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  1. Aug 2020
    1. When your sentences or paragraphs go on for too long without any noticeable break in sight, readers start to wonder what point you’re making and why it’s taking so long to make it and how much longer before we can simply move on to the next idea already, since this one has been beaten to death without getting anywhere, other than winding through all the tangents with which you littered the ridiculously long and winding sentence.

      Would this be qualified as a run on sentence?

    2. (“Such an important-looking capital letter!”) and what comes last (“Why did we stop here?”). Structure your sentences accordingly.

      I will keep this in mind.

    3. A period emphasizes in a different (less shouty) way than an exclamation point. It’s essentially saying “the end” to each concept you describe.

      I agree. I tend to replace my explanation points with periods. This is so because I want to keep the readers attention without overwhelming them.

    4. Mastering punctuation’s power expands our repertoire for conveying meaning. The broader our repertoire, the more skillfully we can employ the most effective tools for each context

      This paragraph is very motivational for me. I didn’t understand sentence structure well. But over the past two years, I feel like my writing skills have improved tremendously.

    1. Do you think there should be a global norm or theory of how we arrange these values, or is there some amount of wiggle room for Americans and Europeans approaching things differently, or people in the Middle East or China approaching their values in the information society differently?

      I think that each country should get civilians together to help create laws and rules that is conducive to everyone in that country. This will allow more fluid movement in the system without stagnating one another.

    2. a bit more autonomy, a bit of freedom. And that’s being taken away by information technology. And so in many places, privacy is in retreat.

      It does seems as if the more we're getting close to the future we all desire, the more of our privacy is taken away and that is a issue that needs to be resolved.

    3. It’s a clear case where the state’s rights prevail over the right of individual privacy, and I say that as an advocate of privacy. We’ve got to get common sense on privacy, not fanaticism.

      I agree with this quote, we can no longer dwell in fanaticism when we can live out our dreams in our reality. The same goes for innovation. We can innovate all day but are we putting it to good use?

    4. and the threat of what I call “technocracy.” It’s a term we don’t often use now, and I mean by technocracy not the rule of experts, but the rule of information technology, the domination of information technology over human beings, and the subordination of people to a technological imperative.

      I feel like technocracy should be taken more seriously and researched upon.

    5. That’s what the whole socialist movement was about: A way to humanize the factory system, tame industrialization, and make sure it was steered in the direction of human welfare.

      Was this during the time when harsh labor was induced? If so, then I can see why humanizing the factory aka the work place was a huge mission.

    6. I think we need the big picture, not just individuals working on privacy, or intellectual property, or the distribution of scientific information, or this and that—you need to approach it in a holistic, integrated way. Not many people are doing that, and I’ve tried to make a start in my Normative Theory of the Information Society.

      I enjoy the way Alistair thinks. It's holistic and she thinks inventively.

    7. We are lacking a framework for attacking the problems of the 21st century. The Industrial Revolution created a lot of creative and systematic thinking about how society should be run.

      I agree with Alistair. Action needs to be taken in order to fufill the industrial revolution's purpose.

  2. Jul 2020
    1. Do learners recognize information gaps or information poverty?

      As a learner, I recognize information gaps or information poverty and I research to fill the gaps in. I also share the information that I discover.

    2. Curate Do learners consciously make connections between their work and that of the greater community? Do learners evaluate their own multimedia works? Do learners evaluate content they find online before sharing with others? Do learners apply ethical practices when using media? Do learners evaluate content and develop their own expertise on a topic? Do learners collect, aggregate, and share content to develop their voice/identity/expertise on a topic?

      This article is very beneficial for my YouTube and writing I do use these curating devices in my daily life.

    3. Build and sustain intentional global and cross-cultural connections and relationships with others so as to pose and solve problems collaboratively and strengthen independent thought; Promote culturally sustaining communication and recognize the bias and privilege present in the interactions;

      This is really beneficial because it helps us expand globally and connect internationally.

    1. It’s a shame it’s taken a pandemic for people to realize if you don’t have internet access you’re cut off from participation in society,” said Sohn, a distinguished fellow at the Georgetown Law Institute for Technology Law and Policy.

      Is the internet a depiction of the collective consciousness?

    2. We believe every one of us deserves equal access to fact-based news and analysis. We’ve decided to keep Guardian journalism free for all readers, regardless of where they live or what they can afford to pay. This is made possible thanks to the support we receive from readers across America in all 50 states.

      I agree with this completely because we all deserve to know the truth so that we can work accordingly.