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  1. Mar 2024
    1. TikTok has roughly 170 million U.S. users, and its cult-like following has prompted politicians to use the app themselves to spread their messages and connect with younger voters (even politicians who believe TikTok is a national security threat).

      Explanation

    2. Trump’s opposition to the bill could be a litmus test of his sway on a party that he’s largely recast in his image, if supporters begin to peel off and force a showdown with the Republicans driving the bill.

      Explanation

    3. Suddenly, the most pressing question in the policy world is an issue barely on the radar a week ago: What happens to TikTok?

      Intro paragraph to know what will be talked about

    1. The top issue for voters in the Wall Street Journal poll was immigration: 20 percent picked it when asked for the issue that most comes to mind for their 2024 presidential vote, more than the economy (14 percent) or a

      Starts off with a video, and gives more explanations.

    2. Despite months of good economic news and a long-shot “soft landing” from post-pandemic inflation, Americans can’t seem to shake the f

      Again another explanation

    3. Voters continue to be troubled by Biden’s age and perceived acuity. Forty-five percent of those who responded in the New York Times/Siena poll said that Biden’s age “is such a problem that he is not capable of handling the

      No subheadings but rather gives explanations and a video to help further understand

    1. Classic rock will always live on as a genre. The big, buzzing, riff-heavy music that brought giant speakers to stadiums and let six-string players wail with booming drummers and banshee vocalists will live on the radio and in the hearts of music lovers for the rest of time.

      Short intro paragraph

    1. Look, the ’80s are back in style in every way, and that’s totally cool. It means pop music is more bearable than it’s been in a long time.

      Brief intro paragraph

    1. What Are the Potential Causes of Emotional Neglect?

      Second main subject, there was no lead in from the past subject to transition. It is strictly ended. But the bold lettering lets me know the next subject is being talked about by bold lettering

    2. Almost 1 in 5 adults globally may have been neglected as a child, and it most likely happened unintentionally (Stoltenborgh et al., 2013).

      Starts out with some pre information to the blog we're about to read

    1. And the gains in the insured population don’t yet reflect the more than 17 million people who, according to health research group KFF, states have removed from their Medicaid rolls over the last year after Biden ended a pandemic-era requirement that states keep people continuously covered in Medicaid. The data is not yet clear on how many of those people have transitioned to other health plans, like employer-sponsored insurance or Obamacare plans, and how many are now uninsured.

      No conclusion to this blog

    2. He set a goal of getting 70 percent of the country vaccinated by July 4, 2021, while amping up non-pharmaceutical interventions like a nationwide mask requirement on public transit.

      Two more subheadings

    3. While the original 2016 moonshot focused on making a decade of scientific progress on cancer prevention and treatment in five years, Moonshot 2.0 has broader aims.

      Two more subheadings

    4. Voters can expect President Joe Biden to play up his success in ending the pandemic, fighting for abortion rights and lowering drug prices in his State of the Union address this week.

      This section gives pre-information for the blog

    5. Abortion accessPartial SuccessCancerJury's OutCovid-19Partial SuccessDrug overdosesMostly FailedDrug pricesJury's OutTrust in public healthMostly FailedUninsured ratesPartial Success

      Starts out with the main topics it would like to talk about

    1. Such ideas are now being repeated by influential pundits. Christopher Rufo, who works at the Manhattan Institute, a think-tank, last year fanned the flames of alleged race-based indoctrination in schools; in new Twitter threads, he has cast schools as a major locus for sexual abuse. Analysts at more-moderate think-tanks are now beginning to entertain similar critiques.

      There is no end conclusion to this blog

    2. 2. The parents-rights framing has a long history.

      Another subject line, however the first subject did not lead into this one. It simply ends and heads into the next subject. However it is clear because a huge header will clarify one subject has ended and another has started.

    3. A raft of legislation in the statehouses taking aim at LGBTQ students this year draws from the newly ascendent discourse about parents’ rights, curriculum transparency, and schools purportedly indoctrinating students via critical race theory and other ideas.

      This section is pre-information

    1. as an attempt to please others, which we will discuss later. Freeze This is an effective technique when fight or flight are not an option (d’Andrea et al., 2013).

      from flight to fight, there is no lead into the next subject, it simply ends and moves on to the next

    2. 3 Lesser-Known Responses to Trauma

      Next big subject, again no lead into next subject, it ends again and goes right into next subject. Big bold heading helps us know this

  2. Feb 2024
    1. But, I think it [would help] a lot if ... the professorswould tell you before each paper what exactly [they wanted]

      The rubric and instructions you give help make this a lot easier

    2. these students are inexperienced in writing for the academic audience. They struggle to envision the person to whom theyare writing their papers and cannot make the subtle adjustments inaudience that different disciplines require.

