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  1. Last 7 days
    1. For the specific grading criteria for this assignment, review the rubric at the bottom of this page.

      We don't want to say bottom of the page per wcag.

      Change to:

      Review the specific grading criteria for this assignment in the rubric.

    2. Select the Prepare tab for preparation information, the Complete tab for assignment instructions, the Submit tab for submission requirements, and the Evaluation tab for grading information.

      Add [Add overview] before instructions

      Change language to:

      Select Prepare for preparation information, Complete for assignment instructions, Submit for submission requirements, and Evaluation for grading information.

    1. he Post tab for detailed instructions on how to make your initial post, the Respond tab to review the requirements for responding to your peers, and the Evaluation tab for information on how this discussion will be graded.

      This was changed from the language we provided, which doesn't include "the" and "tab".

      Change to:

      Select Post for instructions on your initial post, Respond for peer response requirements, and Evaluation for grading information.

    1. Select the Prepare tab to review key content necessary for participating in the discussion, the Post tab for detailed instructions on how to make your initial post, the Respond tab to review the requirements for responding to your peers, and the Evaluation tab for information on how this discussion will be graded.

      Add [Add overview] before instructions

      Change language to:

      Select Prepare to review key content for the discussion, Post for instructions on your initial post, Respond for peer response requirements, and Evaluation for grading information.

    1. he Complete tab for instructions on completing the assignment, the Submit tab to review the submission requirements, and the Evaluation tab for information on how this assignment will be graded

      This was changed from the language we provided, which doesn't include "the" and "tab".

      Should we go even more concise with this:

      Select Complete for assignment instructions, Submit for submission requirements, and Evaluation for grading information.

    2. For the specific grading criteria for this assignment, review the rubric at the bottom of this page.

      We don't want to say bottom of the page per wcag.

      Change to: Review the specific grading criteria for this assignment in the rubric.

  2. Jun 2026
    1. After reviewing the modules lessons, complete this quiz to check your knowledge on… Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.

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    1. This is a graded assignment. For details on the specific criteria for this assignment, review the assignment rubric located at the bottom of this assignment page.

      This is a graded assignment. For the specific grading criteria for this assignment, review the rubric at the bottom of this page.

    2. Use the following standards for your submission: 3-5 pages in length 1-inch margins Double-spaced 11- or 12-point font size Times New Roman, Arial, or Garamond font Submit your work to the assignment’s submission area as a Word or PDF document.

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    3. In this assignment, you will… Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum. Review the following details to successfully complete the assignment: First, lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Then, lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.

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    4. When you’re ready to begin, navigate to the Complete tab for detailed instructions on how to complete the assignment. Check the Submit tab to review the submission requirements. Lastly, visit the Evaluation tab for details on this assignment’s expectations and grading.

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      Select the Complete tab for instructions on completing the assignment, the Submit tab to review the submission requirements, and the Evaluation tab for information on how this assignment will be graded.

    1. When you’re ready to begin, navigate to the Post tab for detailed instructions on how to make your initial post. Check the Respond tab to review the requirements for responding to your peers. Lastly, visit the Evaluation tab for details on this discussion’s expectations and grading.

      Select the Post tab for detailed instructions on how to make your initial post, the Respond tab to review the requirements for responding to your peers, and the Evaluation tab for information on how this discussion will be graded.

    2. Expectations Your initial post is due Wednesday, at 11:59 PM ET; all discussion activities including your replies to classmates’ posts must be completed by Sunday, at 11:59 PM ET. Failure to meet the timeliness and quantity expectations will result in a point deduction.

      Delete.

      This is redundant - it's already in the assignment and when we make updates - it's in both places.

  3. May 2026
    1. Read and analyze at least two of your classmates’ original posts and acknowledge those who responded to you. Provide at least two thoughtful and courteous responses by Sunday, at 11:59 PM ET.

      Read your classmates’ original posts. Respond to at least two of them and acknowledge those who responded to you by Sunday at 11:59 PM ET.

    2. For your initial post in this discussion, address the discussion prompt and follow the discussion guidelines accompanying it. Your initial post is due by Wednesday, at 11:59 PM ET.

