent process to expunge the antisemites: never again those weasel excuses, “we oppose all forms of racism”.

      Specific examples build upon the paragraph’s general, opening declarative. The superlative of ‘most shamed’ has its negative connotations virtually flipped when juxtaposed with Starmer’s efforts to ‘expunge the antisemites.’ ‘Expunge’ suggests a finality, as does the vow ‘never again.’

      ‘Weasel excuses’ sees the author condemn the actions of the Corbyn-led party.

      Paragraph = evidential counterpart to the former paragraph.

    18. Starmer’s slogan, “Another future is possible”, felt as vital for the party itself as for the country.

      Starmer’s slogan is deliberately positioned at the close of the paragraph: a better future is felt as requisite after the reader’s subjection to the ‘raw incompetence of the Corbyn-led campaign.’

      Third paragraph summary:

      • expands on and defines ‘Incompetence’ with examples from the Labour Party in the 2019 election.
      • ideas of defeat and immense loss are similarly furthered
      • the paragraph is structured so the reader (along with ‘the party itself and the country’) turn to Starmer in hope of “another future.”
    19. Activists contended with the raw incompetence of every aspect of the Corbyn-led campaign, from his incredible manifesto, ballooning weekly with new billions pledged, to basic failures to deliver election leaflets on time.

      Focus again turns to ‘incompetence,’ worsened by its ‘raw’ state (pre-modifying adjective). ‘Ballooning,’ a dynamic verb, is demonstrative of this, offering connotations centred around a lack of discipline. ‘Basic failures’ is similarly illustrative of this. Description allows for a direct comparison of Starmer and Corbyn.

    20. The sheer scale of last December’s electoral rout, gifting Boris Johnson an 80-seat majority, sent a seismic shock through the party membership.

      ‘Rout’ = a common noun evocative of defeat. The juxtaposition of this noun with the verb ‘gifting’ suggests that the failure of the Labour Party was the most significant factor in the Conservatives’ victory.

      ‘Seismic shock’ = Noun phrase — demonstrates the ‘sheer scale’ of the electoral defeat.

    21. A trusted, tried and tested, big-brained grown-up arrives as a formidable opponent to this ramshackle, impromptu and patently incompetent prime minister.

      Plosive, overly positive adjectives counter plosive, overly negative adjectives. ‘Grown-up’ as a common noun demonstrates the author’s political view clearly through a depiction of (mature) superiority to the Prime Minister.

      Introductory paragraph summary:

      • Starmer is immediately presented as a force of change to both the Labour Party and ‘the political landscape’ of Britain itself
      • Tone = decisive and unneutral. Starmer is praised; Johnson and Corbyn are attacked.
      • The author appears to focus on ‘competence’ in politics (and the lack of it)
    22. His cool authority swayed many Jeremy Corbyn supporters and Momentum members, when only a short while ago it was glumly assumed only a Corbynite stood a chance.

      ‘Authority’ is modified by the adjective ‘cool,’ which suggests an effortlessness in garnering support (a notion which is furthered by the stative verb ‘swayed’).

      ‘Only a short while ago’ is used as a preposition in order to demonstrate that accomplished by Starmer in such a small frame of time.

      The adverb ‘glumly’ evokes connotations resignation, misery that have since been rectified.

      Second paragraph summary:

      • the author first focuses on the successes of Starmer in the election
      • ideas of change are expanded upon with clear evidence of support
      • Starmer = ‘respectful,’ ‘without enemies,’ appeals to opposition with ‘cool authority.’
    23. He has promised unity and this solid support may augur an end to the party’s civil wars. The respectful tone of the leadership campaign in the three finalists’ hustings drew praise from all sides: peace was possible.

      A semantic field of conflict is overtly present. ‘Praise’ is presented as an almost involuntary response to the ‘three finalists’ hustings,’ and the hopeful message of ‘peace was possible’ is presented as its own alliterative clause.

    24. No digging has found anything but decency and a background of pro bono work: “a bit dull” is the worst they can think of.

      ‘Digging’ as a dynamic verb suggests extensive work was needed to find ‘anything but decency,’ which proved, according to author, as nonexistent.

      ‘Dull’ is modified / lessened by the quantifier ‘a bit,’ again serving as a contrast to the previous adjectival attack of ‘ramshackle, impromptu and patently incompetent.’

    25. Starmer has swept the board, a man risen without enemies.

      ‘Swept the board’ = an idiom of success. ‘Risen without enemies’ furthers this idea of success: ‘risen’ suggests a surge to power, while ‘without enemies’ emphasises the negative attributes Starmer lacks (a direct comparison to the author’s previous depiction of positive attributes lacked by Corbyn).

