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  1. Jul 2021
    1. Composers of infographics know that their readers want information in a concise, easy-to read format.

      Audience of an infographic want easy-to-read info - concise info

    1. hat makes this particular position and organization appealing to me?

      Employers will want to know why you want to work there - it's not just about the skills you bring, but it's about why you want to work there - express those reasons

    2. I need to remember that the main purpose of my cover letter is to persuade the reader to schedule an interview with me.

      THE GOAL IS TO GET THE INTERVIEWER! DON'T SPILL ALL THE BEANS

    1. Adobe Creative Suite 5 and 6 (Dreamweaver, Photoshop, InDesign, and Bridge) * Working knowledge of HTML * Practiced photographer (Nikon D5100, EOS Rebel) and published video editor (Final Cut Pro X, iMovie °11)

      Easy to spot skills section - I think skills are best at the top of the page to be glanced at first

    2. * London—literature, film, political science and theater (Fall 2011) * Athens—art history, Greek language and literature (Summer 2010) * Caen—contemporary and conversational French (Winter 2010)

      good highlight study abroad programs

    1. Elizabeth received a cover letter and resume from someone who wanted to work in the writing center she directs on campus. One sentence in the cover letter read, “I kept my death clean.” The word death was probably a simple typo, but Elizabeth could not bring herself to schedule an interview with the writer.

      This is cut throat ... but it's also the truth - revise revise revise !

    2. exceeded sales goals by 15 percent at the Limited”) than by generalizations (“I am a good salesperson”). Resumes should be precise.

      Good advice - point out specific accomplishments instead of making bland generalizations

    3. “A degree was eamed in history from XYZ University” could be written in the active voice this way: eamed a degree in history from XYZ University.”

      Only difference I see here is the use of "I" ... I guess that adds personality?

    1. ake connections between the cover letter and resume and between different personal experiences. In their cover letters, applicants refer to the specific experiences listed in their resumes. They draw connections between those experiences and the qualifications that the employer has noted in the job listing.

      Don't just write aimlessly in a cover letter - refer to qualifications that you think your experience is relevant for

    2. When you are interested in a job, do you research it before applying for it?

      Important to research the job - not because it shows in your cover letter, but because interviews also know if you did your research before you applied

    3. Refer specifically to the position they're applying to.

      I think many applicants forgot to refer to position they are specifically applying for

    1. Writers need to establish ethos by conveying their ethics and professionalism, noting related past successes, experiences, and aptitudes that qualify them for the job, and showing that they're genuinely interested in working for the organization, perhaps by mentioning something specific about it that they especially like. Writers also need to appeal to readers’ sense of logos by making logical connections between their resume and the organization’s values and the requirements of the position.

      Ethos and Logos primarily used in cover letter - Ethos, to build credibility in yourself - Logos to make logical connections as to why you'll be a good fit for the job

    2. Resumes. When composing a resume, writers need to keep the same factors in mind as when they write a cover letter (see above). Their readers are busy and want a quick and clear case for how fit the applicant is for the position.

      Good advice - keep resumes simple - use bullet points to encourage your audience to glance over those skills first

    3. Get to the point. Writers should keep in mind that their potential employers usually read cover letters in addition to their usual workload. That means readers are moving fast; they want to get an immediate sense of whether the applicant may be a good fit.

      Asking for the interview in a respectful, yet assertive way is a good way to get the attention of the reader - they can appreciate a straight forward approach and it conveys confidence

    4. Communicate a strong work ethic. Readers want to know: Will this person do his or her share of the work?

      Good advice for any cover letter - hard work applies to all work positions :)

    5. Convey personality. Readers want to get a sense of the person they may work with. They'll want to know: Will he or she be interesting as a colleague?

      The only personality traits I attempt to convey in my cover letter are confidence, competitiveness, and being direct

    6. Cover letters, Writers need to take into account several potential readers: the person who will supervise the new hire, a human resources employee, and members of a screening committee made up of supervisors and employees at the hiring organization. Successful cover letters:

      That's a lot of people. I usually keep the hiring manager, direct supervisor, and HR recruiter who filters the applications in mind when creating the cover letter

    1. his letter is not only another tool for being persuasive — it’s a great opportunity to ask any questions you wish you'd asked when you were face-to-face with your interviewer.

      I personally believe asking questions you should have asked in your interview in a post-interview letter looks like you were simply unprepared in your interview to ask the question then. I guess it also depends on the question you are asking ....

    2. A good practice is to limit your resume to one page until you have at least ten years of experience in the field in which you're applying for a job.

      I've seen managers skip past resumes that are longer than one page - or if it's disorganized, or unclear. Best to keep resume short and concise

    3. When you're applying for a job, always send your resume — the document that outlines your skills, education, and experience — with a cover letter tailored to the job you're interested in.

      Cover letter is extremely important - it's helped me get my foot in the door on my different job interviews

    1. Pacing.

      Never thought about pacing in this context - sounds like a useful strategy in digital stories - I wonder if this words in other genres

    2. Pathos is also cental in a digital story, since ros digital stories have an emotional layer to help the audience connect with the experience.

