Be consistent in words and framing. Edit: Bus service that connects Detroit and surrounding suburbs.

Be consistent in words and framing. Edit: City bus that services Detroit.

Minimize unnecessary/redundant words and descriptions. Edit: delete "free".

Avoid misleading and false statements. Getting around Detroit takes stamina, hours on end, and is certainly much more difficult than many people think. Edit: delete this absurd false sentence.

Avoid misleading and false statements. Detroit by transit is by no measure in relative or absolute terms "efficient." Edit: delete "efficient".

Minimize use of gerunds for readability. Edit: to navigate the array of Detroit transit and transportation.

Minimize unnecessary/redundant words. Edit: delete "simple".

Avoid unspecific or unclear advice. "So check both systems when planning your trip" is likely meaningless to anyone who does not already ride SMART and DDOT, and for anyone who uses SMART and DDOT, we'd already know that through our use of Transit app and our rider experience. Edit: delete this tip.

Be consistent in formatting. It looks like this colon is not in bold, while the other colons are in bold. Edit: make colon bold.

Use words that have fewer syllables and are "plain language". Edit: replace "operates" with "runs."

Eliminate unnecessary words and description. Many apps are free to download. Edit: Delete "(free to download)".

Eliminate unnecessary words and descriptions. Edit: delete "As...6,".

Mininize gerunds for readability. Edit: replace "Riding" with "Ride".

Be consistent in wording and descriptions. We ride DDOT, we ride the People Mover, and we "use" the QLine? Edit: Replace "Using" with "Ride".

Use words that are precise, short in syllables, and accurate. Edit: replace "breakdown" to "list".

Avoid unnecessary words and description. Any bus service in any country or city, especially that between a city and a major airport, has a schedule! Edit: Delete ", with...day."

Be consistent in descriptions. What kind of service is DAX? It's bus service, and this description omits that central info. Edit: "provides direct service" to "is direct bus service"

Avoid misleading or unnecessary words or framing. The D2A2 is the only way to get between Ann Arbor and Detroit without a car, not "one of the easiest ways"! Edit: Delete this entire portion "making...a car."

Avoid misleading and vague words. Uber and Lyft, and scooters, are not considered "transit" by most people's definition. Edit: replace "transit" with "transportation" or "Additional options to get around Detroit".

Eliminate unnecessary words. Most people know the scooters are "shared" (and "shared" itself is a misnomer, corporate-speak for "short-term rental"). Edit: delete "shared".

Use precise and accurate wording. Edit: replace "like" with "such as".

Keep sentences short for readability. Divide this long sentence into two sentences. Edit: "Pay online, within the Transit app, or at the station. Then follow the instructions to pick up a bike at any one of MoGo's stations."

Avoid misleading words. "with the Transit app" sounds like you can use the Transit app like you use Apple Pay app. Edit: "within the Transit app".

Avoid inaccuracy in description. MoGo is neither versatile nor flexible. Edit: "a form of active transportation".

Update for current status. The People Mover has been back up since May 6. Edit: Delete these two sentences.

Avoid normative judgments. What is ideal for one person is not ideal for a different person, or what is ideal for one day is not ideal for a different day. Edit: Replace "Ideal" with "Useful".

Eliminate unnecessary/redundant words for readability, and be consistent in describing services. No pass is needed for the QLine, so don't note it here either. Edit: Delete "-- no fare or passes needed".

Eliminate unnecessary/redundant words for readability. Edit: delete "completely".

Eliminate unnecessary/redundant words for readability, and be consistent in describing services. No pass is needed for the QLine, so don't note it here either. Edit: Delete "-- no fare or passes needed".

Eliminate unnecessary/redundant words for readability. Edit: Delete "multiple" as this is evident from the next words.

Eliminate unnecessary words especially adverbs for readability. There's no such thing as half-free or a quarter-free! Edit: Delete "completely".

Misleading and not accurate when the QLine runs only 3.3 miles not the full stretch of Woodward. Edit: "runs a short stretch along Woodward Avenue"

Misleading and vague: Woodward is the main corridor past the 3.3 miles of the QLine. Edit: "along 3.3 mile of the city's main corridor"

Minimize gerunds for readability. Edit: "when you plan"

Hyperlink overhang past parentheses. Edit: Correct so hyperlink is not hanging off past the parentheses.

Minimize gerunds for readability. Edit: "to travel"

Eliminate normative judgments. "Ideal" according to the riders? Doubt it if you ask any riders! Edit: "useful"

Improve structure by prioritizing the noun before a string of adjectives. Edit: "all students at public, private, and charter schools"

Omit unnecessary marks to minimize distractions and inadvertently raising doubt of the reader. Edit: remove quotation marks.

Clarify where in the world does a person buy or receive "a pass"? This info is entirely absent. Edit: "pass you can buy within the Transit app or in the Token app."

Minimize gerunds for readability. Edit" "when you board"

Improve to keep people's options simple. If you're only recommending one app, and that's the most accurate and reliable app, no need to suggest "apps like". Edit: "using the Transit app"

Correct for confusing verbiage as it currently reads "stop using apps..." Edit: "by using"

Correct for accuracy and precision. DDOT is not the backbone, it's the ONLY public transit that runs beyond 3.3miles of the downtown. Edit: "primary form" or "primary service"

Minimize gerunds for readability. Edit: "Ride"

Update for current status. Edit: Delete this entire parenthetical bit because the People Mover is reopened since May 6.

Minimize gerunds. Edit: "that serves"

Minimize gerunds for readability. Edit: "that runs"

Misleading, overly broad, correct for accuracy and precision: Woodward runs 21.5 miles from downtown Detroit to Pontiac, and the QLine runs only 3.3 miles of those 215 miles from downtown Detroit to Grand Blvd. Edit: "A streetcar that runs 3.3 miles along Woodward from downtown to Grand Blvd."

Unnecessary word: "free" is not essential. Edit: omit "free"

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