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  1. Sep 2017
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    1. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      Generation of embryoid bodies and spheroids just got better!

      Title case

    2. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      H3 AggreWell™: Reproducible, Uniform Embryoid Bodies

      I'm wondering if you can't just link the titles. This is not a standard element, but should be very easy for the designers (and may save "space")

    3. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      The new AggreWell™ plates offer the same ease-of-use, uniformity and reproducibility as the 1st-generation AggreWell plates, and now also feature improved imaging characteristics, and a lower price to help your research dollars go further.

      Long sentence, can probably be split in two

    4. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      period of

      just "available for a limited time"

    5. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      older,

      Maybe just "the 1st-generation..."

      I am not sure if describing them as "older" is the best way to go

    6. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      arn More

      Formatting lost on the links, this can be fixed by the designers.

    7. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      AggreWell™400 AggreWell™800

      Spacing will need to be adjusted, but the designer will take care of that

    8. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      ell

      Trademark

    9. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      ell

      Missing trademark

    10. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      AggreWell™ plates with microwells

      This reads a little weird. Do you need to say "with microwells"?

    11. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      :

      I don't know if there are any guidelines, but the colon looks weird to me in an H1. This may be a personal preference more than anything...

    12. bandyn 06 Sep 2017
      H1

      You can remove the tag labels here unless they help you. They aren't needed by the designers.

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