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  1. Mar 2023
    1. While punk rock clearly has deep roots in the U.S, it would be sacrilegious to neglect mentioning the U.K.’s role in its prodigious rise. During the 70s, the British economy was in bad shape; unemployment was high and the youth were angry and disaffected. These conditions created an ideal environment for rebellious, politically motivated punk rockers to cultivate a booming London punk scene. In 1975, the Sex Pistols made their first live appearance, and by the end of the year, several more punk bands that would reach legendary status – including the Clash, the Slits, and the Damned – had formed.

      I believe London was more structured around anger at the current state of the country/economy and the USA punk scene was way more about irony and going against the grain of society.

    2. This lack of concern with strict structure gave artists freedom to experiment, which led to musical innovations that would eventually make up the foundation of punk rock.

      This is what ended up creating the foundation of punk rock.

    1. Style-wise, the clothes designed by McLaren and Westwood helped forge an aesthetic of rips, fractures and tensions, capturing perfectly the darkening mood of the 1970s.

      This was the style that was affiliated with punk, and as history progresses we still see very similar styles.

    2. British punk emerged in 1976, coalescing around the Sex Pistols and spreading – virus-like – into the suburbs, provinces and cities of the UK

      Punk style and attitude was very much a product of British youth culture.

  2. Feb 2023
    1. I’ve always exposed myself to various cultural traditions

      This is something I strive for as well, I think it's important to be well-versed in cultural traditions.

    2. When I was a kid, my soccer coach would always yell, incessantly, “¡Conganas!”

      I think more professors should implement this into their teaching.

    3. also know that school and society add various levels of stress to folks just because of their racial,ethnic, linguistic, sexual and gender identities,

      I totally agree with this, I think everyone has experienced some sort of stress from some of these things.

  3. Nov 2022
    1. as a writer to experiment with certain techniques, rhetorical appeals, and ways of writing that you have carefully observed and annotated when you previously read.

      Experimentation is the process of success.

    2. Annotation and other active reading strategies are useful for all of these processes as well, in addition to peer review of your colleagues’ work and your own proofreading process of your own work.

      Annotation is the key for success in writing.

    1. Writing an annotated bibliography can help writers gain a good perspective on what is being said about the topic.

      Also, it's a good idea to keep a list as you go with your sources. Like keeping URLS.

    1. Todd Walker is an amazing Lecturer and Faculty Development Coordinator for the Writing Program of the SFSU English Department.

      This is not fake news.

    1. What insights am I having as I search and explore? What is surprising or unexpected?

      Whenever you search something, you always have a certain expectation of what you're going to find.

    2. We are (most likely) all familiar with google, and we’re also probably used to considering whether we believe a source or not, how legit it is, and whether it is, to use the parlance of our times, “fake news.”

      There's a large stigma about fake news, especially these past few years. (elon musk)

    1. we’ve gotta have a lot of different tools for a lot of different jobs

      This is valuable information, I believe that this is an essential for our work environment.

    1. Here, reading is more about satisfying your personal curiosities about life’s conundrums, whether that’s answering questions about privilege or racism in your life, or questions about the future of the planet.

      This is what reading should be about and I feel like there is no better way to learn than a book. The amount of times I've read a book, and it's changed my whole perspective on life is crazy.

    1. open to new ways of asking questions, open to new ways of finding information and knowledge from sources, open to relating to new perspectives that you will find in those sources.

      Being open-minded is key to being a good writer, especially during this time.

    2. Connect your ideas to those of other authors.

      Being able to connect your idea to several authors will make building off of your idea way easier.

  4. Oct 2022
    1. rhetorical situation

      Rhetorical situation is so important as a reader, considering the rhetorical situation can help you develop a more detailed understanding of others and their texts.

    2. components of an essay.

      This is great information to learn, learning the components of an essay will benefit you so much in your writing capabilities.

  5. Sep 2022
    1. Sentence Focus

      This is really important, you need to make sure that you are getting your message out. Making sure you are clear, and express emotion is the way your work becomes understandable.

    1. This strategy gives you the ability to prioritize the revisions you are going make in consideration of making changes that will have the greatest effect on your paper

      I could see this becoming a great way to learn.

    1. evision is the real work of writing and is the most time consuming step of the writing process.

      One hundred percent, revision is the real way to become good. If you keep working and fixing your mistakes you will end up becoming severely talented in that.

    2. Communicating through writing does not go away at a certain point in life.

      This is something that's very important to have, our writing will be with us forever.

    3. expressive writing is a process that takes time since thinking and expressing your thoughts, and considering and developing your ideas takes time.

      This is something that I resonate with, it helps develop you're main point which gives you the freedom to do what you want.

    1. esearch may occur later in your writing process as you create a writing plan and discover you would like to learn about other points of view about your topic.

      I like this because it could be a huge time saver if you manage to get those things down first.

    1. metacognitively reflect on your reading, writing, and research in various stages of these processes, in visual and creative ways.

      This is very helpful, you can totally reflect in different ways. It widens your scope.

