wearing a hoodie and plaid pajama bottoms.
His attire seems as if his decision to kill Phobe was a spur of the moment thing that he decides before going to bed. I wonder if this murder was premeditated.
wearing a hoodie and plaid pajama bottoms.
His attire seems as if his decision to kill Phobe was a spur of the moment thing that he decides before going to bed. I wonder if this murder was premeditated.
Salt spray stung her skin. The wind whipped her bare legs. Her cheek rested on his sweatshirt as he cradled her against his chest.
The imagery is so intense here. You can practically hear, feel, smell, see, and taste the picture the author paints here.
strapped her into her pink booster seat.Save this ¶
It’s interesting that Phoebe’s dad took the precaution to put on her seatbelt considering he was about to kill her.
It was blustery and cold, especially for Florida. He didn’t zip her into a jacket or wrap her in a blanket. All the 5-year-old had on were shorts and her green cat T-shirt.
This paragraph is filled with telling details that allow the reader to imagine exactly what happened. Somehow knowing what Phoebe’s pajamas looked like makes what happened even more real to the reader.
And let go.
Although short and simple, this is such a chilling sentence. This entire introduction also acts as a hook as it makes the reader want to learn more about why this tragedy occurred.
Two months after the termination of the Tumblr teens,
The author returns to narration about Exposely the kids' lives after their Tumblrs were deleted.
This has not changed Tumblr’s mind about the banned users.
The author switches to exposition about Tumblr's policies for terminating blogs.
So in between Tumblr posts about life’s daily tragedies,
Back to the narrative about the kids' work on Tumblr.
Exposely had a major selling point for kids in a similar position to So-Relatable:
The author transitions to exposition about Exposely.
Still, they continued with Exposely, sometimes working 60 hours a week
The author returns to the story of Lilley, Greenfield, Hegstad, and, now, Miller.
But at the end of 2013, disaster:
This paragraph is an exposition about Google's behavior when it comes to AdSense.
Lilley and Greenfield felt the sting of a bad exchange a few times,
The author switches back to narration about Lilley and Greenfield.
umblr teens need to be sophisticated about making money,
Reeve switches back to exposition and explains monetization on social media.
In November 2012, Lilley and Greenfield were contacted by
The author continues the narration but switches it back to Lilley and Greenfield.
At Tumblr headquarters, I found myself in a contest of name-
The author returns to narration once again about her experience at Tumblr headquarters.
“Life hacks” are simple tips to make your life a bit better in the tiniest ways,
The author provides exposition about what exactly life hacks are.
I spent the day with them
The author transitions back to narration and describes her meeting with Lilley and Greenfield.
Tumblr teens call many of these jokes “relatable.” This is partially due to the success of Zach Lilley and Jeremy Greenfield,
The author continues the exposition by explaining how the term "relatable" when referring to internet posts was coined. This section also sets up the next in which the author discusses meeting with these kids.
Heartbreak is a recurring theme on these Tumblrs, so is skewering the chipper but futile commands of self-help.
The author switches back to exposition to continue talking about the type of posts teens share on Tumblr.
When this post appeared in my feed, I sent it to several friends who use a group chat at work: “How do they know?”
Reeve continues the narration by bringing what she just explained back to her life.
“Tumblr culture
Reeve transitions back to exposition to explain the nature of users of Tumblr and what their posts entail.
Tumblr headquarters in New York is brightly lit and slightly too warm,
Here, the author switches back to narrative and tells a story about her visit to the Tumblr headquarters.
When Tumblr launched in 2007, the simple layout—text, photo, quote, link, chat, audio, video—was its primary appeal:
The author continues her exposition, but moves on to explain Tumblr's appeal and setup to the reader.
Each social media network creates a particular kind of teenage star:
Here, Reeve switches to exposition about social media networks.
It had taken Pizza more than two years to reach this milestone. In late 2010 she had signed up for Tumblr,
Reeve begins with narrative about Pizza's journey on Tumblr.
When Pizza reached 100,000 followers on Tumblr, she posted a picture of a pizza box, takeout chicken wings, and an orange soda spread out on her bed: “pizza and chicken wings 2 celebrate.” One fan replied, “CONGRATULATIONS GIRL! YOU DESERVE IT!” Another: “MOTHER OF GOD 100K?!?!” An anonymous user was unimpressed: “you only have 100k because of ur url.” But Pizza shot that down: “uh no i had 93k before i got this url so excuse u.”
Reeve beings the essay with quotations that the reader is likely to find humorous. In this way, the reader's interest is piqued and they want to continue reading.
