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  1. Jan 2019
    1. "Sometimes at practice one of the guys'll say, 'Let's just break, it's just one day,"' he said. "And I'll say: 'It's just a few more hours. You only got a couple more to go. It'll be worth it in the end."

      I think that this shows the bond and relationship that they have as a team, that they were able to encourage each other to keep going and keep pushing and not break their fast because as one of the players mentioned earlier he "feels like a warrior" after a long day of fasting and practice, and that energy comes out on the football field as well.

    2. THIS season asked for a greater sacrifice than the culinary.

      I think that here the author is implying that during this season the players who were fasting sacrificed more than just a meal for energy they sacrificed themselves basically for the sake of their religion and the sake of their team.

    3. So Dearborn High is a place where the cafeteria serves halal chicken nuggets, girls wear the hijab along with embroidered jeans, the Ramadan food drive gets equal time with the Key Club on morning announcements,

      I think that this statement is important because it highlights the diversity and community at this high school and showing that no one is more important than the other everyone should be treated equally.

    4. this country has afforded a public tolerance for immigration and religion far greater than have the nations of Western Europe.

      I think that what the author is trying to say here is that even though there have always been tensions between the US and the Middle East the US has still accepted people who have came from the Middle East and have never shut them out completely or shut their beliefs and values out.

    5. "We fast so we can feel for the poor people, to know how they feel," said Khalil, 16, a junior. "I'm going through this hunger and thirst for 12, 13 hours. They're going through it for a lifetime."

      I can't put my finger on what moves the author is using here or what point he is trying to get at, but I think that the author is definitely trying to open up a deeper conversation here with this statement.

    6. You know you've been faithful. And that makes you much tougher out on the field. You have to have a crazy mentality out on the field, and after fasting all day, you feel like a warrior."

      I think that here the author includes this quote from Cheaib because it shows his dedication both to the game of football and his dedication to his religion and his fasting, and how both of those work together to give him strength and encourage him throughout the day.

    7. rhythms of the twin rituals of Islam and the gridiron.

      I find it interesting how the author refers to playing football and fasting as the "twin rituals," I'm not exactly sure what he means by this, but I have a feeling that the author is attempting to get at something deeper than just what's being said.

    8. As much as football meant to him, as much as it mattered to win, those things only counted for Ali if he was also staying true to Allah.

      I think that this shows contradicting views, but within Ali himself because he wanted to play his best and win the football game, but we also see that religion is a very important factor in his life as well.

    9. Ali realized that he was not going to play any more football after high school. He would go back to watching it on television like the 6-year-old he had been when he discovered this crashing competition, much to the consternation of his parents, refugees from the more lethal forms of competition practiced in the Lebanese civil war.

      I think that here the author is trying to bring emotion and possibly a sense of sympathy into the argument so the reader sympathizes with him and the actions he chooses after that.

    10. He wore his letter jacket from the Dearborn High Pioneers, with an orange chevron on each shoulder for his two years on the varsity and the stitching on the back spelling out his nickname, Flea.

      Early on in this story the author is using imagery to create a really clear visual image in the readers mind using every single detail he could possibly gather to make the reader feel as if we can truly feel/experience what's happening.

    1. “I knew this was going to happen,” he cried.

      I think that even though he knew it would happen, Len himself didn't know how to handle his emotions, so he felt as if he had to step away from the situation to grasp what was actually going on.

    2. He wore dark jeans, a blue-and-white checkered shirt and Pumas. He had dinner with friends at a steak-and-sushi place, where he drank Jack Daniel’s and Cokes.

      Through many parts of this article the author uses a lot of details, which I think he does to maximize the effect, and emotion that the reader is feeling.

    3. Len Boogaard played a DVD of family photos and home movies. He reminded his son of everything he went through to reach New York — the family moves, the bullying, the naysayers of youth hockey, the struggles through juniors and the minor leagues.

      I think the author is being implicit with what his father did however, I think he is using a rhetorical move of appealing to the emotion of the audience to try to draw sympathy for Boogaard and his family.

