GLP-1, or glucagon-like peptide 1, is generated by enteroendocrine cells in the small intestine in response to food in the GI system and promotes satiety by interacting with the hypothalamus
separate these into multiple sentences and explain
GLP-1, or glucagon-like peptide 1, is generated by enteroendocrine cells in the small intestine in response to food in the GI system and promotes satiety by interacting with the hypothalamus
separate these into multiple sentences and explain
gluconeogenesis and glycogenolysis in order to release glucose into the bloodstream and raise blood glucose levels.
separate into a few sentences, explain each step by step
Glucagon works via a G protein receptor
by binding to receptor?? how?
meaning
remove
Golgi
Golgi what?
ER
full name please
To do this,
to do what? full complete sentences please
even if it is in high amounts within our bloodstream
even if.... transporters.... should start this way
Anabolic peptide hormone
means what?
Common properties of insulin include:
do not start section like this. form an introduction, background information, where are we in the process?
-THE MORE YOU KNOW- (ACCEPT WITH MINOR EDITS)
This entire GLUT section needs to be reformatted. more clearly explained. step by step, explain the tissues, the definitions, etc.
alpha-helices with two domains N-domain and C-domain, and when the ligand binds
what is this? explain
also,
remove
Also,
remove
We will focus on this type of transporter in this class.
in this class?? this is a textbook
different physiological conditions
vague
Glucose transporters are proteins with many different types
start sentence with this . move this sentence to the beginning of this paragraph
promote
promote? how is this promoted. I dont think this is a good descriptive word for this phenomena
surface of the cell
basal side of cell membrane?
that can be found
remove
to tissues and different target cells.
through tissues, then to....
from circulation
via bloodstream?
not relying on a concentration gradient,
I dont think this is necessary to include. could throw readers off.
ound on most cells
on what tissues?
responsible for this:
Responsible for what? complete sentences please
Four different transmembrane transporters found on different cells are responsible for this:
Where are we now? there is no clear introduction to where we are in this process. There is no diagram indicating what topic we are on. The way this chapter is written is quite difficult to follow
our
Please not in first person this is a textbook
measuring the amount of hemoglobin that is glycated, meaning how much of our hemoglobin is bound to glucose.
What measures the amount of hemoglobin? very vague and unclear here
he way we physiologically do this is
maybe "the way this phenomena occurs..." "this occurs via..."
requires the body to sense blood sugar levels quickl
What does this mean? the body senses blood sugar and insulin levels?
Insulin is used throughout the body to increase cellular uptake of glucose to fuel cellular functions as well as increasing glycogenesis in the liver and skeletal muscle when Blood Glucose concentrations are high.
start by saying when blood glucose concentrations are high....
I agree this needs to be separated into paragraphs to explain the phenomena, the diagram should be here just to aid in the understanding
Before eating, a healthy individual’s blood glucose ranges from 70 to 99 mg/dl and up to 140 mg/dl after eating.
Why are these bolded?
brain consumes most of it
make full sentences please also why is this bolded?
One type of cell are the ɑ-cells, or Alpha cells, which aid in the secretion of glucagon. When blood sugar is low, glucagon is released by the Alpha cells, which in turn cause the liver to release glucose into the bloodstream. Other cells include 𝜷-cells, or Beta cells, for the secretion of Insulin when glucose levels in the bloodstream are too high. Insulin triggers the production of glucose into glycogen so that the sugar can be stored for later use.
define glucagon, and more thorough explanation of this process- step by step
acidity of the duodenum
why is this important?
exocrine functionality,
define in context of pancreatic function
During embryonic development, the pancreas is formed from two separate masses (the dorsal and ventral pancreas), which converge to form the full pancreas. The dorsal pancreas develops into the body and tail of the pancreas, while the ventral pancreas develops into the head of the pancreas. All regions are responsible for housing vital cell types that synthesize and secrete various hormones and peptides through a ductal system that runs throughout the body of the pancreas.
consider having this paragraph first in this section. or taken out completely
directly connected
i think a better descriptive word for this can be used
for efficient release of hormones to the body.
separate sentence
posterior to the stomach and liver, superior to the kidneys, and left of the gallbladder
maybe include a diagram
Beta cells make insulin. This peptide hormone is released when the concentration of glucose is high.
This sentence should be formatted better. talk more about the beta cells here, define them as the alpha cells are suggested to define. where did the peptide hormone sentence come from? please set up the sentences first. for example... another islet of Lange .... is ..... this cell is defined as..... is responsible for...
Alpha cells are responsible for synthesizing glucagon, a peptide hormone secreted into the bloodstream when the concentration of glucose is low.
this sentence needs to be moved around. first define then state what it is responsible for
Fat-soluble toxins are converted into a water-soluble for
where?
the blood of alcohol,
blood of alcohol?
Amylases are enzymes that break down starches into simple sugars, while peptidases break down peptide chains into amino acids. Nucleases break down nucleotides into nucleic acids and lipases break down fats to fatty acids.
i think this would be better as a bulleted, definition list
This sodium bicarbonate can also be secreted directly into the bloodstream.
this would result in what?
cell/tissue
I think this should be a full sentence no "/" because this is a textbook, not a note taking sheet
the pancreas does it all!
I think this paper should have a more scientific and informational tone
wide range of endocrine, exocrine, and paracrine functionality
What does this look like in the context of pancreatic function?
which promotes glucose intake from the bloodstream – and glucagon – which promotes glucose release into the bloodstream. The opposing actions of the two hormones, insulin and glucagon, keeps physiological blood-sugar levels at a homeostatic state
I think its important to elaborate on this section or take it out all together
The primary function of the pancreas is to regulate the release of insulin
responsible for keeping homeostatic glucose regulation -- I think it might be interesting to include that there is evidence of influence of the brain stem having activity on the pancreas
by a rather small organ called the pancreas.
Please take out the word "rather", use a metric measurement and also location is important
it could have disastrous consequences on our bodies.
I would like to see at the end of this sentence "which will be discussed later in the chapter"
Hormone Classification Categories:
hormone classification categories should be written out in paragraph form
Hormones can be classified in a number of different ways. One of those ways is by the proximity of their target cells or tissues, or in other words, by the type of cell signaling (Fig.1). Endocrine hormones travel to their targets through blood plasma over long distances. Paracrine hormones travel short distances to local targets. The target cells of autocrine hormones are the cells that secrete them. Exocrine hormones are unusual, in that they are secreted outside of an organism. One notable example of exocrine hormones are pheromones, which elicit responses from other organisms. These hormones are also called ectohormones.
signaling types should be in the format of bullet points each signaling types should include more information