    1. Taking a step away from your writing plan and looking at it after a pause, you will see where and how you might explain connections, develop the connection/s you see between your topics and evidence, which is your analysis.

      Totally, I do this with my writing too.

    2. A common way to organize your ideas is the good ol’ outline. You can use an outline to determine the order in which you will address the topics in your paper and see your ideas from in linear fashion, which will help you see where you need more evidence to support your topic.

      This is very true, a good outline can create a great piece of work.

    1. Now that Dan has taken you through the reading process, before I take you through these steps, let me share with you what you will learn from engaging with the writing process.

      Perhaps this process ends up taking you where you want to be.

    1. This is not a promotion of ignoranceThis is a linguistic celebration

      To her language is something more than just a way of communicating, it's part of you and it has a big part in your culture.

    2. And announced that I'm"articulate"

      being articulate is really good since you feel strongly about what you say so it becomes interesting and worth listening too.

    1. page 11 "I would like to close by saying that for these reflections on the importance of the act of reading I resolved to adopt the procedure I used because it was consonant with my way of being and with what I am capable of doing." I think reading is far beyond just reading a word out, it can applied to everyone's life and the material you read can be resonate with so many people causing a whole life-change.

    2. page 10 "Consequently for the project I am dedicated to, teaching adults to read and write." It's great he's found something he's passionate about, it speaks volumes to how someone should approach life.

    3. page 9 " My primary effort has been to explain how I became increasingly aware of its importance in my own life." It becomes more deep and sincere since he's applied reading to his life/life decisions.

    4. page 8 "I would like to go back to a time when I was a secondary-school student." I resonate with this because I'm always thinking about what I could've done differently. Especially at a younger age.

    5. page 7 "It is important to add that reading my world, always basic to me, did not make me grow up prematurely, a rationalist in boy's clothing." He gives reassurance that reading that much won't alter your childhood in a bad way.

    6. page 6 "Recapturing distant childhood as far back as I can trust my memory, trying to understand my act of reading the particular world in which I moved was absolutely significant for me." As you grow up you read the world differently, it's always great to look back and see what's changed.

    7. page 5 "Reading the world precedes reading the word, and the subsequent reading of the word cannot dispense with continually reading the world." I agree with this so much, our language is the center of our world.

    1. make connections between sentences; ask yourself what the author was intending to do here

      This a great way to try and create a deeper meaning between you and the text.

    2. the way you read and annotate in a Literature class will vastly differ from the way you read, annotate, and probably take additional notes when reading a Biology textbook.

      This is very true, whatever you read will change the way you perceive it.

    3. The world has changed and most people read on screen these days, both for school and leisure.

      As the world progresses so do our reading and writing habits. We should always be ready for big changes.

    1. that genres are also continually changing

      Everything changes, everything revolutionizes. This includes genres. For Example, comedies now aren't what they used to be.

    1. Some fundamental practices of active reading, like annotation, are universal but adaptable based on how you develop

      Anything you learn, you can adapt into different things.

  6. Aug 2022
    1. Seek relevant authoritative information and recognize the meaning and value of that information

      There's so much informative information out there waiting to be read, so many successful people provide so much information online.

    2. what are your learning goals as a student???

      I believe the things I try to strive for is to try and better myself and the knowledge I need to have in order to achieve my goals.

    1. share ways students can advocate for their own learning.

      Creating a safe space for students can make them be more open with how they want to be taught. It's a great way for the teacher as well, to find certain things he can do to help certain students.

    1. personal story or stories that have greater symbolism and/or meaning for how the author sees themselves and defines their identity.

      This is a valid point as the greater symbolism in a story creates a deeper meaning of what the author perceives to be themselves and what they go through.

    2. Every premise in this text up until now is based on the importance of one’s experience to who they are as a learner, reader, and writer.

      This is a good way to test everyone, since everybody experiences things differently.

    1. they argue that English is not a fixed language, yet has still been used to uphold fixed standard for achievement tests where naturally those who have continually “failed” come out believing that “reading and writing is not for them.

      I agree, it's like were always changing the way we speak and the way certain things mean.

    2. Still, some of our students come into our classes every semester and proclaim that “Reading and writing is not for them,” or “Literature is not my thing.”

      I feel a lot of people can make a connection with that at some point in their life, even right now.

    1. On the outer edge, when teachers don’t adequately assess what students don’t know yet, because they haven’t asked them

      I think there should be check-ins for each student with the teacher.

    2. Therefore, the optimal zone for learning is the “Growth Zone,” right between “comfort” and “panic.” Growth happens when learners work through the appropriate level of challenge; challenge should be determined both by your teacher and the way they set up their classroom; and by you and the way you set up your flexible, growth mindset.

      The Growth Zone is the zone to be in, people learn the most when they know its possible. When you know you can achieve and learn something it helps you keep going.

    3. The next premise of this textbook is that learning must be challenging.

      I believe this, people don't become better by repeating the same step. They go farther and beyond. It's a great philosophy to stick by.