    4. But any concern the Rangers had was outweighed by their eagerness for his brand of toughness and intimidation. They needed an enforcer, and they wanted the best.

      I think this shows the sense of immunity that teams developed to injuries of enforcers because they probably had some thought in their mind that they were going to go out there and fight regardless, so they weren't as concerned about the health aspect of it.

    5. The Wild quietly dangled him as trade bait, then made a half-hearted attempt to re-sign him for about $1 million a year.

      I think that this shows at that point in time some people around him knew what was going on, or some of the possible struggles he was facing, and knew that it was probably best if he was to be let go, or if not much attention was brought to him.

    6. Boogaard had been drafted by the Wild in 2001, a seventh-round pick given little chance of making the N.H.L.

      This idea is brought up more than once in all three articles, the fact that he barely made it into the NHL, but he was there. I think that the thought of that may have came back to haunt Boogaard which could've played a role in his addiction.

    7. He gobbled the pills by the handful — eight or more OxyContins at a time, multiple people said, at a cost of around $60 each — chewing them to hasten their time-release effect. The line between needing drugs for pain and wanting them for celebration blurred.

      This connects to the recent outbreak of the opioid epidemic that is taking over the country and it's tragic, that he more than likely developed a life centered around these drugs that he unfortunately couldn't escape the life he had divulged into.

    8. “His demeanor, his personality, it just left him,” John Scott, a Wild teammate, said. “He didn’t have a personality anymore. He just was kind of — a blank face.”

      I think that at this point in time Boogaard had reached a point of dependency on his addiction, and he didn't know how to handle it, so he was kind of just going through the motions and slowly watching his career and his life slip away.

    9. And that was when Len Boogaard’s own mind went numb.

      I think that in this specific situation, Boogaard's Dad was basically in shock because you have to wonder what thought's could've been going through his mind as a parent, such as if he could've done anything to prevent this from happening to his son.

    10. More than 20 dead former N.F.L. players and many boxers have had C.T.E. diagnosed.

      I wonder if these statistics and findings have any affect on current players in the NHL, NFL, or even boxers as to if they should continue to do what they do, or if they should stop and consider alternate safer ways to partake in these sports.

    11. Two other N.H.L. enforcers died, reportedly suicides, stoking a debate about the toll of their role in hockey.

      This connects back to the thought I had in part two about the idea that people deal with personal and private issues, but are often scared or possibly even ashamed to seek help or talk about it.

    12. When it arrived at a laboratory at the Bedford V.A. Medical Center in Bedford, Mass., the brain was vibrantly pink and weighed 1,580 grams, or about 3 ½ pounds. On a stainless-steel table in the basement morgue, Dr. Ann McKee cleaved it in half, front to back, with a large knife. Much of one half was sliced into sheets about the width of sandwich bread.

      I find it interesting how the author compares the handling and examining of the brain to the handling or making of a sandwich.

    1. “It just dulls you right out,” he said. “Totally numbs everything. You don’t feel anything. You’re in no pain, but you’re not yourself. There’s no senses. Nothing. My wife was like: ‘This is creeping me out, man. You’ve got to stop taking those.’ And so I stopped.”

      I think that it is important to have a support system behind you who will encourage you and steer you in the right direction, and I think because Boogaard was really private about his struggles there would've been people to steer him in the right direction however, he didn't seek that help.

    2. I’m sure people think, ‘Oh, he’s making $1.5 million, how bad can it be?’ But they’ve never been in his shoes.”

      I find it interesting that people often downplay the struggles of pro sports players and celebrities because they often think that their money can fix their problems but the truth is that they all go through issues like normal people, which more awareness should be brought to that topic.

    3. “I don’t know if it’s worth it,” he said. “It wasn’t for me.”

      I like how a different side is portrayed the side that we don't see all the time, the side that shows the remorse of being an NHL enforcer.

    4. Myhres said he had concussions diagnosed twice but estimated he had more than 10 in his career. Now 37, he feels his memory slipping.