Around 540 million years ago,
Yong transitions back to narrative here and begins telling a story about animals that existed hundreds of millions of years ago.
In 2007
Here, Yong switches to exposition to provide the reader with background information that is relevant to what the essay is about.
n his lab at Lund University in Sweden
Yong begins the essay with a narrative about Nilsson's research.
“If you ask people what animal eyes are used for, they’ll say: same thing as human eyes. But that’s not true. It’s not true at all.”
Yong used a startling fact that most readers would not know as a way to draw the reader in and pique their interest.
He was patient and alert to detail, qualities ingrained in a sharpshooter trained to lie atop a building for hours, studying a window through a rifle scope. He interviewed school administrators, who confirmed what Peters had said.
All of the information in this section must have come from interviews.
“I was calling because, uh, my daughter’s a student at Plaza Vista Elementary School,” said the caller. “And uh, I’m concerned one of the parent volunteers there may be under, uh, under the influence or, uh, using drugs. I was, I just had to go over to the school and, uh, I was, I saw a car driving very erratically.”
This information must have come from the author’s research through the case file.
On a normal shift, Shaver could expect to handle barking-dog calls, noisy-neighbor calls, shoplifters and car burglaries, maybe a car wreck or two. He was a sniper on the Irvine Police SWAT team, armed with cutting-edge equipment that was the envy of other departments, but had never needed to pull the trigger. He was 40, a former NCIS investigator with the Marines.
The author probably researched this information about Shaver’s background.
Around campus, she was the mom everyone knew. She had a natural rapport with children. She could double them over with her impression of Applejack, the plucky country gal from the “My Little Pony” TV series. She would wait with them until their parents came to pick them up from the after-school program, but she couldn’t bring herself to enforce the dollar-a-minute late fines.
The information in this paragraph likely comes from interviews with other parents/staff at the school.
In Irvine, she found a master-planned city where bars and liquor stores, pawnshops and homeless shelters had been methodically purged, where neighborhoods were regulated by noise ordinances, lawn-length requirements and mailbox-uniformity rules. For its size, Irvine consistently ranked as America’s safest city. It was 66 square miles, with big fake lakes, 54 parks, 219,000 people, and 62,912 trees. Anxiety about crime was poured into the very curve of the streets and the layout of the parks, all conceived on drawing boards to deter lawbreaking. From the color of its lookalike homes to the height of the grass, life in Irvine was meticulously regulated. (Christina House / For The Times) For all that outsiders mocked Irvine as a place of sterile uniformity, she had become comfortable in its embrace. She had been beguiled by the reputation of the schools, which boasted a 97% college-admission rate. The muted beige strip malls teemed with tutoring centers. If neighboring Newport Beach had more conspicuous flourishes of wealth, like mega-yachts and ocean-cliff mansions, the status competition in Irvine — where so many of the big houses looked pretty much alike — centered on education. Plaza Vista was a year-round public school in a coveted neighborhood, and after six years she knew the layout as well as her own kitchen. The trim campus buildings, painted to harmonize with the neighborhood earth tones, suggested a medical office-park; out back were an organic garden, a climbing wall and a well-kept athletic field fringed by big peach-colored homes.
This information clearly comes from research on the author’s part.
. Kelli Peters handed them over. She told herself she had nothing to fear, that all he’d find inside her PT Cruiser was beach sand, dog hair, maybe one of her daughter’s toys. They were outside Plaza Vista School in Irvine, where she had watched her daughter go from kindergarten to fifth grade, where any minute now the girl would be getting out of class to look for her. Parents had entrusted their own kids to Peters for years; she was the school’s PTA president and the heart of its after-school program. Now she watched as her ruin seemed to unfold before her. Watched as the cop emerged from her car holding a Ziploc bag of marijuana, 17 grams worth, plus a ceramic pot pipe, plus two smaller EZY Dose Pill Pouch baggies, one with 11 Percocet pills, another with 29 Vicodin. It was enough to send her to jail, and more than enough to destroy her name. Her legs buckled and she was on her knees, shaking violently and sobbing and insisting the drugs were not hers. The cop, a 22-year veteran, had found drugs on many people, in many settings. When caught, they always lied.
The information included in the entire beginning to the article likely came from an interview. Goffard says things such as “She told herself she had nothing to fear…” which leads me to believe he interviewed Kelli Peters for this part.
Links to related information
I know that the whole point of this article was to dupe us, but I’m shocked that they actually made other web sites that make the same ridiculous claims so to appear as if the information they’ve presented is true.
Can using DHMO improve my marriage?
The lengths to which the author is going to to dupe us is getting quite ridiculous.
