so, too, are the now routine responses from congressional lawmakers of both parties.
Correlates school shootings with politics
so, too, are the now routine responses from congressional lawmakers of both parties.
Correlates school shootings with politics
While the nation's latest mass shooting at a private school in Nashville, Tennessee, seems sadly all too familiar
Hinting at the rise of school shootings
writings
I annotated this article yesterday. It has since been updated so now my annotations are no longer here. On the hypothesis website you can see all the annotations I made. On hypothesis, the title said "manifesto" and now the updated version says "writings." thats very interesting
Questions regarding the motive behind the shooting still linger, as the shooter Audrey Hale’s journal writings collected by authorities as evidence remain in police custody and outside of the public eye
I already annotated this, but for some reason it went away
152 rounds
Discussed the amount of rounds fired. Very specific for a title
over a period of months,’ police say
The whole article is about how the shooting was premeditated, yet does not discuss much about the amount of writings there were discussing it. It was mentioned multiple times, but there weren't many details surrounding it or conclusions to be suggested
renewed the debates over the scourge of American gun violence, access to firearms and school safety. Hale, who police said was under care for an emotional disorder, had legally
This last tidbit feeds into the widely debated gun control talk. Bringing up the "renewed" debate shows how it is only discussed when the next mass school shooting happens before it dies out again. It also sounds bias in the structural choice to place the debate is back up and the shooter was under emotional disorder yet legally bought firearms
Hale targeted the school and Covenant Presbyterian Church, to which the school is attached, police said, but it’s believed the victims were fired upon at random.
This again, references the writings left by the shooter. If they were willing to release graphic body cam footage, it causes the public to question why the writings wouldn't be released. THis also allows people to come to the conlusion I have seen on social media that it was a targeted attack on christians. People could come to this conclusion based on this line
5.56 rounds from his rifle,
The article mentions multiple times how many rounds were shot be each person. They chose to be specific
Two officers opened fire – a moment captured in bodycam footage later released by police
The body cam footage was released, backing up this point made in the article.
review writings left behind by Hale, which police said Monday contain documentation of Hale’s planning.
This was another aspect I noticed a lot on social media. People online want the manifesto to be released and believe there's more to it than they're stating. This article does not comment on the potential release of the manifesto, but does mention her writings and how she studied other mass murderers
The 28-year-old who killed three children and three adults at a Christian school in Nashville last week fired 152 rounds,
The lead of the story describes the shooter, how many rounds, and the school. The word choice to use an adjective to describe the school was used. I found this interesting. The article also left out the gender of the shooter and I know that was a highly discussed aspect of the shooting
"We have to do more to stop gun violence," he said, once again urging Congress to pass tougher gun control laws. "It is ripping our communities apart, and ripping at the very soul of this nation."The attack was America's 129th mass shooting of 2023, according to Gun Violence Archive, a non-profit that tracks gun violence data.According to data compiled by Education Week, there have been 12 school shootings that have resulted in deaths or injuries in the US this year up until the end of last week.
They put gun control information at the very end of article. This is usually where the least important information goes. Interesting to put at the bottom
Presbyterian-affiliated Covenant School
clarified the denomination of christianity
"It is very, very difficult right now",
THis article only used this one quote from the mother, leaving out other informaiton I found in other articles
First call
The organization of the article shows how they first discussed the manifesto, gender, and guns. This just now goes into how the incident unfolded. Shows me they wanted to put what they deemed as most important in the beginning
officers said they believe "resentment" may have been a motive.
This hints at a motive while other articles explicitly stated no motive. Speculation
There has been some confusion about Hale's gender identity - with police initially describing the attacker as a woman, and later saying that Hale identified as transgender.
This could explain why some news articles left out or described the status of the shooters gender identity
Police said the suspect, armed with three guns, gained entry by shooting through a door at the school.
They discussed the suspect coming in armed with 3 guns, says nothing about legally bought
THis is the first article that discussed the seizing of guns at the home of attacker. The word choice of seize guns is interesting because it sounds a lot more dramatic and focuses the attention on the guns conversation
Founded in 2001, the Covenant School is a private Presbyterian school in Nashville with some 200 students in pre-K through sixth grade, according to the school's website.