      I wonder if enforcers, after leaving the league ever regret what they chose as a career pathway, or if some know the dangers before hand and proceed to partake anyway.

    5. “I was kind of a nurse for him in the room, because around the rink he wanted to play,” Fedoruk said.

      I think this connects to the idea of being two-faced not necessarily in a bad way in this situation but in a sense that he may be scared of what would happened if he showed he was truly struggling.

    6. The rest of the damage, physical and mental, he liked to hide.

      It's common for boys/men to feel like they have to hide their emotions, so maybe he was also playing along with the part of that.

    7.  ‘Don’t worry about it, Dad. It’s the lifestyle.’ ”

      I think it's possible that Boogaard became caught up in the lifestyle and the image he had or wanted to pertain so that could be a reason why he fought and took the pain, and even handled the pain how he did.

    8. Then he got to the N.H.L., and it was about having to wear the designer clothes and having the perfect haircut and the perfect designer glasses. I think he felt he had to fit the part.”

      I find this interesting because sometimes you will find professional athletes who make a lot of money and can afford really nice things, but they are okay with wearing non-name brand clothing and living in a smaller house because they don't feel the need to flaunt their money, but I think for Boogaard it was important that he flaunt his money because he spent so long being an outlier he finally had the chance to fit in.

    9. understated types with an alter ego willing to do the sport’s most dangerous work to protect others. And they are underdogs, men who otherwise might have no business in the game.

      I think that this connects back to the thought that Boogaard stayed in the NHL and continued to receive fame from fighting because he probably knew somewhere within himself that he didn't have the skill to actually play in the NHL and by being an enforcer in the NHL that would be the closest he got to achieving that goal.

    10. He missed the next five games.

      I'm wondering if this was because of personal issues or because of protocol from the game because I previously recall when there was a fight the players would only be given a five minute penalty.

    11. King steered Boogaard toward the boards. Boogaard took a few more swings, but King was content to cling tight. Finally, as they came to rest behind the goal, officials slipped between them. Boogaard’s nose was bleeding, and blood was smeared across his forehead.The fight lasted about a minute.

      It's crazy that the fight only lasted a minute, with the language and detail used in the explanation of this fight I was expecting it to have lasted at a minimum 5 minutes.

    12. super-heavyweight bout

      I find it interesting that the language being used to describe a hockey game is language that in normally used to describe a boxing match.

    13. I remember he said: ‘I hate guys that hide. When I fight, I’m going to throw, and I’m going to throw hard. I don’t have an off switch.’ Anytime a fight didn’t go his way — a draw or maybe he thought he lost — that would eat at him.”

      I think that this connects back to the idea of work and play, because for him this is a job and whether it's a good day, or a bad day, at the end of the day you're still going to get paid, that being said I'm a little taken back by the idea that not winning would eat him, or effect him that hard when that's truly not his job, his job should be playing hockey.

    14. In football, as in most sports, such conduct would end in ejections, fines and suspensions.In hockey, it usually means five minutes in the penalty box and a spot in the postgame highlights. Photo

      I think it's weird how fighting is so looked down upon in a sport like football, but it seems as if in the hockey world it's glorified which may be a tradition, however I'm wondering what kind of message this is sending to (younger) fans especially.

    15. “I went to a fight the other night and a hockey game broke out,”

      I find it ironic how the author throws in this joke to make an appeal to a sense of humor in the audience however the irony in this is that he is highlighting the fact that it seems as if at a hockey game there is more focus on the fight than the hockey so It might as well have just been a fight and a hockey game happened to show up in the middle of things.

    16. The N.H.L., formed in 1917, considered a ban on fighting. It ultimately mandated that fighters be assessed a five-minute penalty.

      This makes me wonder, what was the true reason why fighting started in hockey, because if you think of it like any other sport, when there is full contact fighting you don't just get a five minute "time out" and go on your way your usually taken out for the rest of the game and maybe the next few games to, so I'm wondering why it's so different in hockey?