      I like that with this portfolio, it's clear who our audience is which makes it less anxious about what voice we need to use

    3. I was really getting frustrated with just feeling that every one ofmy papers was the same, in a way. I just had to focus on all thatwe had been studying and choose some very small minutething to focus on and to try to prove that everything we'd everlooked at fit into the theory or idea

      This is exactly what I think when it comes to writing a paper

    4. We who teach need to know how our gradingpractices affect our students and how our students interpret the gradeswe give them.

      That's why it's more peaceful knowing that this assignment is graded on the specific material we choose to do and if we choose to meet that criteria, it's on us for our grades.

    5. Many teachers currently use grades to rank order students' writing performance in comparison with others'

      My transcript for high school made it clear that I was ranked 51/52 because of my grades. It really did compare me to every other student in my grade

    6. None of these students mentioned grades as a useful tool for assessment

      Grades do nothing but tell us whether we did good, mediocre, or bad. It's the help we get beforehand that really helps students further their writing skills

    1. A perspective would be the moral landscape of abortion. My voice isthe person writing this. The point of view is the place where you standand look, where you're coming from, your preconceptions-whetherI'm a born-again Christian, a Catholic .... ''\-'hat I'm going to say aboutit, that's my thesis.

      This makes it a lot more clear

    2. "It depends on whom you're speaking to. You can speak to a group of historians and use one voice. Ifyou'respeaking to a group of students you might use another." In other words,"voice" may indeed be a construct shaped in part by the demands of therhetorical situation,

      Like this portfolio we're doing, we change our voice from formal to conversation with a friend

    3. Are we training our students for the academy or for the workplace? Rarely do we consider theoption of doing both.

      I thought with the multiple different programs, that both would be the answer.

    4. Young writers think that difficult ideas must be expressed ina difficult way. They seem to think it's almost a necessity.

      If this is a constant theme amongst writers, why is it not taught differently to keep this from happening?

    5. In our lab we have seen research papers that amount to nothing more than a string of quotations from barely read sources.

      I see how using research and turning it into a conversation can be more beneficial

    6. we would be tying students' writing to their cognitive development.

      I haven't looked but I hope the portfolios for class are a way of tracking our progress in writing

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    1. it would be dif-ficult to argue that one perspective is right and theothers wrong. One perspective does not necessarilyrepresent greater efficacy in writing.

      Why is does perspective have a say? Shouldn't there be a general baseline? Wouldn't that be more beneficial to the students?

    2. 1. A good paper has a strong, logical overall organization that is clear to the reader, so the reader knows what toexpect.2. I personally like when a writer adds something to their writing which shows some personality (humor, wit, ideals,values). I guess it depends on the piece, but I have read various types of writing that include some of the author’svoice.3. Good writing is clear and easy to understand. Readers don’t have to struggle to get what the author is saying.4. A lot of students write exactly how they talk and it doesn’t make any sense—writers need to be able to useappropriate verb tenses and other proper grammar.5. Good writing shows a sense of audience. To effectively communicate your message, you need to know whoyou’re writing for.6. A lot of juicy verbs help make writing good.7. Good writing stays focused on the main idea/topic throughout.8. Good writing is concise, using an economy of words. It avoids repetition and redundancy.9. Good writing has a strong introduction that states the topic and a strong conclusion that sums up or reiteratesthe important points.10. The paper should have a flow. If the paper jumps from one idea to another, it makes it hard to read, just like apiece of music that doesn’t transition well and then loses the melody.11. Good writers avoid clichés.12. Writers shouldn’t try to write about too big of a topic—they need to choose little moments to describe orspecific topics to write about.13. A variety of sentence types engages the reader (simple, complex, dependent clauses)—you want to avoid toomany short choppy sentences.14. Adjectives tend to clutter up a text—good writers use very few adjectives.15. Some kids’ writing is too chatty for formal reports and research papers—voice in writing has to be appropriate tothe purpose for writing.16. Writing that is too structured (like a five-paragraph essay) tends to be boring.17. Writing needs to be free of errors in conventions or mechanics—punctuation, grammar, and spelling affect thepiece overall.18. A good writer surprises the reader with unexpected moves. This can be accomplished by using metaphors/similes, unusual vocabulary, mixing different modes of discourse (from the vernacular to the academic), varyingsentence structures, employing humor.19. Really, it all depends on the type of writing—every type of writing requires different things to be good.20. Good writing contains details, elaboration, support, whether narrative or expository, enough elaboration to helpthe reader paint a picture in their mind or (for expository) provide sufficient support to explain ideas.21. I think writing needs to have complete sentences to be considered good.22. Writing is good when you can see critical thinking on the part of the writer.23. Good writing is like good thinking—fresh, clear, and honest. It artfully invites the reader into an idea or imagewith a quiet authority that cannot be resisted.24. You need to have a point! Don’t write just to fill up a page.25. You don’t see a lot of adverbs in good writing—adverbs are a sign the verbs are weak.26. Good writing must conform to a genre, be that fiction or nonfiction; be it a memoir, historical fiction, an e-mail,an essay, a poem, an article, and so on.27. Good writing shows instead of tells.28. Good writing is descriptive, with figurative language, and compels the reader to make vivid mental images.29. Good writing gives you the impression that time was spent crafting the piece.30. It’s good when the writer is obviously knowledgeable about the subject.31. Accurate word choice is key—the words have to be chosen precisely to convey the author’s meaning.