    26. From now on Johnson faces the challenge of an unrecognisably remade opposition.

      Starmer’s positive contribution to the Labour Party is solidified with simple syntax and adverbs / adjectives connotative of change.

    27. Until now Boris Johnson had nothing to fear from a four-times vanquished and demoralised foe, with a leader so discredited a plurality of his own voters tell YouGov he changed their party for the worse.

      ‘Until now’ = preposition used to mark change: introduces the reader swiftly into the present tense.

      ‘Four-times vanquished and demoralised foe’ = fricative noun phrase (head word: ‘foe’). Adjectives are dramatic, connotative of a great, one-sided battle.

      Author’s opinion is again presented as fact: YouGov statistics are included as corroboration.

    28. Where there was no effective opposition, a void, a limbo, now in Keir Starmer the party has a grand prosecutor well qualified to hold the government’s feet to the fire.

      Author contextualises the article with the repetition of auxiliary verbs (‘will,’ ‘was’). ‘No effective opposition’ is expanded on as a noun phrase with abstract nouns ‘a void, a limbo’ in order to emphasise the lack of specific / tangible effectiveness.

      ‘Has’ = possessive verb, present tense. ‘Well qualified’ as a post-modifying adjective is demonstrative of Starmer’s strengths, which the author focuses on in how they can improve the Labour Party.

    29. The country today gains an opposition leader who will for the first time subject the government’s competence in this coronavirus crisis to relentless scrutiny.

      Immediate use of positive connotations — ‘gain,’ presented as a dynamic verb, is connotative of a favourable acquisition; ‘for the first time’ reinforces the notion of positive change.

      ‘Will’ as an auxiliary verb demonstrates the certainty of the author’s tone.

      From the opening clause, the coverage is focused on Starmer as an individual and what the author believes to be the positive effects of his election.

    30. Not since Tony Blair in 1994 has a Labour leader emerged from the party’s byzantine structures with support from every section, backed by a majority of MPs, trade unions, affiliates and now its members, too.

      ‘Not since’ is used as a preposition to again mark times of change. Asyndetic listing demonstrates the extent of ‘support’ received by Starmer, which is bolstered by the closing adverb ‘too,’ which is positioned after the clause for maximum effect.

    31. Here is the transformation: in selecting Starmer, Labour in all its divisions shows it has at last emerged as a serious party determined on seeking power.

      The article concludes with a reprisal of the decisive tone it began with. ‘At last’ as a preposition suggests that change has long been needed: Starmer’s leadership has rectified the Labour Party to a ‘serious party determined on seeking power.’ Seriousness and determination (the former used as a pre-modifying adjective, the latter as a stative verb)= qualities the reader finishes the article admiring.

    32. but a leader without a grip on their party looks an unconvincing prime minister of the nation.

      Author indirectly digs at Johnson: references the ‘Tory press howling at its shocking ineptitude.’ Prefix ‘un’ emphasises what the current government lacks rather than what they consist of.

    33. spread so much bitterness through local parties.

      ‘Spread’ as a dynamic verb is linked to the prefix ‘ill.’ Suggests that Starmer’s party will eradicate the ‘bitterness’ spread ‘through local parties.’ Example of positive change.

    34. But with Starmer arriving with the wind in his sails, support for the dead regime may fade away, just as Militant vanished into the ether. Momentum itself has changed: Laura Parker, its national co-ordinator, is a Starmer campaigner and an emblem of the party’s future, unlike Momentum’s founder, Jon Lansman, a veteran Bennite.

      ‘Wind in his sails’ = idiom indicative of growing momentum. Noun phrase ‘dead regime’ solidifies the Corbyn Labour Party as something in need of replacement.

      The movement Momentum is listed as an example of this changing regime.

    35. Corbyn apparatchiks must go, but a Labour leader doesn’t directly control the party machine.

      ‘Must go’ = imperative, decisive, almost removed from the succeeding clause, which is more of a general declarative.

    36. ill-assorted cabinet, chosen for hot Brexit passions not character or competence in a crisis, will face an impressively capable line-up on the bench opposite.

      Repetition of prefix ‘ill’ — if taken literally, it can be viewed that the author is suggesting that the ‘incompetence’ of the current government is like a sickness, and infectious in that retrospect. ‘Hot Brexit passions’ is similarly connotative of a temporary fever.

      Repetition of auxiliary verb ‘will’ — demonstrative of certainty.

