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  1. Oct 2022
    1. If you cannot speak English, you are basically uneducated. You are not seen as someone who is literate and knowledgeable if you are not fluent in English, and it has led to many issues - personal and political.”

      I am not too sure why there is such an emphasis for many countries to feel as though students must speak English as a second language. While I 100% agree with teaching and somewhat expecting an understanding of a second language to make sure students can better understand others I do not understand why English. I only have trouble with this because in the U.S. we have languages offered as a second language but that is really only in late junior high and about two years in high school. The second language is not brought up early or kept all throughout a students educational career like in other countries. If we do not have this expectation that a student should have a better understanding of another language beyond a tenth grade level why should we almost expect other countries to learn English?

    2. -there’s also possibility in allowing, as Evie puts it, “language to be a bridge for better communication as opposed to a barrier.”

      My favorite quote. Allowing is better than denying, so even if the student does reject the activity she at allowed them the opportunity to see what could be produced.

    3. she reports the strategy yielded richer conversation and an increased number of possibilities for making choices. The difference we see in Evie’s retelling of her third and successful attempt, is that she adds an encouraging, “Just speak and see what happens, see what we find out.”

      It's also important to note that Evie kept trying this strategy after the first two were deemed unsuccessful. Many people might have stopped after those two encounters and not have asked the third time.

    4. She explained her ideas with a degree of depth and detail that I hadn’t gotten yet in this section of the piece.

      As someone who speaks two languages I can see why people who have a better concept in another language can be confused as to why they should say their ideas to someone who does not speak that language. It feels as though you are talking to yourself because while the other person may be listening intently they have no idea what those words mean. Saying ideas and concepts out loud though in the language you are more comfortable explaining in though gets you to explain in a deeper understanding.

    5. I said that I didn’t speak Mandarin but maybe she could try it and see if she could articulate her ideas in her first language as a start. She declined. Rejection washed over me.

      What is important is creating the opportunity and option for the student to partake in. Maybe she declined, but allowing for her to choose is better than shutting her down.

    6. She explained to me that at home they use a word similar to “stomp”, since the heart is viewed almost as though it were personified. When it speeds up, it’s similar to that of a person speeding up their pace... stomping on the ground.

      Inquiring allowed Afrah to see why the student used a certain word after finding out the meaning and reason as to why they chose that word. I do not think people get asked why they chose a certain word and are almost always corrected without second thought.

    7. When we imagine our work holistically as taking an interest rather than helping, we are better able to recognize the connections among how people believe and act, write, sign, and speak.

      I think just the change of going from helping to taking an interest has more impact on how we approach students and how the session can be different based on what word you use.

    8. to so many of you guys, I might have never been able to notice the treatment of these students because I never before thought to look outside of my bubble.

      We tend to not realize how small our bubble and perspective are until we are exposed to other perspectives and ideas unprovoked.

    9. far more likely to pursue careers in the global creative industries

      And because of this it is important to see diversity and understand how the world is bigger than just our point of view.

    10. We ensure our writing center tutoring staff is culturally and linguistically diverse--often more than the general student population--to promote multi/translingual experiences and perspectives as a norm in our increasingly globalized world

      Having the tea, to be diverse even more so than the student populations allows for all students to feel represented and know they are able to find someone who in way or another share a commonality with them.

    11. create conditions that encourage peer and professional consultants’ theoretical and pedagogical thinking about language and social justice within the context of their own experiences as language users and tutors.

      I like how it says peer and consultants to ensure that both parties are included in using their own experiences to have a session flow better.

  2. Sep 2022
    1. a marked-up paper indicates to the student thatthe agenda has already been set.

      The student should bring up their concerns therefore setting up the teacher on what the agenda is and how they can go about it versus the teacher deciding what the issue is.

    2. student contributions to the agenda-setting processoften are missed if the teacher has fixed on a problem early

      I think it is important to remember that this is more of a conference and the students are at least in my opinion supposed to dominate the conversating more so than the teacher.

    3. Herethe teacher speaks only 97 words to the student's 397, and in manyof the exchanges she simply prods the student with a "yes.

      The teacher is allowing the student to dominate the conversation and conference. The teacher is more of an encourager and believe the students knows what they want to say but simply needs a push into explaining what they are thinking.

    4. "make sure that life is still going on," the writer seems to have founda reason for her need for letters.

      The student says what she wanted her paper to talk about and hasn't even realized it. The teacher can keep this in mind and try to encourage the student to incorporate more of this into her paper.

    5. Ihad a lot of ideas I wanted to put in ... and they didn't seem to flow.

      Student starts out right from the beginning that they do not like their paper and that their concern is not having all their ideas flow in their paper.

    6. The teacheridentifies a problem and suggests remedies before the student is evenconvinced that a problem exist

      While the teacher can point out a problem and suggest a solution is it really a problem if the student doesn't think so? The student reminds the teacher as some point that they are told to avoid using "it seems" right after the teacher told her to. The student doesn't see an issue because they've checked from the textbook what they should avoid and the teacher going somewhat against that creates more of an issue.

    7. The gamble is that by ignoring, for a time,various technical problems in the writing and by emphasizing thepositive, the writer will, in the near future, gain enough confidence todeal with these technical matters.

      I think this is important to point out that the teacher sees the students lack of confidence as more of an issue compared to the technical writing issues in the paper because the teacher wants the student to feel confident in writing.

    8. In thesefirst few minutes the student characterizes her writing as: "boring"(twice), "it doesn't say much;' "it might be kind of dumb;' and "toolong:'

      I think as someone who also does not have a lot of confidence in herself I can see how these small comments don't seem like a big deal to the student but to the teacher it shows the students self esteem. With these comments we can try to counteract them by encouraging the writer and praising them for what they're good at.

    9. It doesn'treally say much

      This is said a couple times before as well. I like how the teacher after this brought up the concern and asked what the student wanted to say

    10. theyneed to set an agenda, agree to one or two major concerns that willbe the focus of the conference.

      Setting up a goal in the beginning and if the concerns change then we can check throughout the session.

    11. The teachermust balance two opposing mandates: on the, one hand to respond tothe student, to evaluate, to suggest possible revisions and writingstrategies; and on the other to encourage the student to take theinitiative, to self-evaluate, to make decisions, to take control of the

      Trying to balance two ways of approaching the student and knowing when to encourage and when to suggest.