      If no one teacher is really consistent with what they feel is good writing, how are people in the school system really going to know what good writing is

    3. This type of lan-guage obscures the inevitable role of subjectivity inwriting assessment. In fact, what one person thinks isgood writing is not necessarily what another persondoes

      Which I feel also sets us up for failure to an extent. If I ask someone for they're thoughts on my paper and they thought it was amazing, then when I go to someone else, they dislike it, and the odds of whether my teacher will like it is now up in the air. No one in high school asked what the teacher thought was good writing or what their expectations are.

    4. Literacy teachers have long understood that readingcomprehension relies on the reader’s constructionof meaning

      If each experience is unique, then why is grading based on strictly one thing?

    1. In school, many students learn to fear grades,develop low self-esteem, dislike learning, and resist authority.

      not a good learning environment and yet it's still used

    2. place all people in competition with each other,undermining their ability to trust, so threats to such teaching comefrom grade-addicted students, from peers insecure about change, fromparents who want their children to "win" the race to the top

      Always about who's better and who's not

    3. Gradesare curved, for example, when too many succeed, or points are subtracted from a hundred, a so-called "perfect score" that bears littlerelation to the sum of what may be learned.

      Way different in college than it is in high school, this specific assignment actually gives out specific criteria to meet, then is graded on whether you decided to meet the criteria... so now the grades are on us!

    4. n thetwenty years since I started developing this approach, I can count onone hand the writers who did not respond and ended up getting lessthan a quality grade.

      Showing huge improvement from the negative grading scale/process

    5. traditional grading, whichachieves "objectivity" by isolating traits, holding them constant, andassessing all the same way,

      expects the same from every student

    6. Unlike preventive/ corrective teaching and assessment, which identify what anentire age group should know and then "cover" all of it whether or notstudents retain it

      No room to really learn

    7. The problems writers cansolve and remember how to solve are the problems they can spot ontheir own or recognize once they've been pointed out.

      Allows room for personal improvement

    8. ncouraging them to comment first onstrengths (to build confidence), to ask nonjudgmental questions afterthat (to learn where to add information or to clarify unclear parts), andfinally, near the end of the discussion, to offer one or two specific suggestions for improvement, framing their comments constructively andtrusting the writer herself to decide which suggestions to use andwhich to ignore.

      Correlates with the "really responding to other students writing" reading... Once again leaving more positive encounters with writing

    9. Theystart by noting grammatically and mechanically correct passage

      Much more positive way of thinking, helps leave a safe space and less anxiety around writing

    10. They look at effort, quality of writing, and progress made,and they offer suggestions for improvement at the point of need.

      Allows room for more positive encounters with writing

    11. Because those "objective" dataconvinced me that most students can't write well, I did not see howthe grades I assigned forced capable learners to fail.

      She's aware that all students are capable, but understands that the school system doesn't allow room for more help or different learning

    12. . It isalso exclusionary, pitting students against each other in such a waythat all but a few will eventually lose, and it sorts them into tracks thatlimit access to advanced study for all but a few

      You're either considered stupid or smart when none of it really shows your level of intelligence. Teachers don't take the initiative to teach differently to really see growth in a student

    13. Deficiency-focused testing leads to teaching that is reductive, preventive/corrective, lockstep, and structuredto cover content for everyone at the same time, at the same speed

      Noting that school is only meant for one type of learner

    14. I hadlittle impact on the lives of others, whose continued poor writingwould limit them to entry-level jobs.

      A teacher acknowledging that grading on scale of failure has a huge negative impact