    1. Testing effectively encapsulates what is “wrong” with traditional schooling in our view.

      I feel that a lot of tests don't benefit every student. A lot of students learn differently and express their knowledge differently. So it's something that I believe to outdated and needs to be changed.

    1. students will be motivated to learn based on genuine curiosity, problem solving, and a curriculum that revolves around their lives.

      I feel like this statement is very true, as people tend to learn based off of genuine curiosity rather than something that is forced, that's when school starts to become a chore.

    2. as most of us are lucky enough to be taught basic comprehension in elementary school and don’t give much thought to the act of reading after that, except as a chore for school that it usually becomes around junior high.

      I never really thought about it that way, too me reading and writing was just something that was a must. Never occurred to me that it's rather a gift than something that's ubiquitous.

    3. . Without being able to read, these impoverished workers could not negotiate contracts or learn about how to defend their rights.

      This is very sad but it tells us that this is still an issue and we need to start going about it a bit differently.

    4. In a short answer, because that’s how learning happens best. No matter what your instructor’s philosophy of teaching, if they are using this textbook you can probably assume they agree with us, Kohn and countless others who believe that learning happens constructively, or through a “constructivist approach,” that always has to involve students.

      The common standard for every student is to be involved in the first place. Adding a textbook is just the basic approach to teaching and has been done for a long time, and has a history for working.

    1. This approach is the foundation of active learning and what makes learning engaging, fun, and ultimately the most rewarding for both you, the students, and us, the teachers.

      This is a great way for everyone to benefit.

    2. Hence, this is the foundation of learning that will frame all of our activities in this textbook, where learning is not just about reading information and memorizing it, but where what you get out of this text largely depends on the energy you put back into it through our Discussion Forums, annotation prompts and further conversations ‘in the margins’ using hypothes.is. We are excited about the Open Educational Resource (OER) online format of this text because it allows open spaces for collaboration of ideas, using hypothes.is, to help you “learn by doing” even when reading at home. This approach is the foundation of active learning and what makes learning engaging, fun, and ultimately the most rewarding for both you, the students, and us, the teachers.

      This is a great approach is it benefits everyone, the whole class gets to use their voice.

    3. There are dozens of theories about learning, and while we do borrow from Lev Vygotsky’s “Zone of Proximal Development (ZPD)” when he describes how educators have to be responsive to young learners’ best “zones” for learning, we have narrowed our discussion to theories of adult learning that have been proven to work best actively and collaboratively. This is called constructivist learning, where the knowledge in the classroom is constructed from below (which requires that students are collaborating with teachers)—as opposed to knowledge or information delivered from the top (where teachers deliver a lecture).

      This way of teaching should be tested as every student learns differently. It allows for more interactions to make learning a lot easier.

    1. We would like to start this journey by first preparing you with the mindsets that will empower you to grow and learn through various college situations that you will encounter. To properly develop these mindsets, it’s important to start with a fundamental question: What is learning, and how do we learn best?

      People learn and develop through their experiences, having these encounters during the various college situations is a great way to learn.

    2. The way we will frame the ensuing text about learning, reading, writing, research, and college life in general is through the metaphor and real experience of a journey. Like all trips, this book will have a beginning and an end, with a middle that will provide many insights and stories from our teaching that are hopefully memorable because they relate to your own experience. In fact, one premise of this book is that all meaningful reading and writing is personally motivated in some way: motivated by your connections, motivated by your passions and interests as students. And although your college journey will come to an end in four, five, or six years, we hope that the lessons, practices, and habits that you will learn and practice through this interactive textbook will transfer to many courses, and beyond to many life situations in your career and elsewhere.

      They want to make learning for the reader easier, it makes writing a lot easier as you get to use your personal side.

    1. Responsibility, Metacognition: To reflect on your own learning styles and build strategies for reading and writing based on your individual learning process.

      This is the key to growing up as a person, you have to look back and recognize your mistakes.

    2. Engagement in Active Learning: Introduce how this textbook and classroom activities will engage students in active learning as they read, to engage students with interactive experiences during the process of learning and reading.

      These points should help as it gives every student a way to learn, some people learn in different ways and this is a good solution to that.

    3. Engagement in Active Learning: Introduce how this textbook and classroom activities will engage students in active learning as they read, to engage students with interactive experiences during the process of learning and reading.Openness, Flexibility: Prepare your mindset to be flexible and open to new reading and writing situations in college; reinforce the growth mindset model and prepare students with strategies to control their reading and writing growthResponsibility, Metacognition: To reflect on your own learning styles and build strategies for reading and writing based on your individual learning process.

      These points would be good as it would help a lot of students, some students learn in different ways and this a good solution for that.

    1. When I tell you to remember, I need you to never forget where you come from, who you are, who I am,before this the jungle and mountains were our home

      Remembering the struggles you faced when you were younger will make your success in the future feel much more significant.

    2. So when I tell you to speak up, the screams of my people echo in the shadows of a white man’s ignorance.

      One person's voice can promulgate a whole community of people.