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  1. Apr 2021
    1. Or fester like a sore—

      I see this intense imagery representing a dream not going according to plan, but is there any deeper meaning to it? Or is it just personification?

    2. He did a lazy sway . . . He did a lazy sway . . .

      Lazy is used here in a positive way, it's showing how different blues is to other music, just letting someone vibe and create a wholly different and unique sound.

    3. But I laugh, And eat well, And grow strong.

      Staying strong despite circumstances? Staying true to yourself? Or maybe biding your time and staying positive.

    4. My soul has grown deep like the rivers.

      Are the rivers a metaphor for experiences? I've known rivers or "I've seen some shit." It mentions specific rivers, and in the end "My soul has grown deep like the rivers," I've grown more wise and experienced over the years.

    1. You need me, Christ! It is no roseate dream That beckons me—this pretty futile seam,

      Is this the speaker realizing her role? or at least the importance of staying strong despite her circumstance?

    2. I sit and sew—my heart aches with desire—

      The speaker is forced to sew, going back to that first bit, nothing is wrong with the job inherently, but it's the forcing of the labor that causes issue.

    3. My hands grown tired, my head weighed down with dreams—

      Starting off by stating that sewing is a useless task, combined with the weighed down dreams, seems like negative reinforcement set upon the speaker by others, with the words "it seems," it can be suggested that the uselessness of the task isn't her own opinion.

    1. But let us break the seal of years

      Let us show the world our contents? Being still and sure of themselves is one thing, but now it's time to break that stillness and show the world what makes ourselves great?

    2. Oh let them sing

      Now the previous lines make more sense, be proud of what your are, even if, and especially if you are different from the rest, be still in your belief in yourself.

    3. By entities of Self …

      It struck me as odd that the title being usward, a play on words to move forward as a people, started off with the people being still, but this line makes it feel more like the stillness is in reference to their identities of themselves.

    1. I saw a darky dressed fit to kill

      This sentence really stood out to me, the vocabulary of "fit to kill," obviously alludes to having a really nice outfit, but that particular use of the word kill to describe someone of color makes me feel uneasy.

    1. Be still, be still, my precious child,

      I can see this being two different things, either a still born child, "be still, be still," or it could be a potential child, a mother debating on whether she wants a child or not.

    1. I might be driven to sell your love for peace,

      Love isn't worth strife, love isn't worth war, or jealousy, or conflict, or ill health. Talking about love like something that can be sold is a huge contrast to how it is traditionally seen in poetry

    2. Love can not fill the thickened lung with breath,

      I love how strongly the speaker's voice comes through in this poem, bashing the romanticism of love in poetry and comparing it to one's well being and separating the two

    1. “Why do they make good neighbors?

      I love the questions the speaker asks, we as the reader can clearly see their ideology and how it clashes subtly with the rest of the poem

    2. He only says, “Good fences make good neighbors.”

      A metaphoric way of saying separation benefits society? separation of class, of race, of sex? People aren't able to mingle together and live peacefully?

    3. We keep the wall between us as we go.

      It's at this moment where I start to see an underlying message in the poem, before I was imagining a literal wall and its properties. But this statement shows some hints of representing people or a society

    1. What comes of all your visions and your fears?

      What's the point in all of this desperation to hold on to youth? What does that dream do for you, what does that fear do for you? Is he chastising those that don't see the beauty in age?

    2. Be sure, they met me with an ancient air,—

      Juxtaposing himself with the previous statement? Calling himself undesirable and ancient compared to those with young blood and those that are sought after. Nice way to describe the self.

    1. It takes life to love Life.

      This statement is small yet so powerful, the speaker talks of living life in the present moment and loving all of the little things that we often overlook in such a playful yet powerful way.

    1. “I’ve got out at last,” said I, “in spite of you and Jane. And I’ve pulled off most of the paper, so you can’t put me back!”

      This part really gave me chills, I love that the reader wasn't outright told that the woman believes that it is herself that is trapped in the wallpaper, there were hints sprinkled here and there and it makes the big reveal all the more effective.

    2. I have a schedule prescription for each hour in the day; he takes all care from me, and so I feel basely ungrateful not to value it more.

      I love how slowly the tension winds with hints like this throughout the story, this has some aspects of a distrustful narrator and the seeds of doubt are planted for the reader.

    3. but one expects that in marriage.

      This shows the relationship between the woman and John to be one of dominance on the man's side. She is seen as lower in class than her husband and this is accurate to marriages in those times.

  2. Feb 2021
    1. Just how I would do it I could never decide: by reading law, by healing the sick, by telling the wonderful tales that swam in my head,—some way. With other black boys the strife was not so fiercely sunny: their youth shrunk into tasteless sycophancy, or into silent hatred of the pale world about them and mocking distrust of everything white; or wasted itself in a bitter cry

      His outlook on life fascinates me, instead of pushing back and creating friction with the social norm at the time, he seeks out to maneuver through it and find a smoother way to coexist. I wonder why he has this particular reaction to other's racism, and what caused it.

    2. And yet, being a problem is a strange experience,

      It's interesting that he complies with this narrative that he's a problem, there's not really much anger on his part. It seems more like he's genuinely curious about why things are the way that they are.

    3. The voice of my heart in my side or the voice of the sea

      It seems that the water in this case is being juxtaposed to his own inner turmoil, there's a lot of personification of the water and sand, but why use this image in particular?

    1. Where he saw sequence, other men saw something quite different, and no one saw the same unit of measure. He cared little about his experiments and less about his statesmen, who seemed to him quite as ignorant as himself and, as a rule, no more honest; but he insisted on a relation of sequence, and if he could not reach it by one method, he would try as many methods as science knew

      Is this obsession of sequence aimed at trying to discover himself? It seems that his methods make no sense to others, as he cares little about some things and is obsessed with others.

    2. A historian who asked only to learn enough to be as futile as Langley or Kelvin, made rapid progress under this teaching, and mixed himself up in the tangle of ideas until he achieved a sort of Paradise of ignorance vastly consoling to his fatigued senses

      This concept of ignorance has been mentioned a few times, is this a slight against the characters, or is this a way of saying that some ignorance is needed in the learning or teaching process?

    3. Nothing in education is so astonishing as the amount of ignorance it accumulates in the form of inert facts

      This language is really aggressive, does this narrator have its own voice? It seems very personal for being third person omniscient

    1. From my five arms and all my hands, From all my white sins forgiven, they feed, From my car passing under the stars, They Lion, from my children inherit, From the oak turned to a wall, they Lion, From they sack and they belly opened And all that was hidden burning on the oil-stained earth They feed they Lion and he comes.

      The constant repetition of the word lion makes me feel that the author wants the reader to focus on this part of the piece in particular, what does the lion symbolize though?

    2. Earth is eating trees, fence posts, Gutted cars, earth is calling in her little ones,

      Is this an aggressive way of describing some sort of natural disaster? It seems like something like a hurricane or a tornado is being romanticized and personified

    3. Of industrial barns, out of rain, out of bus ride, West Virginia to Kiss My Ass, out of buried aunties, Mothers hardening like pounded stumps, out of stumps, Out of the bones’ need to sharpen and the muscles’ to stretch

      the voice changes from stanza one to this one, the words hit a lot harder and have much more impact. Words like pounded and sharpen really emphasis the pacing and voice of this piece

    4. Out of the acids of rage, the candor of tar,

      The connotation makes a shift from the first two lines. burlap sacks, butter, black beans, slate bread, none of these are necessarily negative things, but then words like acids of rage and tar come up