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  1. Aug 2018
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    1. The blinds would be drawn down and Aunt Kate would be sitting beside him, crying and blowing her nose and telling him how Julia had died.

      Again the title is "The Dead" but it hasn't refer to anybody. Julia here could just be an example. or prediction of she got some seriou desease? But in my comprehension, "the dead" means everyone, it may sound horrible but we have to admit that death is the fate that no one can escape from. Although body is warm and life is busy, there is always an end for all the stuff. An unsuccessful intimacy, the envy and annoyance to wife's experience, the sound of falling snow, every aspects of life changes and develops, no matter if we notice them and ourselves.

    2. She was walking on before him so lightly and so erect that he longed to run after her noiselessly, catch her by the shoulders and say something foolish and affectionate into her ear. She seemed to him so frail that he longed to defend her against something and then to be alone with her. Moments of their secret life together burst like stars upon his memory. A heliotrope envelope was lying beside his breakfast-cup and he was caressing it with his hand. Birds were twittering in the ivy and the sunny web of the curtain was shimmering along the floor: he could not eat for happiness. They were standing on the crowded platform and he was placing a ticket inside the warm palm of her glove. He was standing with her in the cold, looking in through a grated window at a man making bottles in a roaring furnace. It was very cold. Her face, fragrant in the cold air, was quite close to his; and suddenly he called out to the man at the furnace:

      I really like the paragraph about the love, lust and haze of Gabriel to his wife, it's rare and interesting to find this description of marriage relationship in literature, which seems like the feeling of two young teeangers in love. I mean the passion in a cold winter morning, the intense contrast, warm inside and cold outside, really would make strong impression to readers. I can image the emotion after wine, music and lecture for whole night.

    3. “O, to tell you the truth,” retorted Gabriel suddenly, “I’m sick of my own country, sick of it!” “Why?” asked Miss Ivors.

      That's the problem almost everyone who has a different culture background with where he/she is in currently will meet. Gabriel just wanted to take his vacation anywhere he was interested in but he was criticized by Miss Ivors for he didn't admire his own culture. This group pf people always sturggle that swift between their original culture and the new culture they need to adapt to. By the way, it 's really upset to meet a people like Miss Ivors in a party, she just won't let you go and keep judging, and which makes everyone feel awkward.

    4. They were always falling out now but when they were boys together they used to be the best of friends: but such was life.

      It's so true for the characters worried about the coming date or meeting, I always do that, too. And we have to accept that friends who used to play with us very well in childhood may become strange of unfamiliar with us someday.

    5. Maria had to laugh and say she didn’t want any ring or man either; and when she laughed her grey-green eyes sparkled with disappointed shyness and the tip of her nose nearly met the tip of her chin.

      So Maria may be a elder and unmarried woman, we can see something from the " disappointed shyness" on her face. It's smart for Joyce to use the words of disappointed and shyness together. It's easy to imagine what the expression looks like. Just like the shy people who have to stay in the corner of a noisy party. Has Maria had a story? By the way the title is "clay", look forward to see something about it below.

    6. There had been no open complicity between mother and daughter, no open understanding but, though people in the house began to talk of the affair, still Mrs. Mooney did not intervene.

      There may be a suggestion that Polly and Mr. Doran may have had "real relationship".

    7. had a habit of glancing upwards when she spoke with anyone, which made her look like a little perverse madonna.

      I like the metaphor,it's religious but also vivid, young, naive girl, who lives in a big boarding house, meets various people come and leave, the kind of experience will build her in a active and charming, even frivolous way. We can also feel that from the lyrics she just sang.

    8. The people made way for them. At the corner of Grafton Street a short fat man was putting two handsome ladies on a car in charge of another fat man. The car drove off and the short fat man caught sight of the party.

      It's interesting to find that the word "handsome" can be used to describe ladies, does it also mean good looking here?

  3. Jul 2018
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    1. The evening deepened in the avenue.

      Here responds the begining, evening invaded the avenue, which may reveal that time has passed and Eveline was waiting for anything?

    2. She knew it was that that had given her the palpitations. When they were growing up he had never gone for her like he used to go for Harry and Ernest, because she was a girl; but latterly he had begun to threaten her and say what he would do to her only for her dead mother’s sake. And now she had nobody to protect her.