      I assumed Pathos would play a big part in the rhetorical appeal in digital stories because you have to get the viewer engaged - hard to do that without using audio and visuals to play towards emotions

    3. Audience Digital storytellers offen compose fora wide audience, However, some might imagine that ‘their audience will be someone who has shared a similar experience.

      Digital stories will often times be viewed by the masses, but in many cases the story will be meant for a specific audience as well

    4. These finished stories are often shared on the Intemet, hosted on such sites as YouTube or Vimeo, or published on digital storytelling sites such as StoryCenter.

      Youtube / Vimeo - or other internet digital sites

    5. They usually include a combination of digital images, recorded narration, video clips text, and/or music.

      music / images / recorded narration / video clips / text

    1. What tone will I take in my writing? Will my literacy narrative be serious or funny? Academic or down-to-earth? What kind of language will I use? How much detail will I include?

      Style is important to me

    2. I'm writing about my own life: How will I keep my writing true and accurate? How much will I disclose about myself (and others) in my literacy memoir? Will I write in the first person? What anecdotes will I use to tell the story of myself as a reader or writer, and why? Also, what literary elements might I use?

      All questions worth asking yourself about when writing your own literary narrative

    1. Writers of literacy narratives use direct language and real details from their lives to establish credibility (ethos). They also make logical connections (logos) between their narratives and the larger issues of literacy; often these authors write to emphasize and argue about the importance of literacy which makes the use of logos especially important,

      Great example to see how rhetorical appeals are used in literacy narratives

    2. Instructors assign this genre to help students understand what influences their speaking, reading, and writing.

      Ahh - well, now I know why we are doing this :)

    3. People write literacy narratives because their formative experiences with reading and writing are important to them; they want to share their stories with others, especially if their literacy histories involve obstacles or challenges. Some may also want to make an argument about the importance of literacy

      Keep this purpose in mind when creating your own literacy narrative

    4. The writers of literacy narratives tell a story specifically about how they leamed to read and/or write

      KEY Literacy narrative is about how you learned to read and write

    5. Like memoirists, when the writers of literacy narratives tell their own stories, they relate events and also analyze how these events have shaped their identities.

      Relate events between the memoir and the literacy narrative

    1. RHETORICAL SITUATION & CHOICES 0 Purpose. What is my central evaluative claim I want to make? What is it that I want to understand about the piece I'm analyzing? Ci Audience. What do I hope my audience leams from this piece? Have I described the piece enough for an audience that is unfamiliar with what I'm analyzing? Oi Rhetorical appeals. Have I established my ethos so that my reader trusts my judgments? Have I used terminology that shows I'm familiar with the genre I'm analyzing? Is my logos evident? Have I used enough evidence to build my case? 1 Modes & media. Is text the only way to present my analysis? How would it be strengthened by including any audio? Visuals? Are there advantages to presenting this digitally? Print? GENRE CONVENTIONS 1 Elements of the genre. Have I properly introduced the work being analyzed? Have I provided a brief summary? Have I examined the writer/composer’s central claim? Have I presented my own clear evaluative claim? D Style. Does my title indicate the position I'm taking? Am I using language throughout that indicates how I feel about the work I'm evaluating? 1 Design. Have I formatted this to meet the assignment? Have I used proper essay structure? Do I have a clear introductory and concluding paragraph? 0 Sources. Have | included enough evidence from the work to support my claims? Have I properly cited my information? Have I included a Works Cited page for any of the sources used?

      Great to have a checklist like this to reference when I'm analyzing a piece on my own

    2. RHETORICAL SITUATION & CHOICES 1, Purpose. What stance does Yoshida take regarding the advertisement? Is his claim evaluative? Why or why not? 2. Purpose. How does Yoshida provide his audience with a deeper understanding of how the advertisement is constructed and its effectiveness? 3. Audience. Even though this piece was written for a class assignment, and thus his audience are his teacher and peers, this analysis might have other audiences. Who might they be? Why? 4. Rhetorical appeals. How does Yoshida establish his ethos? Do you find him to be a credible writer? Why or why not? Modes & media. How would the piece be stronger if Yoshida had included visuals of the ad throughout? Which visuals might he have included?

      Great piece to reference when I'm analyzing a piece on my own

    1. Critical analysis papers are formatted like most other academic papers: as text-based essays or researched arguments that follow a specific documentation style, such as MLA, APA, or Chicago Manual of Style.

      MLA / APA / or Chicago Manual of Style used for critical analyses papers

    1. Since a critical analysis is essentially an argument, writers must first establish ethos to gain the reader's trust.

      Establish ethos - gain trust first

    2. The ultimate purpose of a critical analysis is to evaluate and understand how another writer/artist/composer created meaning.

      Ultimate purpose of critical analyses

    3. he writer then explains the composer's central points and provides her own evaluation of whether the composer's argument was or was not successful

      Provide central points - provide own evaluation on successfulness of argument

    1. Backing up your ideas and claims with correct information. gathered from reliable sources, will make your argument stronger.