    17. “I never fought mad. Because it’s a job, right? I never took it personally. Lot of times when guys fight, you just ask the other guy politely.

      This phrase reminded me of theme we are working with which is work and play which I believe this specific phrase coincides with because he talks about not taking things personally because that's his job, however I feel that at one point or another it would be taken personally because of the damage that could be to done to a person physically, mentally, and even their career by another hockey player.

    18. Seven seconds after their gloves dropped, the damage was done. Surgeons inserted metal plates and a swath of mesh to rebuild the right side of Fedoruk’s face. His career was never the same.

      I find it interesting how in such a short amount of time so much damage can be caused and especially by one person I think that the author does this to show just how forceful and feared Boogaard was in the NHL.

    19. “It was the fierceness of his brand and the gentleness of his character,”

      Gentle and Fierce are practically opposites when defined so I find it weird but done purposefully that the author would put these two words together to describe the complex person that Boogaard was.

    20. understated types with an alter ego willing to do the sport’s most dangerous work to protect others. And they are underdogs, men who otherwise might have no business in the game.

      This relates to the idea that some enforcers in hockey are there because they have no skill or talent to play the actual game, but they are there, and fighting because it's basically paying the bills, and they have the title of being in the NHL

    1. For the first time, he put on an N.H.L. uniform.And it fit.

      I think that this goes along with the idea of connotations with the fact that Boogaard had a jersey that actually fit his stature which was hard at his size, and also the fact that he found a team which achieved his goal of being in the NHL and possibly a fit in the sense that he could get along with the people there and have a feeling that he belongs there.

    2. Instead of losing weight, he gained about 25, 30 pounds that summer, while his jaw was wired shut. It was incredible.”

      I think it's ironic how the connections are made with Boogaard's pain physically and mentally being dealt with, by his drug addiction but I also think that this is an example of another way of dealing with the pain, he just kept going as if nothing would stop him from attaining his goals.

    3. N.H.L. enforcer. Quickly tagged with a reputation for poor balance and wild swings, Boogaard lost most of the rest of his fights, too.

      It must've been challenging for him to only be recognized initially for his fighting and now with him loosing fights that recognition probably started to fade as well.

    4. Boogaard was expected to step into the character, leading with his fists.

      I find it interesting that at this point there isn't even a small amount of attention on his hockey skills, or hockey skills he could have or acquire, everything that is expected of him is expected for him to use his fists too.

    5. There is not much use for an enforcer who loses fights.

      I find it weird how there is so much attention put on an enforcer in hockey when the most attention should be on the game itself, not the fights stimulated within the game.

    6. The next team also had little use for Boogaard. During a game at a tournament in Calgary, Boogaard watched teammates take turns on the ice while he sat, unused, on the bench

      I think it's possible that Boogaard turned to fighting for attention because he wasn't receiving the attention he wanted solely based off of his hockey playing skills.

    7. “He knew,” Ripplinger said. “He was a smart guy. He knew he wasn’t going to be good enough to make it on skills alone, and he used his size to his advantage. I remember him at 16 years old, pushing weights and boxing and stuff like that. He knew his job.”

      I noticed earlier in this article that it was a possibility that Boogaard fought because he had a point to be proven and it gave him attention, and I am now convinced that this is another reason of why he fought because he probably had some idea that it would get him where he wanted to be and he couldn't achieve that on skills alone.

    8. When the leagues made helmet removal illegal, players learned to delicately remove each other’s helmets before the fight began — a concoction of courtesy and showmanship.

      I was initially confused by the idea of "delicately" removing helmets before the fight started because I didn't think that, removing helmets would be one of their biggest worries. However, I now find that ironic because if there is already a lot of tension and energy you're not necessarily worried about how you look, you just want your point to be made.

