love
Should it say "I love"?
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frompassiontoprofitslive.com frompassiontoprofitslive.com
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lots
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Travle
Travel
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Coffee, Tea, and Wate
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to Profits
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the
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Profits
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the
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that
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But they don’t just share stories: They also share their specific, concrete strategies they used to build their businesses beyond even what they imagined
Rephrase to say: But they don’t just share stories, they also share their specific, concrete strategies used to build their businesses beyond their imagination.
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get clear
gain clarity
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sit quiet and learn
sit-quiet-and-learn
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3
three
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fears, doubts, and overwhelm
overwhelm doesn't fit. "You'll leave behind your fears and doubts and immerse"
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at the event
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we
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come
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e events!!
Missing end quote"
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me
my
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rothschild
Is this a last name? If so, Capitalize.
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double
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excel,
End new combined sentence here with period. Start new sentence "You'll"
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le.
Also it isn't a complete sentence, combine sentence with comma
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From Passion to Profits® LIVE 2017 is three electric days of full business immersion and high energy designed to transform you from the inside out.
This whole section is hard to read!
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What is From Passion to Profits® LIVE?
Can't read this! Gold font color on gold background
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Profits
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Profits
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Yotu
Remove accidental 't' inserted!!
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results
result, not results
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