      Poor girl! She was so lonely and she cannot feel any love from her family, that can explain why she wanted to leave her home. In fact, the contradiction like that never stops happening when generations of young people try to separate with their original families, there are various problems in families but there are also their comfort zone.

    3. My uncle said he was very sorry he had forgotten. He said he believed in the old saying: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” He asked me where I was going and, when I had told him a second time he asked me did I know The Arab’s Farewell to his Steed. When I left the kitchen he was about to recite the opening lines of the piece to my aunt.

      I really know the feeling of waiting, it's struggle, just as an old Chinese idion said "a hunderd of paws are scratching the heart". In my opinion, the reason that the hero of the story wanted to go Araby so terribly not only because he was interested in, but the girl he loved. He dreamed to walk on place which she liked and buy a present to her.

    4. Eliza took out her handkerchief and wiped her eyes with it. Then she put it back again in her pocket and gazed into the empty grate for some time without speaking.

      It's interesting that the title is _"The Sisters"_but there are few sentences about the sisters, insteadly, the perspective is a man and the whole story is talking about the death of Father O’Rourke.

    5. We came then near the river. We spent a long time walking about the noisy streets flanked by high stone walls, watching the working of cranes and engines and often being shouted at for our immobility by the drivers of groaning carts.

      The tour is really like the The Adventure of Tom Sawyer. Young, naughty boys run away from home on weekends and make an adventure.

    1. I’m not going to marry you,” I said, “I can’t leave my lady.”

      What a reason! It's quite unbelieveable! She'd company her lady for whole life rather than marry the man she loved and build her own life.

    2. Well, you see, madam, he’d taken such pride in my hair. He used to sit me up on the counter, before the customers came, and do it something beautiful—big, soft curls and waved over the top. I remember the assistants standing round, and me ever so solemn with the penny grandfather gave me to hold while it was being done...

      I feel that her grandpa has made her as a Lucky Cat or mascot, that why he was so angry about her cutting her hair, it's so curel and bloody for an adult to treat a little girl in this way.

    3. But if that were true, why didn’t Charlotte or the girls stop him? Why was he all alone, climbing up and down?

      Old Mr. Neave was so stressful, he cannot feel the love and care from his wife and daughters. He has built nice environment for them and them take it for granted without bringing their old father.

    4. But it wasn’t only his family who spoiled Harold, he reflected, it was everybody; he had only to look and to smile, and down they went before him.

      It's hard to say whether his appearence is a gift or burden given by God, on one side, a handsome fellow will definitely live more smoothly in his life; but on the other side, people cannot treat him normally, which was very negative to a boy's growing, and it was diffcult for hime to grow up as a honest man.

    5. At that the music seemed to change; it sounded sad, sad;

      The sad music revealed the curel fact that time passes and no one could escaping from getting old.

    6. "Fast! Ah, too Fast Fade the Ro-o-ses of Pleasure; Soon Autumn yields unto Wi-i-nter Drear. Fleetly! Ah, Fleetly Mu-u-sic's Gay Measure Passes away from the Listening Ear."

      lyrics were really like the love and the heartbreaking of Miss Meadows! Winter comes to replace summer soon and pleasure and roses pass away soon, too. She was like a little jealous of her students, young and beautiful, "bubbling", pink, just like the roses which are blooming.

    7. Leila was sure if her partner didn’t come and she had to listen to that marvellous music and to watch the others sliding, gliding over the golden floor, she would die at least, or faint, or lift her arms and fly out of one of those dark windows that showed the stars.

      Mainsfield was amazing! She did so well in describing the mental world of girls. I always have the feeling like"what about flying out of windows now to escape from the awkward situation now?" I have waiting for long time at my first ball ( not a formal one) and it was really, really hard.

    8. Oh dear, how hard it was to be indifferent like the others! She tried not to smile too much; she tried not to care. But every single thing was so new and exciting...

      The psychological activities of the young girl are so real! I really know the feeling when young girls enter a new environment, meet different and interesting people, especially boys. Teenagers always want behave like adults but they are still curious and nervous.

    9. Then she turned round and took a long, mournful look at grandma’s blackness and at Fenella’s black coat and skirt, black blouse, and hat with a crape rose.

      It can explain their sadness before, the grandma and Fenella have just lost a family memeber, maybe it was Fenella's mother.

    10. The freshening wind tugged at Fenella’s skirts;

      The sea wind appeared again, it may be the symbol of something the young girl, is it fear to the unkown voyage, or freedom?