Dihydrogen Monoxide overdose in these patients can result in congestive heart failure, pulmonary edema and hypertension.
This is not common knowledge and, therefore, must be cited.
The incidence of gun violence seems to be rising at an alarming rate
If anyone was unsure about the accuracy of the claims the author has been making up until this point, now it is extremely clear that the author is duping us.
a fact that the raw numbers and careful research both bear ou
If there are “raw numbers” and “careful research” that prove the dangers of DHMO then why would the author not include them?
public awareness of the real and daily dangers of Dihydrogen Monoxide is lower than some think it should be.
Even if this is so, the author should provide statistics, results from studies, quotations, etc. so as to not be making claims that have no backing.
Research conducted by award-winning U.S. scientist Nathan Zohner concluded that roughly 86 percent of the population supports a ban on dihydrogen monoxide. Although his results are preliminary, Zohner believes people need to pay closer attention to the information presented to them regarding Dihydrogen Monoxide. He adds that if more people knew the truth about DHMO then studies like the one he conducted would not be necessary. A similar study conducted by U.S. researchers Patrick K. McCluskey and Matthew Kulick also found that nearly 90 percent of the citizens participating in their study were willing to sign a petition to support an outright ban on the use of Dihydrogen Monoxide in the United States.
Even if what the author is saying wasn’t so obviously false, he is not including the proper citations to make his claims even slightly plausible.
Dihydrogen Monoxide (DHMO) is a colorless and odorless chemical compound, also referred to by some as Dihydrogen Oxide, Hydrogen Hydroxide, Hydronium Hydroxide, or simply Hydric acid
By using all of these technical names for something as simple as water, it is clear that the author is trying to make the reader believe he/she knows what they are talking about.
Take advantage of your education and learn something.
Although it may be easier to take the lazy way out, it will only wind up hurting you – not anyone else – in the long run.
Critical thinkers: Try to understand and then describe what someone claims; Determine the merit of those claims by applying criteria; and Rationally justify their criteria (explain their reasoning process).
If you were to take one thing away from the information presented on this page, it should be this. Knowing what critical thinking consists of will be helpful in almost any learning situation.
One of the main purposes of a good education is to learn to think critically. Critical thinking leads to one of the highest forms of human knowing.
This is something many people struggle with – myself included! Although it may be easier to simply take what the author is saying and replace a couple of words with some synonyms, it will only wind up hurting you in the long run as you will not really have comprehended the information…not to mention it’s plagiarizing!
Most of all, if you believe and duplicate what you read and hear others say, then you might be a dupe.
I find that it is fairly common for people to automatically believe whatever they see on the internet. The only way to not look like a dupe and to avoid including incorrect information in your own work is to make sure you fully grasp the concept at hand and fact check information using reliable sources.
R U a dupe?
The author uses an interesting style of writing in these tutorials. Many of the things he says are witty, which I personally enjoyed as I found myself better retaining the material and not becoming bored.
Duff was struck by how thoroughly the Irvine police had investigated a crime in which the victim had suffered no physical harm. They had put 20 detectives on the case against Kent and Jill Easter at one time or another, and the lead investigator had spent six months on it exclusively.
I am sure the Easter's smugness and their attempts to ruin the reputation of a well-respected member of the community played a part in their perseverance..
Easter said it just didn’t occur to him to look for her texts. “I had no idea they were in
This definitely seems like a lie. Anyone who suspected a spouse of cheating and had access to their phone would look for evidence.
“I mean, she has ‘Fifty Shades of Grey’ on her cellphone, correct?”
I was confused why Duff asked him this question. Was it to confuse him or make a comparison between the book and the "salacious" texts on Jill Easter's phone?
He had an air of bloodless detachment that came across as arrogance.
He seems to be no better than his wife which makes his story, that she manipulated him. less believable.
Her tone was growing angrier and angrier. “I’m not going to be fine, do you understand me? Don’t just put your head in the sand! This is the moment, this is when I needed someone and you turned your back on me! And I will not survive this!”
This is more evidence of Jill Easter's vindictive and manipulative ways.
Into the story, on the very morning the search warrants were served, stumbled a strapping off-duty firefighter — Jill Easter’s married paramour.
This sounds more like a soap opera or the Real Housewives of Orange County! It is incredible that she was cheating on her husband in the middle of all of this!
When wronged, the heroine burned for revenge and applied her patient, formidable intelligence to the task of exacting it.
This sounds eerily like Jill Easter,,,art imitating life?
eters, who had volunteered for years without controversy, was badly shaken. She worried how the attention might affect the school.