    37. ill-equipped government will not come through it well – and Keir Starmer will.

      ‘Ill’ is again utilised as a prefix, suggesting that the government is not at all capable to carry the population through the coronavirus crisis — it is debilitated. However, the reader is assured that ‘another future is possible’ through the closing clause and auxiliary verb.

      Paragraph summary:

      • Paragraph blends Starmer’s ambitions with their relevance in modern-day context.
      • The government is presented as incapacitated and unable
      • However, despite the conflict within the Labour Party and the conflict of Britain as a whole, the reader is encouraged to view Starmer as a force of authority to rely on.
    38. aftermath of coronavirus and Brexit, plunged into a depressed economy, no one can guess the mood of politics in four years’ time,

      Acknowledgement of pragmatics — times are defined as uncertain, with the addition of a grim outlook

    39. Costly though it is, expect no backsliding on free tuition fees, because he sincerely believes in universal free education. But without power, policies are tinkling cymbals: ahead is the long, hard slog of solid and skilful opposition.

      Tone takes on an evaluative element through the adverb ‘costly.’ However, the reader is soured to ‘expect no backsliding’ due to Starmer’s ‘sincere’ beliefs, which the author presents as worthy of admiration.

      Pre-modifying, sibilant adjectives are used to define the opposition as ‘solid and skilful.’

    40. but wait for interpretations: it need not mean Whitehall-run monoliths.

      Author encourages the reader to form their own critical opinion before jumping to conclusions.

    41. Treading the tightrope stretched across a divided party, some Corbynites suspect he’s a covert Blairite, while some pragmatists worry about his radical pledges.

      Metaphor of a ‘tightrope’ suggests both conflict and danger.

      Author’s personal opinion takes a backseat, and the reader is presented with largely emotion-based (‘suspect,’ ‘worry’) views of other Labour supporters. It is important that these supporters have had to be, as noted previously, ‘swayed’ to Starmer’s case. Emphasises ideas of ‘division.’

    42. “any government would struggle”, before pointing to confused messages, slow action and the harsh light the crisis has shone on a decade of austerity. Steering off callow opportunism, expect forensically focused critiques to make this ill-prepared government writhe.

      Quote = direct example of aforementioned ‘nuance.’ ‘Pointing to’ also promotes ideas of simply exposing the government’s ‘confused messages’ and ‘slow action’ rather than directly attacking it. ‘Critiques’ as a noun reinforces this — a semantic field professionalism is evoked.

      ‘Steering off’ is similarly evocative of direct change, suggesting the Labour Party will take a route free from ‘callow opportunism’ under Starmer.’

      The author, however, steers the reader’s aggravation towards the government, where the pre-modifying adjective ‘ill-prepared’ is employed to define the current government as incapable in handling the coronavirus crisis. The reader is expected to support Starmer’s ‘critiques to make this government writhe’ as a result.

    43. After Corbyn’s unseemly gloating that coronavirus proved his policies right, expect pitch-perfect nuance from Starmer.

      ‘Unseemly gloating’ is directly juxtaposed with noun phrase ‘pitch-perfect nuance’ to demonstrate the switch from what the author views as an incompetent leadership to a refined, capable one.

    44. YouGov this week scored Johnson the highest positive rating of any government since 2003 – because nothing can save us but the state.

      Statistics in favour of the Tories are countered by the explanatory conjunction ‘because,’ which clarifies that the general public opinion only favours ‘the state’ as a result of the state being the one with authority in today’s context. Tone is almost scathing, sarcastic, although it cannot be said that the coverage is solely focused on Starmer and therefore excessively biased.

    45. Stricken and locked-down, there is no appetite for party politics as Britain, like every other country, at least temporarily rallies round the government of the day:

      Builds on ideas of adversity. ‘Stricken and locked-down,’ a fricative compound of adjectives, is connotative of political change being virtually unaccomplishable in today’s social landscape.

      ‘Rallies around the government of the day:’ modifier ‘of the day’ suggests that the public merely seek the reassurance of authority than that of the Conservative party specifically.

    46. What a hard time to arrive in post

      Introduction of present-day (COVID-19) context: simple syntax results in an indisputable statement. ‘Hard time’ as a noun phrase = source of adversity, challenges. Content of the paragraph is displayed clearly.

    47. Using the very thing that most shamed Labour, his first totemic act will be to summon representatives of the Jewish community to help him set up a rigorously independent process to expunge the antisemites: never again those weasel excuses, “we oppose all forms of racism”.

