153 Matching Annotations
  1. Apr 2023
    1. dint know that mice were so smart

      Despite being made to feel inferior, Charlie has no resentment against Algernon and only seems to be amazed by him - this reveals how gentle and kind Charlie is

    2. I woudnt see it so I tryed not to look and that made me nervus

      Charlie is perceptive enough to realise what others are trying to hide from him - much smarter than people give him credit for

    3. I dint see howe we could have the same amazed if Algernon had a box and I had a paper

      Charlie is unable to see how a 3D maze can be mapped into a 2D drawing on paper

    4. amazed and that Algernon and me had the same amazed

      **Due to his poor literacy, Charlie uses "amazed" instead of "a maze" - this is a malapropism (the wrong use of a word to replace a similar-sounding one). **

    5. He's just a mouse.

      Charlie unthinkingly stereotypes Algernon as being beneath him, as he is an animal - the same way other people have been stereotyping Charlie. However, what Charlie does not know is that Algernon has super-intelligence from the experiments.

    6. CHARLIE laughs.

      Charlie's innocent laughter conveys his delight at seeing an adorable white mouse - Charlie is easily entertained and has a simple heart

    7. Ill try reely hard to see the pictures.

      Touchingly, Charlie has not given up - he is determined to once again try his best, revealing his innate sense of optimism.

    8. my frend Bert

      Charlie is so innocent that he now considers Bert a friend, despite their shallow and brief interaction. This reveals how simple and good-hearted Charlie is.

    9. I tryed the hardist and I reely wantid to lem

      Again we see Charlie's admirable attitude of optimism and perseverance - a disposition only Ms K seems to appreciate so far

    10. I don't care if it hurts.

      Charlie is so desperate to be like everyone else that he is willing to endure anything. Again, this reveals the deep suffering he has endured due to his disability.

    11. all my life I wanted not to be stupid

      Charlie reveals a heartbreaking self-consciousness here. While others may assume him to be too stupid to have deep feelings, this makes it clear he feels deeply inferior.

    12. Why did you want to learn to read and to spell?

      Dr Nemur is puzzled by why Charlie would want to improve himself; he does not seem to think him capable of wanting to be better

    13. stares blankly at him.

      Charlie appears to not be able to comprehend what "star pupil" means - again, he shows a difficulty with figurative language

    14. Miss Kinnian tells us you're her star pupil.

      Dr Strauss kindly tries to affirm Charlie - this also reveals that Miss K is very proud of Charlie

    15. to learn to read and spell good

      Charlie is aware of his poor literacy and is driven to do better - however, the doctors do not seem to see this as admirable

    16. Did someone tell you to go there?

      Even Dr Strauss does not consider Charlie capable of seeking out education himself. He assumes that Charlie would have had to be told to do so

    17. Miss Kinnian never gives me tests like that one.

      *Charlie is desperately trying to explain his poor performance, trying to rationalise that he can be taught to do better *

    18. Tell us about the night school you go to.

      Again, Dr Nemur's communication to Charlie is phrased as a command, as if he feels Charlie is unable to respond to normal conversation

    19. It doesn't matter.

      Dr Strauss kindly tries to comfort Charlie. However, in saying this, he also reveals that Charlie's hard work is insignificant

    20. I couldn't see the pictures. I'm really sorry.

      Charlie pre-emptively apologises, before Dr Strauss can even tell him the results. He bursts out in an apology because he feels that he is likely to be blamed for his poor performance, revealing that Charlie seems to have been blamed before

    21. Sit down please.

      Dr Nemur is uninterested in responding to Charlie's greeting. He issues this command because he does not see Charlie as being worthy of conversation.