      Create your initial post in this discussion by Wednesday at 11:59 PM ET.

    3. To view the discussion rubric, select the Options (three dots) icon in the upper right and select Show Rubric. Review the Canvas Guide on finding discussion rubrics for additional details.

      Choose one.

      keep link in case the interface gets updated

    4. Prompt Suggestions Challenge a perspective: Do you agree or disagree with their stance on mandatory ethical hardware lifecycle practices? Why? Provide evidence or examples to support your view. Expand the discussion: Did their article present a new angle on e-waste that you hadn’t considered? How does it compare to your findings? Propose a solution: How could businesses better balance cost, efficiency, and sustainability when disposing of outdated hardware? Suggest an alternative strategy or best practice. Make it personal: Have you or someone you know experienced challenges with outdated hardware disposal? How did the organization handle it, and what lessons can be learned?

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    5. the most pressing ethical issue facing the tech industry today? How does this ethical concern impact various stakeholders, including users, companies, governments, and society as a whole? Provide examples to support your points. You may also want to consider: Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Then, lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.

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    2. Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.

      Delete the lorum ispum. Keep "In this module..."

    1. we covered… Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum. Consider… Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.

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    2. Submit your work to the assignment’s submission area

      Confirm that required deliverables are complete and in the correct file format. Submit your work to the assignment’s submission area.

      - file format?

    3. For your initial post in this discussion, address the discussion prompt and follow the discussion guidelines accompanying it. Your initial post is due by Wednesday, at 11:59 PM ET.

      For your initial post in this discussion, address the following by Wednesday at 11:59 PM ET.

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    4. On this page  Introduction  Module Outcomes

      Can we delete these? They aren't necessary. These are short sections and we don't need tabbed nav for them.

    5. Use the following standards for your submission: 3-5 pages in length 1-inch margins Double-spaced 11- or 12-point font size Times New Roman, Arial, or Garamond font

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    6. In this assignment, you will… Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur. Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.

      Delete

    7. Review the Canvas Guide on finding assignment rubrics for additional details.

      the rubric is on the page, which is stated here. why do we need to send them away? suggest deleting.

    8. Failure to meet the timeliness and quantity expectations will result in a point deduction.

      One late policy, one place

      remove this throughout.

      this isn't true for nursing - the policy should be in the syllabus language for the program, not in each individual assignment,

  4. Oct 2025
    1. Can you think of a team, business unit, or process in your organization that feels stable, even though change is constantly occurring? What keeps it in balance?

      This is a good reflection.

    2. Closing Thoughts Systems thinking isn’t just about connecting the dots. It’s about understanding why those dots behave the way they do. By learning to see steady states, manage stocks and flows, set boundaries intentionally, and surface governance dynamics, you gain the tools to shape systems and not just react to them.

      Let's talk about closing thoughts, summaries, etc. and ways to close lessons. Do we need a closing thought? AI does this, but it rarely feels valuable.

      This feels fluffy, but maybe it's because of the "It's not just X, it's X." structure.

    3. Stocks are the accumulations in a system, like the water in a pond, the money in a savings account, or the number of trained staff in an organization.

      This could be more effective if we're focused on weaving the example we introduced above throughout (intentionally). ie, take out pond analogy, for example, Stocks are,..

      Other examples of stocks include...

    4. Reflection prompt:

      Terms like "reflection prompt" and "discussion prompt" are id language, not ideal for students. How can we standardize this in our courses?

      Take a moment to reflect.??? Maybe an icon?

    5. Let’s begin with a natural example: a pond.

      This is conversational and uses an analogy. As someone 'learning' this, this is easy to understand and the visual adds to the learning experience here.

      good tone, good analogy, good use of an image

    6. Musikanski, L., Phillips, R., Bradbury, J, DeGraaf, J. & Bliss, C. L. (2021).

      Remove authors and and publisher. Simple include the text title and the chapter number and title. When only one chapter, don't use a subbullet. Place title and chapter in main bullet. Chapter first?

    7. For the exmplar, remove the text (stocks and flows) from the image. In general, we want to avoid this and this particular definition is phrased different from the one in the lesson.