      Must be accurate when persuading others

    1. Pathos — your appeal to your readers’ emotions — is generally not a priority when you're writing to inform. On the other hand, if you want to inform but also persuade your readers, you can appeal to their emotions by using humor, for example. Generally humor is appropriate for less formal informational genres, but you also have to consider your specific purposes and audiences.

      This is a different way to appeal to audiences emotions, especially in an informative piece

    2. Could the brochure creators also be trying to convince you to whiten your teeth?

      Informative writing doesn't necessarily just have to be "informative", but it can be used to persuade

    3. An author of a scientific report, for example, may present facts, but as a way to influence you to share an opinion or take an action.

      Is there always an attempt to persuade?

    1. o author is purely objective.

      Debatable? Maybe "most" authors are not able to remain objective in their writing .... but maybe a small percentage of authors can remain objective ... I believe

    2. You do a quick search on YouTube and turn up a video by a guy in a gas mask who lives ina desert bunker. His instructions seem to have some merit but overall are rambling and confusing. Though the video may be riveting, it is a poor source of information because the author lacks credibility (or ethos) and logic (logos).

      bad example of an authoritative source

    3. The trick is to (1) figure out which sources of information are the best, and (2) analyze, use, and share that information according to your needs as a reader or writer.

      Pick best info - analyze, use, share info according to needs as reader or writer

    4. INFORMING Purpose: Why share information? Audience: How do we inform others? Rhetorical appeals: How do we use them to inform? TELLING STORIES Purpose: Why tell stories? Audience: How do we connect through stories? Rhetorical appeals: How do we use them to tell stories? PERSUADING Purpose: Why write to persuade? Audience: How do we persuade others? Rhetorical appeals: How do we use them to persuade?

      INFORMING TELLING STORIES PERSUADING

    1. With the rise in social media use and the proliferation of digital devices, participatory or citizen journalism has become a major player when it comes to activism and change.

      Interesting

    2. When considering the concept of genres used for activism, perhaps you first think of protests — people carrying signs with their messages. Maybe you think about famous speeches, such as Martin Luther King Jr.’s 1963 “I Have a Dream” speech delivered at the National March on Washington. Have you ever received a phone call from an organization encouraging you to vote a particular way? Perhaps you’ve been greeted on the street by a person with a clipboard, asking you to sign your name to bring a particular issue to the ballot.

      Examples of activism

    1. When you post on Facebook, for example, you might consider yourself to be writing for your friends, but if you don’t have your privacy settings configured to keep strangers from seeing your posts, you are actually composing for everyone on Facebook, over a hundred million readers. I

      This is something I always keep in mind, not just on facebook, but on twitter and other platforms - the audience on most social media platforms are open to the general public, unless your specifically set up your privacy settings to only allow friends to view your content

    1. The types of genres chosen are usually dictated by the situation, the task, and the audience.

      Genres are determined by situation, task, and the audience

    2. Workplace writing is any kind of writing or composing you do in a business or professional setting.

      Workplace writing = writing you do in the workplace

    1. Some typical genres for reflective writing are portfolio cover letters, in which you describe and reflect on items in a portfolio of writing or artwork; progress reports, in which you describe and analyze the progress you’ve made toward achieving a particular task or outcome; and self-evaluations, in which you discuss some of your successes and challenges on the job.

      Typical genres in the real world

    2. Reflective genres also respond to a rhetorical situation. For example, if you have to write a reflective essay to accompany a visual argument you created, your purpose might be to help your professor (your audience) understand why you made particular choices in composing the visual and what overall effect you want the visual to have on its audience.

      Good example of how a reflective essay might used with a separate assignment

    3. What are some of the reflective genres you might encounter in college? Your professor might ask you to write a reflection on your writing process and turn in it alongside a research report, or you might be asked to write a reflection on a field experience for your geology class.

      Examples of what can come in college

    1. An academic genre that has a somewhat different rhetorical situation is the personal statement. A personal statement is an essay you write when you apply for a scholarship or to graduate school in which you explain to a funder or graduate program (your audience) why you deserve the scholarship or admittance to the graduate program you are applying for.

      I will at some point write a personal statement letter to get accepted into graduate school - understanding the genre and audience will be key - glad to be learning about this

    2. Most of this writing is done “on demand,” meaning you are not writing because the muse inspired you, but rather because your professor told you to.

      The author understands the reality :)

    1. Whether you are in the classroom beginning an assignment, sitting at work staring at a request from your supervisor, or anticipating standing on the street corner giving a speech at a rally, you need a way to figure out what you want to say and how you want to say it.

      No matter the situation - you NEED TO FIGURE OUT WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY AND HOW YOU WANT TO SAY IT

    1. In this chapter, we will briefly describe some of the types of writing you might expect to do in college and beyond and the types of rhetorical situations you might find yourself in.

      WHAT THIS CHAPTER WILL BE ABOUT

    2. How you write about a topic or issue will always depend on the rhetorical situation you find yourself in.

      This is a free-flowing concept - not a black and white one. Must adapt.

    1. The first draft is the child’s draft, where you let it all pour out and then let it romp all over the place, knowing that no one is going to see it and that you can shape it later.