    9. Players scattered like spooked cats, fleeing over the wall or through the open gates.

      I think it's interesting how the author uses literary devices like similes to add some lightness to the situation, when in actuality it seems like the other team was terrified of Derek

    10. Halcro said. “I’m 5 foot 9, and a little guy my size would take a run at Derek and run into his elbow, and the refs would give him a penalty. He got so many penalties because he was 6 foot 3, 6 foot 4 at that age.

      I think here the author is using a rhetorical move of acknowledging or recognizing the other side by showing that all of the penalties weren't necessarily his fault. This now makes me think that maybe a lot of his fighting on the ice was because he was being picked on by other players for his stature or whatever the case may be, and Boogaard felt the need to defend himself.

    11. Their ensuing debate landed Boogaard in detention.

      I think this shows that even from a young age Boogaard had an argumentative attitude, or a defensive attitude which could've played a role in his fighting, or this attitude could've stemmed from the fact that he was always picked on or made fun of as a kid.

    12. Boogaard had an assignment: Describe what you want to do for a living. He wrote that he wanted to play in the N.H.L., envisioning himself among the class of gritty players with scoring punch, like his hero, Wendel Clark, who grew up in Saskatchewan and became captain of the Toronto Maple Leafs.

      I find it amazing how when he was doing this assignment and had decided that he wanted to be in the NHL he talks about having a "scoring punch" which I think is a connotation due to the fact that at the time he was probably talking about the idea of scoring many goals, and in regards to being a good player, however, as time went on that "Scoring punch" could've been referring to the idea of an actual punch since he became widely known for his fighting in the NHL.

    13. The family was determined to provide positive reinforcement. Hockey was one way.

      I think it's really ironic how his family wanted to provide positive reinforcement for him, but in the end that sport ended up doing exactly the opposite because he still ended up in a really negative situation.

    14. The family feared for Boogaard’s safety because he often acted without considering the outcome

      This connects back to the idea of Derek continuing to fight because of the fact that he received attention and appreciation when he acted out which is one of the big reasons I believe Derek continuously fought.

    15. At age 11, after another family move, he was quickly challenged to a schoolyard fight by a boy named Evan Folden, who considered himself king of the school jocks.

      For most of this article I was under the impression that Boogaard began fighting abruptly when he joined the NHL, however now I have a change of thought I feel that maybe this notion of fighting stayed with him from such a young age that when he got to the NHL and had the opportunity to be appreciated and recognized for his fighting he continued to do that because he got the appreciation he never received as a child.

    16. Whether Len Boogaard was issuing traffic tickets or investigating domestic disturbances, the grievances “would ultimately come back to the kids at some point,”

      This shows a deeper insight to some of the pain Derek may have went through at a younger age which could've caused his life to end sooner than expected by a drug overdose because issues that were obviously not his issues at such a young age somehow became his issues, and he very well could've been the person that bottled things up inside, and then one day it became too much for him to handle.

    17. “I think the best part of playing hockey for ages 3 until 16 was the little road trips with dad,”

      I think that this phrase really shows a positive, more open side of Boogaard because this far we have seen him mostly portrayed as a very tough, strong person but this shows that there were positive times in his life and was a fun, loving kid like most kids his age.

    18. He heard the whispers of parents saying that this oversize boy — too big, too clumsy — had no rightful place on the team.

      I think that this can connect back to the subject of Boogaard's drug use, I think it shows how his drug use could've stimulated from both mental and physical pain, the physical of course being the pain from fighting and the mental, this pain he experienced at such a young age which he could've bottled up inside himself and finally dealt with it by his use of drugs.

    19. If he did recognize the toll, he dismissed it as the mere cost of getting everything he ever wanted.

      This connects back to the idea of opportunity and obligation because there could've been plenty more opportunities for Boogaard to thrive, and share his talent and skills, but he ended up sacrificing that by sacrificing his health because of the money, and fame that he could get by continuing to take the pain and not acknowledging the toll that fighting was taking on his body.