I thought this was random. The entire article discussed Hale as a person, then abruptly ended with when the school was founded and enrollment
s "very nice" and "very religious."
I also didn't know this. Interesting to use the quote religious as it was an attack on christian children. I wish it went more into her religious affiliations
I think I lost my daughter today,"
I have never seen an interview with the mother. Interesting they used this quote because she refers to the shooter as "daughter" compared to the transgender identity of being a man
school and church building itself were the targets. Investigators said she had several writings about other locations and a map of Covenant School with drawings of potential entry points there.
This goes into the writings and how the school and church were a target, but keeps in that there were other locations targeted. Some article did not do that
Police said that Hale had seven legally purchased guns, three of which were used the day of the shooting. Officials said that Hale was being treated for an unspecified emotional disorder.
The choice of "legally" and "unspecified emotional disorder" in the same sentence leads to the narrative of gun control
Who was Nashville shooter Audrey Hale?
The headline constructs the story to describe who the shooter was other than a monster. It off the bat identifies her as the Nashville shooter, so it makes people want to click to find out more
website that appears to be associated with Hale indicates that Hale was a Nashville-based graphic designer and illustrator who created logos and branding to "help tell a company's story" and "bring a whimsical and light-hearted feel."
The organization of this article put the shooters occupation first. THis is peculiar choice but fits the title of the article as who the shooter was
A police spokesperson told ABC News that Hale was assigned female at birth and pointed to a social media account linked to Hale that included use of the pronouns he/him
The lengthiest description I have seen describing the transgenderism behind Audrey
The 28-year old graphic designer once attended the school, police said
First time I have seen a lead describe the shooter as graphic designer. I feel like this makes the shooter seem human and "normal"
WSMV4 investigation found Hale likely trained for the shooting.
The news station had the investigation who found Hale liekly to train. I am curious to know how this played out
continue to grow louder on social media, from Tennessee lawmakers to Elon Musk, country music stars and Donald Trump Jr.
Choosing this source is a political and prominence angle
Typically, evidence in such a mass shooting investigation would not be made public until the investigation is closed, the department said. Yet, it remains open.
This was worded confusingly to me. But it sounds like the reason it wasn't released was ebcause the investigation is still open. THis would explain what the entire article is about.
The writings could explain why Hale, a former student at the school, drove to the school March 27 and opened fire, killing three 9-year-olds, a school administrator, a substitute teacher and a custodian.
this is speculation. Hinting at narrative
Investigators were reviewing writings by Hale, who had attended the Covenant School, and had interviewed the suspect's parents. Drake said during a Tuesday press briefing that the shooter had legally purchased seven firearms from five local gun dealers. Three of those weapons were used in Monday's attack.
This entire section hardly talked about the writings and jumped right back, stating for the second time, the firearms were legally purchased. This shows me that the angle this article took was from the conclusions I have been making about either the transgender hate on christians narrative or gun control narrative and this is gun control
Police say they don't yet have a motive for the shooting.
I found this itneresting because the other articles discuss a potential motive or hint at the writings, yet this clearly states it that police do not know the motive
Drake said he had also spoken with Biden, who told him he intended to reach out to the officers too.
Interesting info. I did not know this or have heard this piece of information. It is vague and I wonder if it was respectful or tension
Collazo and the other officers reach the second floor, where one says, "We've got one down," as loud gunshots are heard.
Again, this framework and organization reads like a story in a book compared to sounding like a news article
amouflage-style pants, a white T-shirt, a red cap and a black vest, Hale shoots out the glass of a side door and crawls through the opening to access the building.
Very descriptive. Almost written like a story than a news article. Appeals to human interest
Authorities initially identified Hale as a woman but later clarified that Hale used he/him pronouns.
This article addressed the transgenderism and handled it differently than other sources. Respected and took part in the transgender lanuage
Families leave a reunification center in Nashville on Monday after three children and three adults were killed in a shooting at the Covenant School.