      Specific examples build upon the paragraph’s general, opening declarative. The superlative of ‘most shamed’ has its negative connotations virtually flipped when juxtaposed with Starmer’s efforts to ‘expunge the antisemites.’ ‘Expunge’ suggests a finality, as does the vow ‘never again.’

      ‘Weasel excuses’ sees the author condemn the actions of the Corbyn-led party.

      Paragraph = evidential counterpart to the former paragraph.

    48. Starmer’s slogan, “Another future is possible”, felt as vital for the party itself as for the country.

      Starmer’s slogan is deliberately positioned at the close of the paragraph: a better future is felt as requisite after the reader’s subjection to the ‘raw incompetence of the Corbyn-led campaign.’

      Third paragraph summary:

      • expands on and defines ‘Incompetence’ with examples from the Labour Party in the 2019 election.
      • ideas of defeat and immense loss are similarly furthered
      • the paragraph is structured so the reader (along with ‘the party itself and the country’) turn to Starmer in hope of “another future.”
    49. raw incompetence of every aspect of the Corbyn-led campaign, from his incredible manifesto, ballooning weekly with new billions pledged, to basic failures to deliver election leaflets on time.

      Focus again turns to ‘incompetence,’ worsened by its ‘raw’ state (pre-modifying adjective). ‘Ballooning,’ a dynamic verb, is demonstrative of this, offering connotations centred around a lack of discipline. ‘Basic failures’ is similarly illustrative of this. Description allows for a direct comparison of Starmer and Corbyn.

    50. electoral rout, gifting Boris Johnson an 80-seat majority, sent a seismic shock through the party membership.

      ‘Rout’ = a common noun evocative of defeat. The juxtaposition of this noun with the verb ‘gifting’ suggests that the failure of the Labour Party was the most significant factor in the Conservatives’ victory.

      ‘Seismic shock’ = Noun phrase — demonstrates the ‘sheer scale’ of the electoral defeat.

    51. cool authority swayed many Jeremy Corbyn supporters and Momentum members, when only a short while ago it was glumly assumed only a Corbynite stood a chance.

      ‘Authority’ is modified by the adjective ‘cool,’ which suggests an effortlessness in garnering support (a notion which is furthered by the stative verb ‘swayed’).

      ‘Only a short while ago’ is used as a preposition in order to demonstrate that accomplished by Starmer in such a small frame of time.

      The adverb ‘glumly’ evokes connotations resignation, misery that have since been rectified.

      Second paragraph summary: the author first focuses on the successes of Starmer in the election ideas of change are expanded upon with clear evidence of support *Starmer = ‘respectful,’ ‘without enemies,’ appeals to opposition with ‘cool authority.’

    52. augur an end to the party’s civil wars. The respectful tone of the leadership campaign in the three finalists’ hustings drew praise from all sides: peace was possible.

      A semantic field of conflict is overtly present. ‘Praise’ is presented as an almost involuntary response to the ‘three finalists’ hustings,’ and the hopeful message of ‘peace was possible’ is presented as its own alliterative clause.

    53. digging has found anything but decency and a background of pro bono work: “a bit dull” is the worst they can think of.

      ‘Digging’ as a dynamic verb suggests extensive work was needed to find ‘anything but decency,’ which proved, according to author, as nonexistent.

      ‘Dull’ is modified / lessened by the quantifier ‘a bit,’ again serving as a contrast to the previous adjectival attack of ‘ramshackle, impromptu and patently incompetent.’

    54. Starmer has swept the board, a man risen without enemies.

      ‘Swept the board’ = an idiom of success. ‘Risen without enemies’ furthers this idea of success: ‘risen’ suggests a surge to power, while ‘without enemies’ emphasises the negative attributes Starmer lacks (a direct comparison to the author’s previous depiction of positive attributes lacked by Corbyn).

    55. A trusted, tried and tested, big-brained grown-up arrives as a formidable opponent to this ramshackle, impromptu and patently incompetent prime minister.

      Plosive, overly positive adjectives counter plosive, overly negative adjectives. ‘Grown-up’ as a common noun demonstrates the author’s political view clearly through a depiction of (mature) superiority to the Prime Minister.

      Introductory paragraph summary:

      • Starter is immediately presented as a force of change to both the Labour Party and ‘the political landscape’ of Britain itself
      • Tone = decisive and unneutral. Starmer is praised; Johnson and Corbin are attacked.
      • The author appears to focus on ‘competence’ in politics (and the lack of it)
    56. Until now Boris Johnson had nothing to fear from a four-times vanquished and demoralised foe, with a leader so discredited a plurality of his own voters tell YouGov he changed their party for the worse.

