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  1. Last 7 days
    1. I find that the performance of the poem is only possible through the digital medium of video. While Day or an interpreter could sign the accompanying ASL alongside the poem in a live reading, the experience of the ASL and the spoken word intercutting each other would be lost.

      I do feel this intercutting between languages is important to the poem's message since we as the audience are meant to experience what it's like being in between the hearing and non-hearing experience. The editing of the video makes switching between the ASL and the spoken word feel abrupt and disorienting which could be Day's experience as shown by lines like "I saw Joni live & still thought a gay pair of guys put up a parking lot" and "How could I have known You are worthless sounds like Should we do this"

    2. Meg Day uses ASL in tandem with spoken word to emphasize certain phrases. Some of the ASL I could catch seemed to repeat the last bit of the accompanying line.

    3. Elegy in Translation

      Right before the poem begins, Meg Day looks to be communicating with someone off screen and then takes a moment to put on hearing implants.

      Following this, Day appears to fingerspell the title of the poem.

      This sets up the structure of the poem by establishing Day will be using ASL as part of the poem's reading.

    4. Or oil; grease from a fox with the gallof a hare, bear fat melted in hot piss, peach kernels fried in hog lard & tucked along the cavum for a cure; a sharp stickeven, a jagged rock;

      With further research I found that these are some folk remedies people used to "cure" deafness.

    5. I was trying to wave to you but you wouldn’t wave back —The Be Good Tanyas

      The quote is excluded from the original video. What does this add to the poem?

  2. Sep 2026
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