IMage hints at emotional appeal of children
Gun Violence Archive, there have been 130 mass shootings in the U.S. so far this year
Again, using this source and key words lead to suggested narrative
legally and had been in treatment for an emotional disorder
Fueling the narrative
sympathy from politicians, including President Biden and others across the U.S., and it reignited calls for Congress to do more to prevent school shootings.
Straight from story to the discussion of gun violence
Presbyterian
Clarification chosen to represent what denomination
including three children
Every article has consistently clarified that 3 of the 6 individuals murdered were children
Hagerty accused the Biden administration of being more focused on sculpting the "narrative," as opposed to the reality of the situation.
Inviting the lawmakers who protested for gun control were invited to the White House over the victims families. This is what fueled Hagerty and angered him into the scultping of narrative
We're doing we can to put in place legislation
I wonder what specifically he is referring to
slammed the White House for inviting the "Tennessee Three," a group of state lawmakers who protested after the Nashville school shooting, to the White House but not the victims of the brutal massacre.
The shooting has become political
arguing the manifesto's release could "answer a lot of questions," and should be released the lawmakers and families affected by the shooting.
I agree it could be helpful, but it's hard to not assume that there's another intent and that is to push the opposite narrative that transgender individuals are a danger, especially to the christian community
"It seems that certain information is flooded into the marketplace immediately if it fits the narrative, so to speak. If the information does not fit the narrative, it seems to get suppressed."
This is extremely fascinating because we have learned about narratives. I believe he's reaching the conclusion that the narrative the media want to push is for gun control, but what do you do when a transgender attack christians when the right side believes transgenderism is the push for left narratives
"perplexing"
I like this quoted word choice
20 journals, five laptops and a suicide note among other things at the shooter's home.
The articles annotated before did not note this much information, granted it may have not come out at the time
FBI has been accused of stalling its release
Accused by who specifically?
Tennessee Sen. Hagerty accuses Biden admin of being 'focused entirely on politics' after Covenant School shootings
This is political in itself because it's republican going after democrat
Authorities are facing mounting pressure to unveil the Nashville school shooter's manifesto to shed light on the motive behind the brutal massacre that left six people, including three children, dead last month.
This shows how people are pushing for the release of the manifesto. I do wonder, who are the authorities?
Other Tennessee lawmakers were quick to offer their condolences and support following Monday's attack.
The last half of the article shares quotes from lawmakers offering prayers. This reinforces the christian unity, compared to the gun control narrative
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This quote stands alone with no attribution obvious. This is the narrative angle the article took. That it was an attack on christians by the transgender movement.
Rev. Mark Spalding of the Diocese of Nashville said in a statement. Let us pray for the victims, their families, and the Covenant Presbyterian community."
The use of a Reverand as a source, and noting it is a Presbyterian community indicates the push of the narrative of transgender attack on christian ideology
Two of the weapons may have been purchased legally in the Nashville area,
This article uses the word choices of "may have been pruchased legally" which does not sound definite like the other articles did. Diverting and taking away from the narrative of stricter gun laws
written a manifesto.
A suggestion towards a manifesto with detailed descriptions of how to carry out the act
transgender woman.
This is stated wrong. Also it is the third mention of gender and the article has hardly began
engaged with and killed
This, along with words like 'attack' earlier in the sentence show the way different word choices change the meaning. Does engage mean communicate? Negotiate?
28-year-old woman
The lead identifies the shooter as a female. This is the first article I have read that immediately stated the gender and stated it as a fact
who identified as a
First mention in the article of how Audrey identified as. Makes it clear she identified as a man while the article suggests everyone else identifies the shooter as a woman.
Hale's writings also indicated that The Covenant School wasn't the killer's only target, authorities said.