      Not the end of the world - you will mold it into the final piece slowly bit surely

    2. For me and most of the other writers I know, writing is not rapturous. In fact, the only way I can get anything written at all is to write really, really shitty first drafts.

      Shitty first drafts are the way :)

    3. They do not type a few stiff warm-up sentences and then find themselves bounding along like huskies across the snow.

      Not always perfect at first - even for professional writers

    1. Philosopher Alan Watts suggests that the education system’s emphasis on grade completion causes us to not pay attention to the journey, which to his mind, is the inspiration.

      Interesting take ... I can see his point

    2. Sometimes creators even wonder if they will ever be able to create again.

      Ahh, this kind of sounds like a sales slump happening at work - where I found myself wondering if I'll be able to get out of the slump and return to my normal production - I imagine the feeling is similar

    3. Writers call it Writer’s Block, which is defined as the inability to write.

      Can't say I've experienced this yet .... but there's always a first for everything!

    4. Perhaps you recall a time when you awoke from a dream, knew your dream had a fantastic story line, and sat down at your computer and furiously typed out a rough plot for a short story. Or maybe you went to the farmers’ market, purchased a wide assortment of vegetables, and then went home and invented a new dish with many of them, delighted in the new taste combinations you had created.

      Unfortunately, I've not had any similar experiences, but I do understand the point :) An example for me would be of time when I thought of a melody in my head, and I whistled the melody, and to not forget it I would pull out the recording app on my phone to capture the idea so I can then later play it on a piano and build onto it

    5. fhat does it mean to be “creative”? While we often associate creativity with artsy types, anyone who creates anything new can be said to be creative.

      Creativity is when you make something that did not previously exist - taking something from an idea and putting it into existence -

    1. The most persuasive authors discuss the sources that informed their composing process.

      Sources remain important in author statements, and the most persuasive writers use them in their author statements

    2. Authors’/Artists’ Statements can often look like an academic essay, with indented paragraphs and little or no decoration except for subheadings that offer structure and organization. However, a writer might choose to design a Statement to reflect the genre of the composition. For example, the Statement might take the form of a letter written to a professor, a Director’s Statement, or a one-page Artist’s Statement.

      Design is still relevant in an author's statement

    3. Write in a tone that builds ethos. In their Statements, authors use critical, analytical language to make their points. They choose words related to their subject of inquiry to establish themselves as experts. When you write such a Statement, even though you're writing in the first person (J), use a serious, straightforward tone to emphasize that you have made deliberate, thoughtful choices.

      Write in a tone that suggests you are subject matter expert on the area you are writing about

    4. On the other hand, don’t hesitate to mention places where you could improve your work editorially or technically. Doing your best, reflecting on what you did well, and talking about what you'd like to improve adds to your ethos as a composer and to the persuasiveness of your work.

      Don't be afraid to look at your work objectively, and look for areas to improve on - this also adds to your ethos

    5. Writers use Authors’ Statements as an opportunity to look back at a composition and evaluate the extent of their achievement; they might also note what they would have done differently or better.

      Author Statements are another opportunity to reflect on your work, maybe even add things you might have done differently

    1. Explain their choice of genre and how they worked with its conventions.

      No matter the genre - explain your reasoning for selecting that genre in your author statement

    2. ddress readers directly. Writers use the “I” construction, which allows them to speak plainly to readers about their choices. They also refer to the works they’re discussing in the Statement as “my essay” (or “my painting,” “my photograph,” etc.), indicating their ownership of the composition and the choices they made.

      KEY POINT TO REMEMBER: IN AUTHOR STATEMENT ADDRESS READERS DIRECTLY AND CLIAM YOUR WORK WITH "I" OR "MY ESSAY", etc.

    3. Your purpose or main point in creating a collage on the relationship between body art and identity — and what the relationship is » Why you chose specific central images, how they contribute to your message, and how you hope your viewers will read them and relate to the overall collage » How you wanted to connect with your viewers through pathos, logos, and ethos (for example, your arrangement of images might appeal to their logic or emotions) » Why you decided to create the collage, say, in a digital format

      Example of how to explain purpose to viewers on a particular genre

    4. iscuss their specific rhetorical situation and related choices. The Author’s/Artist’s Statement gives you, as a composer, an opportunity to explain to audiences: » Your purpose: why you composed the work on that specific topic, in that specific way » Your audience and use of rhetorical appeals: what you understand about your readers and how you connected with them through choices regarding ethos, pathos, and logos » Your mode and medium: why you chose them and how they benefit your work overall

      Much of same material recycled and re-worded from earlier - good to reread anyways

    1. f you're writing an Author's Statement in an academic setting, your main purpose is to inform and persuade readers — your peers, your instructor, your audience — of the critical and creative thought you put into your composition.

      MAIN GOAL OF AUTHOR'S STATEMENT IN AN ACADEMIC SETTING

    2. By writing an accompanying Author’s/Artist’s Statement, you can persuade your readers to see your finished piece in a particular way.

      This can help you "set the stage" for your audience - and perhaps help them view your story through a particular lens

    3. Purpose The purpose of an Author’s/Artist’s Statement is for an author (or artist or other composer) to discuss the decisions and choices he or she made in composing a specific text or other work.

