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  1. Sep 2019
    1. Technological innovations regarding writing—the typewriter, the electric typewriter, the computer and all its word-processing tools—have been about removing impediments to publishing one’s words. But they all have, until now, stopped short of the actual act of publishing. The line between writing and talking has also been blurred, and we can imagine that the line between talking and thinking will be, too, at some point.

      The author describes why modern writing tools are having such a great impact on today's authors.

    2. And if its appearance on Twitter equals being published, do I even have the rights to it anymore?

      The author introduces a possible consequence of drafting essays on Twitter.

    3. A day or two later I assembled the tweets, revised them into a short essay, and sent them out for publication.

      The author describes the initial essay written using this Tweeting and revising process.

    4. the idea of writing in public seemed like it would force me toward a further understanding.

      The author discusses a possible benefit of drafting publicly.

    5. But could Twitter possibly be productive, beyond the basic act of publicizing what you have written and/or proving that you still exist?I hadn’t thought so, until I composed a short piece, something between a journal entry and a personal essay, in a series of tweets.

      The author introduces their personal experiment of drafting compositions on Twitter.

    6. Part of me thinks that having these scraps, these false starts, these isolated phrases, find their way into the public domain at the time they were written would have diminished the impetus of, say, Sylvia Plath or John Cheever, to do the work that has made so much of their ephemera fascinating in the first place.

      The author describes the value of writing privately and how writers in the past would have likely suffered from drafting on a live and public platform, like Twitter.

    7. The editor Ted Solotaroff wrote an essay called “A Few Good Voices In My Head,” in which he talked about managing this feeling of having an audience.

      The author introduces testimonial from a reliable source to expand upon the idea of writing live for an audience.

    8. Writing on Twitter brings the energy of a début to every phrase. You could say it imbues writing with a sense of performance

      The author introduces the first of many observations made from drafting their work as tweets.

    9. more and more, we think in public. For writers, this is an especially strange development.

      The author clearly defines the main topic of the article.

    1. One of the chief delights of living in the future, as we do, is that many of the world’s big, historic books are in the public domain and have been scanned by the Internet Archive, Project Gutenberg, or Google Books.

      The author introduces another benefit of reading online.

    2. But no. I was wrong. I arrived at these paragraphs …

      It seems unnecessary for the author to include these lengthy passages from the novel. These quotations pose a distraction from the author's main topic.

    3. But once the voice dictation became fluid, I quickly discovered I could highlight a cool passage and then dash off a paragraph of my own observations, dictating it like Henry James to his secretaries.

      The author introduces another benefit of digital reading.

    4. But what happens if we treat digital screens with the same romance, the same intensity of focus? Studies suggest that the cognitive distinctions go away: We learn just as much, and retain just as much, as we do on paper. As the journalist Ferris Jabr reported in Scientific American, the intellectual differences between paper and bytes may lie in our attitude towards them. When we believe that reading on a phone is equally “serious” as reading on paper, we internalize that reading just as deeply.

      The author provides evidence to support that digital reading can have as much of an impact on the reader as physical reading. Including the paraphrase from Ferris Jabr in Scientific American helps build credibility.

    5. Some new research into the nature of reading suggests an intriguing reason we remember more from print books than digital ones: It’s because we expect print to be intellectually engaging. We approach it with an orientation that “this is serious business,” in a way that we don’t when we read on a screen.

      I strongly relate to the author's point here. If I can get into a serious mindset prior to reading on a screen I have a much easier time paying attention and ignoring distractions.

    6. Swiping through such small chunks of text seemed less intimidating, and more suited to the ten-minute-long bursts of reading I’d fit into interstitial moments. Because I was carrying the book around all the time, I pulled it out all the time: On the subway, walking down the block to get groceries.

      The author explains another benefit of reading on their phone.

    7. But the truth is, a small page filled with relatively few words is what books often looked like, back in the 18th and 19th centuries. Check out this page from Conjectures on Original Composition, a book from 1759 by the English poet Edward Young:

      The author builds credibility here by explaining some of the historical background of books and their layouts, as well as how today's Kindles compare to 18th century texts.