    22. I dont think I passd the test

      The scene ends on a depressing note - Charlie is clearly devastated and disappointed in himself, and the finality of his statement suggests that he considers himself a failure

    23. Im trying very hard.

      again, Charlie shows a heartbreaking sincerity and dedication - despite his disability, he is willing to try harder than anyone else

    24. Miss Kinnians class for slow adults

      Charlie reveals that the class he attends is for people already labelled deficient by society - a group of people considered different from others

    25. Im not so fast somtimes. Im a slow reeder too

      Charlie's humility here is sad and touching. Charlie knows that he is deficient compared to other people - he is pleading for others to accept him and give him a chance

    26. I told him I saw a inkblot but he wantid me to say what was in the ink

      Charlie sees things literally and struggles to look at things figuratively

    27. when I was a kid I always faled tests in school and I spilled ink to

      Through this, we learn that Charlie frequently got into trouble for his academic failures and clumsiness in school. It is evident from this that people viewed Charlie negatively despite his cheerful and gentle nature.

    28. I had my rabits foot in my pockit

      a rabbit's foot is meant to bring luck. Charlie already believes himself incompetent and thus, out of his deep sense of insecurity, feels compelled to use such tokens.

    29. was very skared

      Charlie has a deep psychological trauma from failing tests before - this reveals that he has suffered mentally from feeling incompetent all his life

    30. I think that maybe now they wont use me

      the pessimistic tone reveals that Charlie feels hurt and disappointed. Despite what others may think of him, Charlie is sensitive and has deep feelings.

    31. unexpected formal politeness makes BERT stop his shuffling and look at CHARLIE properly for the first time

      Bert has not expected Charlie to be capable of good manners. Like everyone else, he has not considered Charlie to be a fully-functioning human with thoughts and feelings.

    32. I'm Charlie.

      Although Bert has already stated his name, Charlie echoes it again. This reveals that Charlie's conversation is simple and thoughtless, reflecting how basic his thoughts are.

    33. BERT

      It is interesting that the playwright Bert Coules names the lab technician Bert after himself. Perhaps Coules does so because Bert is kind and patient to Charlie, suggesting that Coules's message to us is emulate this compassion.

    34. humming tunelessly

      Charlie's inability to carry a tune is again a sign of his intellectual disability. However, the fact that he is humming indicates a good mood and an optimistic disposition, suggesting that Charlie is a cheerful person despite his problems.

    35. Average for his development. Perhaps slightly above.

      Although Miss K acknowledges Charlie is not exceptional, she still tries to push that he is "slightly above" - Miss K is an optimistic teacher who wants the best for her students

    36. Not long

      Miss K is reluctant to acknowledge that Charlie struggled with the recorder - she is trying to help Charlie get a place in the experiment

    37. maybe they can make me smart. I want to be smart. I have nuthing more to say now.

      this is an intensely personal narrative; the doctors are listening to Charlie's inner thoughts

    38. I hope they use me

      despite being objectified as something to "use", Charlie doesn't seem to mind - he just wants to help and to improve himself. Charlie is sincere and simple-minded.

    39. shud say about what I think and evrey thing that happins

      frequent misspellings reveal that Charlie is not very literate (not very good at reading or writing); again, a symbol of how he struggles with intellectual tasks.

    40. mic bumps, and the first words are much too close and distorted

      Although Charlie has been taught to use the microphone, he is still clumsy and awkward with it, revealing how much of a struggle he faces in daily life.

  2. Feb 2023
    1. At last

      the longing tone of "at last" and the drawn-out prolonged vowels contain her intense yearning to find true love, as well the long duration of time she has waited!

  3. Mar 2022
    1. Who then

      the question of "Who" implies that in the present, justice is delivered to black people and their attackers are rooted out, unlike in the past where anyone could be their assailant (and it would not be addressed)

    2. realized that these men were trying to blame Kevin for "hurting" my arm

      Kevin, a white man in the present, is now placed in the position of the oppressed, treated and "blame(d)" the way white people used to treat slaves

    3. "Accident," I heard myself whisper. "It was an accident."