      ‘Until now’ = preposition used to mark change: introduces the reader swiftly into the present tense.

      ‘Four-times vanquished and demoralised foe’ = fricative noun phrase (head word: ‘foe’). Adjectives are dramatic, connotative of a great, one-sided battle.

      Author’s opinion is again presented as fact: YouGov statistics are included as corroboration.

    57. Where there was no effective opposition, a void, a limbo, now in Keir Starmer the party has a grand prosecutor well qualified to hold the government’s feet to the fire.

      Author contextualises the article with the repetition of auxiliary verbs (‘will,’ ‘was’). ‘No effective opposition’ is expanded on as a noun phrase with abstract nouns ‘a void, a limbo’ in order to emphasise the lack of specific / tangible effectiveness.

      ‘Has’ = possessive verb, present tense. ‘Well qualified’ as a post-modifying adjective is demonstrative of Starmer’s strengths, which the author focuses on in how they can improve the Labour Party.

    58. The country today gains an opposition leader who will for the first time subject the government’s competence in this coronavirus crisis to relentless scrutiny.

      Immediate use of positive connotations — ‘gain,’ presented as a dynamic verb, is connotative of a favourable acquisition; ‘for the first time’ reinforces the notion of positive change.

      ‘Will’ as an auxiliary verb demonstrates the certainty of the author’s tone.

      From the opening clause, the coverage is focused on Starmer as an individual and what the author believes to be the positive effects of his election.

    59. Not since Tony Blair in 1994 has a Labour leader emerged from the party’s byzantine structures with support from every section, backed by a majority of MPs, trade unions, affiliates and now its members, too.

      ‘Not since’ is used as a preposition to again mark times of change. Asyndetic listing demonstrates the extent of ‘support’ received by Starmer, which is bolstered by the closing adverb ‘too,’ which is positioned after the clause for maximum effect.

    1. The people whose votes we lost need to believe that we have really changed, and reverted back to the party that they loyally supported for generations and believed represented their interests. Now is the moment for radical, ambitious and forward-looking policies. Not a comfort zone of indecision or complacency, but rather an understanding that the future belongs to the brave.

      Article is concluded with a personal call for a ‘future’ which ‘belongs to the brave.’ Change is presented as a necessity, while the Labour Party supported by previous ‘generations’ is presented as something for Starmer to strive for. Plural pronoun ‘we’ is seen replacing the noun of the Labour Party, suggesting that it is a collective responsibility to enforce change. Focus has been shifted from Starmer as an individual to the Labour Party as an institution.

    2. it will be vital for Keir to reach out and embrace Britons living way beyond the M25.

      Example of Britain ‘coming together’ — ‘to reach out’ as a verb phrase solidifies the idea that it is Starmer’s responsibility to promote unity (although previous ‘proclamations’ of such have been attacked by the author).

    3. By necessity in this coronavirus crisis, the Conservatives have abandoned long-held dogma such as their ideological objections to the role of the State. For its part, Labour must set aside its own dogmas.

      Positioning of the Conservatives before the Labour Party suggests that the Labour Party ought to follow their lead. Ideas of superiority come into play.

    4. There will be lasting political consequences, as always after major traumas such as war. Some think this will bring people together. I am not so sure.

      Personal tone is developed alongside the guarantee of ‘lasting political consequences’ (use of auxiliary verbs, declaratives).

    5. I supported Lisa Nandy to be leader

      Singular pronoun suggests an authorial bias / alternate political preference. Arguably weakens personal arguments against Starmer.

    6. But it will not be enough, in the short-term, to articulate the demands for a dramatic improvement in testing for Covid-19 or to accelerate the distribution of personal protection equipment. Labour must also have a vision of how the nation should come together in the long period of recovery.

      Pragmatic elements influence language use: in the coronavirus crisis, the modal auxiliary verb ‘must’ illustrates that it is requisite for Starmer to ‘have a vision of how the nation should come together.’

    7. that healing has a lot to do with delivering the right medicine, not merely covering up the wounds.

      Auxiliary verbs combined with declarative sentence functions present the author’s (metaphorical) opinion as fact, even advice.

    8. I was spat at as I walked into National Executive Committee meetings to play my part in expelling those who had joined Labour with the sole aim of taking over the party and betraying the people who had traditionally supported us.

      Anecdotal context is provided in order to support the author’s current arguments against the Labour Party — emotive language is used to personalise his experience and present the actions of Momentum as a wilful ‘betrayal.’