    11. Isabel wore a jersey and her hair in a plait; she looked about fourteen.

      William's beautiful impression of his wife is an image of a teenager girl ( it's a bit sick by the way), so below, she really behaved like a teenager, hanged out with various men without caring her husband's feeling, relying on her husband and never tried to be independent, her husband liked the way she like a doll, so she really became a doll and whole family wouldn't happy, either. That's why we should support feminism.

    12. “Isabel.” The same thing happened every Saturday afternoon. When he was on his way to meet Isabel there began those countless imaginary meetings. She was at the station, standing just a little apart from everybody else; she was sitting in the open taxi outside; she was at the garden gate; walking across the parched grass; at the door, or just inside the hall.

      These imaginary scenes may suggest that William and Isabel's marriage has some problems yet, meeting Isabel every week may has not been a exciting, happy event to look forward, but has become a stressful and confusing routine.

    13. “No, sir.” “Very strange. I could have sworn I left a teaspoonful of cocoa in the tin.” He broke off. He said softly and firmly, “You’ll always tell me when you throw things away—won’t you, Mrs. Parker?” And he walked off very well pleased with himself, convinced, in fact, he’d shown Mrs. Parker that under his apparent carelessness he was as vigilant as a woman.

      The difficulties of life to people who like this literary gentleman were just like messy room, writing which was hard to continue...But to women like Ma Parkers, life was so true and harsh, they have no place to hide and escape. Those mood which called "petite bourgeoisie" is so pale in front of the true hardness of life. It's the problem of "to be or not to be".

    14. But the struggle she’d had to bring up those six little children and keep herself to herself. Terrible it had been! Then, just when they were old enough to go to school her husband’s sister came to stop with them to help things along, and she hadn’t been there more than two months when she fell down a flight of steps and hurt her spine.

      The sad part of Ma Parker makes me think of A True Story, from Mark Twain, the African maid, "Aunt Rachel", she also had a miserable life, but she just talked about her past calmly, even with humor. Ma Parker is kind of like Aunt Rachel, they both were brave and tough working women, life was harsh on them ,but them fighted for themselves and families, that's really moving.

    15. She couldn’t bear sitting in a car. She’d wait on the steps.

      Poor girl! She has no place to go, she doesn't like neither thr casino nor the car, but she has no choice. Senstive persons are easy to feel depressed and painful when they have to stay in the environment they don't like, obviously she belongs to senstive group.

    16. “Oh, I don’t mind,” said she. “I don’t want to look twenty-one. Who would—if they were seventeen! It’s”—and she gave a faint shudder—“the stupidity I loathe, and being stared at by old fat men. Beasts!”

      It's ludicrous for a mother to try to bring her young children into a casino,even her daughter shall look down at her, the driving part makes me think of the same plot of Lolita, whose female character is also a young, unpleasant girl.

    17. Do you think we could ask Kate for two cups of hot water?”

      The poor sisters don't have to ability to command their servant and even protect themselves since their father died. They lived under her father's control so long that they cannot decide by themselves.

    18. He was in the top drawer with his handkerchiefs and neckties, or in the next with his shirts and pyjamas, or in the lowest of all with his suits. He was watching there, hidden away—just behind the door-handle—ready to spring.

      I can image the feeling of losing a people, the funeral wasn't the most painful part but the days after it. When people have finished all those stuff, to see the last guest out and begun to tidy up the things, the real sadness would come up. There is no change in surrounding environment but the loved will never be here any more. It's the moment that people realize that "Oh, now I really lose him/her", and the heartbreaking just come as tide. Even though their father was really strict to the sisters, but it was still hard to believe that they have lost their father.

    19. “But it doesn’t know there aren’t,” said Constantia.

      It can be imagined that their living conditions has a obvious drop since their father passed away and the two poor girls have to make living by themselves. They are just like the little mouse, walking around without finding anything.

    20. “And just think of what the band would sound like to that poor woman,” said Laura. “Oh, Laura!” Jose began to be seriously annoyed. “If you’re going to stop a band playing every time some one has an accident, you’ll lead a very strenuous life.

