Abstract
Your abstract is really well-written overall!
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Individuals with more opinionated beliefs around safety and community trust may have decided to respond to the survey entirely or may have avoided completing the survey due to strong beliefs or feelings about phrasing or questions.
Potential revision of this sentence: "Individuals with stronger views about safety and community trust may have been more motivated to complete the survey, or conversely, may have chosen to discontinue participation if they disagreed with the survey’s wording or focus."
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Finally, the assumptions of utilizing a multiple linear regression model may have limited the study data and conclusions that can be drawn from modeling as a linear model assumes a clear cut relationship between a predictor and the outcome.
This sentence is a bit confusing. Consider rewording (e.g., "Finally, the assumptions inherent in a multiple linear regression model may have constrained the data and the conclusions, given that linear models presume a clear, linear relationship between predictors and the outcome variable.")
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questions
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For instance difference ,as a predictor of feelings of distrust and lack of safety in one’s community being a person of color was only associated with a 0.13 point increase in scores while being nonsignificant with a p value of 0.6.
This sentence is a bit confusing. Consider rewording (e.g., "For instance, being a person of color was associated with only a 0.13-point increase in reported distrust and lack of safety, a difference that was not statistically significant (p = 0.6).")
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I really like the way you break up the blocks of writing by listing them with their corresponding code chunks. This is definitely something I want to include in my report as I revise for my final submission!
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average
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Figure 2.4
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or possibly even a slight negative relationship as social status increases, feelings of safety decrease.
This end of the sentence here gets a bit confusing. Consider rewording (e.g., "Alternatively, for females, increases in social status appear to be largely unrelated to feelings of safety, with a potential slight negative trend in which greater social status corresponds to lower perceived safety.")
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could make this an em dash if wanted!
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dataset
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variables
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could replace this comma with "and" if wanted!
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However, plots visualizing social status in relation to community and non community variables revealed more variation
I would consider rewording this topic sentence to help the flow out a bit. For example, you could say, "Unlike the largely flat patterns observed for political beliefs, social status demonstrated more distinct variation in perceived community trust and safety across genders."
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I wasn't sure how to do this in my own report, so now seeing this code and how you approached it is super helpful to inspire revisions for my final report!
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#explanation:
These explanations are super helpful for the reader due to their depth (something I will definitely place more emphasis on in my revisions now that I realize their significance)!
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Quatrics
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multiple linear regression
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dataset
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sociodemographic
just change this to "sociodemographics"
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of
delete this "of" to fix the grammatical flow of this sentence!
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