    9. those who joined Labour only to destroy it, such as the organisers of the far-Left group Momentum, will require more than benign indifference.

      Links to Starmer being able to ‘take out the hard-Left if he wanted to.’ The author solidifies Momentum as a ‘threat’ which requires the opposite of ‘benign indifference.’

    10. But this is only a beginning. The control of so many levers remains in the grip of those who tolerated antisemitism, ignored thuggery and bullying, and drove out decent people dedicated to the democratic parliamentary means of improving the lives of others.

      Unlike the Guardian article, it is suggested that change will not come in positive forms. ‘Grip’ is an uncompromising abstract noun; ‘ignored’ is a stative verb that connotes a lack of concern for ‘thuggery and bullying;’ ‘drove out decent people dedicated to the democratic...’ is a form of alliteration that summarises the author’s opposition to the Labour Party and Starmer.

    11. zealots of the hard-Left no longer hold the Labour Party. Meanwhile, the bulk of the membership has at last woken from its slumbers to recognise the catastrophe that befell the party in December when we suffered our fourth successive General Election defeat and ended up with fewer MPs than during the Michael Foot debacle of 1983.

      The verb phrase ‘hold the Labour Party’ rather dramatically suggests that it is now free from the clutches of ‘zealots of the hard-Left.’ ‘Catastrophe’ and ‘debacle’ are both connotative of extreme disaster as common nouns — a disaster that needs immediate rectification. Pragmatic elements are provided to bolster this claim (‘Michael Foot debacle of 1983’).

    12. a small shining light. A dismal chapter has closed in the history of the Labour Party and therefore, too, of this country's functioning democracy.

      The hope in a ‘small shining light’ (made pleasant-sounding by a combination of sibilance and assonance) is not founded by Starmer but in the closing of a ‘dismal chapter in the history of the Labour Party.’ Suggestion: the author does not have a similar hope for the leadership.

    13. Proclamations of unity and outbreaks of sweetness and light are, to say the least, premature.

      Ridiculing tone is reequipped with noun phrase ‘outbreaks of sweetness and light,’ with the abstract noun ‘outbreaks’ suggesting only a temporary presence. Despite overly positive connotations of the nouns presented, there is a turbulent undertone.

    14. power of zealots who tolerated antisemitism and thuggery in the Labour Party, says former Home Secretary LORD BLUNKETT

      The reader is similarly inclined to ‘fear the power of zealots who tolerated antisemitism and thuggery.’ ‘Zealot’ as a common noun has links to the extent of aforementioned ‘radicalism.’

    15. 'I have the most negative feelings about Keir Starmer imaginable,' he said earlier this year. 'Countless human beings were tormented because of him and he has never apologised. Keir is not only unsuitable to be leader of the Labour Party, he is unsuitable for any public position down to and including dog-catcher.'

      Gambaccini is humanised by the author before his quotes are inserted into the article as opposition to Starmer. The reader is inclined to feel sympathetic, or otherwise outraged, at Gambaccini’s treatment by the CPS: his superlative claim of ‘I have the most negative feelings about Keir Starmer imaginable’ is therefore granted a higher degree of validity.

      Auxiliary verbs (‘is’) mirror the author’s certainty.

    16. claimed to have 'stood up to the powerful' as DPP. But others claim he pursued 'victim-centred' justice at the expense of the rights of defendants.

      ‘Claimed’ as a dynamic verb is connotative of an overall lack of evidence / proof, thus presenting Starmer as unreliable: especially when he is confronted with the ‘claims’ of ‘others.’ Focus has adopted a pragmatic element that the reader is entrusted to apply to his politics.

    17. he flirted with radicalism as part of the 'editorial collective' for a fringe magazine that vowed to challenge the 'capitalist order' and turn Labour into 'the united party of the oppressed'.

      ‘Flirted’ as a stative verb suggests a lack of commitment to ‘radicalism,’ which has already been proven with the article’s previous content.

    18. Perhaps in an attempt to enliven his image, Starmer confided in a New Statesman interview last week that he moisturises every night.

      Tone becomes actively ridiculing with juxtaposition of ‘confided’ — dynamic verb connotative of secrecy — with bland, everyday information, which is again juxtaposed against stative verb ‘enliven.’

    19. Some critics cried opportunism but, of course, that is the trademark of most modern politicians.

      Language focuses on politics in general: accusation of ‘opportunism’ (abstract noun) is not personally levelled at Starmer, although it is suggested that is no different than ‘most modern politicians.’