Peter's reaction is in sharp contrast to Jill Easter who only cares about herself, threatening to sue the school. This perpetuates the greedy and litigious reputation of lawyers.
He would race up to her, proud of his drawings.
Peter's was obviously well-liked by the children. Could this whole situation be the result of jealousy?
ut the weird thing was she never changed her facial expression. It was always the same weird smile.”
Sign of something sinister?
She had quit her practice to become a stay-at-home mom in Irvine, and by appearance her daily routine was unexceptional: play dates at the community pool, sushi with girlfriends, hair salons, Starbucks, yoga. He was logging 60-hour workweeks as a partner in one of Orange County’s biggest law firms, with a 14th-floor office overlooking Newport Beach.
Paints the picture of a seemingly idyllic lifestyle revolving around the family.
The couple had three young children, a cat named Emerald and a closetful of board games. On their nightstand were photos of their wedding in Sonoma wine country
This is painting the picture of a typical wealthy suburban family.
The drugs were easy to find. They were sticking out of the pouch behind the driver’s seat.
It seems unlikely that someone who is guilty would hide the drugs in such an obvious spot, particularly since she has a child who regularly rides in the back seat and would have seen the drugs.
This paints her as a peaceful, well-liked presence around campus.
I like how he started it off with the story of the crime and then backtrack
“I hope someone stops me.”
This story is devastating. There were so many warning signs that were overlooked and ignored. John even asked someone to stop him.
There are implications for child safety. This is due to the family’s history of prior reports ... and to the father’s history of child abuse and neglect, DCF concluded on June 7, 2013.
Why was Phoebe not removed from his custody if this is so?
As usual, Michelle dropped the charges
Why does she keep dropping the charges??
Phoebe was almost nonverbal, said Linda, 50. She would just stand still and stare
This is yet another warning sign that was ignored.
Five days later, an updated report dismissed the concerns because John and Michelle were in counseling.
Phoebe was failed by the system. She fell through the cracks time and time again. There were so many red flags, yet nothing was ever done.
John’s father, John Jonchuck Sr. , was a hard-drinking construction worker who got arrested for beating John’s mom and lost his license after too many DUIs. He moved away when John was 3.
This establishes the cycle of abuse.
In St. Petersburg, a police car pulled behind and followed, lights off.
Did the police follow because the car was speeding or because they knew what he was going to do?
She did this even as she told doctors and new friends in Missouri that he was a drug addict who had abandoned his daughter. Meanwhile, Rod and Kristy spoke to Gypsy pretty often. They always planned to visit, but “for one reason or another, it would never work out,” Rod said. { "id": 9461759 } Share On facebook Share On facebook Share Share On pinterest Share On pinterest Share On pinterest Share On pinterest Pin Share On email Share On email Email Share On copy Share On copy Copy Link Share On facebook Share On facebook Share Share On pinterest Share On pinterest Share On pinterest Share On pinterest Pin { "id": 945445518 } Rod continued to send, as he always had, $1,200 a month in child support to a New Orleans bank account.
Dee Dee created an effective narrative about Gypsy’s father to gain even more sympathy from people.
The story of a mother and disabled daughter left without anything proved irresistible to local press.
This relates to the reading in part 1.1 of this assignment: the purpose of storytelling is to evoke an emotional response. Dee Dee and Gypsy’s story about losing everything caused people to help their cause.
It turned out that, in fact, Gypsy hadn’t used a wheelchair from the moment she left her house a few days earlier. She didn’t need one. She could walk just fine, there was nothing wrong with her muscles, and she had no medication or oxygen tank with her either. Her hair was short and spiky, but she wasn’t bald — her head had simply been shaved, all her life, to make her appear ill. She was well-spoken, if shaken by recent events. The disabled child she’d long been in the eyes of others was nowhere to be found. It was all a fraud, she told the police. All of it. Every last bit. Her mother had made her do it.
This is called Munchausen by proxy syndrome.
So when Gypsy confided in Aleah, it was through a secret Facebook account, under the name Emma Rose.
Apparently she did not have the mind capacity of a 7-year-old if she had a secret Facebook account to go behind her mother’s back…
As Pinegar understood it, he'd never sent them a dime, not even when Dee Dee and Gypsy had lost everything in Hurricane Katrina.
Dee Dee doesn’t work and doesn’t receive help from Gyspy’s father…how is she supporting herself and her daughter?
she’d had to flee her abusive family with Gypsy. It was her own father, Gypsy’s grandfather, who’d been the last straw; he’d burned Gypsy with cigarettes.
This establishes a pattern of abuse in the family, which often is perpetuated in the cycle of abuse.