      Purpose - discuss decisions/choices you've made in composing a specific text.

    1. Cook’ Illustrated readers are serious foodies who don’t mind spending hours on a recipe and they want to understand every decision the chef made so they can learn from the chef's mistakes or maybe even use the recipe as inspiration for their own creation.

      ALWAYS KEEP YOUR AUDIENCE IN MIND

    2. In this way, the statement helps readers understand the invisible logic behind the finished product, the recipe.

      The statement is used to help the reader understand the INVISIBLE LOGIC behind the finish product

    3. The liner notes that come with a CD, the program you receive at the theater or symphony, the Director’s Statement on a DVD, the Artist’s Statement pinned to the wall at an art gallery — these are all forms of Authors’ or Artists’ Statements.

      Actually, much more common and practical than I thought

    4. Composers and artists of all sorts often write a statement for their audience that explains their inspirations, intentions, and choices in their creative and critical processes.

      I never thought this would be part of a composition piece - interested - makes sense to give the audience a peek into the mindset that went into creating a piece

    1. Gwen evaluates her second draft and comes up with a list of items to focus on for her third and final draft Gwen observes the following.

      Good tip - observe your revisions / progress

    1. Make a list of what you want to work on when you revise. Base your list on what you've determined in steps 2-7.

      MAKE A LIST ON THINGS TO REVISE

    2. Step 5. Look at how you use rhetorical appeals. Look at your draft and the sample genre piece you're consulting. To what extent does the other author use ethos, pathos, and/or logos? How effective is his or her approach, and what might you want to adapt for your own work?

      Does ethos/pathos/logos have to be present in every persuasive piece?

    1. Step 9. Zero in on how you’ll use your experience & evidence.

      think about the uses of sources in your text & how genre's you're considering typically deal with sources

    2. Step 8. Look at examples of the three genres you’re interested in. There are many features to consider when looking at genre: « Is point of view important for your purpose and audience? For example, if you need your piece to be first person so that it includes your perspective, make sure you choose a genre that accommodates this point of view. ¢ What type of connection do you want to establish with your audience? If you want to remain at a critical distance, consider choosing a genre that emphasizes ethos in its rhetorical appeal. To make a closer connection by appealing to readers’ emotions regarding your topic, consider choosing a genre that emphasizes pathos. © What tone do you want to use in order to achieve your purpose? If you want your piece to have a certain level of formality (or informality), be sure to choose a genre that demonstrates that.

      THINGS TO CONSIDER WHEN LOOKING AT A GENRE

      • point of view important for purpose and audience ?
      • what type of connection do you want to establish with audience?
      • what tone do you want to use in order to achieve your purpose?
    3. Step 7. Narrow your choices down to three possible genres.

      NARROW DOWN TO 3 POSSIBLE GENRES - Which will be enable you to respond to your rhetorical situation

    1. Experiment by making yourself write nonstop for ten to thirty minutes.

      Wow ... 10 or 30 minutes huh .... Sounds like freewriting takes commitment!

    2. At this stage, if you're putting pressure on yourself to write flawless, beautiful prose, remind yourself of the term freewrite. Take a little more pressure off by thinking of Anne Lamott’s phrase “shitty first draft.”

      KEEP THIS PHRASE TOP OF MIND WHEN YOU FIND YOURSELF ATTEMPTING TO COMPOSE PERFECTLY AT FIRST

    3. Advice for Freewriting As you begin your rough or exploratory draft, remember that it is just for you. No one else ever needs to see it. Think of your draft not as an organized, perfect piece of writing with a clear purpose, but as a messy opportunity for creativity and experimentation.

      Love this advice - makes me feel like an ..... artist .... in a way - there's a method to the madness and this surely sounds like a mad way to get your thoughts flowing :) not really a "mad" way, but just an out of the box way!

    4. As you keep your fingers moving, don't worry about making sense or about readers being confused or impressed. No one is going to read this document but you. When you take away the pressure of producing smooth prose, you may be surprised to see the ideas you generate. We like to refer to this as a “shitty first draft.”

      A "shitty first draft" haha this made me laugh - but I can totally see the value in this strategy - you're basically forcing your ideas to from thought to paper, to at least get it out there, hence, a shitty first draft :)

    5. The goal is to get your ideas written down without judging what you're writing, or editing yourself, or trying to write beautifully.

      This is something I've never tried before - but it sounds like a good way to get creative and come up with good material

    1. From your initial list, force yourself to double or triple the size of the list.

      After you make the first list, DOUBLE and TRIPLE the size of the list

    2. Make a brainstorm list. What do you care most about? Begin by making a list of things you are passionate about, your pet peeves, things you are curious about, things you don’t understand, or things you'd like to change about the world.

      MAKE A LIST

    3. alk to people. Discuss your topic ideas and questions with classmates, friends, family, and coworkers to find out what others have to say about the topic you're considering. Often, explaining why you're interested in a topic can help you focus. When others ask you to clarify your ideas, you will often discover what you really want to say.