    20. 'I am a socialist,'

      Pragmatics: it can be inferred that the audience of the Daily Mail are not socialists. The author is indirectly providing reasons for reader opposition to Starmer.

    21. Starmer won yesterday's vote because he convinced an outright majority of members that he is best placed to draw together Labour's disparate elements.

      ‘Because’ as a subordinating conjunction suggests a certainty in the following clause.

      ‘Convinced’ = connotative of manipulation, borderline fraud. Indirect suggestion is that Starmer is not, in fact, ‘best placed to draw together Labour’s disparate elements.’

      ‘Disparate’ as a pre-modifying adjective heightens the internal conflict of the Labour Party.

      ‘Elements’ = a regular plural noun. Demonstrates the extent of differences in the Labour Party.

      ‘Draw together’ as a verb phrase does not suggest a successful blend of these ‘elements;’ rather, it is suggested that the best Starmer can do is bring these elements ‘together’ in an unsatisfying co-existence.

    22. His knighthood has been ridiculed, too

      ‘Too’ as an adverb demonstrates the extent of ‘ridicule’ targeted at Starmer, which the article actively participates in.

    23. Some friends found the honour hard to reconcile with the firebrand politics of Starmer's youth, just as they were discomfited when he led the Crown Prosecution Service, having previously been on the 'other side' as a defence barrister.

      Opinion of ‘friends’ is sought to further emphasis the conflict present in Starmer’s leadership.

      ‘Reconcile’ = connotative of contrast, differing notions. ‘Firebrand politics’ as an abstract noun phrase has similar passionate connotations to the ‘fervent’ Momentum.

      ‘Other side’ = abstract noun demonstrative of aforementioned hypocrisy.

    24. reflecting some years earlier, the lawyer said: 'I got made a Queen's Counsel, which is odd since I often used to propose the abolition of the monarchy.'

      Direct quotes from Starmer are used to further the author’s presentation of conflict / hypocrisy. Attacks have now moved past Corbyn and are grounded in the present tense.

    25. emotions were characteristically difficult to read. Did his heart swell with pride as the knighting sword tapped his shoulder. Or did he feel a little conflicted?

      ‘Characteristically’ suggests, as an adverb, that this is a typical issue with Starmer — the article also shifts into a personal, individual focus. Emotive language is employed with ‘did his heart swell with pride’ and ‘did he feel a little conflicted.’ Author encourages audience speculation with interrogatives.

    26. Clooney chum's journey from an anti-royal Trot to knight of the realm: Can Sir Keir Starmer, who focus groups find 'dull, wooden and too lawyerly', really make inroads into the Tories' electoral lead?

      Topic subheading: informal lexis is evident in common noun ‘chum.’

      Asyndetic listing used in ridicule with ‘dull, wooden and too lawyerly’ all evoking particularly negative connotations. Tone of the article loses its factual element. Contrast: the Guardian article does not find fault with the post-modifying adjective ‘dull,’ and modifies it with quantifier ‘a bit.’

      ‘Really’ as an adverb voices the author’s doubt.

    27. Momentum, set up originally to protect Mr Corbyn's leadership, responded with congratulations to Sir Keir but tweeted: 'In this new era, Momentum will play a new role.

      Focus shifts back to Momentum — negative connotations are pre-established.

      ‘But’ as a coordinating conjunction is indicative of an approaching challenge, which is solidified with the auxiliary verb ‘will’ in ‘Momentum will play a new role.’

    28. The promise failed to quell criticisms that he had failed to speak out strongly enough over the party's handling of the issue while serving as Mr Corbyn's Shadow Brexit Secretary.

      Repetition of ‘failed’ as a past-tense stative verb demonstrates weaknesses already present in Starmer’s leadership.

      ‘Quell’ as a dynamic verb suggests a great extent of ‘criticisms.’

      After attacking the leadership of Jeremy Corbin, negative connotations are then ascribed to Starmer when he is directly tied to Corbyn with the possessive ‘Mr Corbyn’s Shadow Brexit Secretary.’

    29. by paying tribute to the former leader 'as a friend as well as a colleague' but vowing on antisemitism to 'tear out the poison by its roots'.

      Pragmatic element of the article is furthered with discussion on antisemitism in the Labour Party.

      ‘But’ as a coordinating conjunction, however, suggests that removing ‘the poison’ of antisemitism is an act in direct opposition to ‘paying tribute’ to Corbyn. Article attacks the Corbyn-led Party here.