      Dana refers to her injury as an accident; an allusion to how Rufus also suffers many "accidents"

    4. Hurt. As though I'd scratched my arm

      her indignation at the low word intensity of "hurt" conveys that she considers her injury grievous and traumatic, perhaps even impossible to heal from unlike a "scratch"

    5. Who hurt you?

      in the present, the police are focused on addressing the harm done to a black woman (Dana), contrasting with the past where it is accepted that black women may suffer pain

    6. shad­ows

      connoting darkness, suggesting that perhaps the police in the modern day are black people (thus implying equality: the powerless become the enforcers of law)

    7. I had to convince the police that he did not belong in jail

      an inversion of how black people lack liberty in the past in the present, black people have the power to report white people to the police, and white people can be prosecuted

    8. he came to the hospital and stayed with me so that I would know I hadn't lost him too

      Kevin is a loving and devoted husband, a contrast / foil to Rufus: where Rufus takes security from Dana, Kevin restores it to her

  4. Feb 2022
    1. about a year of my life

      literal meaning: she has lost a year spent in the past figuratively: she has lost a year of her life due to stress and fear

    2. last trip home

      Dana is going between the past and present; it is unclear whether she is referring to the past or present as "home", suggesting she is equally familiar with both

    1. my last trip home

      Dana has travelled to both the past and present - which is the "home" she refers to here? Could be either past or present, indicating she is torn between both

  5. Nov 2021
  6. Sep 2021
    1. “I wish I had a hundred years,” she said, very quietly. “A hundred years I could give to you.”

      the hyperbole of "hundred years" conveys the mother's deep and lasting love for Conor, as she wishes to spend an entire lifetime with her beloved son

    2. administered painkillers so strong she was never able to stay awake after she took them

      tells us that the pain Conor's mother feels is so intense that the painkillers knock her out

    3. ou feel bad for being so angry, if you feel bad for being so angry at me that you couldn’t even speak to me,

      she understands Conor's feelings and forgives him for all of them

    4. “You be as angry as you need to be,” she said. “Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise. Not your grandma, not your dad, no one. And if you need to break things, then by God, you break them good and hard.”

      his mother tells him to express his feelings freely, showing that she loves Conor and wants the best for him

    5. It’s okay that you’re angry, sweetheart,” she said. “It really, really is.

      she allows and encourages Conor to express his feelings, even if they are unkind to her, showing her deep love for him

    6. It’s probably what’s kept me here so long, Conor. Believing it so you would

      Conor's mother makes it clear that she has stayed alive all this while ("kept me here so long") simply out of love for Conor

    7. “You lied,” Conor said, looking back up at her. “You’ve been lying this whole time.”

      Conor feels betrayed and hurt, still wanting to believe that things will get better

    8. “I’ve never been more sorry about anything in my life.”

      Conor's mother deeply regrets her early death and feels guilty about leaving Conor early

    9. deep breath to speak, which set her off into a terrible, heavy-sounding coughing fit.

      Conor's mother is struggling to speak, which also conveys the tremendous sacrifice she makes to communicate her feelings to Conor

    10. she was blushing furiously

      the imagery of "blushing furiously" tells us Lily feels shy and embarrassed, because the note reveals her deep personal feelings

    11. I underlined about a hundred times

      Lily emphasises repeatedly she cherishes Conor, emphasising that regardless of how others treat him, she will always "see" him and care for him - suggests Lily is a loyal friend

    12. I’m sorry for telling everyone about your mum, read the first line.

      Lily has accepted her mistake - her first act is to apologise for hurting Conor, suggesting that she has matured enough to accept responsibility

    13. “Take it,” she whispered out of the side of her mouth

      Lily repeatedly tries to reach out to Conor - moving that she tries to re-establish their friendship

    14. where she’d sat throughout all the years they’d been in school together

      sense of familiarity with Lily's position in class; the physical nearness and familiarity emphasise how close they usually were and thus, how far apart they now are

    15. Making fun of him no doubt. Look at Conor O’Malley, just sitting there like a lump. What a freak.

      Conor expects mockery now; he has become pessimistic and hopeless, expecting others to mistreat him