Again, reference to the writings yet the writings would not be released. Shakes the trust
praised his officers for taking on the shooter
the word 'praised' chosen shows the officers as heroes, which I agree with, but this wasn't a consistency among other articles
Two of those three weapons were legally obtained in the Nashville area,
Although they made the choice to say it was legally bought, fueling the gun control debate, they also noted that one was not, so it loses credibility to use as a tool in the push for gun control
feel that she identifies as trans, but we’re still in the initial investigation into all of that and if it actually played a role into this incident
This again hints to the conclusion. The article carefully selects words and uses quotes to come to that conclusion without confirming it as truth
Hale was transgender
This was purposely noted in the article with no other description other than up to the reader to find the conclusion that the shooter was seeking revenge because christian ideology does not support transgenderism
alleged to have left behind writings being studied by local and federal investigators
This is the key detail used to get to the conclusion reached that the shooter sought revenge. Using the word "alleged" means it is not a fact or proven, but a lot of times people look right past this word and take it as truth.
e resentment for having to go to that school,
This is the quote that confirms this article surrounds the idea of finding the conclusion of why the shooter committed the crime and pieces of the story hint to this conclusion
This title suggests the article will be more about why Hale committed the crime rather than the story behind it. This hints at the narrative conclusion of the transgender seeking revenge on christian ideology instilled when the shooter was a prior student.
survey stated that 39% of Americans have a favorable opinion of Trump, down 3 percentage points from a November poll that found his favorable opinion at 42%, but up from 38% in the summer
The entire article discusses different polls. Although they are a little ambiguous, they are consistent in the results, adding validity.
recent ABC News/Ipsos poll revealed Biden's approval up nearly 10-points over Trump, locking in a 34% favorability rate among Americans compared to 25% who have a favorable opinion of the former president. The survey was conducted April 6 to 7, with a margin of error of plus or minus 4.4 percentage points.
This is another example summarizing another poll.
Quinnipiac University also released a national survey
This clarifies a national survey with percentages, dates, margin of error, but it still leaves the question to how many answered and demographics. The article does not specify
several recent polls indicate President Joe Biden has a higher approval rating than former President Donald Trump
This part refers to several polls, but it does not clarify how many or what polls exactly.
“Don’t Say Gay” law, which prevents teachers from talking about LGBTQ+ issues or people.
This is an example of citing something by paraphrasing. It is a fact and she hyperlinked the source
retaliation for its opposition
Retaliation is another word choice of a metaphor that Desantis was getting revenge or fighting back
strip
Another metaphor term that Desantis took away a power
losing to both Donald Trump and Mickey Mouse
This goes in hand with the war metaphor and Desantis losing to Trump and Disney. The reference of culture war is prominent and the ideology behind the culture battle
powerless
this is another word that can be seen as a metaphor. This entails no freedom or choice, submissive, hopeless. This entails the board members cannot do anything and it is out of their control
declared victory in his battle with Disney
This is a metaphor about war. The word choice of "declared victory" and the "battle" entails it is a binary function of win and loss.
More than half of American workers with AI-related PhDs work for a handful of big-name companies. So, our elected representatives should initiate a whole-of-government effort — across Congress, the departments of Commerce and Labor, the FCC, and the SEC — to build a regulatory framework to match.
This is another example of conclusion as they cite evidence to back up the conclusion that companies and elected officials must do something about the increase of AI
Software developers should commit to continuous monitoring through “algorithmic canaries” — models designed to spot malign content like fake news — and external, independent audits of their algorithms.
This is another example of conclusion. The opinion piece is giving advice to companies on what to do with AI
All of this has our alarm bells ringing.
This statement sounds like speculation that something alarming will happen if AI isn't controlled
Along the way, these algorithms replicate human error and bias, often in ways not discernible until the consequences are before us: Intolerable cruelty, unjust arrests, and the loss of critical care for millions of Black people, to name a few
Although this is an opinion piece, they cite their sources and have factual evidence to support their claims. This is an example of an informed opinion
BUTLER COUNTY, Ohio
This shows the proximity relevance
The district said
This makes me question who specifically said this and how did they know this information
Local 12 is not naming the teacher
This is important because the article prompts the reader to find out who the teacher was that had an alleged relationship with former student. The news source decided to not name the teacher bcause of no criminal charge