    8. I tend to blow up the text into a big font, so a page has only a few hundred words on it. Friends would often peer at my screen and wonder, doesn’t it drive you nuts to read such a big book in such tiny driblets?

      I find it easier to concentrate on and understand a text if it is delivered to me in several smaller chunks as the author describes here.

    9. Today’s digital books do not give you the nearly-sensual, visual sense of “where” something is in a book. We remember bits of a book not just by the words, but how they looked on the page — where they were located, how our hands lay next to them.

      I am a visual learner, so I often remember phrases that I read by their location on the page.

    10. Bookmakers have spent hundreds of years patiently tweaking their design for maximum usability and loveliness.

      The author finally returns to the main topic of the text in this paragraph. The artistry involved in bookmaking is likely another reason why paper books are continuing to thrive in modern times.

    11. Or, as Tolstoy puts it in one lovely metaphor:

      The author includes a lot of information about War and Peace through both paraphrase and quotation which distracts the reader from the main point of the text.

    12. In 1846, Edgar Allan Poe complained that modern life made long, sustained attention impossible; one could only read in short chunks. “If any literary work is too long to be read at one sitting, we must be content to dispense with the immensely important effect derivable from unity of impression —for, if two sittings be required, the affairs of the world interfere, and every thing like totality is at once destroyed,” he wrote.

      I also enjoy completing stories in one sitting, often binge watching or reading media for hours at a time in attempt to fully envelope myself in the story.

    13. But as science-of-attention researchers like Gloria Marks have found, the bigger problem is self-interruption.

      I strongly connect this concept of "internal alerts" posing distractions as opposed to digital alerts. I tend to read academic texts on my laptop with my phone on silent, but I feel the urge to check my phone regardless.

    14. In this case, though, my back-and-forth flipping between browser and phone wasn’t eroding my ability to understand the book. On the contrary, it was reinforcing it

      As a theatre major, when I read plays for the first time I often find myself switching tabs from the script to google for quick inquiries that enhance my understanding. Knowing the basics of a time period, location, or culture is often critical in analyzing and understanding a script.

    15. I studied English at the University of Toronto back in the 80s and early 90s, where I discovered I really loved the compression of poems

      Here, the author reveals a piece of their education and background. An individual who majored in English is likely to have a much different opinion on the ease of reading and analyzing lengthy texts than someone with a differing education. This hints that the author's intended audience might be the college-educated public with interest in thoughtful interpretation of texts.

    16. I wanted to find out. So I did an experiment. I pulled out my iPhone and downloaded the hugest, weightiest tome I could think of. War and Peace.

      The author clearly informs the reader of the subject of the remainder of the text. Given the research cited in the introduction, the reader may assume that the text will include reliable research from external sources alongside the author's own opinions.

    17. I wanted to find out. So I did an experiment. I pulled out my iPhone and downloaded the hugest, weightiest tome I could think of. War and Peace.

      The author clearly informs the reader of the subject of the remainder of the text. Given the research cited in the introduction, the reader may assume that the text will include reliable research from external sources alongside the author's own opinions.

    18. If you assume, as Baron does, that in the decades to come books will migrate more and more to screens — screens that more suited to skimming and tweet-authoring than intensive reading

      Personally, I enjoy reading lengthy texts on paper, however the ease of flow of information on the internet causes reading shorter texts (news articles, short stories, etc.) to become much more convenient. In this case, I connect more with the prior paragraph's statement concerning the rising numbers of bookstores in the digital age.

    19. It may also be, as the scholar Anne Mangen has found in her work, that our minds are slightly befuddled by navigating ebooks. When you can’t as easily flip through a text, you feel more at sea.

      Here the author paraphrases Anne Mangen, which proves to the reader that ample research had been investigated prior to the composition of the text and builds credibility.

    20. In her new book Words Onscreen: The Fate of Reading in a Digital World, the linguist Naomi Baron surveyed the research and concluded that digital screens are pretty lousy environments for deep, immersive reading.

      It is helpful to the reader that the author cites research from another scholar. This helps the author build credibility.