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  1. Apr 2024
    1. KIND WORDS ABOUT THE BODY-BASED SOMATIC HEALING TECHNIQUES

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    2. However, if you want 1-1 writing and healing support from me, please explore my ‘work with me’ page.

      I do offer 1:1 writing and healing support services, so if you're looking for more personalized support than this course provides, send an email to..

    3. If you want community access, I recommend taking one of my other courses.

      This course is a great way to get started on your memoir writing and healing through writing journey - from there, you'll have the opportunity to learn about my other programs that include community access.

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      everything you need to.... [course promise]. You'll get instant access to the 9 modules...

      Scroll back up to see an overview of what's covered in each module!

    5. You don’t need any experience writing and storytelling to take this course.

      No, you don't...

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    6. In case we haven’t met yet, I’m Janelle… And I love all things memoir, body, healing and story. I’m a transformational memoir-writing teacher and body-based healing therapist, and

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      I love all things memoir... and I've been...

    7. Although this is a self-directed course, you won’t feel like you’re doing it alone. Inside the course you’ll find a kind, straightforward process, with plenty of video guidance from your instructor on writing your life stories and healing yourself. It’s a self-paced and very supported process. LET'S DO THIS!

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    8. Body healing technique

      Does each module have a body healing technique? Include this in the overview paragraph.

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    9. Introduction

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      We'll start off with an overview to help you get started on your memoir writing journey on the right foot.

    10. The healing process and why this writing course has a body and somatic focus How to write a literary bio Body healing technique

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    11. About your teacher Janelle (me!) and how my love of stories, writing and embodied healing began. Then explore what’s influenced my work over the years and how that’s shaped this course’s focus on writing and healing.  Learn what memoir is, why it’s such a healing process, and the different forms both personal story writing and the healing journey can take. Learn and use gentle body-based (somatic) techniques for healing (and why they’re so helpful). Decide which story form is the best one for your story, and discover the obvious and the not-so-obvious themes of your life. Then narrow it down by choosing what you’ll put in your story, and what you’ll set aside for later. Optional – learn why and how ancient tales like fairy tale and memoir are such a support to memoir and healing, and how to build a relationship with a tale so it can guide your memoir-writing. Start writing your memoir while learning more about nervous system healing and how it’s connected to resistance and writer’s block. Connect the dots between your difficult life experiences and embodied challenges, then start shifting them, while writing your brilliant and wonderful transformational stories, using either a three or a four-act structure.  To finish, I’ll shares some tips on planning, writing, revising and sharing your stories. More importantly, you’ll learn how to cultivate joy and celebrate your accomplishments on the memoir-writing and healing path.

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      This self paced, on demand course is broken into 9 modules, that will guide you to...[course promise]

      We'll start with... understanding what memoir is..., how to decide what story form is for you, and narrow down what to include in your story..

      Throughout the process, you'll learn gentle body-based (somatic) techniques for healing, that will help you heal your nervous system, making it easier to move past resistance and writer's block, and start wroting your memoir.

      As you go through the course and start writing your stories, you'll connect the dots...

      By the end, you will have learned how to cultivate joy...

    12. Sign up and get those stories out of your head and onto paper. Start getting those difficult experiences out of your body, and alchemised through the writing and storytelling process. Start resolving traumatic responses for good.

      It's time to... - get those stories out of your head and onto paper. - get your difficult experiences out of your body - and resolve traumatic responses for good as you alchemise them through the writing and storytelling process.

    13. Easeful, with somatic techniques to shift out of overwhelm and frustration

      You have somatic (body-based?) techniques to shift you out of overwhelm and frustration, so writing feels easeful.

    14. Feeling overwhelmed and frustrated

      You feel overwhelmed and frustrated, especially when writing about difficult or challenging parts of your story.

    15. And these fears can stop you from starting. But how long will you wait? Months, years, even decades?

      Everyone has fears and worries when it comes to looking at their past and telling their stories.

      But what is it costing you to keep waiting?

    16. Not writing your stories, just thinking about how much you want to write them

      Thinking about how much you want to write your stories, but not actually writing them.

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      learn how to work through them with gentle guidance and a trauma informed approach.

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      Get instant access for just $29.

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    18. . So write more. Don’t let perfectionism stop you. Keep writing.

      and this course will help you write more, without letting perfectionism stop you.

    19. people

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      Start writing your story while healing in the process with the Write Your Life Stories, Heal Your Past self-paced course today!

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    20. Lifetime access (in a self-paced video and written format)

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      • go through at your own pace, and revisit the lessons as many times as you need to.
      • so you can... to help you... without having to... say good bye to...
    21. process

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      Hi! I’m your teacher, Janelle, and I’m a transformational memoir-writing teacher and body-based healing therapist.

      I know a thing or two about how writing and healing go hand in hand.

      I’ve been writing since I was a child, and have published my writing in newspapers, magazines and an anthology of single mother writers. I’m a lover of stories; a lifelong apprentice to the art of storytelling, both written and oral, in both new and ancient tales.

      I've also been on the healing path since my early 20s, and I'm trained in the skills needed to gently and effectively support myself and my students in trauma-healing from a gentle, body-based, nervous-system oriented perspective.

      I created this memoir writing course to help [creative seekers] like you... [course promise]

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    22. I know a thing or two about the healing journey. On the healing path since my early 20s, I’m trained in the skills needed to gently and effectively support myself and my students in trauma-healing from a gentle, body-based, nervous-system oriented perspective.

      Maybe you've tried to write your story in the past but... [use this to describe 1-2 examples what their past experiences have looked like that didn't work for them.]

    23. Heal from difficult experiences using trauma-informed body-based techniques.

      Lean how to write your life stories, while healing from difficult experiences.

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    24. I’ve been writing since I was a child, and have published my writing in newspapers, magazines and an anthology of single mother writers.  And, I’m a lover of stories; a lifelong apprentice to the art of storytelling, both written and oral, in both new and ancient tales. In this course you’ll explore different story structure options, figure out the themes at play in your life, and start writing your stories down!

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    25. Writing your personal stories by yourself without healing support is difficult, which is why I created this course.

      Writing your life story is an inherently healing process, but it can get lonely and overwhelming without guidance - especially when writing about the difficult or traumatic experiences in your past.

      This course provides tools, guidance, and techniques.... (pull from the video here.)

    26. Learn how to write your life stories.  Hi! I’m your teacher, Janelle, and I’m a transformational memoir-writing teacher and body-based healing therapist.

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    27. “I spent hours delving into this work and absolutely loved it.

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      Watch this video to learn how you can write a compelling memoir and tell your story while healing your past.

    28. LET'S DO THIS!

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      I literally could not ask for a more perfect course

      I’ve been looking for a journalling course for EVER! But they all take the same formulaic and (for me) slightly simplistic approach.

      I LOVE that you combine writing with somatic healing exercises.. I’ve watched the first 4 or 5 lessons and I love the sensitivity and depth of your teaching style. You’ve clearly lived and done your research. I know I’m going to get so much out of this, even though I’m very resistant to putting pen to paper.Thank you so much for creating this course

    29. A self-paced on-demand memoir-writing course that prioritises your healing, so you don’t get overwhelmed when you write your difficult stories. And so you can craft your compellingly joyful stories.

      A self-paced on-demand memoir-writing course to help you heal while writing your difficult stories - so you can craft a compelling and joyful memoir without getting overwhelmed.

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    30. Are you ready to write your memoir and heal yourself?  – ENROL NOW →

      Write your memoir while healing your past at the same time --->

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