    20. He loved what it brought: a continuation of an unlikely hockey career.

      For me this statement implies that Boogaard continued to fight and do what he did because there was possibly a doubt in his mind that he wasn't going to get a successful hockey career due to the fact that his skills may not have been that good, or that there just may have been people who were better than them, so he felt that if he continued to do what he did he would continue to get paid and have a spot on the team.

    21. On May 13, his brothers found him dead of an accidental overdose in his Minneapolis apartment. Boogaard was 28.

      It's said that the overdose was accidental which it could or couldn't have been, however I think that there may have been some correlation between the pressure/stress he could've been under from fighting/playing which ultimately could've played a role in his death.

    22. Over six seasons in the N.H.L., Boogaard accrued three goals and 589 minutes in penalties and a contract paying him $1.6 million a year.

      I think that this statement connects back to one of the first statements made in this article which was about opportunity and obligation which shows how in this specific instance Boogaard had the opportunity to become a great hockey player for his skill, abilities to play, or even work well with others, whatever the case may be, however he may have felt obligated to continue to be recognized for his fighting capabilities because that's what people expected/wanted from him, and it could've even been the idea of fear coming back as to what people would or wouldn't have thought of him if he didn't continue to fight during hockey games.

    23. That dream ended early, as it usually does, and no one had to tell him.

      I think that this statement is supposed to be a subtle way of showing or implying what's going to happen in the future, however I was thrown off by the statement saying "and no one had to tell him."

    24. noble and barbaric, necessary and regrettable

      I find it weird how this one job that most people would feel is so minimal and has no large impact is so controversial in its description and role being played in hockey.

    25. Boogaard was exhilarated, exhausted, relieved. Maybe the fear was extinguished, but it always came back, like the flame of a trick candle. One fight ended, another awaited. It was a cycle that commanded the rest of his life.

      It's not unusual for people to have fear especially in a situation like this, the language that's used in this small paragraph like "flame of a trick candle" makes me think that the author isn't just trying to refer to the fear that may come back to Boogaard, but he could also be referring to the flame that has been ignited by him engaging in that fight the flame being the more fights he has to follow, the questions he has to answer by doing that, and possibly his own inner feelings, whatever, those may be, of living with what he did whether that be pride, regret, whatever he still has to live with those inner feelings.

    26. He did not know whom he would fight, just that he must.Opportunity and obligation had collided, the way they can in hockey.

      I think that these two statements set the tone for this piece, by saying something that relates to the topic of hockey and fighting, but also something that relates to everyday life. I think this because with a lot of decisions people make in life it''s often an inner battle with yourself of do I do what I have the passion to do, or do I do what's the responsible choice. So I think that this shows in this specific moment both of those things collided which would allow him to fight.

    1. You cry together at enoughfunerals, you figure you can bleed together on a football field,too. One thing about firemen, they don't let each other fightbattles alone.

      This is a strong statement that grasped my attention because of the way that these everlasting friendships between them are portrayed. They are showed in a way such that it makes you think about that friendship on the field and on the job because as it states there were men who had rejected multiple times, men who had retired, and they came back which shows the idea of this everlasting friendship and allegiance to each other, showing that they will always support each other and wouldn't leave anyone going solo.

    2. After 10 straight days of digging through the rubble, it wasDanny who found Tommy. One last time, Danny pulled Tommy out ofthe pile. "When we found him," says Danny, "it was kind of arelief. I promised my mom I wasn't coming home withoutTommy

      This shows that even though it's a sad time on their team and the NYCFD, they are still committed to their jobs and Danny specifically preserved to find his brother and bring him home because these are all things that are/were very important to him which makes this situation emotional in a way but also shows his character and strength to keep going and not give up.

    3. Most of the guys on the team have a nasty case of the WTC cough,which is what you get from digging week after week, up to 18hours a day, and inhaling dust, smoke, glass particles, asbestosand, indeed, microscopic remains of their fallen comrades. Butthe guys are playing.

      This is sh showing that these men are dedicated to what they do and what they love, they may be working hard, and long days, but at the end of the day they are going to continue to play not only for themselves but probably for their comrades because that's what they would have wanted them to do.