      Compared with her sister and her mom, Laura is a kind girl even though sometimes her ideas are naive. But she still cares about others' feeling even though when most people don't care about their living conditions. She knows it's cruel to play music when other is holding funeral,but her family members are used to it. As Jose said, “If you’re going to stop a band playing every time some one has an accident, you’ll lead a very strenuous life", it seems like entertainment is the only thing in those ladies' life! Her mom also shows the same attitude that the accident was nothing to them. Laura is younger so she has more sympathy for the poor, but it can be predicted is that she may also become a indifferent woman like her sister and her mom.

    21. Why couldn’t she have workmen for her friends rather than the silly boys she danced with and who came to Sunday night supper? She would get on much better with men like these.

      The workmen are attractive to Laura, even more charming than those young gentlemen she got along with. They are fresh and mysterious to Laura, a young lady who is from the upper class. But the tension between them couldn't make any progress because Laura is just curious about them, we can find that her real attitude to the labor groups in the next parts, she feels nervous and sorry to them when she really stands among them. All she can do to show she can "adapt" to them as a work-girl is "took a big bite of her bread-and-butter" , it could be the rudest behavior she can think of.

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    1. Here was a chance of reading that domestic bit about the child which I had marked on the day of Mr. Franklin’s marriage!

      Oh how many diamonds can compare with romantic, true love and the happiness they enjoyed this moment? It's amazing for old Betteredge got the information of the marriage of the sweet couple who he saw their growing up. Moonstone disappeared from their life, but they definitely have better time than when they owned it. Someone or some things occurs in our life and they may cannot be owned by us forever, heartbreaking always happens when they leave, but actually there's no difference with the life before they appeared, right? Just keep the precious memory and treat anyone who comes to life carefully.

    2. Mr. Godfrey Ablewhite’s life had two sides to it. The side turned up to the public view, presented the spectacle of a gentleman, possessed of considerable reputation as a speaker at charitable meetings, and endowed with administrative abilities, which he placed at the disposal of various Benevolent Societies, mostly of the female sort. The side kept hidden from the general notice, exhibited this same gentleman in the totally different character of a man of pleasure,

      It's a great summary to Mr. Godfery and it explains the real persona of him, now readers can know who is the biggest villain. It could be one of Sergeant Cuff's accomplishments in the event, and the first investigation started from Godfredy's wife and his furniture, and all other luxuries he got recently, it's really like the investigation of Sherlock Holmes to Professor Moriarty.

    3. The Sergeant writes from Ireland. He acknowledges the receipt (through his housekeeper) of a card and message which Mr. Blake left at his residence near Dorking, and announces his return to England as likely to take place in a week or less.

      The crime has happened one year ago and it doesn't seem like Sergeant Cuff has solved it totally out or kept on it. And he just went on his vacation and moved on? I mean he may was not so good as others' praise. And then he come back to England, made a summary and deduced from Godfery's death. But that deduction part is really smart and helps me understand the whole story.

    4. I left Mr. Blake, to go my rounds among my patients; feeling the better and the happier even for the short interview that I had had with him.

      Ok now even Jennings has falled in love with Franklin, too? Why Franklin is so charming? Just a kidding. But we can tell that Jennings is a helpful guy and he will make the determinate step to solve the crime in the future(actually he proved Franklin's honesty and made Franklin and Rachel come back together), so I think higher of him than Sergeant Cuff. I mean what he has done from the very beginning?

    5. In your nightgown–with your bedroom candle in your hand

      Actually I think he was controlled by those three Indians, with some witchcraft, but the assistant said it was the effect of opium or laudanum, I keep my opinion.

    6. He read the first without appearing to be much interested in it.

      Because he has already known poor Rosanna's love to Mr.Franklin. Why everyone can realize it except Mr.Franklin? Because the gentlemen wouldn't care the feeling and expression of a maid, especially when she was not very pretty. Rosanna died from fear and shame that she thought Mr. Franklin was the theif. So she chose to hide the pajama and suicided, in some degree, she was on the same side with Rachel, they both tried to protect Mr.Franklin and were willling to suffer for him. What the love of women in Victorian Era!

    7. There he was–the dear old friend of the happy days that were never to come again–there he was in the old corner, on the old beehive chair, with his pipe in his mouth, and his ROBINSON CRUSOE on his lap, and his two friends, the dogs, dozing on either side of him!