    30. And there has also been disappointment for years that while the Tories have had two female leaders, Labour refuses to give a woman the top job.

      Paragraph begins with coordination conjunction; purpose = to further the viewpoint accumulating flaws in the Labour Party / Starmer.

      Factual, precise tone is furthered with ‘has’ auxiliary verbs and use of past tense.

      ‘While’ = subordinating conjunction. Suggestion: that the Tories have somewhat of a superiority over the Labour Party with ‘two female leaders.’

      ‘Refuse’ = stative verb. Suggestion: that Labour is deliberately withholding the ‘top job’ from women. It could be inferred from this that the author is deliberately attempting to position his female audience against the current state of the Labour Party.

      ‘For years’ = a preposition that marks an on-going problem. Links to conjunction ‘and’ with the same purpose.

    31. There is deep concern from Northern, Brexit-supporting Labour MPs over how Sir Keir, who backed Remain and represents a North London constituency, could appeal to the 'Red Wall' of seats lost to the Tories at the Election.

      Ideas of weakness are built upon from the last paragraph with the pre-modifying adjective ‘deep’ emphasising the degree of ‘concern from Northern, Brexit-supporting MPs.’ Language takes a political focus: embedded clause displays Starmer’s political leanings.

      ‘Lost to the Tories’ = connotative of (a contrasting) defeat. Stative verb ‘lost’ directly opposes previous victory / triumph.

    32. still left some MPs mystified last night over how different he would be.

      Focus becomes more individually centred on Starmer. ‘Still’ as an adverb is demonstrative of weakness despite the aforementioned strength of his electoral ‘victory.’

    33. further blow to the Left, schools spokesman Angela Rayner was elected deputy leader with ardent Corbynite Richard Burgon pushed into third place.

      Pre-modifying adjective ‘further’ suggests that Starmer’s election is already a loss for the ‘Left.’

      ‘Pushed’ = dynamic verb, suggestive of forced change.

    34. 'take out' the hard-Left if he wanted to.

      Connotations of power are solidified in the verb phrase ‘take out,’ which is dependent on the simple ‘want’ of Starmer. It can be inferred that the author believes the hard-Left should be ‘taken out’ as a result of previous negative depictions.

    35. He was the top choice of party members, affiliates and registered supporters with 56 per cent of the vote – way ahead of Ms Long- Bailey on 28 per cent and Ms Nandy on 16 per cent.

      Tone is factual, precise, supported by auxiliary verbs (‘was’). Like the aforementioned Guardian article, asyndetic listing is used to demonstrate the degree of support in ‘party members, affiliates and registered supporters.’

      Noun phrase ‘top choice’ is indicative of superiority / a ‘decisive’ victory.

      Adverb ‘ahead’ is modified informally by ‘way’ in order to demonstrate the extent of such victory: article so far appears to be supportive of Starmer’s success.

    36. threat sparked fury from many MPs last night, with even one former Corbyn ally saying that such was the scale of the new leader's victory that the hard-Left was now 'just howling at the moon'.

      ‘Threat’ as an abstract noun immediately modifies the tone of the previous paragraph: the reader’s opposition against Momentum is solidified. Article attacks the ‘hard-Left’ rather than Starmer himself.

      Use of expert opinion in ‘one Corbyn ally:’ author’s perspective becomes supported by the opinion of certain Labour Party supporters.

      Repetition of ‘victory.’ Reader is encouraged to believe that Starmer’s ‘triumph’ is well-deserved as a result.

      ‘Howling at the moon’ = idiom equipped to emphasise the ridiculousness of the ‘hard-Left’s’ actions. Interestingly, ‘howling’ is also used in the Guardian article to describe the outrage of the ‘Tory press.’

    37. fervently pro-Corbyn Momentum group reacted to Sir Keir's overwhelming triumph by vowing to hold the new leader to account 'and make sure he keeps his promises'.

      ‘Fervently’ = an adverb connotative of great passion, intensity. Immediately positions the Momentum group as a challenge to Starmer’s ‘overwhelming triumph:’ the reader is inclined to oppose the group as a result. ‘Triumph’ as an abstract noun suggests victory in the face of adversity; ‘overwhelming’ heightens the intensity of this triumph as a pre-modifying adjective.

      ‘Vowing’ = dynamic verb. Suggests a commitment to challenging Starmer.

    38. stormed to victory in the Labour leadership race yesterday only to face an immediate threat

      Adverb ‘only’ immediately negates the positive connotations of the phrase ‘stormed to victory,’ with the dynamic verb ‘stormed’ connotative of a significant power.