      Ways to get your ideas flowing

    4. The Index of Themes, page T-1, organizes every reading in the text by topic, and the Index of Genres, page G-1, will help you see the relationship between topic choice and genre choice.

      HELPFUL TIPS

    1. It’s a good idea to annotate an assignment to make sure you understand it and to help you think through the different steps.)

      GOOD IDEA TO ANNOTATE ASSINGMENTS

  2. Jun 2021
    1. CHECKLIST | Understanding How Rhetorical Situations and Genres Work Together ‘When you compose, you can refer to the checklist below as well as the blank guided reading grid provided on Sample Grid. RHETORICAL SITUATION & CHOICES O Purpose. Is my purpose to tell a story, inform, or persuade? Do I have several purposes, and if so, which is my primary purpose? C Audience. How would I describe my primary audience? Whose attention do I want most? Who are the people I want to persuade? Do I have another, secondary audience? How will I entice this audience? O Rhetorical appeals. How will I establish my credibility (ethos)? Will appealing to my audience’s emotions help me persuade them (pathos)? How might logic (logos) help me convince others? 1 Modes & media. Do I want to work with written words? Will I present my ideas in person, orally? Will I use visuals? How about audio? Does my idea lend itself to video? Do I want my piece to be available digitally or in print? Will I use some combination of these modes and media? GENRE CONVENTIONS C Elements of the genre. How will I structure my composition? What is the best way to combine elements to convey my purpose — and make my case to my audience? 0 Style. Whatever form my composition takes (visual, verbal, etc.), what is the best tone to use to reach my audience? What voice will I use? How present will I be in my composition? What kind of language will I use? What level of detail will I need to convey my purpose? 0 Design. How do I want my composition to look? How will the layout help me achieve my purpose? O Sources. What sources will I draw on for my composition? Do I need to conduct interviews? Do I need to research online or in the library? How will I attribute my sources?

      Keep Checklist handy when annotating a piece

    1. Purpose. Reread Henderson’s press release and Hurley’s blog post. What are the writers’ purposes? How can you tell? How do these purposes differ? How might they overlap? 2. Audience. Who do you imagine is the primary reader for Henderson's press release? For Hurley's blog post? Explai 3. Rhetorical appeals. How effective are Henderson and Hurley in using ethos, pathos, or logos to reach their audiences? Which appeals do they rely on most effectively, and why? 4. Rhetorical appeals. Consider how hyperlinks, photos, and other information can contribute to a composer’s ethos. Why do you think Hurley used the National Park Service as a source for information and images? How did this choice affect his ethos? 5. Modes & media. Both Henderson and Hurley use a combination of text and visuals. If you were to add audio or video to either piece, what would you add? What meaning or information would the audio or video add?

      Useful info to reference when rhetorically reading/annotating your own work.

    2. Shaan Hurley, The Wall Arch Collapses in Arches National Park

      The guided readings really help break down a rhetorical way to analyze a piece of writing -

    1. As you'll see, Henderson and Hurley provide much of the same information about the arch collapse, but they write in different genres and with different purposes and audiences in mind. The notes in the margins of each piece explain their rhetorical situations and how they work within the conventions of the press release and the blog post.

      This highlights the distinct differences that different genres can bring out of the same topic. Even though both writers are covering the same topic, the purposes and audiences are different since the genres are different.

    1. While we might not note all the elements, we do describe the key ones associated with an advertisement (such as it being an argument, having a headline, and having particular ad copy).

      No need to note ALL elements - best to note "key" elements

    1. Consider your purpose, and as you compose, ask yourself if that purpose will be evident to your reader. Pay close attention to the genre conventions.

      THINGS TO CONSIDER WHEN COMPOSING

    1. Memes often parody or poke fun at something or someone. They take many forms but often feature an image and a brief caption written in informal language (elements and style). ¢ Often an image is prominent, and the words — typically what the subject of the meme is saying or thinking — are presented in a large display font (design). « Memes draw on current topics and popular culture (sources).

      There's a lot of academic strategies to take away from this breakdown of the meme .... but it's actually a little bit funny in and of itself because a meme gets it's point across extremely simply ... this break down over analyzes it and almost makes it more complicated than the point it's trying to get across

    2. he composers are providing a commentary (purpose). ¢ They are communicating to like-minded readers on the Internet (audience). ¢ They are using humor and satire to connect with their audience (drawing on the rhetorical appeal. pathos). ¢ They are working with both text and imagery (mode) and delivering the composition digitally, online (medium).

      Great example of how to break down a piece rhetorically

    1. The rhetorical situation that the original blogger and Elizabeth and Amy are all responding to is simple: They all have pets that they think are just adorable and find their pets’ reactions to being anthropomorphized hilarious. They are participating in a long tradition of pet owners sharing the silliness of their own pets (purpose) with other pet owners (audience)

      Never thought a meme could be broken down to a genre, or I, at least, never thought about it.