      Everyone knows old Betteredge's habit, this scene is touching. The boy left house and grew up outside, when he come back, he found his old friend was waiting for him. It's really a comfort to a returning man. I think of a Chinese poem called A Note on Homecoming "I left home a youngster and returned a senior, Though greyed my temple hair has, change my accent has not. Village children came to greeet me but knew me not, They cheerfully took me for visitor and enquired where I'd come from."

    8. Mr. Bruff, what is their third chance of seizing the Diamond? and when will it come?” As the question passed his lips, I penetrated the motive of the Indian’s visit to my office at last! “I see it!” I exclaimed. “The Indians take it for granted, as we do, that the Moonstone has been pledged; and they want to be certainly informed of the earliest period at which the pledge can be redeemed–because that will be the earliest period at which the Diamond can be removed from the safe keeping of the bank!”

      Indians will start a third trying to acquire the diamond, maybe in June, next year. Really patient of them.

    9. Mr. Luker was, in every respect, such an inferior creature to the Indian–he was so vulgar, so ugly, so cringing, and so prosy–that he is quite unworthy of being reported, at any length, in these pages. The substance of what he had to tell me may be fairly stated as follows:

      The comparsion between Mr.Luker and the Indian impressed me. It's kind of rare to the see that the foreigner from distant Asia could be described as decent and polite (no matter what mind behind the appearance is) in 19th British language. Maybe Mr.Luker is just really annoying?

    10. Lady Verinder amply justified the confidence which her husband had placed in her. In the first days of her widowhood, she sent for me, and made her Will. The view she took of her position was so thoroughly sound and sensible, that I was relieved of all necessity for advising her. My responsibility began and ended with shaping her instructions into the proper legal form. Before Sir John had been a fortnight in his grave, the future of his daughter had been most wisely and most affectionately provided for.

      As Cuff said, Lady Verinder is a smart woman, a young lady who has a huge wealth is dangerous in 19th century, that may make her attracttive to unhonest suitors, who love her money but not herself. The fixed income of Rachel has made her helpless to Alberwhite, so in some degree, Rachel can have more freedom than other wealthy unmarried ladies in choosing a husband.

    11. “Sure! You know what I was, Rachel. Let me tell you what I am. I have lost every interest in life, but my interest in you. A transformation has come over me which I can’t account for, myself. Would you believe it? My charitable business is an unendurable nuisance to me; and when I see a Ladies’ Committee now, I wish myself at the uttermost ends of the earth!”

      Such a liar! He is a drama queen and all of his charity were not from his heart. He just enjoys the feeling that he is moving others and acting. I'm glad that Clack had to see the whole conversation.

    12. Ordinary people might have hesitated before setting aside their own engagements to suit the convenience of a stranger. The Christian Hero never hesitates where good is to be done. Mr. Godfrey instantly turned back, and proceeded to the house in Northumberland Street. A most respectable though somewhat corpulent man answered the door, and, on hearing Mr. Godfrey’s name, immediately conducted him into an empty apartment at the back, on the drawing-room floor.

      Mr. Godfrey is really a danger to girls like Clack, acting as a devoted Christian, I hope she wouldn'd fall in love to this guy.

    13. The person who answered the door, took my message in insolent silence, and left me standing in the hall. She is the daughter of a heathen old man named Betteredge–long, too long, tolerated in my aunt’s family.

      It' interesting to find the first narrative Clack doesn't like Mr.Betterege and his daughter, maybe their performances didn't seem to be decent in Clack's eyes, because she's really religious and conservative, and a little humorous in this story. But actually I can's see anything unnormal or rebellious of Mr.Betterege and Penelope, maybe because he read novel(ROBISON)?

    14. “Where’s the man you call Franklin Blake?” says the girl, fixing me with a fierce look, as she rested herself on her crutch. “That’s not a respectful way to speak of any gentleman,” I answered. “If you wish to inquire for my lady’s nephew, you will please to mention him as MR. Franklin Blake.”

      I can feel the conflicts from the conversation bewteen Lucy and Mr. Betterage, he insisted that she should call Franklin as "Mr." but Lucy didn' deign to say this word. It also shows the rules and distinct differences bewteen classed in 19th century. The precious friendship between these two poor girls really moved me, in a society where poor women wouldn't be cared, it's valuable for these words, such as moving to London, living by theirselves. I guess it's early feminism.

    15. My girl was in wretchedly low spirits about the changed state of things in the house. “Nothing goes right, father; nothing is like what it used to be. I feel as if some dreadful misfortune was hanging over us all.”

