ersion of Aesop’s fable. There was a boastful rabbit AND There was a slow tortoise AND They decided to race… BUT the rabbit fell asleep AND The tortoise plodded on… THEREFORE the tortoise won the race AND The moral is: “Slow and steady wins the race.”
This part really shows how storytelling isn’t just about what happens, but how you tell it. By shifting where the tension starts, the same basic story can be felt differently. Of course, it is a great way to keep people engaged, but it also raises questions about how much a story can be shaped before it stops being truthful, making readers feels like, in a marketing sense, the author is selling not telling his points.