    2. If we examine a particular event, we can see that there are numerous ways someone might choose to respond. After the Orlando shooting in the Pulse nightclub on June 12, 2016, people chose to respond in a variety of ways. Former President Barack Obama responded by releasing a press statement that included, “Our thoughts and prayers are with the families and loved ones of the victims.” Canadian Prime Minister Justin Trudeau tweeted, “We grieve with our friends in the US & stand in solidarity with the LGBTQ2 community after today’s terror attack.” Samantha Bee, a comedic television talk show host, used her show Full Frontal to issue her response:

      Great examples to keep in mind of different genres in response to different situations

    3. That means the writer considers the purpose of her piece, whom she wants to reach, how best to appeal to her reader, and what sources and evidence to use, along with other considerations mentioned in Chapter

      Keep these things in mind when composing a piece

    1. Sources. What sources does the author draw on? How do you know? How does the author incorporate and give credit to sources? Is there documentation? Hyperlinking?

      Depending on the genre, sourcing will be listed differently, if at all. Keep sources in mind as you rhetorically read to understand what sources the author draws on, if any at all.

    2. Design. What does the composition look (sound, feel, smell) like? How do words and visuals and other media work together in the genre, physically? How would you describe the format of the composition? Would the format change if the mode were changed? For example, if a newspaper editorial moves from a print medium to an online medium, what changes occur in the genre?

      Design can be as simple as an aesthetic touch to a text piece, but a great writer will use design to add different elements to their genre.

    3. Style. What is the author’s tone? How would you describe the language of the piece? How much detail does the author use?

      This is probably the easiest thing for me to recognize and analyze within a genre

    4. Common elements. What do you know about this genre already? What are some of the typical features of this genre? How is the content organized? How does the author use words, images, or other media to convey a purpose and reach an audience?

      KEY information - all worth noting and remembering

    1. To compose in different genres, you first should be able to identify them, see how other writers use them to achieve purposes and reach audiences, and learn some of the basic features so you can experiment.

      An important note to keep in mind - be able to identify genres before you decide to compose them .... a good rule of thumb

    2. Sources referred to in a research essay aimed at academic readers should be documented because readers will want to know where ideas and information came from: the purposes of song lyrics are different, though. Listeners of a song aren’t listening for information, so the sources of information are less important.

      Ahh, this explains what should be formally referred to and what shouldn't - I now have more clarity on my previous note

    3. In other cases, such as novels, comics, and music lyrics, while you’ve read and used sources, you’re not required to document them formally.

      I did not know this - I always thought that even within a novel that the source needed to be cited somewhere, like at the bottom of a page ....

    4. Sources Sources are the people, conversations, documents, books, journal articles, movies, and other works that we refer to for facts, perspectives, and models as we compose.

      Basically anything you are pulling information from or referring to from within your work

    5. Take a look at how Gilad uses images in his blog. Maps show readers exactly where this traveler is, the timeline indicates the duration of his trip, and the photos of Gilad help readers connect with him personally.

      Examples of how designs can be a function feature, and not just an aesthetic one

    1. For example, the writer and traveler we mentioned in Chapter 1, Gilad Hizkiyahu, uses a particular style on his blog. Because he is interested in attracting “accidental surfers” to his blog — that is, people who stumble upon his blog accidentally — he takes a casual and funny approach to his travels rather than a serious, scholarly tone. A serious, scholarly tone would probably appeal to an audience interested in the economics or politics of his travels, but because Gilad’s purpose is to share his quirky, funny adventures, his casual, humorous style makes more sense.

      Clear example of style

    2. The trick is to make sure that the style you’re using is appropriate to your purpose and accessible and persuasive to your audience.

      The TRICK when using style

    3. We look at how much detail writers include and how precise that detail is. We listen for tone (seriousness, humor, etc.) and voice (the presence of the author) and analyze how these qualities affect the overall composition. How a writer uses sources is part of style as well.

      Style refers to particular ways we communicate - Look for these details to analyze style

    4. For instance, most press release writers try to be as brief and objective as possible and to aim at answering the questions who? what? why? where? and when? For those reasons, we consider brevity, objectivity, and thoroughness to be elements of the press release genre.

      EXAMPLE OF FEATURES/ELEMENTS OF A GENRE

    5. we ask you to pay attention to the main features of a given genre: the specific elements that are common to most examples of the genre.

      Each genre has features/elements specific to that genre - pay attention to them

    6. Keep an open mind as you choose genres to compose in. Consider collaborating with classmates who have more detailed knowledge of the genres that you’re less familiar with.

      Don't close off the idea of collaborating with others who may understand a genre better than you

    1. Let’s say you want to tell a story and convey it graphically. You don’t need to be McCloud or Picasso or Art Spiegelman, but you do need to understand how artists, graphic novelists, and memoirists work with visuals and text to tell stories.

      Don't overcomplicate it - you don't have to be a professional in the genre you are using ... but you have to be familiar with it

    2. you need to know something about the genre you’re composing in: you need to know its basic qualities and agreed-upon conventions, and you need to be familiar with some examples.

      IF YOU WANT TO BE A GREAT WRITER - YOU MUST KNOW THESE THINGS

    1. In her memoir, Burton wrote in the first person, portrayed real people, described settings, conveyed conflict, and told stories from her own life. These elements are features of the memoir genre and of any autobiography.