      We could see the influence of moonstone by Penelope's words. The family was breaking up.

    16. “I have no claim, my lady,” says the Sergeant, “to control Miss Verinder’s actions. All I can ask you to do is to put off her departure, if possible, till later in the day. I must go to Frizinghall myself to-morrow morning–and I shall be back by two o’clock, if not before. If Miss Verinder can be kept here till that time, I should wish to say two words to her–unexpectedly–before she goes.”

      Sergeant Cuff realized the problem of Rachel's departure and Mrs Verinder was upset about his assumption but she eventually agreed with his advice that putting off Rachel's departure. Mrs Verinder tried to protect her daughter but she really didn' know what Rachel thought and she didn't sure if she was the suspect.

    17. “At the sands, of course!” says Nancy, with a toss of her head. “She had another of her fainting fits this morning, and she asked to go out and get a breath of fresh air. I have no patience with her!”

      And Nancy said Rosanna was late again for dinner and OF COURSE she was at the sand, which means she went there a lot and there was really a relationship with Rosanna and the sand. The sand may be a evidence which can be used latter.

    18. “Going to telegraph to London,” says Mr. Franklin. “I have convinced my aunt that we must have a cleverer head than Superintendent Seegrave’s to help us; and I have got her permission to despatch a telegram to my father. He knows the Chief Commissioner of Police, and the Commissioner can lay his hand on the right man to solve the mystery of the Diamond. Talking of mysteries, by-the-bye,” says Mr. Franklin, dropping his voice, “I have another word to say to you before you go to the stables. Don’t breathe a word of it to anybody as yet; but either Rosanna Spearman’s head is not quite right, or I am afraid she knows more about the Moonstone than she ought to know.”

      Why Franklin believed that Rosanna knew about the moonstone? Maybe he guessed it from the strange actions and words of Rosanna, or it was a trick to remove others' attention. However, Betteredge tried to protect Rosanna by didn't tell him the past of her , but still Franklin doubt her.

    19. Miss Rachel walked swiftly through to her bed-room, wild and angry, with fierce eyes and flaming cheeks. Mr. Superintendent once more attempted to question her. She turned round on him at her bed-room door. “I have not sent for you!” she cried out vehemently. “I don’t want you. My Diamond is lost. Neither you nor anybody else will ever find it!” With those words she went in, and locked the door in our faces. Penelope, standing nearest to it, heard her burst out crying the moment she was alone again.

      The madness of Rachel happens suddenly, it makes me thinks of the famous Chinese novel Dream of the Red Chamber, Baoyu, the male protagonist who was born with a jade in his mouth (so his name means "jade" in Chinese). When he lost his jade, he went kind of silly and crazy. So there can be a relationship between jewlery and the mood even life of people. Rachel, as a educated lady from upper status in the 19th century, and she didn't care about jewlery very much before, acted unusual, even rude to others. It could be the influence of the diamond, which makes reader believe the curse.

    20. “His present address, sir, is THE GRAVE,” says Mrs. Threadgall, suddenly losing her temper, and speaking with an emphasis and fury that made the glasses ring again. “The Professor has been dead these ten years.”

      Grave appeared again, everyone kept saying ominous words this night, it could be understood the effect of the moonstone, may create some magnetic field or something. I can feel the embarssing atmosphere in the dining room.

    21. “I saw him take her away alone into the rose-garden,” says Penelope. “And I waited behind the holly to see how they came back. They had gone out arm-in-arm, both laughing. They came back, walking separate, as grave as grave could be, and looking straight away from each other in a manner which there was no mistaking. I never was more delighted, father, in my life! There’s one woman in the world who can resist Mr. Godfrey Ablewhite, at any rate; and, if I was a lady, I should be another!”

      Penelope felt very happy about the breaking up of Rachel and Mr. Godfrey, maybe she didn't like the gentlemen who were very attracted to women and knew how to please women. The mind was likely to be effected by the values of the 19th century in England, charming was a dangerous quality, young maid didn't want her mistress be puzzled by some men. then we can guess what had happened between Rachel and Mr. Godfrey when they were walking in the ROSE garden, rose is the sybmol of love but it means negative here. Why they went separate and the situation looked like grave? Both rose garden and quicksand have been attached to grave, maybe there are some relationships.