      Memoirs and autobiographies carry these same elements as well

    2. So, Burton chose her genre — the memoir — as a social response to her rhetorical situation. If she had been trained in music, she would have written a ballad or an opera, or if she had been bor a little later, she might have told her story as a documentary film.

      Timing is always important when selecting a genre - what your talents are in is always way to help you select your genre.

    1. she must have noticed that a very popular genre of the day was memoir.

      Consider a popular genre of the time you are in when deciding how to best reach a wide audience, if, in fact, a wide audience is the goal.

    2. Her audience might have also included literate former slaves, most likely in the North because her book was published in Boston.

      Don't just think about a composers current audience, but always consider who their audience was at the time they wrote the text

    3. Thus one purpose of the memoir was to give readers “comfort and courage to do what God commands them to do.” Another purpose might have been to help women readers understand what it was like to be a woman. and a slave.

      Clear example of a purpose

    1. Your choice of genre also depends on your own skills and interests, as well as the materials available to you.

      Your choice of genre is based on your skills and interests - don't feel confined to another person's idea of a proper genre - you have to choose what you feel is the best way to capture the attention of your audience

    1. As a student, you write research papers and presentations; these are two examples of academic genres.

      Become familiar with academic genres - Research papers, presentations, power points, etc.

    2. All of this also helps her develop ethos and come across as a credible source.

      Well .... looks like I had a totally different idea where ethos was shown, if you look at my previous notes. I'm not the author, but I find it a bit confusing to try and understand how Goforth was not appealing to ethos when she was very specifically showcasing her accomplishments, and education. It's probably a bit too simple to just say that was her appealing to ethos, but sometimes things can be simple like that, I believe. I think the way the author is interpreting her appeal to ethos is bit overly analyzed, and I don't think it's that complex. Ethos is an appeal to authority and credibility, and I believe the initial accolades she mentions early in her article are a better example of her appeal to ethos .... but I could just have a complete misunderstanding of the concept ....

    1. I have an undergraduate degree in biology and a grad degree in entomology. I don’t know whether that makes me seem any more reliable or trustworthy to my readers or not, but there it is. I study aquatic insects, especially behavior and respiration in giant water bugs and dragonflies.

      ETHOS - The writer is mentioning her degrees and education to build credibility - she then directly addresses the idea of credibility by inserting doubt that what she just stated may not even make her "reliable or trustworthy" to her readers. I think her level of transparency and lack of care on whether she is viewed as credible or not essentially lends to her credibility in the end. It's kind of like reverse psychology, in a way, if that makes sense.

    2. Iam NOT a taxonomiust, so I wi// get the occasional identification wrong. If you happen to notice a mistake, please let me know (use that Contact Me button above). It’s frustrating enough to read all the misinformation about insects online without being part of the problem.

      PATHOS - The writer admits she is not perfect, and people can relate to that. She also invites you to contact her if you notice a mistake. I think this is her way of trying to implement emotion/pathos in her writing because she is trying connect with the reader by engaging them. She even goes on to use terms like "frustration", which is an emotion in and of itself.

    3. Christine Goforth, from her blog The Dragonfly Woman

      The previous notes was my attempt at pointing out the rhetorical appeals in her "About DW" page, but not sure if I got Logic correct ..... that was a tough one for me to recognize

    4. I cover a variety of topics, but everything is at least tangentially related to insects. I had originally intended for this blog to be purely educational, but it’s evolved into more of a celebration of insects, scientifically, culturally, and personally. I like it better this way.

      LOGOS - I think this is the writers attempt at logically explaining what she does, and how her blog has evolved the way it has. After explaining why it she feels it has evolved how it has, she doubles down by saying she "likes it better this way." She has a very straight forward approach, one that suggests that doesn't really mind if you stick around, or like what she does or how she does it.

    5. here is everything you ever wanted to know about me or my blog condensed down into a few bullet points.

      PURPOSE? To share everything you ever wanted to know about her or her blog ....

    6. If you arrived here, you probably wanted to learn a little more about the crazy woman who tells strange stories and goes on and on about aquatic insect respiration on this blog.

      AUDIENCE? Those who want to know more about her and her strange stories .....

    7. Blogs changed because the people using them, both composers and audiences, realized that blogs could be interactive, could be shared, could be multimodal, and more.

      The blog is a clear example of how genres change over time. Audiences, composers, technology, modes - they can all change; hence, the evolution of the blog.

    8. Because genres are responses to social situations, they are dynamic, changing over time as people and their needs change over time.

      Genres can change and evolve over time as people and their needs change over time

    9. We wrote this book to acknowledge that in college and beyond there are many more genres available to us besides the five-paragraph essay or the traditional term paper.

      When I first heard the term "genre", I only thought of movies, books, music. I never realized how vast genres can be, and how anyone can also create genres of their own.

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    1. Reading Academic Texts

      Reading Academic Texts

      • Purpose, the motivation of the author - the exigence - what are they trying to get across
      • Audience, who is it?
      • Rhetorical appeals, How does the author use them? -- ethos/pathos/logos
      • Modes & media, what are they using to convey their idea? - radio? print? video? etc.